Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
The Clown
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all wear masks in differing situations.
July 3rd, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all wear masks in differing situations.
July 3rd, 2017 01:00
The Clown
Heather T said:
This struck me particularly sorrowful. I guess it\'s that the insides are so contrasted against the gaiety of the paint. Makes the paint a silly mockery of the man inside.
July 2nd, 2017 19:38
Heather T said:
This struck me particularly sorrowful. I guess it\'s that the insides are so contrasted against the gaiety of the paint. Makes the paint a silly mockery of the man inside.
July 2nd, 2017 19:38
The Clown
onepauly said:
it reminds me of the clown in Stephen kings story called \"it\".
July 2nd, 2017 18:59
onepauly said:
it reminds me of the clown in Stephen kings story called \"it\".
July 2nd, 2017 18:59
The Clown
Bibbeck said:
Simple words delivering a powerful reflective verse. Great write!
I still have one of my favourite childhood toys, a clown puppet - the subject of a song-writing attempt: Painted Puppet Clown. It contains a lyric \"can\'t change his frown\".
July 2nd, 2017 16:40
Bibbeck said:
Simple words delivering a powerful reflective verse. Great write!
I still have one of my favourite childhood toys, a clown puppet - the subject of a song-writing attempt: Painted Puppet Clown. It contains a lyric \"can\'t change his frown\".
July 2nd, 2017 16:40
The Clown
malubotelho said:
I think we are all clowns sometimes. We do what we have to do to survive in this world and some days we need to put up our show.
July 2nd, 2017 15:24
malubotelho said:
I think we are all clowns sometimes. We do what we have to do to survive in this world and some days we need to put up our show.
July 2nd, 2017 15:24
The Clown
Louis Gibbs said:
I guess that makes me a clown too. Aren\'t we all for that matter? Good poem, Fred!
July 2nd, 2017 12:56
Louis Gibbs said:
I guess that makes me a clown too. Aren\'t we all for that matter? Good poem, Fred!
July 2nd, 2017 12:56
The Clown
orchidee said:
I don\'t half write some rubbish sometimes. Small things amuse small minds? lol.
July 2nd, 2017 10:52
orchidee said:
I don\'t half write some rubbish sometimes. Small things amuse small minds? lol.
July 2nd, 2017 10:52
The Clown
orchidee said:
A fine write F. Some clowns can seem sinister, and make us worried.
At the moment I\'m more worried of how to get that accent thingy under the \'c\' in \'façade\'! lol. Ooh it\'s put it in automatically I see
July 2nd, 2017 10:51
orchidee said:
A fine write F. Some clowns can seem sinister, and make us worried.
At the moment I\'m more worried of how to get that accent thingy under the \'c\' in \'façade\'! lol. Ooh it\'s put it in automatically I see
July 2nd, 2017 10:51
The Clown
Michael Edwards said:
Perhaps we are all clowns at heart - great read Fred.
July 2nd, 2017 06:34
Michael Edwards said:
Perhaps we are all clowns at heart - great read Fred.
July 2nd, 2017 06:34
The Clown
Fay Slimm. said:
An emotive read Fred and so true of any wearing a mask behind which is much sadness. Impressive work.
July 2nd, 2017 05:26
Fay Slimm. said:
An emotive read Fred and so true of any wearing a mask behind which is much sadness. Impressive work.
July 2nd, 2017 05:26
The Clown
kevin browne said:
this clowning about business turns poetry into fun. I love your work.
July 2nd, 2017 04:33
kevin browne said:
this clowning about business turns poetry into fun. I love your work.
July 2nd, 2017 04:33
Too old?
burning-embers said:
Oh so right! You\'ve hit that squarely on the nose. Some clown decided i\'m pensionable this year. Good job i run my own business too or i would have had to adjust their nose in a different manner. Lots of life left inside us old coots so long as our health luck holds out.
July 2nd, 2017 03:19
burning-embers said:
Oh so right! You\'ve hit that squarely on the nose. Some clown decided i\'m pensionable this year. Good job i run my own business too or i would have had to adjust their nose in a different manner. Lots of life left inside us old coots so long as our health luck holds out.
July 2nd, 2017 03:19
Memory
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, it is amazing the words and names that I couldn\'t recall during the day come to me about 3 o\'clock in the morning!
July 2nd, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, it is amazing the words and names that I couldn\'t recall during the day come to me about 3 o\'clock in the morning!
