Comments received on poems by onepauly
good
kevin browne said:
love this beautiful little gem onepauly. love the style, love the passion, love the words you written. there is a word in the oxford dictionary called \'nonsensical\'. \'sensical\' has not yet been made a word but pretty soon I\'m sure it will. great write by the way.
July 15th, 2017 20:49
kevin browne said:
love this beautiful little gem onepauly. love the style, love the passion, love the words you written. there is a word in the oxford dictionary called \'nonsensical\'. \'sensical\' has not yet been made a word but pretty soon I\'m sure it will. great write by the way.
July 15th, 2017 20:49
good
FredPeyer said:
Pauly you are full of surprises (good ones I might add) and you are absolutely right: Let\'s have a party! Not so sure about \"sensical\" since it does not seem to be an \'official\' word yet in the English language. But who cares, if you want to have a sensible way of life, don\'t become a writer, become an accountant!
July 15th, 2017 17:37
FredPeyer said:
Pauly you are full of surprises (good ones I might add) and you are absolutely right: Let\'s have a party! Not so sure about \"sensical\" since it does not seem to be an \'official\' word yet in the English language. But who cares, if you want to have a sensible way of life, don\'t become a writer, become an accountant!
July 15th, 2017 17:37
recess
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I once knew a postman whose postal round was in the middle of the town and he always picked up lose change he found in the street. He reckoned he collect 40 or 50 pounds (UK currency) a year.
July 15th, 2017 00:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I once knew a postman whose postal round was in the middle of the town and he always picked up lose change he found in the street. He reckoned he collect 40 or 50 pounds (UK currency) a year.
July 15th, 2017 00:00
recess
malubotelho said:
A nice one Pauly. I prefer to dare than care for the change but I don\'t waist to much. I give all the coins for my granddaughter pig bank. We save for her college.
July 14th, 2017 19:31
malubotelho said:
A nice one Pauly. I prefer to dare than care for the change but I don\'t waist to much. I give all the coins for my granddaughter pig bank. We save for her college.
July 14th, 2017 19:31
recess
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve picked up change and loose money before. One man\'s trash is another man\'s treasure, as they say. Good stuff, post more of it! Your poetry I mean.
July 14th, 2017 15:46
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve picked up change and loose money before. One man\'s trash is another man\'s treasure, as they say. Good stuff, post more of it! Your poetry I mean.
July 14th, 2017 15:46
recess
FredPeyer said:
Pauly, love this one. That first line sounds like a voice from heaven. You start out with that huge promise of success and end up giving us a dime? :-)
July 14th, 2017 11:48
FredPeyer said:
Pauly, love this one. That first line sounds like a voice from heaven. You start out with that huge promise of success and end up giving us a dime? :-)
July 14th, 2017 11:48
at random
FredPeyer said:
Pauly, this is not something just cooked up, this is a gourmet meal!
July 13th, 2017 02:51
FredPeyer said:
Pauly, this is not something just cooked up, this is a gourmet meal!
July 13th, 2017 02:51
candle light
Goldfinch60 said:
Nothing \'run of the mill\' about this poem. Good write.
July 13th, 2017 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Nothing \'run of the mill\' about this poem. Good write.
July 13th, 2017 00:52
candle light
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Nice flow and rhyme. Enjoyed the fun read. Tyfs!
July 12th, 2017 16:00
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Nice flow and rhyme. Enjoyed the fun read. Tyfs!
July 12th, 2017 16:00
candle light
FredPeyer said:
A simple poem you say? NOT
I do like the line \"now warming my lips\". Were you trying to eat it? Or was this for rhyming purposes only?
How about \"it wanes and stands...now warming my hands\"
No offence, just kidding around here Paul. You should be proud of this one, it IS good!
July 12th, 2017 11:04
FredPeyer said:
A simple poem you say? NOT
I do like the line \"now warming my lips\". Were you trying to eat it? Or was this for rhyming purposes only?
How about \"it wanes and stands...now warming my hands\"
No offence, just kidding around here Paul. You should be proud of this one, it IS good!
July 12th, 2017 11:04
candle light
malubotelho said:
For sure it is a cute one. And I like the simplicity too. Simplicity unclutter our mind. Gives us light spirited feelings. Very enjoyable. 😊 Thank you
July 12th, 2017 08:45
malubotelho said:
For sure it is a cute one. And I like the simplicity too. Simplicity unclutter our mind. Gives us light spirited feelings. Very enjoyable. 😊 Thank you
July 12th, 2017 08:45
candle light
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever alliteration Paul - liked the way words flowed into that candlelit scene.
July 12th, 2017 07:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever alliteration Paul - liked the way words flowed into that candlelit scene.
July 12th, 2017 07:57
candle light
P.H.Rose said:
I too really enjoyed this
I like it simplicity and
That you picture it on
Your mind... well i did
Good word pauly!!!!
July 12th, 2017 07:47
P.H.Rose said:
I too really enjoyed this
I like it simplicity and
That you picture it on
Your mind... well i did
Good word pauly!!!!
