Comments received on poems by onepauly
poets and poetry
kevin browne said:
nice poem, onepauly, you obviously haven\'t lost your touch. keep them coming.
April 22nd, 2018 16:55
kevin browne said:
nice poem, onepauly, you obviously haven\'t lost your touch. keep them coming.
April 22nd, 2018 16:55
poets and poetry
Michael Edwards said:
Ah \'tis ever so - nice piece and so apt.
April 22nd, 2018 09:23
Michael Edwards said:
Ah \'tis ever so - nice piece and so apt.
April 22nd, 2018 09:23
inner peace
AlexHoy said:
Good poem :). Never give up in your search for inner peace. It’s a beautiful thing!
April 21st, 2018 11:17
AlexHoy said:
Good poem :). Never give up in your search for inner peace. It’s a beautiful thing!
April 21st, 2018 11:17
inner peace
Laura🌻 said:
Yes, onepauly, “peace and tranquility” is what we all want and need!
A great write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 21st, 2018 10:02
Laura🌻 said:
Yes, onepauly, “peace and tranquility” is what we all want and need!
A great write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
April 21st, 2018 10:02
the bus ride
AllTheRandomThings said:
This is great! I love the visual aspect you get from it, I was envisioning being on a bus while pondering on society and all its red type mysteries. awesome work!
April 20th, 2018 15:04
AllTheRandomThings said:
This is great! I love the visual aspect you get from it, I was envisioning being on a bus while pondering on society and all its red type mysteries. awesome work!
April 20th, 2018 15:04
the bus ride
Nicholas Browning said:
Haha. A good one for sure. We should think about that shouldn\'t we. A nice work. Much enjoyed.
April 20th, 2018 03:48
Nicholas Browning said:
Haha. A good one for sure. We should think about that shouldn\'t we. A nice work. Much enjoyed.
April 20th, 2018 03:48
Beach Dineing
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Life is good from the perspective of this poem onepauly; life indeed is a blessing and your poem captures the sentiment of a life lived well -
April 18th, 2018 20:17
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Life is good from the perspective of this poem onepauly; life indeed is a blessing and your poem captures the sentiment of a life lived well -
April 18th, 2018 20:17
Beach Dineing
FineB said:
Thanks onepauly.
Simply lovely.
After having watched an excellent Commonwealth Games from the Gold Coast in Australia I wish I was somewhere tropical certainly after reading your poem.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:14
FineB said:
Thanks onepauly.
Simply lovely.
After having watched an excellent Commonwealth Games from the Gold Coast in Australia I wish I was somewhere tropical certainly after reading your poem.
Keep writing
FineB
April 14th, 2018 05:14
Beach Dineing
Lorna said:
Well you\'ve made me jealous for a picnic on the beach!
April 13th, 2018 06:23
Lorna said:
Well you\'ve made me jealous for a picnic on the beach!
April 13th, 2018 06:23
Beach Dineing
blast219 said:
i like the humor in the last line really made me smile
April 13th, 2018 06:12
blast219 said:
i like the humor in the last line really made me smile
April 13th, 2018 06:12
morning walk
Goldfinch60 said:
Early morning walks are fabulous with or without the cheesecake.
April 11th, 2018 08:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Early morning walks are fabulous with or without the cheesecake.
April 11th, 2018 08:25
morning walk
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Paul, - -that early morning walk must be a tonic without the arrival of noise - -- - hope that cheesecake tasted just as good as it looked. Good read.
April 11th, 2018 05:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Paul, - -that early morning walk must be a tonic without the arrival of noise - -- - hope that cheesecake tasted just as good as it looked. Good read.
April 11th, 2018 05:38
morning walk
Lorna said:
Love your little morning walk and now you have made me hungry! I\'ll have to find cheesecake!
April 11th, 2018 05:04
Lorna said:
Love your little morning walk and now you have made me hungry! I\'ll have to find cheesecake!
April 11th, 2018 05:04
TRUTH
Goldfinch60 said:
Life changes all the while but in spite being thrown onto a different road you always end up where your are meant to be.
April 10th, 2018 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Life changes all the while but in spite being thrown onto a different road you always end up where your are meant to be.
April 10th, 2018 00:58
start
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but to my mind rhyming is not important, not many of my poems rhyme but the emotion shows through them.
April 9th, 2018 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but to my mind rhyming is not important, not many of my poems rhyme but the emotion shows through them.
April 9th, 2018 02:18
the cyclonic experience
kevin browne said:
isn\'t that centrifugal force, onepauly, or do you perceive it to be different. would like to hear your thoughts.
April 3rd, 2018 19:00
kevin browne said:
isn\'t that centrifugal force, onepauly, or do you perceive it to be different. would like to hear your thoughts.
April 3rd, 2018 19:00
the cyclonic experience
kevin browne said:
like your poem is exploding inside your poem showing goos strength. good see you, onepauly.
April 2nd, 2018 06:44
kevin browne said:
like your poem is exploding inside your poem showing goos strength. good see you, onepauly.
April 2nd, 2018 06:44
mirror talk
Caring dove said:
oh , this is very nice , paul :-) i love the wording , its quite interesting . i love how you started talking about the mirror on the wall .
January 23rd, 2018 05:41
Caring dove said:
oh , this is very nice , paul :-) i love the wording , its quite interesting . i love how you started talking about the mirror on the wall .
January 23rd, 2018 05:41
ahoy!
Caring dove said:
hello , i like this , it sounds about someone who feels very lost and alone , the wind and the rain whilst being on the ocean all alone sounds kind of scary and how do we get out of that place with nobody around to help us get out .. nice piece of writing
January 23rd, 2018 05:32
Caring dove said:
hello , i like this , it sounds about someone who feels very lost and alone , the wind and the rain whilst being on the ocean all alone sounds kind of scary and how do we get out of that place with nobody around to help us get out .. nice piece of writing
January 23rd, 2018 05:32
the gate
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I hope the gate remains open for us all.
August 1st, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I hope the gate remains open for us all.
August 1st, 2017 01:10
the gate
kevin browne said:
so you\'re not mad and there was I thinking? great write though my little onepauly.
July 31st, 2017 22:49
kevin browne said:
so you\'re not mad and there was I thinking? great write though my little onepauly.
July 31st, 2017 22:49
the gate
malubotelho said:
I like that you are knock, knock on heavens door. Great poem Pauly.
July 31st, 2017 20:22
malubotelho said:
I like that you are knock, knock on heavens door. Great poem Pauly.
July 31st, 2017 20:22
the gate
FredPeyer said:
Great writing. I have been knocking, but a lot of times there is no answer. Seems like the lights are on, but nobody home.
July 31st, 2017 17:19
FredPeyer said:
Great writing. I have been knocking, but a lot of times there is no answer. Seems like the lights are on, but nobody home.
July 31st, 2017 17:19
chant
FredPeyer said:
My guess......????????????????
No clue what it means or stands for, but had a great time reading it. Maybe comparable to an abstract painting, beautiful to look at, but not getting it.
July 31st, 2017 12:00
FredPeyer said:
My guess......????????????????
No clue what it means or stands for, but had a great time reading it. Maybe comparable to an abstract painting, beautiful to look at, but not getting it.
July 31st, 2017 12:00
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