Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Children of War
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very truthful and descriptive, really gives insight
July 18th, 2017 19:38
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very truthful and descriptive, really gives insight
July 18th, 2017 19:38
Children of War
Heather T said:
Cuts to the bone with images of spirits unbroken in the midst of death and destruction that most can\'t fathom. Emotive work, friend.
July 18th, 2017 17:31
Heather T said:
Cuts to the bone with images of spirits unbroken in the midst of death and destruction that most can\'t fathom. Emotive work, friend.
July 18th, 2017 17:31
Children of War
Michael Edwards said:
Inspiring write - good for them - hope they keep playing.
July 18th, 2017 11:00
Michael Edwards said:
Inspiring write - good for them - hope they keep playing.
July 18th, 2017 11:00
Children of War
Louis Gibbs said:
A poignant poem very well presented, Fred! Excellent write!
July 18th, 2017 09:08
Louis Gibbs said:
A poignant poem very well presented, Fred! Excellent write!
July 18th, 2017 09:08
Children of War
Fay Slimm. said:
This gets right to the heart of war\'s effect on the young - a truly moving and unforgettable read Fred.
July 18th, 2017 07:25
Fay Slimm. said:
This gets right to the heart of war\'s effect on the young - a truly moving and unforgettable read Fred.
July 18th, 2017 07:25
Children of War
burning-embers said:
My thoughts went to WW1 Fred and the Christmas football match between the trenches between the Jerrys and Tommys. The joy of humanity still thriving in the boy brought to foreign lands to be slain in waves and for what? As Gordon Sumner wrote \'the flower of england face down in the mud and stained in the blood of a whole generation.\'
July 18th, 2017 05:00
burning-embers said:
My thoughts went to WW1 Fred and the Christmas football match between the trenches between the Jerrys and Tommys. The joy of humanity still thriving in the boy brought to foreign lands to be slain in waves and for what? As Gordon Sumner wrote \'the flower of england face down in the mud and stained in the blood of a whole generation.\'
July 18th, 2017 05:00
Children of War
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good write and in this day and age it is so true and is probably expanding to a bigger rubble filled pitch.
July 18th, 2017 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good write and in this day and age it is so true and is probably expanding to a bigger rubble filled pitch.
July 18th, 2017 02:56
Goodbye
onepauly said:
whats in your view finder? anything good. I love the printed word. I don\'t want to dig a hole I cant climb out of.sometimes imagination is tricky
July 17th, 2017 16:53
onepauly said:
whats in your view finder? anything good. I love the printed word. I don\'t want to dig a hole I cant climb out of.sometimes imagination is tricky
July 17th, 2017 16:53
Goodbye
Michael Edwards said:
Now I took it that you received the letter and the poem is about its contents. either way its a super piece of writing.
July 17th, 2017 10:33
Michael Edwards said:
Now I took it that you received the letter and the poem is about its contents. either way its a super piece of writing.
July 17th, 2017 10:33
Goodbye
malubotelho said:
Lovely written Fred. I always I love to read you. In the beginning I was scared by the title because I thought you were leaving. Maybe you are leaving someone or someone left you?
July 17th, 2017 09:57
malubotelho said:
Lovely written Fred. I always I love to read you. In the beginning I was scared by the title because I thought you were leaving. Maybe you are leaving someone or someone left you?
July 17th, 2017 09:57
Goodbye
burning-embers said:
For me you were picking up litter - public spirited soul that u are - and discovered the masterpiece here included. A lovely tragic combination of a rubbished love affair now a piece of windblown trash. Take away the first two and last two lines of your piece and its impact goes, but they\'re there and its VERY powerful.
July 17th, 2017 08:47
burning-embers said:
For me you were picking up litter - public spirited soul that u are - and discovered the masterpiece here included. A lovely tragic combination of a rubbished love affair now a piece of windblown trash. Take away the first two and last two lines of your piece and its impact goes, but they\'re there and its VERY powerful.
July 17th, 2017 08:47
Goodbye
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting that both Kat and Renzi assumed that you wrote the note rather than found it. I wasn\'t sure, but either way it is a fine poem, Fred! Very touching.
July 17th, 2017 08:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Interesting that both Kat and Renzi assumed that you wrote the note rather than found it. I wasn\'t sure, but either way it is a fine poem, Fred! Very touching.
July 17th, 2017 08:35
Goodbye
Renzi said:
Where are you going... dont leave her (MPS) Very good write. Heartbrake gold! Fiction?
July 17th, 2017 04:40
Renzi said:
Where are you going... dont leave her (MPS) Very good write. Heartbrake gold! Fiction?
July 17th, 2017 04:40
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve heard that left handed people lead bad lives. I can\'t say though, because I\'m right handed. There are some things I do better with my left though. Good spot of fun, Fred.
