Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Looking for my Mind
malubotelho said:
I can see that you had fun with this one. You too have a scattered soul. You are all over the place. Fun reading. Thanks
July 27th, 2017 08:57
malubotelho said:
I can see that you had fun with this one. You too have a scattered soul. You are all over the place. Fun reading. Thanks
July 27th, 2017 08:57
Looking for my Mind
Louis Gibbs said:
Say, if you happen to stumble across my missing mind while you are looking, please send it home. Thanks. Truly enjoyed this brilliant piece, Fred!
July 27th, 2017 08:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Say, if you happen to stumble across my missing mind while you are looking, please send it home. Thanks. Truly enjoyed this brilliant piece, Fred!
July 27th, 2017 08:30
Looking for my Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can be split and hide the pieces but it can always be reformed to write poems kplike this on.
July 27th, 2017 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can be split and hide the pieces but it can always be reformed to write poems kplike this on.
July 27th, 2017 07:56
Looking for my Mind
kevin browne said:
you\'re not the only one FredPeyer. I believe we have all lost our mind and the world is going crazy with it. lets all sit in that library and open up a few more books to see where we all went mad. brilliant write and you make sure you come back.
July 27th, 2017 06:04
kevin browne said:
you\'re not the only one FredPeyer. I believe we have all lost our mind and the world is going crazy with it. lets all sit in that library and open up a few more books to see where we all went mad. brilliant write and you make sure you come back.
July 27th, 2017 06:04
Looking for my Mind
burning-embers said:
Hmm i can see why your writings are so diverse and interesting Fred - you\'re all over the place mate! LOL kiddin you. This is great, great idea you\'ve had and humourous. A really entertaining read.
July 27th, 2017 01:55
burning-embers said:
Hmm i can see why your writings are so diverse and interesting Fred - you\'re all over the place mate! LOL kiddin you. This is great, great idea you\'ve had and humourous. A really entertaining read.
July 27th, 2017 01:55
Another Glass of Whiskey
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. Drink can ruin families, a member of our family hada drink problem who is trying to recover, they go to Alcoholics Anonymous which helps a lot. Drink free since November last year.
July 27th, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. Drink can ruin families, a member of our family hada drink problem who is trying to recover, they go to Alcoholics Anonymous which helps a lot. Drink free since November last year.
July 27th, 2017 00:53
Another Glass of Whiskey
ShannonXx said:
A excellent write, with a real message attached!
July 26th, 2017 15:25
ShannonXx said:
A excellent write, with a real message attached!
July 26th, 2017 15:25
Another Glass of Whiskey
Michael Edwards said:
This just trips off the tongue in a style that anyone can follow and as such I is so refreshing. A really superb work.
July 26th, 2017 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
This just trips off the tongue in a style that anyone can follow and as such I is so refreshing. A really superb work.
July 26th, 2017 10:42
Another Glass of Whiskey
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing but sad times came to my mind. Most of my nights were expected with fear waiting for my dad to come home. Alcohol broke my heart but also made me stronger. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 10:38
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing but sad times came to my mind. Most of my nights were expected with fear waiting for my dad to come home. Alcohol broke my heart but also made me stronger. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 10:38
Another Glass of Whiskey
Louis Gibbs said:
I watched a dear brother go down that path. Had to step in and help raise his daughter. It is a home-wrecking addiction. Great poem portraying it, Fred!
July 26th, 2017 08:27
Louis Gibbs said:
I watched a dear brother go down that path. Had to step in and help raise his daughter. It is a home-wrecking addiction. Great poem portraying it, Fred!
July 26th, 2017 08:27
Another Glass of Whiskey
burning-embers said:
Story teller with such a sad strong message. Now and again its ok to get plastered i guess. I\'d do it tonite willingly. But i cant imagine what it\'s like to be hooked on booze. Tho when i was a kid on the streets i do recall meths drinkers in their sad state of hopelessness.
July 26th, 2017 07:36
burning-embers said:
Story teller with such a sad strong message. Now and again its ok to get plastered i guess. I\'d do it tonite willingly. But i cant imagine what it\'s like to be hooked on booze. Tho when i was a kid on the streets i do recall meths drinkers in their sad state of hopelessness.
July 26th, 2017 07:36
Another Glass of Whiskey
Fay Slimm. said:
So vividly written this cry against alcohol abuse Fred - - so many affected too in these troubled days.
July 26th, 2017 04:45
Fay Slimm. said:
So vividly written this cry against alcohol abuse Fred - - so many affected too in these troubled days.
July 26th, 2017 04:45
Another Glass of Whiskey
S.louise said:
A great write.
My grandad was an alcoholic.
We did have good times (which I don\'t remember). All I remember is the bad times. Its sad bad times in life stand out so much more then the good times.
July 26th, 2017 04:33
S.louise said:
A great write.
My grandad was an alcoholic.
We did have good times (which I don\'t remember). All I remember is the bad times. Its sad bad times in life stand out so much more then the good times.
July 26th, 2017 04:33
Another Glass of Whiskey
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Kat, grew up with an alcoholic, and met lot of them.
July 26th, 2017 04:13
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Kat, grew up with an alcoholic, and met lot of them.
July 26th, 2017 04:13
Just around the Corner
Heather T said:
In some ways being aware of the possibility makes everything a little sweeter. Certainly makes one grip a little tighter, forgive a little easier, and jump out of comfort zones. Death nips at all of our heels, regardless of age. It also gives one pause to practice gratefulness.
July 25th, 2017 22:51
Heather T said:
In some ways being aware of the possibility makes everything a little sweeter. Certainly makes one grip a little tighter, forgive a little easier, and jump out of comfort zones. Death nips at all of our heels, regardless of age. It also gives one pause to practice gratefulness.
