Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



Procrastination
poetboy123 said:

An interesting view on procrastination and I must agree, it\'s quite exhilarating though sometimes for the wrong reaso- I\'ll write the rest later.

July 30th, 2017 10:45

Procrastination
Louis Gibbs said:

I told myself that if I waited long enough I might think of a clever response to this poem. Oh well, I liked it, Fred!

July 30th, 2017 10:10

Fear
Renzi said:

Ive missed reading your work 💓

July 30th, 2017 04:03

Procrastination
Goldfinch60 said:

The procrastinators curse \"I will do it tomorrow\" Good write Fred I could go on but I will leave that until tomorrow.

July 30th, 2017 02:25

Fear
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and very well imagined. Imagination can pull us all into that fearful trap.

July 30th, 2017 01:24

Procrastination
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. I was gonna write on the same theme. My thoughts went:
Erm, yes, well, maybe, perhaps. Might write a poem, er, possibly. Can\'t seem to get started though. Ohh I give up - I will put it off until another day! lol.


July 30th, 2017 01:22

Procrastination
Heather T said:

I don\'t know if I\'m much of a procrastinator, but I do perform better under some stress. I have a friend that fits your poem to a T.

July 30th, 2017 00:47

Fear
Heather T said:

False Evidence Appearing Real...I tell myself that when anxiety strikes. You\'ve penned this emotion well.

July 30th, 2017 00:45

Procrastination
onepauly said:

ill have to agree with Michael.
fred, keep on writing.

July 30th, 2017 00:16

Procrastination
Michael Edwards said:

My oldest son says \'Procrastination is a virtue - if you leave it long enough the problem usually resolves itself\' - great work Fred.

July 30th, 2017 00:09

Fear
burning-embers said:

I felt fear overtake me very recently. Horrible, it had me shaking and pumped with adrenaline. Was an unfounded fear fortunately and a good friend talked me out of my imagined situation. But just as u say, it was all over me at one stage.

July 29th, 2017 18:54

Fear
orchidee said:

I fear that I\'m not following all this Outback! heehee. I\'ve not stopped to unravel all you\'ve said!

July 29th, 2017 14:21

Fear
P.H.Rose said:

Been there... got the scars..
Brilliant poem sir
Loved it

July 29th, 2017 13:10

Fear
Michael Edwards said:

The scourge of fear so well described in this gem.

July 29th, 2017 12:32

Fear
GODisreal said:

Yes..it is fear..beautifully written

July 29th, 2017 12:24

Fear
onepauly said:

I\'ve been their. good way to describe it.

July 29th, 2017 12:21

Fear
Louis Gibbs said:

I can\'t imagine such hopeless fear, but you managed to quite well. Well done exercise in imagining, Fred!

July 29th, 2017 11:22

Fear
kevin browne said:

I feel my own fear and that\'s it. when you start feeling the fear for others or other things then a weakness may be shown. same thing goes for life. people blame life for their problems, mistakes etc when in fact its all down to the self to stay in control. don\'t play the game but live it as human and stand strong through it all. a fascinating write.

July 29th, 2017 11:21

Fear
orchidee said:

I fear this is a good write Fred. lol.

July 29th, 2017 11:09

Fear
Fay Slimm. said:

You capture so well the results of succumbing to fear Fred - - a terrible state to take over a mind - -imagined maybe but by your pen made to feel very real.

July 29th, 2017 11:08

Kaleidoscope
P.H.Rose said:

You most certainly can Fred
Excellent poem sir

July 28th, 2017 17:12

Kaleidoscope
burning-embers said:

Yes Fred, coloured beads and mirrors. Shake em up and they look pretty. Life can be like that too... depends how u look at it, shake it up a bit, or shake ones self up a bit and the picture changes.

July 28th, 2017 15:00

Kaleidoscope
Michael Edwards said:

One eye at one end - the future through the other - great Fred.

July 28th, 2017 11:44

Kaleidoscope
malubotelho said:

So I remember now. The kaleidoscope is like very interactive with us. It is playfull for our mind. Thanks Fred.

July 28th, 2017 10:53

Kaleidoscope
Louis Gibbs said:

\"A new exciting world in a cardboard tube,\" indeed ... and the one outside ain\'t all that dull either! Fine, memory-provoking poem, Fred.

July 28th, 2017 08:02

Kaleidoscope
Goldfinch60 said:

Our imagination can see all and all it needs is a twist on that tube called life. Goo write.

July 28th, 2017 07:57

Kaleidoscope
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant and so true, if only they knew the places your mind can take you to. If you have never seen what it\'s like through that cardboard tube!

July 28th, 2017 06:31

Kaleidoscope
Fay Slimm. said:

A great read as you opened that cardboard tube again to me to show how wonderful a kaleidoscope can be
- -thanks for the memory Fred.

July 28th, 2017 05:09

Looking for my Mind
onepauly said:

what say you. good poem fred

July 27th, 2017 14:17

Looking for my Mind
Tony36 said:

LOL. Loved it

July 27th, 2017 12:03



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