Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Mirror
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but always remember person you see in the mirror is not how people see you.
June 26th, 2017 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but always remember person you see in the mirror is not how people see you.
June 26th, 2017 00:12
Mirror
P.H.Rose said:
This is another really
Good poem Fred
It discribes me to a tee
June 25th, 2017 17:17
P.H.Rose said:
This is another really
Good poem Fred
It discribes me to a tee
June 25th, 2017 17:17
Mirror
Poetic Dan said:
Perfectly done!
Memories of the man I was
Looking at someone else
Now I truly see myself
Free from my own self-hate
June 25th, 2017 13:14
Poetic Dan said:
Perfectly done!
Memories of the man I was
Looking at someone else
Now I truly see myself
Free from my own self-hate
June 25th, 2017 13:14
Mirror
Michael Edwards said:
Turn the mirror round - you never look so old from behind. Love the write.
June 25th, 2017 12:42
Michael Edwards said:
Turn the mirror round - you never look so old from behind. Love the write.
June 25th, 2017 12:42
Mirror
Louis Gibbs said:
How refreshing to read a well written poem with both structure and cadence! Kudos, Fred!
June 25th, 2017 10:12
Louis Gibbs said:
How refreshing to read a well written poem with both structure and cadence! Kudos, Fred!
June 25th, 2017 10:12
Too old?
Renzi said:
Anyone below you can\'t offend you and noone you are equal to would! That good awl saying \'you are only as old as you feel\' It\'s true. Never stop living your life , it\'s there for you to grab and hold and love and embrace! As long as you are happy.. the world is yours. Much love.
June 25th, 2017 04:05
Renzi said:
Anyone below you can\'t offend you and noone you are equal to would! That good awl saying \'you are only as old as you feel\' It\'s true. Never stop living your life , it\'s there for you to grab and hold and love and embrace! As long as you are happy.. the world is yours. Much love.
June 25th, 2017 04:05
Too old?
onepauly said:
let it be, let it be,
whisper words of wisdom,
let it be.
June 24th, 2017 22:58
onepauly said:
let it be, let it be,
whisper words of wisdom,
let it be.
June 24th, 2017 22:58
Too old?
P.H.Rose said:
Fred I absolutely love
This poem...brilliant!!
I\'m making it another
One of my favourites
Every word you write
Is spot on......
June 24th, 2017 14:43
P.H.Rose said:
Fred I absolutely love
This poem...brilliant!!
I\'m making it another
One of my favourites
Every word you write
Is spot on......
June 24th, 2017 14:43
Too old?
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Louis, you are right, age is only a number, at least up to a certain point. I want to do something physical. My mind says: No problem. My body says: Are you kidding?
June 24th, 2017 12:40
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Louis, you are right, age is only a number, at least up to a certain point. I want to do something physical. My mind says: No problem. My body says: Are you kidding?
June 24th, 2017 12:40
Too old?
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Robert! I love Einstein, did not hear the one about the socks yet. I wrote this poem after I was asked once again when I would retire. I am 69, own my own business (one man show), love to work and don\'t see any reason to stop.
And Michael, you are right. Inside we are much younger than outside. And since my wife keeps telling me that I will never grow up, I must be around 7 or so.
June 24th, 2017 12:37
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Robert! I love Einstein, did not hear the one about the socks yet. I wrote this poem after I was asked once again when I would retire. I am 69, own my own business (one man show), love to work and don\'t see any reason to stop.
And Michael, you are right. Inside we are much younger than outside. And since my wife keeps telling me that I will never grow up, I must be around 7 or so.
June 24th, 2017 12:37
Too old?
Louis Gibbs said:
Well spoken on behalf of us \"men of a certain age\"! Personally, I consider chronological age irrelevant. Fine poem, Fred.
June 24th, 2017 12:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Well spoken on behalf of us \"men of a certain age\"! Personally, I consider chronological age irrelevant. Fine poem, Fred.
June 24th, 2017 12:35
Too old?
Michael Edwards said:
Just how I feel - still feel young and I have so much to do and look forward to - time doesn\'t come into it. Thanks for posting.
June 24th, 2017 12:25
Michael Edwards said:
Just how I feel - still feel young and I have so much to do and look forward to - time doesn\'t come into it. Thanks for posting.
June 24th, 2017 12:25
Abandoned
Emile Dubois said:
Misunderstanding and expectations are the roots of all our trepidation. If only we had the time to stop and think. If ego didn\'t exist. Imagine where we all could be? No regrets.
June 24th, 2017 03:22
Emile Dubois said:
Misunderstanding and expectations are the roots of all our trepidation. If only we had the time to stop and think. If ego didn\'t exist. Imagine where we all could be? No regrets.
