Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
burning-embers said:
So you\'re biased to your left, right? It\'s no understatement when you know that cant be right, so a statement like yours is just best left. Right away i knew you\'d want to bring politics into this lifestyle too or is that best left? Was grandma left handed too? Did the pullover she knitted fit you better than right handed Aunt Mabel\'s sock\'s?
July 16th, 2017 03:10
burning-embers said:
So you\'re biased to your left, right? It\'s no understatement when you know that cant be right, so a statement like yours is just best left. Right away i knew you\'d want to bring politics into this lifestyle too or is that best left? Was grandma left handed too? Did the pullover she knitted fit you better than right handed Aunt Mabel\'s sock\'s?
July 16th, 2017 03:10
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I seem to have noticed recently that I come across more and more left handed people. I my self am right handed and when I sit down at the piano I wonder what the left hand is there for!
July 16th, 2017 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I seem to have noticed recently that I come across more and more left handed people. I my self am right handed and when I sit down at the piano I wonder what the left hand is there for!
July 16th, 2017 01:46
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
onepauly said:
left right left right left right.
I\'m marching in a parade.
macys thanksgiving day parade
oh yeah I\'m a righty. what are you left with.
July 16th, 2017 01:43
onepauly said:
left right left right left right.
I\'m marching in a parade.
macys thanksgiving day parade
oh yeah I\'m a righty. what are you left with.
July 16th, 2017 01:43
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ah yes, the left hand was seen as bad, and the right hand as good, at least by Jews, and maybe others too. I\'m not Jewish myself.
There\'s another bit I picked up on right/left hands, but bit long to explain here.
July 16th, 2017 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ah yes, the left hand was seen as bad, and the right hand as good, at least by Jews, and maybe others too. I\'m not Jewish myself.
There\'s another bit I picked up on right/left hands, but bit long to explain here.
July 16th, 2017 01:41
Alone
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i can understand where your coming from,we even get comfortable in our own minds
July 15th, 2017 22:37
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i can understand where your coming from,we even get comfortable in our own minds
July 15th, 2017 22:37
Alone
onepauly said:
this is truly amazing. poems like this why I joined my poetic side. its as though you were writing about me. because I\'m alone but never alone. I listen to that little voice and it helps me to decide what to do. this is by far the best I\'ve ever read.
keep it going.
July 15th, 2017 21:34
onepauly said:
this is truly amazing. poems like this why I joined my poetic side. its as though you were writing about me. because I\'m alone but never alone. I listen to that little voice and it helps me to decide what to do. this is by far the best I\'ve ever read.
keep it going.
July 15th, 2017 21:34
Alone
Heather T said:
I abhor being alone, but am jealous over my solitude. I\'m blown by whatever whim I find myself in, I guess. Social butterfly that needs recovery time to be left with thoughts and books. My imaginary friend is a nagger. When I crumple up a paper her mouth is on the receiving end.
July 15th, 2017 14:04
Heather T said:
I abhor being alone, but am jealous over my solitude. I\'m blown by whatever whim I find myself in, I guess. Social butterfly that needs recovery time to be left with thoughts and books. My imaginary friend is a nagger. When I crumple up a paper her mouth is on the receiving end.
July 15th, 2017 14:04
Alone
malubotelho said:
You went deep with this one. Love it. Describes so well our imagination. I like when you say if you should send him home to be truly alone. I like to do that sometimes. To be totally free from my inside. To be nothing. To fade away from everything. To be like a blank canvas. Then you are reborn. Thanks for this wonderful piece.
July 15th, 2017 11:16
malubotelho said:
You went deep with this one. Love it. Describes so well our imagination. I like when you say if you should send him home to be truly alone. I like to do that sometimes. To be totally free from my inside. To be nothing. To fade away from everything. To be like a blank canvas. Then you are reborn. Thanks for this wonderful piece.
July 15th, 2017 11:16
Alone
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, cherish my solitude. Great expression of this creative space, Fred!
July 15th, 2017 09:11
Louis Gibbs said:
I, too, cherish my solitude. Great expression of this creative space, Fred!
July 15th, 2017 09:11
Alone
burning-embers said:
Fred i know this chap you speak of, we grew up together and he spoke to me a great deal when i needed to learn from something. He reminds me of the things i ought not to do and he congratulates me freely. He allows me to indulge in things and never abuses me. One thing i admire in him above all else is his compassion. A seriously good thought provoking write.
July 15th, 2017 08:23
burning-embers said:
Fred i know this chap you speak of, we grew up together and he spoke to me a great deal when i needed to learn from something. He reminds me of the things i ought not to do and he congratulates me freely. He allows me to indulge in things and never abuses me. One thing i admire in him above all else is his compassion. A seriously good thought provoking write.
July 15th, 2017 08:23
Alone
Michael Edwards said:
Poet and artist - both done alone, no competitive element, no team spirit to pay homage to - yup I\'m a loner and this resonates - great write.
July 15th, 2017 07:35
Michael Edwards said:
Poet and artist - both done alone, no competitive element, no team spirit to pay homage to - yup I\'m a loner and this resonates - great write.
