Comments received on poems by onepauly
refreshed
SLR said:
This reminds me of a placei used to live. Nearby there was a cave and a stream with the clearest, coldest, most gloriously pure water I\'ve ever tasted! I would do that exact thing, dipping my hands together into it to get a drink on my walks. Thank you for this reminder of a wonderful memory! Great write!
May 12th, 2018 17:50
SLR said:
This reminds me of a placei used to live. Nearby there was a cave and a stream with the clearest, coldest, most gloriously pure water I\'ve ever tasted! I would do that exact thing, dipping my hands together into it to get a drink on my walks. Thank you for this reminder of a wonderful memory! Great write!
May 12th, 2018 17:50
on writing
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all need to write, that need is within us.
May 7th, 2018 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all need to write, that need is within us.
May 7th, 2018 00:35
on writing
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I love the traditional rhyme work OnePauly and the asymmetry of your 5 couplets. “On Writing” a tradionalist’s delight!
May 6th, 2018 20:39
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I love the traditional rhyme work OnePauly and the asymmetry of your 5 couplets. “On Writing” a tradionalist’s delight!
May 6th, 2018 20:39
on writing
Laura🌻 said:
No letter grade, Pauly!
A holistic grade is more like it! An excellent write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 19:54
Laura🌻 said:
No letter grade, Pauly!
A holistic grade is more like it! An excellent write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 19:54
on writing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks PAULY as Poets ~ Commentators ~ Teachers & Preachers we are all required too WRITE ! Getting it RIGHT is a separate problem !
Yours BRIAN (UK)
May 6th, 2018 03:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks PAULY as Poets ~ Commentators ~ Teachers & Preachers we are all required too WRITE ! Getting it RIGHT is a separate problem !
Yours BRIAN (UK)
May 6th, 2018 03:03
a normal day
FineB said:
Thank you Onepauly.
A vivid and interesting poem.
A day at times can last for eternity especially if you are having a bad one.
Keep writing
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:44
FineB said:
Thank you Onepauly.
A vivid and interesting poem.
A day at times can last for eternity especially if you are having a bad one.
Keep writing
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:44
shelter
Christina8 said:
Enjoyed this fun poem! Hopefully you really don\'t have to endure more winter! Great job!
May 1st, 2018 14:15
Christina8 said:
Enjoyed this fun poem! Hopefully you really don\'t have to endure more winter! Great job!
May 1st, 2018 14:15
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