June 24th, 2017 03:22
Sleeping Beauty
P.H.Rose said:
Such a great poem
Of love...Fred
A really great write
June 23rd, 2017 16:56
P.H.Rose said:
Such a great poem
Of love...Fred
A really great write
June 23rd, 2017 16:56
Sleeping Beauty
FredPeyer said:
Thank you all for your very much appreciated comments. It is kind of nice to be able to share and not to be the only one reading it.
June 23rd, 2017 14:03
FredPeyer said:
Thank you all for your very much appreciated comments. It is kind of nice to be able to share and not to be the only one reading it.
June 23rd, 2017 14:03
Sleeping Beauty
Louis Gibbs said:
You are a fortunate man, and a wise one to appreciate what you have while you still have it. Fine poem, Fred!
June 23rd, 2017 13:01
Louis Gibbs said:
You are a fortunate man, and a wise one to appreciate what you have while you still have it. Fine poem, Fred!
June 23rd, 2017 13:01
These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
FredPeyer said:
Thank you! Even though writing is a solitary art, I do not feel alone after reading all your comments. I am looking forward to your constructive criticisms on my future poems.
June 22nd, 2017 12:43
FredPeyer said:
Thank you! Even though writing is a solitary art, I do not feel alone after reading all your comments. I am looking forward to your constructive criticisms on my future poems.
June 22nd, 2017 12:43
These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED two GREAT ODES ~ To make us all realise that to most of us POETRY does not come natural ~ like writing recipes ! BUT when the MUSE MOVES it is much more effective than \"Syrup of Figs! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
June 22nd, 2017 10:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED two GREAT ODES ~ To make us all realise that to most of us POETRY does not come natural ~ like writing recipes ! BUT when the MUSE MOVES it is much more effective than \"Syrup of Figs! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
June 22nd, 2017 10:51
These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
Louis Gibbs said:
Charming poems, Fred. Certainly worth sharing!
June 22nd, 2017 09:29
Louis Gibbs said:
Charming poems, Fred. Certainly worth sharing!
June 22nd, 2017 09:29
These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
P.H.Rose said:
Great two poems sir
Enjoyed them so much.
I\'d love to write on a typewriter
Unfortunately I\'m illiterate
And cannot spell or produce
Grammar. My saviour is
Spell check and perdictive text.
June 22nd, 2017 03:44
P.H.Rose said:
Great two poems sir
Enjoyed them so much.
I\'d love to write on a typewriter
Unfortunately I\'m illiterate
And cannot spell or produce
Grammar. My saviour is
Spell check and perdictive text.
June 22nd, 2017 03:44
These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
Frank Prem said:
Well done for persisting Fred.
Bravo
June 22nd, 2017 03:23
Frank Prem said:
Well done for persisting Fred.
Bravo
June 22nd, 2017 03:23
These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
Michael Edwards said:
Great write but not something I usually experience. If an idea comes to me I scribble down a few ideas and then play around with them until I get a poem out of it as with yesterdays poem. Other than that I have a notebook into which I put phrases, words that appeal, ideas etc. that come to me at any time, when reading, watching TV, talking to others etcetera and I have the book with me at all times. These ideas are usually quite disjointed and unrelated. I never sit in front of a screen and think what to write about.
What I do is type a series of entries from the book (I score through them in the book so I don\'t repeat them again later) and usually they trigger an idea for a poem. If they don\'t I leave them in my documents and add to them from time to time until something jumps out of the woodwork at me. That\'s exactly how todays poem Deserted Graveyard came about.
June 22nd, 2017 02:29
Michael Edwards said:
Great write but not something I usually experience. If an idea comes to me I scribble down a few ideas and then play around with them until I get a poem out of it as with yesterdays poem. Other than that I have a notebook into which I put phrases, words that appeal, ideas etc. that come to me at any time, when reading, watching TV, talking to others etcetera and I have the book with me at all times. These ideas are usually quite disjointed and unrelated. I never sit in front of a screen and think what to write about.
What I do is type a series of entries from the book (I score through them in the book so I don\'t repeat them again later) and usually they trigger an idea for a poem. If they don\'t I leave them in my documents and add to them from time to time until something jumps out of the woodwork at me. That\'s exactly how todays poem Deserted Graveyard came about.
June 22nd, 2017 02:29
Memories of Last Night
FredPeyer said:
Thank you everybody! Your encouragement is very much appreciated.
June 22nd, 2017 02:03
FredPeyer said:
Thank you everybody! Your encouragement is very much appreciated.
June 22nd, 2017 02:03
Memories of Last Night
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - written in such style and with a surprise ending this has to be read again Fred. Into my favs. with this one
June 22nd, 2017 01:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - written in such style and with a surprise ending this has to be read again Fred. Into my favs. with this one
June 22nd, 2017 01:51
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