July 2nd, 2017 00:51
Memory
onepauly said:
I too find it easier on my mind when I go out among other people and they see my toothless jaw sagging and two hearing aids I have to wear. is it me or them? I just don\'t know, but I do know it feels good.lol
July 1st, 2017 20:01
onepauly said:
I too find it easier on my mind when I go out among other people and they see my toothless jaw sagging and two hearing aids I have to wear. is it me or them? I just don\'t know, but I do know it feels good.lol
July 1st, 2017 20:01
Memory
malubotelho said:
The good thing about being older is that one can blame everything on being older. Lovely way of writing.
July 1st, 2017 18:51
malubotelho said:
The good thing about being older is that one can blame everything on being older. Lovely way of writing.
July 1st, 2017 18:51
Memory
Heather T said:
What a perfect description of those stutters! Sometimes it\'s so close I could trip over it, and other times it\'s washed spotless. I\'m certain I\'ve lost brain cells each year past 35. I think my three curtain climbers helped induce the fog.
July 1st, 2017 16:38
Heather T said:
What a perfect description of those stutters! Sometimes it\'s so close I could trip over it, and other times it\'s washed spotless. I\'m certain I\'ve lost brain cells each year past 35. I think my three curtain climbers helped induce the fog.
July 1st, 2017 16:38
Memory
Louis Gibbs said:
You speak for all of us who are \'of a certain age\', Fred! well written poem. I\'ve written one on the subject as well, which I\'ll present soon.
July 1st, 2017 08:53
Louis Gibbs said:
You speak for all of us who are \'of a certain age\', Fred! well written poem. I\'ve written one on the subject as well, which I\'ll present soon.
July 1st, 2017 08:53
Memory
P.H.Rose said:
Oh!! Fred I feel your pain.
I too have the memory
Of a gnat...great poem..
The words are just there
But for some reason
Someone\'s put a door there..
So bloody annoying!!!!!!
July 1st, 2017 05:39
P.H.Rose said:
Oh!! Fred I feel your pain.
I too have the memory
Of a gnat...great poem..
The words are just there
But for some reason
Someone\'s put a door there..
So bloody annoying!!!!!!
July 1st, 2017 05:39
Memory
kevin browne said:
bless you my lovely, what a nice and poignant poem to write. we all certainly hear you so hope that helps you a little x
July 1st, 2017 05:32
kevin browne said:
bless you my lovely, what a nice and poignant poem to write. we all certainly hear you so hope that helps you a little x
July 1st, 2017 05:32
Memory
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe it all well here Fred - memory can play such tricks with age.
July 1st, 2017 04:04
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe it all well here Fred - memory can play such tricks with age.
July 1st, 2017 04:04
Waiting
poetboy123 said:
This poem is incredible, thank you for sharing it with us!
June 30th, 2017 11:53
poetboy123 said:
This poem is incredible, thank you for sharing it with us!
June 30th, 2017 11:53
Waiting
Louis Gibbs said:
Life is what happens while we wait for just the right direction to reveal itself, isn\'t it. Good poem, I enjoyed, Fred!
June 30th, 2017 09:46
Louis Gibbs said:
Life is what happens while we wait for just the right direction to reveal itself, isn\'t it. Good poem, I enjoyed, Fred!
June 30th, 2017 09:46
Today I said Goodbye
malubotelho said:
Very profound. I like that you could fit the bulls and the bears there on your goodbye. They are so annoying. I said goodbye to my unreal self so many times but it is like I can leave it but it never leave me. I have only feel holly moments with my truly self and it is only when I can quite my freaking mind.
Your poetry is very truthful. Thank you.
June 30th, 2017 08:17
malubotelho said:
Very profound. I like that you could fit the bulls and the bears there on your goodbye. They are so annoying. I said goodbye to my unreal self so many times but it is like I can leave it but it never leave me. I have only feel holly moments with my truly self and it is only when I can quite my freaking mind.
Your poetry is very truthful. Thank you.
June 30th, 2017 08:17
Waiting
malubotelho said:
I so can relate to this poem. We are always waiting for next time. For a better occasion, for better words. To someone to love. For approval, for understanding. We are like ghosts procrastinators. Waiting to the moment that we can no longer lift a finger. I loved the way you put it. So true.
June 30th, 2017 08:10
malubotelho said:
I so can relate to this poem. We are always waiting for next time. For a better occasion, for better words. To someone to love. For approval, for understanding. We are like ghosts procrastinators. Waiting to the moment that we can no longer lift a finger. I loved the way you put it. So true.
June 30th, 2017 08:10
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