Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
FredPeyer said:
Thank you! Even though writing is a solitary art, I do not feel alone after reading all your comments. I am looking forward to your constructive criticisms on my future poems.
June 22nd, 2017 12:43
FredPeyer said:
Thank you! Even though writing is a solitary art, I do not feel alone after reading all your comments. I am looking forward to your constructive criticisms on my future poems.
June 22nd, 2017 12:43
These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED two GREAT ODES ~ To make us all realise that to most of us POETRY does not come natural ~ like writing recipes ! BUT when the MUSE MOVES it is much more effective than \"Syrup of Figs! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
June 22nd, 2017 10:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED two GREAT ODES ~ To make us all realise that to most of us POETRY does not come natural ~ like writing recipes ! BUT when the MUSE MOVES it is much more effective than \"Syrup of Figs! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
June 22nd, 2017 10:51
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Louis Gibbs said:
Charming poems, Fred. Certainly worth sharing!
June 22nd, 2017 09:29
Louis Gibbs said:
Charming poems, Fred. Certainly worth sharing!
June 22nd, 2017 09:29
These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
P.H.Rose said:
Great two poems sir
Enjoyed them so much.
I\'d love to write on a typewriter
Unfortunately I\'m illiterate
And cannot spell or produce
Grammar. My saviour is
Spell check and perdictive text.
June 22nd, 2017 03:44
P.H.Rose said:
Great two poems sir
Enjoyed them so much.
I\'d love to write on a typewriter
Unfortunately I\'m illiterate
And cannot spell or produce
Grammar. My saviour is
Spell check and perdictive text.
June 22nd, 2017 03:44
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Frank Prem said:
Well done for persisting Fred.
Bravo
June 22nd, 2017 03:23
Frank Prem said:
Well done for persisting Fred.
Bravo
June 22nd, 2017 03:23
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Michael Edwards said:
Great write but not something I usually experience. If an idea comes to me I scribble down a few ideas and then play around with them until I get a poem out of it as with yesterdays poem. Other than that I have a notebook into which I put phrases, words that appeal, ideas etc. that come to me at any time, when reading, watching TV, talking to others etcetera and I have the book with me at all times. These ideas are usually quite disjointed and unrelated. I never sit in front of a screen and think what to write about.
What I do is type a series of entries from the book (I score through them in the book so I don\'t repeat them again later) and usually they trigger an idea for a poem. If they don\'t I leave them in my documents and add to them from time to time until something jumps out of the woodwork at me. That\'s exactly how todays poem Deserted Graveyard came about.
June 22nd, 2017 02:29
Michael Edwards said:
Great write but not something I usually experience. If an idea comes to me I scribble down a few ideas and then play around with them until I get a poem out of it as with yesterdays poem. Other than that I have a notebook into which I put phrases, words that appeal, ideas etc. that come to me at any time, when reading, watching TV, talking to others etcetera and I have the book with me at all times. These ideas are usually quite disjointed and unrelated. I never sit in front of a screen and think what to write about.
What I do is type a series of entries from the book (I score through them in the book so I don\'t repeat them again later) and usually they trigger an idea for a poem. If they don\'t I leave them in my documents and add to them from time to time until something jumps out of the woodwork at me. That\'s exactly how todays poem Deserted Graveyard came about.
June 22nd, 2017 02:29
Memories of Last Night
FredPeyer said:
Thank you everybody! Your encouragement is very much appreciated.
June 22nd, 2017 02:03
FredPeyer said:
Thank you everybody! Your encouragement is very much appreciated.
June 22nd, 2017 02:03
Memories of Last Night
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - written in such style and with a surprise ending this has to be read again Fred. Into my favs. with this one
June 22nd, 2017 01:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - written in such style and with a surprise ending this has to be read again Fred. Into my favs. with this one
June 22nd, 2017 01:51
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Goldfinch60 said:
Most have been there, that empty page or blank screen can sometimes be very daunting. Good writes.
June 22nd, 2017 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Most have been there, that empty page or blank screen can sometimes be very daunting. Good writes.
June 22nd, 2017 01:43
Memories of Last Night
The Broken Vessel said:
I\'m a very visual listener, and your words paint a perfect picture. I followed where you took me, and I giggled with her in the end. Wonderful Picture Thank you
June 21st, 2017 23:48
The Broken Vessel said:
I\'m a very visual listener, and your words paint a perfect picture. I followed where you took me, and I giggled with her in the end. Wonderful Picture Thank you
June 21st, 2017 23:48
Abandoned
Magic Maker said:
I\'m looking forward to reading more of your work. This is incredibly moving and well thought out. Great work.
June 21st, 2017 19:53
Magic Maker said:
I\'m looking forward to reading more of your work. This is incredibly moving and well thought out. Great work.
June 21st, 2017 19:53
Memories of Last Night
Louis Gibbs said:
I love poems with a punch line, such as this one. Well done, Fred!
June 21st, 2017 11:57
Louis Gibbs said:
I love poems with a punch line, such as this one. Well done, Fred!
June 21st, 2017 11:57
Memories of Last Night
FredPeyer said:
Thank you to all of you! I am glad you like it. And as far as subject matter is concerned, it is true, I am kind of all over the place. I usually write a first line and then that mysterious thing called mind simply takes over. Mahalo!
June 21st, 2017 10:02
FredPeyer said:
Thank you to all of you! I am glad you like it. And as far as subject matter is concerned, it is true, I am kind of all over the place. I usually write a first line and then that mysterious thing called mind simply takes over. Mahalo!
June 21st, 2017 10:02
Memories of Last Night
Michael Edwards said:
Well penned sir - and what a great last line - yes this really appealed to me.
June 21st, 2017 00:18
Michael Edwards said:
Well penned sir - and what a great last line - yes this really appealed to me.
June 21st, 2017 00:18
Abandoned
malubotelho said:
Yes, I really liked your poem. Hope I can read more of that. Thank you.
June 20th, 2017 23:31
malubotelho said:
Yes, I really liked your poem. Hope I can read more of that. Thank you.
June 20th, 2017 23:31
Abandoned
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Jeff and Harvey! Your encouragement helps to overcome all the self doubts.
June 20th, 2017 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Jeff and Harvey! Your encouragement helps to overcome all the self doubts.
June 20th, 2017 11:31
Abandoned
HarveyDent said:
This is real and well written. Evokes so much emotion
June 20th, 2017 11:03
HarveyDent said:
This is real and well written. Evokes so much emotion
June 20th, 2017 11:03
Abandoned
Jeff said:
If this is an example of future writes from you....then i am defintiely quitting writing lol....very well done....an excellent poem. Great job
June 20th, 2017 07:06
Jeff said:
If this is an example of future writes from you....then i am defintiely quitting writing lol....very well done....an excellent poem. Great job
June 20th, 2017 07:06
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