Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Dying Love
onepauly said:
this is a wonderful way to describe love. in its many assetts
July 19th, 2017 10:58
onepauly said:
this is a wonderful way to describe love. in its many assetts
July 19th, 2017 10:58
Dying Love
Louis Gibbs said:
The agony and the ecstasy love reflected can bring ... beautifully portrayed in this fine poem, Fred. The analogy to a neglected rose ... so well done!
July 19th, 2017 08:19
Louis Gibbs said:
The agony and the ecstasy love reflected can bring ... beautifully portrayed in this fine poem, Fred. The analogy to a neglected rose ... so well done!
July 19th, 2017 08:19
Dying Love
Fay Slimm. said:
How poignant this poem Fred - filled with sad reasons for comparing a dead rose with wilting love. A moving read.
July 19th, 2017 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
How poignant this poem Fred - filled with sad reasons for comparing a dead rose with wilting love. A moving read.
July 19th, 2017 04:05
Dying Love
Renzi said:
Stunning. A friend of mine always says *love is pain* .. i guess it is in a way.
July 19th, 2017 03:54
Renzi said:
Stunning. A friend of mine always says *love is pain* .. i guess it is in a way.
July 19th, 2017 03:54
Dying Love
orchidee said:
A fine write FP. Flowers there for a time, for a season - then gone!
July 19th, 2017 03:22
orchidee said:
A fine write FP. Flowers there for a time, for a season - then gone!
July 19th, 2017 03:22
Dying Love
burning-embers said:
Brought a tear to my eye fred because i interpreted this as my love for life and how life loves right back at me. Sadly i age and cannot enjoy this lovely world as i would like to. The decaying rose is me and millions like me. Beautiful words. You are some poet
July 19th, 2017 02:59
burning-embers said:
Brought a tear to my eye fred because i interpreted this as my love for life and how life loves right back at me. Sadly i age and cannot enjoy this lovely world as i would like to. The decaying rose is me and millions like me. Beautiful words. You are some poet
July 19th, 2017 02:59
Children of War
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very truthful and descriptive, really gives insight
July 18th, 2017 19:38
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very truthful and descriptive, really gives insight
July 18th, 2017 19:38
Children of War
Heather T said:
Cuts to the bone with images of spirits unbroken in the midst of death and destruction that most can\'t fathom. Emotive work, friend.
July 18th, 2017 17:31
Heather T said:
Cuts to the bone with images of spirits unbroken in the midst of death and destruction that most can\'t fathom. Emotive work, friend.
July 18th, 2017 17:31
Children of War
Michael Edwards said:
Inspiring write - good for them - hope they keep playing.
July 18th, 2017 11:00
Michael Edwards said:
Inspiring write - good for them - hope they keep playing.
July 18th, 2017 11:00
Children of War
Louis Gibbs said:
A poignant poem very well presented, Fred! Excellent write!
July 18th, 2017 09:08
Louis Gibbs said:
A poignant poem very well presented, Fred! Excellent write!
July 18th, 2017 09:08
Children of War
Fay Slimm. said:
This gets right to the heart of war\'s effect on the young - a truly moving and unforgettable read Fred.
July 18th, 2017 07:25
Fay Slimm. said:
This gets right to the heart of war\'s effect on the young - a truly moving and unforgettable read Fred.
July 18th, 2017 07:25
Children of War
burning-embers said:
My thoughts went to WW1 Fred and the Christmas football match between the trenches between the Jerrys and Tommys. The joy of humanity still thriving in the boy brought to foreign lands to be slain in waves and for what? As Gordon Sumner wrote \'the flower of england face down in the mud and stained in the blood of a whole generation.\'
July 18th, 2017 05:00
burning-embers said:
My thoughts went to WW1 Fred and the Christmas football match between the trenches between the Jerrys and Tommys. The joy of humanity still thriving in the boy brought to foreign lands to be slain in waves and for what? As Gordon Sumner wrote \'the flower of england face down in the mud and stained in the blood of a whole generation.\'
July 18th, 2017 05:00
Children of War
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good write and in this day and age it is so true and is probably expanding to a bigger rubble filled pitch.