July 15th, 2017 07:35
Alone
Fay Slimm. said:
This touches home to loners like me - - most poets thrive on imagined company. Can relate to that poetic phrase \"alone yet not alone\"
July 15th, 2017 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
This touches home to loners like me - - most poets thrive on imagined company. Can relate to that poetic phrase \"alone yet not alone\"
July 15th, 2017 04:29
Alone
orchidee said:
A fine write FP. Aww, I nipped in to comment, as this poem looked \'alone\'. heehee. I\'ve gone barmy. I\'ll be talking to lamp-posts next! lol.
July 15th, 2017 04:24
orchidee said:
A fine write FP. Aww, I nipped in to comment, as this poem looked \'alone\'. heehee. I\'ve gone barmy. I\'ll be talking to lamp-posts next! lol.
July 15th, 2017 04:24
Just A Job (Short Story)
malubotelho said:
I could catch back on this one. Short stories are so good. Fast entertainment without compromise. Oops 🙊 the way I put it it sounds almost promiscuous. I liked your writing and can not criticize because I\'m not entitled to. I know too little to wheigh anyone work. Sorry but can not help here. Thanks for sharing one more.
July 14th, 2017 23:34
malubotelho said:
I could catch back on this one. Short stories are so good. Fast entertainment without compromise. Oops 🙊 the way I put it it sounds almost promiscuous. I liked your writing and can not criticize because I\'m not entitled to. I know too little to wheigh anyone work. Sorry but can not help here. Thanks for sharing one more.
July 14th, 2017 23:34
Low Hanging Fruit
Heather T said:
So...I plucked it anyway, left my teeth marks, scrapped it, and grabbed another. Does that count for wisdom? Maybe that\'s just waste 😉
July 14th, 2017 21:36
Heather T said:
So...I plucked it anyway, left my teeth marks, scrapped it, and grabbed another. Does that count for wisdom? Maybe that\'s just waste 😉
July 14th, 2017 21:36
Low Hanging Fruit
malubotelho said:
Awesome nice, smart one. It is like we are being precisely economic today. Thanks for sharing and already copied the little cute joke too. I also love jokes.
July 14th, 2017 19:43
malubotelho said:
Awesome nice, smart one. It is like we are being precisely economic today. Thanks for sharing and already copied the little cute joke too. I also love jokes.
July 14th, 2017 19:43
Hoping
rita_ehn said:
This poem says so much. Hope gradually dwindles with every disappointment and becomes very difficult to maintain. Especially if, like you said in your comment, action has been taken and there is still no result. Good stuff.
July 14th, 2017 15:27
rita_ehn said:
This poem says so much. Hope gradually dwindles with every disappointment and becomes very difficult to maintain. Especially if, like you said in your comment, action has been taken and there is still no result. Good stuff.
July 14th, 2017 15:27
Low Hanging Fruit
Renzi said:
I can resist anything but temptation haha! Life\'s lessons and blessings? I tell myself that any way ha. Nicely penned my kind friend :)
July 14th, 2017 07:04
Renzi said:
I can resist anything but temptation haha! Life\'s lessons and blessings? I tell myself that any way ha. Nicely penned my kind friend :)
July 14th, 2017 07:04
Low Hanging Fruit
Louis Gibbs said:
NOW you give me this advice! Where were you a couple of marriages ago? Oh well, thanks anyway for this cute shorty, Fred.
July 14th, 2017 06:57
Louis Gibbs said:
NOW you give me this advice! Where were you a couple of marriages ago? Oh well, thanks anyway for this cute shorty, Fred.
July 14th, 2017 06:57
Low Hanging Fruit
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise message hiding within these four lines Fred. Good rhyme.
July 14th, 2017 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Wise message hiding within these four lines Fred. Good rhyme.
July 14th, 2017 04:02
Low Hanging Fruit
burning-embers said:
I like the way you\'re telling me not to go for a low hanging pear here Fred.
As always less is more. Yep, what comes easily isn\'t usually the best.
July 14th, 2017 03:46
burning-embers said:
I like the way you\'re telling me not to go for a low hanging pear here Fred.
As always less is more. Yep, what comes easily isn\'t usually the best.
July 14th, 2017 03:46
Just A Job (Short Story)
Heather T said:
A blooming second in and I thought I was in the midst of a John Grisham novel. I agree with Yumna over italics. I think the end twist underscores the callousness of the hitman\'s work being treated with the same cavalier attitude of selling a car. Even though the title you chose foreshadows, I\'m not sure I\'m settled on it. Gripping write, friend.
July 13th, 2017 17:51
Heather T said:
A blooming second in and I thought I was in the midst of a John Grisham novel. I agree with Yumna over italics. I think the end twist underscores the callousness of the hitman\'s work being treated with the same cavalier attitude of selling a car. Even though the title you chose foreshadows, I\'m not sure I\'m settled on it. Gripping write, friend.
July 13th, 2017 17:51
Just A Job (Short Story)
onepauly said:
I do like a good mystery. but you wrote how it ended. trying to help?
July 13th, 2017 09:08
onepauly said:
I do like a good mystery. but you wrote how it ended. trying to help?
July 13th, 2017 09:08
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