Comments received on poems by seeker123
I Am Human
Jane Frye said:
Seeker123, Thank you for sharing your words. Beautifully written.
December 7th, 2019 21:29
Jane Frye said:
Seeker123, Thank you for sharing your words. Beautifully written.
December 7th, 2019 21:29
let him fall from heaven
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the imagery you use in this verse of yearning. The final line too is very telling.
May 26th, 2019 05:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the imagery you use in this verse of yearning. The final line too is very telling.
May 26th, 2019 05:01
let him fall from heaven
Neville said:
a page filled with love & longing, to the very point of overflowing...
Neville
May 26th, 2019 04:49
Neville said:
a page filled with love & longing, to the very point of overflowing...
Neville
May 26th, 2019 04:49
My Name
SoulMeetsBody said:
Names are fascinating. Like you say, it\'s an entire identity. Crazy thing is, we don\'t really get a say in the matter, except if you choose to change it. Usernames on the other hand... Great poem that\'s got me thinking.
May 21st, 2019 10:48
SoulMeetsBody said:
Names are fascinating. Like you say, it\'s an entire identity. Crazy thing is, we don\'t really get a say in the matter, except if you choose to change it. Usernames on the other hand... Great poem that\'s got me thinking.
May 21st, 2019 10:48
Love\'s Atmosphere
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that warped course may be leading you to the right path on your life.
January 4th, 2018 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, that warped course may be leading you to the right path on your life.
January 4th, 2018 01:16
Looking for Me
Peculiarly Lauren said:
Seeker123, I absolutely love the description you displayed in this poem on what seems to be that consistent feeling of waiting. Would love to read more of your poems in the mean time. keep of the good work -Sincerely L
December 20th, 2017 21:31
Peculiarly Lauren said:
Seeker123, I absolutely love the description you displayed in this poem on what seems to be that consistent feeling of waiting. Would love to read more of your poems in the mean time. keep of the good work -Sincerely L
December 20th, 2017 21:31
The Blackbird in the Night
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, great choice of words. Well penned, Kudos!
October 25th, 2017 01:09
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, great choice of words. Well penned, Kudos!
October 25th, 2017 01:09
The Blackbird in the Night
Michael Edwards said:
Some write this and so worth waking up to.
October 25th, 2017 00:07
Michael Edwards said:
Some write this and so worth waking up to.
October 25th, 2017 00:07
A Selfless Child
Gary Edward Geraci said:
You’ve taken effort to write a good biography about yourself...thank you! Your poem speaks to the discouraging confines of a person of above average reason locked within the rules and restrictions of an adolescent (of which I dare not disparage). However, you have undoubtedly discovered the transcendental quality that writing evokes upon the writer. Hence, the flying you write about can be interpreted as a manifestation of the freedom of being joyfully liberated from the otherwise, mundane lifestyle peculiar to a young woman your age. You are a gem, unique and brilliantly burning with clarity and potential, a gem that should be continuously polished my friend.
October 12th, 2017 22:55
Gary Edward Geraci said:
You’ve taken effort to write a good biography about yourself...thank you! Your poem speaks to the discouraging confines of a person of above average reason locked within the rules and restrictions of an adolescent (of which I dare not disparage). However, you have undoubtedly discovered the transcendental quality that writing evokes upon the writer. Hence, the flying you write about can be interpreted as a manifestation of the freedom of being joyfully liberated from the otherwise, mundane lifestyle peculiar to a young woman your age. You are a gem, unique and brilliantly burning with clarity and potential, a gem that should be continuously polished my friend.
October 12th, 2017 22:55
Impermanence
Michael Edwards said:
Hey Seeker this is a superb piece of work and look forward to seeing more of your poems.
August 25th, 2017 00:37
Michael Edwards said:
Hey Seeker this is a superb piece of work and look forward to seeing more of your poems.
August 25th, 2017 00:37
Impermanence
dusk arising said:
Ah well yes...i may have the answer for you.... see my published poem tomorrow.
August 24th, 2017 21:36
dusk arising said:
Ah well yes...i may have the answer for you.... see my published poem tomorrow.
August 24th, 2017 21:36
Stained Dreams
malubotelho said:
Wow! I love the way you wrote this. Kept me reading and delighted from the beginning to the end.
August 20th, 2017 20:12
malubotelho said:
Wow! I love the way you wrote this. Kept me reading and delighted from the beginning to the end.
August 20th, 2017 20:12
Two Faces
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we always have the choices in our live and do we always take the right path, the good path; possibly not but we will always be left with the question in our lives \"What if I had taken the other path?\"
July 7th, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we always have the choices in our live and do we always take the right path, the good path; possibly not but we will always be left with the question in our lives \"What if I had taken the other path?\"
July 7th, 2017 01:28
Two Faces
Hopey_xx said:
Yes,a lovely write and very well written. I enjoyed reading it a lot
July 6th, 2017 16:27
Hopey_xx said:
Yes,a lovely write and very well written. I enjoyed reading it a lot
July 6th, 2017 16:27
Two Faces
Louis Gibbs said:
I had a spiritual teacher who would often say; \"The dark and the light, one and the same\", referring to the opposite ends of the same spectrum we explore and experience as humans. As you say in your comments, \"without the other side we could not be a balanced human being\". Fine poem, Seeker!
July 6th, 2017 16:13
Louis Gibbs said:
I had a spiritual teacher who would often say; \"The dark and the light, one and the same\", referring to the opposite ends of the same spectrum we explore and experience as humans. As you say in your comments, \"without the other side we could not be a balanced human being\". Fine poem, Seeker!
July 6th, 2017 16:13
Bound By Love
seeker123 said:
Thank you your comment makes me smile. At least someone understands.
July 4th, 2017 00:50
seeker123 said:
Thank you your comment makes me smile. At least someone understands.
July 4th, 2017 00:50
Bound By Love
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. Just.. Wow
Your writing sings to me
I started doing this early (13)
People would say to me
You don\'t understand what your writing/saying
They didn\'t understand where I\'d been
Life made me grow up fast
With ever breath until the last
I\'ll say that Wisdom is not an age
Understanding not a number
For we are walking proof
Standing up for each other
Take care
July 4th, 2017 00:48
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. Just.. Wow
Your writing sings to me
I started doing this early (13)
People would say to me
You don\'t understand what your writing/saying
They didn\'t understand where I\'d been
Life made me grow up fast
With ever breath until the last
I\'ll say that Wisdom is not an age
Understanding not a number
For we are walking proof
Standing up for each other
Take care
July 4th, 2017 00:48
No Tomorrow
FredPeyer said:
What an incredible first poem here. Thank you for sharing.
Please don\'t close these blinds yet, you have a lot more inside you that has to be written down and shared.
July 3rd, 2017 18:56
FredPeyer said:
What an incredible first poem here. Thank you for sharing.
Please don\'t close these blinds yet, you have a lot more inside you that has to be written down and shared.
July 3rd, 2017 18:56
No Tomorrow
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, you just put the first time I saw a family member passed way in a hospital bed in my head. Then straight after a friend that took her own life (live, learn and figure it out) was a recent one in memory of her.
I truly thank you, from a healed soul that not enough compassion and empathy lives in the world.
July 3rd, 2017 15:19
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, you just put the first time I saw a family member passed way in a hospital bed in my head. Then straight after a friend that took her own life (live, learn and figure it out) was a recent one in memory of her.
I truly thank you, from a healed soul that not enough compassion and empathy lives in the world.
July 3rd, 2017 15:19
