Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Waiting
P.H.Rose said:
Just so bloody good
Fred... I can see
Myself in every word
You wrote.....
June 30th, 2017 04:36
P.H.Rose said:
Just so bloody good
Fred... I can see
Myself in every word
You wrote.....
June 30th, 2017 04:36
Waiting
Renzi said:
To live, not only survive. LIVE :) When you think about this life, world, yourself. You are actually capable of anything and that\'s amazing. Mindblowing. Its the hard part putting those thoughts into actions. I\'m rooting fo you :)
June 30th, 2017 04:24
Renzi said:
To live, not only survive. LIVE :) When you think about this life, world, yourself. You are actually capable of anything and that\'s amazing. Mindblowing. Its the hard part putting those thoughts into actions. I\'m rooting fo you :)
June 30th, 2017 04:24
Waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
I can relate to this verse and its lesson in the futility that sheer waiting can bring Fred - those final lines speak wisely of the freedom experienced when \"self-inflicted shackles\" are lifted.
June 30th, 2017 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
I can relate to this verse and its lesson in the futility that sheer waiting can bring Fred - those final lines speak wisely of the freedom experienced when \"self-inflicted shackles\" are lifted.
June 30th, 2017 04:01
Today I said Goodbye
onepauly said:
I said goodbye to myself long ago
and whats left over is me.
June 29th, 2017 18:49
onepauly said:
I said goodbye to myself long ago
and whats left over is me.
June 29th, 2017 18:49
Today I said Goodbye
Augustus said:
Love the message and the presentation. Good stuff!
June 29th, 2017 16:14
Augustus said:
Love the message and the presentation. Good stuff!
June 29th, 2017 16:14
Today I said Goodbye
Heather T said:
Nothing like shaking the dust off of your soul.
June 29th, 2017 10:48
Heather T said:
Nothing like shaking the dust off of your soul.
June 29th, 2017 10:48
Today I said Goodbye
Louis Gibbs said:
A formidable and noble challenge you have given yourself, Fred! I like your poem and admire you for setting this goal.
June 29th, 2017 10:07
Louis Gibbs said:
A formidable and noble challenge you have given yourself, Fred! I like your poem and admire you for setting this goal.
June 29th, 2017 10:07
Today I said Goodbye
P.H.Rose said:
VerY good Fred...
As we say in the uk
It\'s a cracker !!!
June 29th, 2017 10:05
P.H.Rose said:
VerY good Fred...
As we say in the uk
It\'s a cracker !!!
June 29th, 2017 10:05
Today I said Goodbye
ShannonXx said:
A very uplifting poem! A great message attached to this that others should follow!
June 29th, 2017 06:51
ShannonXx said:
A very uplifting poem! A great message attached to this that others should follow!
June 29th, 2017 06:51
Today I said Goodbye
Renzi said:
Cleaning out the closest. Sometimes losing things from life is the greatest gain :) freedom, nicely penned my friend.
June 29th, 2017 03:47
Renzi said:
Cleaning out the closest. Sometimes losing things from life is the greatest gain :) freedom, nicely penned my friend.
June 29th, 2017 03:47
You will love it there
onepauly said:
I\'m 62. I don\'t want to grow old
any suggestions?
June 28th, 2017 18:31
onepauly said:
I\'m 62. I don\'t want to grow old
any suggestions?
June 28th, 2017 18:31
You will love it there
avigail said:
sad ,great write...my prayer - never be dependent ... always be creative...
June 28th, 2017 15:12
avigail said:
sad ,great write...my prayer - never be dependent ... always be creative...
June 28th, 2017 15:12
You will love it there
Michael Edwards said:
The older I get the more I fear ending up in a home - this really brings home the reality of it all.
June 28th, 2017 09:53
Michael Edwards said:
The older I get the more I fear ending up in a home - this really brings home the reality of it all.
June 28th, 2017 09:53
You will love it there
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow, a very well done commentary poem, Fred! Save the 700 bucks a day and just shoot me.