July 25th, 2017 22:51
Just around the Corner
malubotelho said:
I\'m ready to die but still have a lot to live. I truly believe that death is just when you come to an intersection in life where from there after you need to take another road.
July 25th, 2017 11:57
malubotelho said:
I\'m ready to die but still have a lot to live. I truly believe that death is just when you come to an intersection in life where from there after you need to take another road.
July 25th, 2017 11:57
Just around the Corner
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed it may be, so may we all spend our lives fully lived! Your fine poem is a good reminder, Fred.
July 25th, 2017 08:09
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed it may be, so may we all spend our lives fully lived! Your fine poem is a good reminder, Fred.
July 25th, 2017 08:09
Just around the Corner
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true give the day the best it or you have to offer.
July 25th, 2017 07:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true give the day the best it or you have to offer.
July 25th, 2017 07:47
Just around the Corner
burning-embers said:
What are those words in the ceremony \'in the midst of life we are in death\'. You are so right here
July 25th, 2017 05:51
burning-embers said:
What are those words in the ceremony \'in the midst of life we are in death\'. You are so right here
July 25th, 2017 05:51
Just around the Corner
Renzi said:
I swear on my hair you took my current life and stuck it in a poem. Amazing. Take each day as it comes. Good or bad. Great write my friend 😊
July 25th, 2017 04:15
Renzi said:
I swear on my hair you took my current life and stuck it in a poem. Amazing. Take each day as it comes. Good or bad. Great write my friend 😊
July 25th, 2017 04:15
Just around the Corner
kevin browne said:
I only ever think of death when it\'s necessary. fuck death whilst you\'re alive dude so get on with it and keep writing poetry but include life next time. it\'s a really important factor to understand because you know how short a time we have on this planet and it ain\'t a great deal. death is easy, it\'s the living part that becomes the eciting part so live it.
July 25th, 2017 04:11
kevin browne said:
I only ever think of death when it\'s necessary. fuck death whilst you\'re alive dude so get on with it and keep writing poetry but include life next time. it\'s a really important factor to understand because you know how short a time we have on this planet and it ain\'t a great deal. death is easy, it\'s the living part that becomes the eciting part so live it.
July 25th, 2017 04:11
Just around the Corner
Michael Edwards said:
I do like this - for me though I\'ve so much to live for and so much I still want to do that death is something I never dwell on - if it comes it comes but in the meantime I live for today and for the future.
July 25th, 2017 02:54
Michael Edwards said:
I do like this - for me though I\'ve so much to live for and so much I still want to do that death is something I never dwell on - if it comes it comes but in the meantime I live for today and for the future.
July 25th, 2017 02:54
Just around the Corner
Frank Prem said:
Just around the corner, for sure, Fred.
Live like it\'s your last, and keep doing that every new day.
July 25th, 2017 02:48
Frank Prem said:
Just around the corner, for sure, Fred.
Live like it\'s your last, and keep doing that every new day.
July 25th, 2017 02:48
Wisdom
Seek said:
For those who love wisdom, this write is a gem. \"Containing all we know, So our minds can grow\", well said! And to think there are so many whose minds have gone through arrested development and stopped growing thenceforth. The pity of it. For such folks, brain death precedes corporal death by many years. Thanks for that timely reminder FredP!
July 25th, 2017 02:46
Seek said:
For those who love wisdom, this write is a gem. \"Containing all we know, So our minds can grow\", well said! And to think there are so many whose minds have gone through arrested development and stopped growing thenceforth. The pity of it. For such folks, brain death precedes corporal death by many years. Thanks for that timely reminder FredP!
July 25th, 2017 02:46
Wisdom
Seek said:
For those who love wisdom, this write is a gem. \"Containing all we know, So our minds can grow\", well said! And to think there are so many whose minds have gone through arrested development and stopped growing thenceforth. The pity of it. For such folks, brain death precedes corporal death by many years. Thanks for that timely reminder FredP!
July 25th, 2017 02:45
Seek said:
For those who love wisdom, this write is a gem. \"Containing all we know, So our minds can grow\", well said! And to think there are so many whose minds have gone through arrested development and stopped growing thenceforth. The pity of it. For such folks, brain death precedes corporal death by many years. Thanks for that timely reminder FredP!
July 25th, 2017 02:45
Just around the Corner
Poetic Dan said:
That I do sir, every corner is then a milestone.
Well written
July 25th, 2017 01:58
Poetic Dan said:
That I do sir, every corner is then a milestone.
Well written
July 25th, 2017 01:58
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
malubotelho said:
Coconuts are my favorites. I just planted 3 trees. They it takes very long to grow and begin to give you fruits, so, it is not risky for me yet. Taking advice on how to open them. Great advice poem.
July 24th, 2017 15:49
malubotelho said:
Coconuts are my favorites. I just planted 3 trees. They it takes very long to grow and begin to give you fruits, so, it is not risky for me yet. Taking advice on how to open them. Great advice poem.
July 24th, 2017 15:49
Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get)
Heather T said:
I have plumbed the depths of Mr. Peyer, in all of his mystery and enigma, and escaped holding a coconut. Consider me fulfilled, Fred my friend. Now I\'m craving a French Coconut Pie.
July 24th, 2017 11:13
Heather T said:
I have plumbed the depths of Mr. Peyer, in all of his mystery and enigma, and escaped holding a coconut. Consider me fulfilled, Fred my friend. Now I\'m craving a French Coconut Pie.
July 24th, 2017 11:13
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