July 16th, 2017 18:21
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve heard that left handed people lead bad lives. I can\'t say though, because I\'m right handed. There are some things I do better with my left though. Good spot of fun, Fred.
July 16th, 2017 18:21
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Heather T said:
Several lefties in the family, but I\'m a righty. I hope your penmanship is better than my left handed dad, poor thing.
July 16th, 2017 17:02
Heather T said:
Several lefties in the family, but I\'m a righty. I hope your penmanship is better than my left handed dad, poor thing.
July 16th, 2017 17:02
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
malubotelho said:
Cute your poem. You are left but right when you say left has some advantage. I agree. I\'m right but my stronger side is my left if it counts. All my left side is better than the right. My older son is left and he is overall better than most people I know. If I want an opinion I always ask him. You shine.
July 16th, 2017 16:36
malubotelho said:
Cute your poem. You are left but right when you say left has some advantage. I agree. I\'m right but my stronger side is my left if it counts. All my left side is better than the right. My older son is left and he is overall better than most people I know. If I want an opinion I always ask him. You shine.
July 16th, 2017 16:36
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Renzi said:
When nothing is going right, go LEFT.
What a fun poem :) tell me though.. what about the ambidextrous? :p
July 16th, 2017 09:09
Renzi said:
When nothing is going right, go LEFT.
What a fun poem :) tell me though.. what about the ambidextrous? :p
July 16th, 2017 09:09
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve got it dead right = or in case dead left
July 16th, 2017 04:43
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve got it dead right = or in case dead left
July 16th, 2017 04:43
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
burning-embers said:
So you\'re biased to your left, right? It\'s no understatement when you know that cant be right, so a statement like yours is just best left. Right away i knew you\'d want to bring politics into this lifestyle too or is that best left? Was grandma left handed too? Did the pullover she knitted fit you better than right handed Aunt Mabel\'s sock\'s?
July 16th, 2017 03:10
burning-embers said:
So you\'re biased to your left, right? It\'s no understatement when you know that cant be right, so a statement like yours is just best left. Right away i knew you\'d want to bring politics into this lifestyle too or is that best left? Was grandma left handed too? Did the pullover she knitted fit you better than right handed Aunt Mabel\'s sock\'s?
July 16th, 2017 03:10
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I seem to have noticed recently that I come across more and more left handed people. I my self am right handed and when I sit down at the piano I wonder what the left hand is there for!
July 16th, 2017 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I seem to have noticed recently that I come across more and more left handed people. I my self am right handed and when I sit down at the piano I wonder what the left hand is there for!
July 16th, 2017 01:46
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
onepauly said:
left right left right left right.
I\'m marching in a parade.
macys thanksgiving day parade
oh yeah I\'m a righty. what are you left with.
July 16th, 2017 01:43
onepauly said:
left right left right left right.
I\'m marching in a parade.
macys thanksgiving day parade
oh yeah I\'m a righty. what are you left with.
July 16th, 2017 01:43
I am a Leftie - And proud of it!
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ah yes, the left hand was seen as bad, and the right hand as good, at least by Jews, and maybe others too. I\'m not Jewish myself.
There\'s another bit I picked up on right/left hands, but bit long to explain here.
July 16th, 2017 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ah yes, the left hand was seen as bad, and the right hand as good, at least by Jews, and maybe others too. I\'m not Jewish myself.
There\'s another bit I picked up on right/left hands, but bit long to explain here.
July 16th, 2017 01:41
Alone
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i can understand where your coming from,we even get comfortable in our own minds
July 15th, 2017 22:37
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i can understand where your coming from,we even get comfortable in our own minds
July 15th, 2017 22:37
Alone
onepauly said:
this is truly amazing. poems like this why I joined my poetic side. its as though you were writing about me. because I\'m alone but never alone. I listen to that little voice and it helps me to decide what to do. this is by far the best I\'ve ever read.
keep it going.
July 15th, 2017 21:34
onepauly said:
this is truly amazing. poems like this why I joined my poetic side. its as though you were writing about me. because I\'m alone but never alone. I listen to that little voice and it helps me to decide what to do. this is by far the best I\'ve ever read.
keep it going.
July 15th, 2017 21:34
Alone
Heather T said:
I abhor being alone, but am jealous over my solitude. I\'m blown by whatever whim I find myself in, I guess. Social butterfly that needs recovery time to be left with thoughts and books. My imaginary friend is a nagger. When I crumple up a paper her mouth is on the receiving end.
July 15th, 2017 14:04
Heather T said:
I abhor being alone, but am jealous over my solitude. I\'m blown by whatever whim I find myself in, I guess. Social butterfly that needs recovery time to be left with thoughts and books. My imaginary friend is a nagger. When I crumple up a paper her mouth is on the receiving end.
July 15th, 2017 14:04
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