June 28th, 2017 08:28
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow, a very well done commentary poem, Fred! Save the 700 bucks a day and just shoot me.
June 28th, 2017 08:28
You will love it there
Renzi said:
This reminds me of one of my times i was sent to hospital .. although they did not tell me i would love it there! I didn\'t!! Another great write? I hope all is okay.
June 28th, 2017 04:06
Renzi said:
This reminds me of one of my times i was sent to hospital .. although they did not tell me i would love it there! I didn\'t!! Another great write? I hope all is okay.
June 28th, 2017 04:06
Symphony
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Life\'s symphony is there for us all.
June 28th, 2017 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Life\'s symphony is there for us all.
June 28th, 2017 00:42
Symphony
onepauly said:
read this one often enough
and it will grow on you.
wonderful!
June 27th, 2017 19:07
onepauly said:
read this one often enough
and it will grow on you.
wonderful!
June 27th, 2017 19:07
Symphony
Christina8 said:
Really enjoyed reading this! Wonderful rhyme and cadence. Loved the message.
June 27th, 2017 18:00
Christina8 said:
Really enjoyed reading this! Wonderful rhyme and cadence. Loved the message.
June 27th, 2017 18:00
Moon Candy
malubotelho said:
Other the from the sad part that you did not have a stick I liked it very much. I felt some innocence on it. When I was a kid I always dreamed about being left locked inside a candy store and had to spend the night there eating all those delicious candy. My first job I was only thirteen and when I\'ve got my first paycheck what was cash I run to the candy store and bought a basket full of candy. I ate so much candy that day that for a long time after I could not see candy without feeling sick. And the dream never came back.
June 27th, 2017 13:27
malubotelho said:
Other the from the sad part that you did not have a stick I liked it very much. I felt some innocence on it. When I was a kid I always dreamed about being left locked inside a candy store and had to spend the night there eating all those delicious candy. My first job I was only thirteen and when I\'ve got my first paycheck what was cash I run to the candy store and bought a basket full of candy. I ate so much candy that day that for a long time after I could not see candy without feeling sick. And the dream never came back.
June 27th, 2017 13:27
Abandoned
FredPeyer said:
Thank you everybody, it is a pleasure and honor to be a part of this group!
June 27th, 2017 12:53
FredPeyer said:
Thank you everybody, it is a pleasure and honor to be a part of this group!
June 27th, 2017 12:53
Symphony
Louis Gibbs said:
As well we all are the \'conductors of our life\'s symphony\' ... beautifully expressed, Fred!
June 27th, 2017 10:44
Louis Gibbs said:
As well we all are the \'conductors of our life\'s symphony\' ... beautifully expressed, Fred!
June 27th, 2017 10:44
Moon Candy
Renzi said:
Every sunrise is a second chance. Find that stick 😉 great write alfred 😊
June 27th, 2017 03:48
Renzi said:
Every sunrise is a second chance. Find that stick 😉 great write alfred 😊
June 27th, 2017 03:48
Moon Candy
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much everybody! I think no matter what we should keep on dreaming! And Robert, I guess I am getting a little bit too old for eye candy. But like a beautiful painting, I can appreciate a beautiful lady.
June 26th, 2017 21:53
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much everybody! I think no matter what we should keep on dreaming! And Robert, I guess I am getting a little bit too old for eye candy. But like a beautiful painting, I can appreciate a beautiful lady.
June 26th, 2017 21:53
Moon Candy
onepauly said:
all things are possible
esp\' ecially
in our dreams
want some candy?
June 26th, 2017 20:21
onepauly said:
all things are possible
esp\' ecially
in our dreams
want some candy?
June 26th, 2017 20:21
Moon Candy
Heather T said:
Sweetly sad piece that is highly relatable. Enjoyed you.
June 26th, 2017 16:26
Heather T said:
Sweetly sad piece that is highly relatable. Enjoyed you.
June 26th, 2017 16:26
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