Comments received on poems by onepauly
shelter
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write onepauly, enjoy the warmth and your music.
May 1st, 2018 08:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write onepauly, enjoy the warmth and your music.
May 1st, 2018 08:13
shelter
Lorna said:
This sounds like a cozy cabin and lovely fire for a winter\'s day OnePauly - but hopefully not again - yet!!!
May 1st, 2018 04:45
Lorna said:
This sounds like a cozy cabin and lovely fire for a winter\'s day OnePauly - but hopefully not again - yet!!!
May 1st, 2018 04:45
grateful
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine recommendation to foster positive thinking Pauly - - being grateful is the secret to happiness.
April 30th, 2018 12:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine recommendation to foster positive thinking Pauly - - being grateful is the secret to happiness.
April 30th, 2018 12:06
at home
MendedFences27 said:
Just for the fun of it? A great flow of words and rhymes. No particular purpose just wordin\' and rhymin\' for the fun of it. I think we all do this, at times , just to \"unwind\" as you say. It helps to get the juices flowing and maybe will lead to something else. Good job on the writing. Liked it.- Phil A.
April 29th, 2018 11:05
MendedFences27 said:
Just for the fun of it? A great flow of words and rhymes. No particular purpose just wordin\' and rhymin\' for the fun of it. I think we all do this, at times , just to \"unwind\" as you say. It helps to get the juices flowing and maybe will lead to something else. Good job on the writing. Liked it.- Phil A.
April 29th, 2018 11:05
us
Goldfinch60 said:
We cannot change what we are and in time we may find out what it is all about.
April 29th, 2018 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
We cannot change what we are and in time we may find out what it is all about.
April 29th, 2018 00:29
us
Christina8 said:
It definitely takes guts to put yourself out there but this is a great write. This is what we as poets do. A great write onepauly!
April 28th, 2018 17:52
Christina8 said:
It definitely takes guts to put yourself out there but this is a great write. This is what we as poets do. A great write onepauly!
April 28th, 2018 17:52
us
orchidee said:
The only thing that drives people nuts is me singing! heehee.
April 28th, 2018 10:07
orchidee said:
The only thing that drives people nuts is me singing! heehee.
April 28th, 2018 10:07
us
Laura🌻 said:
onepauly,
We are what we are and we do what we do...for our own sake!
A pleasure to read your poem!
Enjoyed it!
~Laura~
April 28th, 2018 05:41
Laura🌻 said:
onepauly,
We are what we are and we do what we do...for our own sake!
A pleasure to read your poem!
Enjoyed it!
~Laura~
April 28th, 2018 05:41
up and atom
Fay Slimm. said:
A power-packed write Paul - - love the twist and play on words which add so much force to the read.
April 28th, 2018 02:26
Fay Slimm. said:
A power-packed write Paul - - love the twist and play on words which add so much force to the read.
April 28th, 2018 02:26
up and atom
X A I said:
Such a heartfelt and expressive poem... Keep it up, Paul!
April 27th, 2018 18:57
X A I said:
Such a heartfelt and expressive poem... Keep it up, Paul!
April 27th, 2018 18:57
up and atom
FineB said:
Sharp and good onepauly.
Excellent.
Keep writing
FineB
April 27th, 2018 14:24
FineB said:
Sharp and good onepauly.
Excellent.
Keep writing
FineB
April 27th, 2018 14:24
up and atom
kevin browne said:
wow, that hit me really hard. strong write, my friend.
April 27th, 2018 06:03
kevin browne said:
wow, that hit me really hard. strong write, my friend.
April 27th, 2018 06:03
all candor
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write onepauly, this applies to you as well.
April 26th, 2018 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write onepauly, this applies to you as well.
April 26th, 2018 00:51
create
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write both in words and rhythm, I could imagine this performed in rap.
April 24th, 2018 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write both in words and rhythm, I could imagine this performed in rap.
April 24th, 2018 00:15
create
Fay Slimm. said:
I truly agree with these clever lines on the power of mindfulness Pauly.
April 23rd, 2018 16:05
Fay Slimm. said:
I truly agree with these clever lines on the power of mindfulness Pauly.
April 23rd, 2018 16:05
Beach Dineing
kitcat said:
Great poem really enjoyed it I had to smile at the end didn\'t expect that
April 23rd, 2018 15:19
kitcat said:
Great poem really enjoyed it I had to smile at the end didn\'t expect that
April 23rd, 2018 15:19
poets and poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write onepauly, you must include yourself in this tribute.
April 23rd, 2018 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write onepauly, you must include yourself in this tribute.
April 23rd, 2018 01:07
the bus ride
kitcat said:
Brilliant I enjoyed reading it and your so right it made me smile
April 22nd, 2018 17:06
kitcat said:
Brilliant I enjoyed reading it and your so right it made me smile
April 22nd, 2018 17:06
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