Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
orchidee said:
I might have to swoon at this, if there\'s any \'hot\' double-meaning behind it! heehee.
July 24th, 2017 10:41
orchidee said:
I might have to swoon at this, if there\'s any \'hot\' double-meaning behind it! heehee.
July 24th, 2017 10:41
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ having just spent two weeks in CUBA and the PINA COLLADAS were free in the last hotel ~ Any mention of COCONUTS stirs my juices ~ Thanks for scaring ~ BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 10:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ having just spent two weeks in CUBA and the PINA COLLADAS were free in the last hotel ~ Any mention of COCONUTS stirs my juices ~ Thanks for scaring ~ BRIAN
July 24th, 2017 10:07
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m sorry, it is too deep for me to comprehend. Maybe something less wordy, perhaps? Fine two-liner, Fred.
July 24th, 2017 09:20
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m sorry, it is too deep for me to comprehend. Maybe something less wordy, perhaps? Fine two-liner, Fred.
July 24th, 2017 09:20
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
Seek said:
So brief, yet so complete. I imagine coconuts would be wanting without cracking a nuthead or two. So many of us out there. This piece must bring a smile to all who read. Thank you!
July 24th, 2017 08:29
Seek said:
So brief, yet so complete. I imagine coconuts would be wanting without cracking a nuthead or two. So many of us out there. This piece must bring a smile to all who read. Thank you!
July 24th, 2017 08:29
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
Goldfinch60 said:
The depth of your words is wonderful.
July 24th, 2017 08:24
Goldfinch60 said:
The depth of your words is wonderful.
July 24th, 2017 08:24
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
charlesbarrett said:
Practical advice indeed! Thanks for sharing, Fred.
July 24th, 2017 07:33
charlesbarrett said:
Practical advice indeed! Thanks for sharing, Fred.
July 24th, 2017 07:33
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
Frank Prem said:
Ouch, Fred. Something needed for them coconuts!
July 24th, 2017 04:32
Frank Prem said:
Ouch, Fred. Something needed for them coconuts!
July 24th, 2017 04:32
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
Renzi said:
Awhh lovely! One day i\'ll witness them dangle instead of drinking them in a cocktail haha!
July 24th, 2017 03:32
Renzi said:
Awhh lovely! One day i\'ll witness them dangle instead of drinking them in a cocktail haha!
July 24th, 2017 03:32
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece Fred. I have only just conquered the art of shelling a coconut so that it remains whole and the outer hard bit can be peeled with a potato peeler - feeling quite chuffed with myself.
July 24th, 2017 03:17
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece Fred. I have only just conquered the art of shelling a coconut so that it remains whole and the outer hard bit can be peeled with a potato peeler - feeling quite chuffed with myself.
July 24th, 2017 03:17
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
burning-embers said:
I shy away from such droppings - hey, i even dodge the pigeons efforts.
July 24th, 2017 03:15
burning-embers said:
I shy away from such droppings - hey, i even dodge the pigeons efforts.
July 24th, 2017 03:15
Glass House
kevin browne said:
prying eyes are everywhere you go these days and living in your glass house only invites them in. great thought provoking and interesting compact write. well done my friend.
July 23rd, 2017 15:40
kevin browne said:
prying eyes are everywhere you go these days and living in your glass house only invites them in. great thought provoking and interesting compact write. well done my friend.
July 23rd, 2017 15:40
Glass House
burning-embers said:
Nice twist. But when the spies open these comments will we be hauled before the master spy?
July 23rd, 2017 14:45
burning-embers said:
Nice twist. But when the spies open these comments will we be hauled before the master spy?
July 23rd, 2017 14:45
Glass House
Fay Slimm. said:
All goes round in a watcher\'s circle Fred - good points made here.
July 23rd, 2017 11:40
Fay Slimm. said:
All goes round in a watcher\'s circle Fred - good points made here.
July 23rd, 2017 11:40
Wisdom
Heather T said:
Wise words. They say once is a mistake and twice is a choice. Maybe it is. Perhaps it\'s a glitch of frail reasoning skills. Regardless, you are correct that we will repay. Nice!
July 22nd, 2017 19:15
Heather T said:
Wise words. They say once is a mistake and twice is a choice. Maybe it is. Perhaps it\'s a glitch of frail reasoning skills. Regardless, you are correct that we will repay. Nice!
July 22nd, 2017 19:15
Wisdom
burning-embers said:
Oh to have never made the same mistake twice. Nice one
July 22nd, 2017 13:32
burning-embers said:
Oh to have never made the same mistake twice. Nice one
July 22nd, 2017 13:32
Wisdom
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine poem with attention to form, which I find quite pleasing. Well done, Fred!