July 18th, 2017 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good write and in this day and age it is so true and is probably expanding to a bigger rubble filled pitch.
July 18th, 2017 02:56
Goodbye
onepauly said:
whats in your view finder? anything good. I love the printed word. I don\'t want to dig a hole I cant climb out of.sometimes imagination is tricky
July 17th, 2017 16:53
onepauly said:
whats in your view finder? anything good. I love the printed word. I don\'t want to dig a hole I cant climb out of.sometimes imagination is tricky
July 17th, 2017 16:53
Goodbye
Michael Edwards said:
Now I took it that you received the letter and the poem is about its contents. either way its a super piece of writing.
July 17th, 2017 10:33
Michael Edwards said:
Now I took it that you received the letter and the poem is about its contents. either way its a super piece of writing.
July 17th, 2017 10:33
Goodbye
malubotelho said:
Lovely written Fred. I always I love to read you. In the beginning I was scared by the title because I thought you were leaving. Maybe you are leaving someone or someone left you?
July 17th, 2017 09:57
malubotelho said:
Lovely written Fred. I always I love to read you. In the beginning I was scared by the title because I thought you were leaving. Maybe you are leaving someone or someone left you?
July 17th, 2017 09:57
Goodbye
burning-embers said:
For me you were picking up litter - public spirited soul that u are - and discovered the masterpiece here included. A lovely tragic combination of a rubbished love affair now a piece of windblown trash. Take away the first two and last two lines of your piece and its impact goes, but they\'re there and its VERY powerful.
July 17th, 2017 08:47
burning-embers said:
For me you were picking up litter - public spirited soul that u are - and discovered the masterpiece here included. A lovely tragic combination of a rubbished love affair now a piece of windblown trash. Take away the first two and last two lines of your piece and its impact goes, but they\'re there and its VERY powerful.
July 17th, 2017 08:47
Goodbye
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting that both Kat and Renzi assumed that you wrote the note rather than found it. I wasn\'t sure, but either way it is a fine poem, Fred! Very touching.
July 17th, 2017 08:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting that both Kat and Renzi assumed that you wrote the note rather than found it. I wasn\'t sure, but either way it is a fine poem, Fred! Very touching.
July 17th, 2017 08:35
Goodbye
Renzi said:
Where are you going... dont leave her (MPS) Very good write. Heartbrake gold! Fiction?
July 17th, 2017 04:40
Renzi said:
Where are you going... dont leave her (MPS) Very good write. Heartbrake gold! Fiction?
July 17th, 2017 04:40
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve heard that left handed people lead bad lives. I can\'t say though, because I\'m right handed. There are some things I do better with my left though. Good spot of fun, Fred.
July 16th, 2017 18:21
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve heard that left handed people lead bad lives. I can\'t say though, because I\'m right handed. There are some things I do better with my left though. Good spot of fun, Fred.
July 16th, 2017 18:21
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Heather T said:
Several lefties in the family, but I\'m a righty. I hope your penmanship is better than my left handed dad, poor thing.
July 16th, 2017 17:02
Heather T said:
Several lefties in the family, but I\'m a righty. I hope your penmanship is better than my left handed dad, poor thing.
July 16th, 2017 17:02
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
malubotelho said:
Cute your poem. You are left but right when you say left has some advantage. I agree. I\'m right but my stronger side is my left if it counts. All my left side is better than the right. My older son is left and he is overall better than most people I know. If I want an opinion I always ask him. You shine.
July 16th, 2017 16:36
malubotelho said:
Cute your poem. You are left but right when you say left has some advantage. I agree. I\'m right but my stronger side is my left if it counts. All my left side is better than the right. My older son is left and he is overall better than most people I know. If I want an opinion I always ask him. You shine.
July 16th, 2017 16:36
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Renzi said:
When nothing is going right, go LEFT.
What a fun poem :) tell me though.. what about the ambidextrous? :p
July 16th, 2017 09:09
Renzi said:
When nothing is going right, go LEFT.
What a fun poem :) tell me though.. what about the ambidextrous? :p
July 16th, 2017 09:09
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve got it dead right = or in case dead left
July 16th, 2017 04:43
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve got it dead right = or in case dead left
July 16th, 2017 04:43
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