July 12th, 2017 07:47
candle light
kevin browne said:
quite flamy actually and I love sitting on my window seal too. a warmth to this one for sure.
July 12th, 2017 07:09
kevin browne said:
quite flamy actually and I love sitting on my window seal too. a warmth to this one for sure.
July 12th, 2017 07:09
mutual
Goldfinch60 said:
The way I read it is to travel with your soul or it may be just you soul travelling and leading yourself into a better world. Though provoking write. Paul.
July 12th, 2017 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
The way I read it is to travel with your soul or it may be just you soul travelling and leading yourself into a better world. Though provoking write. Paul.
July 12th, 2017 00:12
mutual
malubotelho said:
I understood that it is a travel between you and your soul. It seems a pleasant trip that brings good news. Good news is the kind of news I want to see. Thank you.
July 11th, 2017 15:12
malubotelho said:
I understood that it is a travel between you and your soul. It seems a pleasant trip that brings good news. Good news is the kind of news I want to see. Thank you.
July 11th, 2017 15:12
mutual
P.H.Rose said:
What I get is you are
Talking about another
Person, maybe a loved one
I actually like it pauly as it
Makes you think, read it
A cpl of times and see
Something different..
It\'s a great play with words.
And also it has created
Good conversation between
Us..... but you are so right
About putting down what
Comes into your head..
I read some of my stuff
I\'ve not published and to
Be honest it\'s alien speak !!
July 11th, 2017 07:35
P.H.Rose said:
What I get is you are
Talking about another
Person, maybe a loved one
I actually like it pauly as it
Makes you think, read it
A cpl of times and see
Something different..
It\'s a great play with words.
And also it has created
Good conversation between
Us..... but you are so right
About putting down what
Comes into your head..
I read some of my stuff
I\'ve not published and to
Be honest it\'s alien speak !!
July 11th, 2017 07:35
mutual
Nicholas Browning said:
I believe this is a message stating that someone goes on a journey in order to see things for what they are, in turn resulting in their abundant fuel for their craft. Well said.
July 11th, 2017 03:56
Nicholas Browning said:
I believe this is a message stating that someone goes on a journey in order to see things for what they are, in turn resulting in their abundant fuel for their craft. Well said.
July 11th, 2017 03:56
mutual
kevin browne said:
yes, still trying to work this one out slightly. I get your vision of getting up, out and about in the tour of life. apart from that understanding I fell short at the end.
July 11th, 2017 02:26
kevin browne said:
yes, still trying to work this one out slightly. I get your vision of getting up, out and about in the tour of life. apart from that understanding I fell short at the end.
July 11th, 2017 02:26
mutual
FredPeyer said:
Paul I hate to admit it, but this time you lost me half way into your poem. Could use some help!
July 11th, 2017 02:06
FredPeyer said:
Paul I hate to admit it, but this time you lost me half way into your poem. Could use some help!
July 11th, 2017 02:06
solar system
malubotelho said:
Awesome Pauly. I like to think that God is playfull but I believe God is the nothing that fills all the empty space including inside us. But also is the creator of everything.
July 11th, 2017 00:05
malubotelho said:
Awesome Pauly. I like to think that God is playfull but I believe God is the nothing that fills all the empty space including inside us. But also is the creator of everything.
July 11th, 2017 00:05
solar system
Augustus said:
God is Juggling big colorful balls for our amusement. Heh,heh. Nicely done
July 10th, 2017 09:56
Augustus said:
God is Juggling big colorful balls for our amusement. Heh,heh. Nicely done
July 10th, 2017 09:56
solar system
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, one day we will visit the planets.
July 10th, 2017 07:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, one day we will visit the planets.
July 10th, 2017 07:41
solar system
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank OP for a playful and elegant jaunt through the SOLAR SYSTEM ? Have you ever wondered why in the midst of all this LIFELESSNESS ~ Planet Earth is the only LIVING PLANET ~ In the SOLAR SYSTEM and probably in our GALAXY the MILKY WAY. Planet Earth (GAIA) enables You & I to be alive and have a FUTURE as well as a PAST & PRESENT ~ makes you think ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ Thanks BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 05:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thank OP for a playful and elegant jaunt through the SOLAR SYSTEM ? Have you ever wondered why in the midst of all this LIFELESSNESS ~ Planet Earth is the only LIVING PLANET ~ In the SOLAR SYSTEM and probably in our GALAXY the MILKY WAY. Planet Earth (GAIA) enables You & I to be alive and have a FUTURE as well as a PAST & PRESENT ~ makes you think ! Please check my Poem & Fusion ~ Thanks BRIAN
July 10th, 2017 05:37
solar system
FredPeyer said:
Paul, only a mind like yours could come up with such a great poem about our neighboring planets. I love the line \"neptune is probably in the drink\". You think they have whiskey up there?
July 10th, 2017 04:24
FredPeyer said:
Paul, only a mind like yours could come up with such a great poem about our neighboring planets. I love the line \"neptune is probably in the drink\". You think they have whiskey up there?
July 10th, 2017 04:24
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