Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Hoping
Michael Edwards said:
And next to hope I would place the need (for many of us) to have a companion in life. Loneliness I guess more often than not goes hand in hand with hope. A very telling write.
July 10th, 2017 14:07
Michael Edwards said:
And next to hope I would place the need (for many of us) to have a companion in life. Loneliness I guess more often than not goes hand in hand with hope. A very telling write.
July 10th, 2017 14:07
Hoping
Louis Gibbs said:
Good poem and a powerful last line, Fred! A home run! I love it when a poem has a killer ending such as this.
July 10th, 2017 12:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Good poem and a powerful last line, Fred! A home run! I love it when a poem has a killer ending such as this.
July 10th, 2017 12:42
Hoping
burning-embers said:
Its a good thing to have hope in your life but a bad thing if hope becomes your life. There are many things us hopefuls can do as well as hope. Like following your example of excellent writing.
July 10th, 2017 10:47
burning-embers said:
Its a good thing to have hope in your life but a bad thing if hope becomes your life. There are many things us hopefuls can do as well as hope. Like following your example of excellent writing.
July 10th, 2017 10:47
Hoping
onepauly said:
maybe she loved the birds. don\'t want to up one on you. (I hope) she finds someone she could love.
July 10th, 2017 09:19
onepauly said:
maybe she loved the birds. don\'t want to up one on you. (I hope) she finds someone she could love.
July 10th, 2017 09:19
Hoping
Nicholas Browning said:
Hope is a sword that is drawn at the cost of one\'s own blood. True indeed.
July 10th, 2017 06:03
Nicholas Browning said:
Hope is a sword that is drawn at the cost of one\'s own blood. True indeed.
July 10th, 2017 06:03
Heart Space
malubotelho said:
You are cute asking those question. I could see a little boy inside you asking those question. I would say that our heart has a way of its on. All we have to do is listen and follow to it. Thanks for this beautiful thought.
July 9th, 2017 15:23
malubotelho said:
You are cute asking those question. I could see a little boy inside you asking those question. I would say that our heart has a way of its on. All we have to do is listen and follow to it. Thanks for this beautiful thought.
July 9th, 2017 15:23
Heart Space
Heather T said:
Immeasurable, as long as we are walking in it (love).
July 9th, 2017 13:29
Heather T said:
Immeasurable, as long as we are walking in it (love).
July 9th, 2017 13:29
Heart Space
Michael Edwards said:
Love is infinite - just a shame so many either deny it or are denied it.
July 9th, 2017 10:48
Michael Edwards said:
Love is infinite - just a shame so many either deny it or are denied it.
July 9th, 2017 10:48
Heart Space
Louis Gibbs said:
In the final analysis, what else is there to life but love? It is expansive and infinite, as are we. Love this thoughtful and thought-provoking poem, Fred!
July 9th, 2017 10:47
Louis Gibbs said:
In the final analysis, what else is there to life but love? It is expansive and infinite, as are we. Love this thoughtful and thought-provoking poem, Fred!
July 9th, 2017 10:47
Heart Space
burning-embers said:
Today they measure space in gigabytes and stuff.I think i\'ve got many many gigglebytes left for love in me my friend. Thought provoking piece because as we age so we encapsulate more love.
July 9th, 2017 08:16
burning-embers said:
Today they measure space in gigabytes and stuff.I think i\'ve got many many gigglebytes left for love in me my friend. Thought provoking piece because as we age so we encapsulate more love.
July 9th, 2017 08:16
Heart Space
Renzi said:
Dance to the beat of my drum * heartbeat* well i love this write. So there is more love. Love has no limits. The heart sometimes forgets because the mind likes to fight with the heart and trick it through life. But the heart- to infinity and beyond is that hearts love 💓
July 9th, 2017 04:28
Renzi said:
Dance to the beat of my drum * heartbeat* well i love this write. So there is more love. Love has no limits. The heart sometimes forgets because the mind likes to fight with the heart and trick it through life. But the heart- to infinity and beyond is that hearts love 💓
July 9th, 2017 04:28
Heart Space
onepauly said:
there you go. you have answered your own question. I really like this one!
July 9th, 2017 04:26
onepauly said:
there you go. you have answered your own question. I really like this one!