July 22nd, 2017 09:44
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine poem with attention to form, which I find quite pleasing. Well done, Fred!
July 22nd, 2017 09:44
Train to Nowhere
malubotelho said:
This is great writing. It is like we are in the same boat or waiting for the same ride. The magic ride that will take us to fulfillment.
July 21st, 2017 08:06
malubotelho said:
This is great writing. It is like we are in the same boat or waiting for the same ride. The magic ride that will take us to fulfillment.
July 21st, 2017 08:06
Train to Nowhere
Louis Gibbs said:
The past, \"to be gazed upon with acceptance\"; \"Any destination will feel like I was meant to be there\", both phrases gems of poetry, Fred! Love this one.
July 21st, 2017 07:45
Louis Gibbs said:
The past, \"to be gazed upon with acceptance\"; \"Any destination will feel like I was meant to be there\", both phrases gems of poetry, Fred! Love this one.
July 21st, 2017 07:45
Train to Nowhere
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is full of surprises and not knowing is sometimes very exhilarating. Very good write.
July 21st, 2017 03:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is full of surprises and not knowing is sometimes very exhilarating. Very good write.
July 21st, 2017 03:38
Train to Nowhere
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s what makes life worth living - not knowing for sure but always in eager anticipation - love this one Fred
July 21st, 2017 03:13
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s what makes life worth living - not knowing for sure but always in eager anticipation - love this one Fred
July 21st, 2017 03:13
Leading the Way
malubotelho said:
I like this and the dried flowers are nice. For me it has a nice meaning because s flowers life is so ephemeral that drying them is extending the love for them. I always get some that has felled to the ground but still fresh and in shape and dry them inside my heavy books. Then I use them to create cards for occasions. I mix them with other pieces like little branch and sewing notions and give them to friends on they birthday. Unique piece made with love. Thanks for sharing
July 20th, 2017 12:44
malubotelho said:
I like this and the dried flowers are nice. For me it has a nice meaning because s flowers life is so ephemeral that drying them is extending the love for them. I always get some that has felled to the ground but still fresh and in shape and dry them inside my heavy books. Then I use them to create cards for occasions. I mix them with other pieces like little branch and sewing notions and give them to friends on they birthday. Unique piece made with love. Thanks for sharing
July 20th, 2017 12:44
Leading the Way
Goldfinch60 said:
Gods word is there for all to see, but many refuse to see it.
July 20th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Gods word is there for all to see, but many refuse to see it.
July 20th, 2017 08:01
Leading the Way
lastbadbrad6 said:
even a pauper can enter heaven, god does not judge by looks oryour status
July 20th, 2017 04:54
lastbadbrad6 said:
even a pauper can enter heaven, god does not judge by looks oryour status
July 20th, 2017 04:54
Leading the Way
Michael Edwards said:
However you interpret it its a great few lines Alfred
July 20th, 2017 03:48
Michael Edwards said:
However you interpret it its a great few lines Alfred
July 20th, 2017 03:48
Dying Love
malubotelho said:
Fred, I wrote the simple lines about love and you portrayed all the matters in this poem. It truly bought me to tears. Beautiful and sad. I don\'t think love dies though, I think it change but does not die. I still loving my ex husband even if we don\'t live together anymore. But we are good friends and we still loving each other. We still arguiyng also. And laughing too. Love changed, did not die.
July 19th, 2017 21:48
malubotelho said:
Fred, I wrote the simple lines about love and you portrayed all the matters in this poem. It truly bought me to tears. Beautiful and sad. I don\'t think love dies though, I think it change but does not die. I still loving my ex husband even if we don\'t live together anymore. But we are good friends and we still loving each other. We still arguiyng also. And laughing too. Love changed, did not die.
July 19th, 2017 21:48
Dying Love
whisperingquill said:
This hurts brother only the symmetry of memories can make these petals glisten again
The second stanza humbly astonishing
July 19th, 2017 19:04
whisperingquill said:
This hurts brother only the symmetry of memories can make these petals glisten again
The second stanza humbly astonishing
July 19th, 2017 19:04
Dying Love
Heather T said:
This absolutely aches as it withers down the page. It puts me in mind of my daughter. She dries and saves all of her special flowers to remember events. I guess we could become friends or enemies with a memory .
July 19th, 2017 17:08
Heather T said:
This absolutely aches as it withers down the page. It puts me in mind of my daughter. She dries and saves all of her special flowers to remember events. I guess we could become friends or enemies with a memory .
July 19th, 2017 17:08
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