July 9th, 2017 04:26
Heart Space
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Take heart FRED ~ in my experience HEART SPACE is infinite as we still grieve for those killed in LONDON ~ BIRMINGHAM ~ London High Rise ~ Iraq etc etc. GOD is LOVE and his LOVE is infinite ~ We are created in God\'s likeness ~ a priori our HEART SPACE is also infinite ! So keep you Heart open to the whole World ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 03:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Take heart FRED ~ in my experience HEART SPACE is infinite as we still grieve for those killed in LONDON ~ BIRMINGHAM ~ London High Rise ~ Iraq etc etc. GOD is LOVE and his LOVE is infinite ~ We are created in God\'s likeness ~ a priori our HEART SPACE is also infinite ! So keep you Heart open to the whole World ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 03:40
Heart Space
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much for your comment Fay, I was playing around a little bit here. I know we are saying that love comes from the heart, but the heart is just a muscle. The mind is probably more accurate!
July 9th, 2017 03:34
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much for your comment Fay, I was playing around a little bit here. I know we are saying that love comes from the heart, but the heart is just a muscle. The mind is probably more accurate!
July 9th, 2017 03:34
Heart Space
Fay Slimm. said:
Intriguing thoughts here regarding heart-space my friend - - real love comes from the heart and love cannot die so the final stanza says it for me - \" ever expanding with no limits\" oh what a mystery is the human heart. Excellent read Fred.
July 9th, 2017 03:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Intriguing thoughts here regarding heart-space my friend - - real love comes from the heart and love cannot die so the final stanza says it for me - \" ever expanding with no limits\" oh what a mystery is the human heart. Excellent read Fred.
July 9th, 2017 03:27
Mind
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Interesting poem. Thinking about the sky beyond the sky is what so many do all the time. I enjoyed the poem, tyfs!
July 8th, 2017 20:21
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Interesting poem. Thinking about the sky beyond the sky is what so many do all the time. I enjoyed the poem, tyfs!
July 8th, 2017 20:21
Mind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ For SHARING ~ an interesting Poem and for RAISING (in our minds) some interesting questions. I am a BIOCHEMIST and there is a false assumption that \"If the conditions were right ~ anywhere in the Universe ~ LIFE would arise spontaneously\". A priori because the Universe is so vast there must be some Parallel Earth-like Planets out there inhabited by Intelligent Beings ~ just like us ! Of course this is all Science Fiction and there is no evidence that Life arose spontaneously on Earth and the Theory of Evolution that flows from that (to explain the myriad Species on Planet Earth) is also still A THEORY 158 years later. Have you considered the complexity of Life on Earth with its complex food chains & webs and the Mineral Cycles (water ~ carbon ~ oxygen ~ nitrogen) why our planet has so much water and an atmosphere of Oxygen (21%) and Nitrogen (78%) ~ and an ambient temperature which is still only 16C and a super moon etc etc ~ A LIVING PLANET ! Now look at our lifeless neighbours MARS & VENUS and ask yourself why ? Also observe that the other Planets in the Solar System are even less habitable ~ if we mess up Planet Earth ~ THERE IS NOWHERE ELSE TO GO ! This is why I post so many Poems about CONSERVATION ! I have studied Science since I was TEN (23 years ago !) and the only Truth I find about the origin of the Universe ~ The Solar System ~ Planet earth and Life on Earth etc is in the BIBLE the Word of God ! the first verse states \"In the beginning ~ GOD created the Heavens and the Earth etc etc\" Genesis 1 v 1. Even atheistic Scientists admit ~ that that explanation (God did it !) is just as viable as anything they have to offer ! I rest my case. What\'s your explanation ? Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 16:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ For SHARING ~ an interesting Poem and for RAISING (in our minds) some interesting questions. I am a BIOCHEMIST and there is a false assumption that \"If the conditions were right ~ anywhere in the Universe ~ LIFE would arise spontaneously\". A priori because the Universe is so vast there must be some Parallel Earth-like Planets out there inhabited by Intelligent Beings ~ just like us ! Of course this is all Science Fiction and there is no evidence that Life arose spontaneously on Earth and the Theory of Evolution that flows from that (to explain the myriad Species on Planet Earth) is also still A THEORY 158 years later. Have you considered the complexity of Life on Earth with its complex food chains & webs and the Mineral Cycles (water ~ carbon ~ oxygen ~ nitrogen) why our planet has so much water and an atmosphere of Oxygen (21%) and Nitrogen (78%) ~ and an ambient temperature which is still only 16C and a super moon etc etc ~ A LIVING PLANET ! Now look at our lifeless neighbours MARS & VENUS and ask yourself why ? Also observe that the other Planets in the Solar System are even less habitable ~ if we mess up Planet Earth ~ THERE IS NOWHERE ELSE TO GO ! This is why I post so many Poems about CONSERVATION ! I have studied Science since I was TEN (23 years ago !) and the only Truth I find about the origin of the Universe ~ The Solar System ~ Planet earth and Life on Earth etc is in the BIBLE the Word of God ! the first verse states \"In the beginning ~ GOD created the Heavens and the Earth etc etc\" Genesis 1 v 1. Even atheistic Scientists admit ~ that that explanation (God did it !) is just as viable as anything they have to offer ! I rest my case. What\'s your explanation ? Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2017 16:31
Mind
malubotelho said:
Thanks for this beautiful write. I like to think that we are all connected through this ruge universe and I always like to feel that connection before going to sleep. Thinking this way I never feel lonely.
July 8th, 2017 15:06
malubotelho said:
Thanks for this beautiful write. I like to think that we are all connected through this ruge universe and I always like to feel that connection before going to sleep. Thinking this way I never feel lonely.
July 8th, 2017 15:06
Mind
Louis Gibbs said:
Your \'huge mind\' and \'old soul\' come across in this fine poem, Fred. I\'m sure our brothers out there are aware of us too, and are quite concerned.
July 8th, 2017 11:04
Louis Gibbs said:
Your \'huge mind\' and \'old soul\' come across in this fine poem, Fred. I\'m sure our brothers out there are aware of us too, and are quite concerned.
July 8th, 2017 11:04
Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, they are out there and one day we will meet them.
July 8th, 2017 08:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, they are out there and one day we will meet them.
July 8th, 2017 08:21
Mind
Fay Slimm. said:
We are made with eternity held inside and this lovely read reminds us that small though our body is we are as old as the soul we own. Thanks for your poetic thoughts here Fred.
July 8th, 2017 05:22
Fay Slimm. said:
We are made with eternity held inside and this lovely read reminds us that small though our body is we are as old as the soul we own. Thanks for your poetic thoughts here Fred.
July 8th, 2017 05:22
Mind
kevin browne said:
seeing and loving your brother I guess is a desire you have. God will shine down on you and help you through your traumas. thank you for sharing your intimate feeling.
July 8th, 2017 04:32
kevin browne said:
seeing and loving your brother I guess is a desire you have. God will shine down on you and help you through your traumas. thank you for sharing your intimate feeling.
July 8th, 2017 04:32
Mind
burning-embers said:
I like your style here. Drawn me into your thoughts there and bigger questions,like - do those beings share our spiritual nature. Every civilization on earth has had a spiritual good and bad ethic etc. It\'s those last two lines.
July 8th, 2017 04:28
burning-embers said:
I like your style here. Drawn me into your thoughts there and bigger questions,like - do those beings share our spiritual nature. Every civilization on earth has had a spiritual good and bad ethic etc. It\'s those last two lines.
July 8th, 2017 04:28
Mind
onepauly said:
outstanding! I followed every line. the universe is endless and so are we.
July 8th, 2017 03:34
onepauly said:
outstanding! I followed every line. the universe is endless and so are we.
July 8th, 2017 03:34
Defiance
malubotelho said:
Lovely to ready about your day. The simple way of life. So sincere. So truthful. Thank you. Best than any news from a major media.
July 7th, 2017 21:46
malubotelho said:
Lovely to ready about your day. The simple way of life. So sincere. So truthful. Thank you. Best than any news from a major media.
July 7th, 2017 21:46
Defiance
kevin browne said:
very clever my friend, I like your style and all up for beards I say.
July 7th, 2017 13:52
kevin browne said:
very clever my friend, I like your style and all up for beards I say.
July 7th, 2017 13:52
Defiance
Louis Gibbs said:
A respite from routine helps recharge the soul. Good, well presented poem, Fred!
July 7th, 2017 11:14
Louis Gibbs said:
A respite from routine helps recharge the soul. Good, well presented poem, Fred!
July 7th, 2017 11:14
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