Comments received on poems by lasergraph
HER JOB
orchidee said:
A fine write laser. We sit and wait in places sometimes. We may worry; then confidence seeps away. The longer we wait, the worse it can get. Then we\'re all in a heap when the time comes for the interview, or whatever we\'re waiting for, and worn out before we\'ve started, as in mentally exhausted!
April 11th, 2018 13:42
orchidee said:
A fine write laser. We sit and wait in places sometimes. We may worry; then confidence seeps away. The longer we wait, the worse it can get. Then we\'re all in a heap when the time comes for the interview, or whatever we\'re waiting for, and worn out before we\'ve started, as in mentally exhausted!
April 11th, 2018 13:42
HER JOB
Nicholas Browning said:
Your poetry is so down-to-earth that every time I read it, I feel like I\'m heading home. A pleasant read every single time. Well done sir.
April 11th, 2018 13:00
Nicholas Browning said:
Your poetry is so down-to-earth that every time I read it, I feel like I\'m heading home. A pleasant read every single time. Well done sir.
April 11th, 2018 13:00
WRITER\'S BLOCK
Goldfinch60 said:
That blank page obviously attracted these fine words laser.
April 10th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
That blank page obviously attracted these fine words laser.
April 10th, 2018 00:38
WRITER\'S BLOCK
Christina8 said:
This is great! Always enjoy your poems, laser.
April 9th, 2018 18:54
Christina8 said:
This is great! Always enjoy your poems, laser.
April 9th, 2018 18:54
WRITER\'S BLOCK
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes that which eludes us comes about in it\'s own way. Well done Ed.
April 9th, 2018 10:01
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes that which eludes us comes about in it\'s own way. Well done Ed.
April 9th, 2018 10:01
WRITER\'S BLOCK
orchidee said:
You got that... gin?? Have a drink. Ya might get more words then! Sober ones! heehee.
April 9th, 2018 09:51
orchidee said:
You got that... gin?? Have a drink. Ya might get more words then! Sober ones! heehee.
April 9th, 2018 09:51
WRITER\'S BLOCK
Daveyboyz said:
If it brought about this poem it was worth it in the end.
April 9th, 2018 08:46
Daveyboyz said:
If it brought about this poem it was worth it in the end.
April 9th, 2018 08:46
Simple Words
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Edward, words can be so fragile that it is always best to keep it simple.
April 6th, 2018 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Edward, words can be so fragile that it is always best to keep it simple.
April 6th, 2018 00:44
Simple Words
smallest_stars said:
What a sweet poem! I really enjoyed the rhythm and rhyming of it. They were spot on.
Great write!
April 5th, 2018 11:23
smallest_stars said:
What a sweet poem! I really enjoyed the rhythm and rhyming of it. They were spot on.
Great write!
April 5th, 2018 11:23
MODERN DAY BLUES
Christina8 said:
A great write as always Laser! So much truth in that!
April 4th, 2018 19:26
Christina8 said:
A great write as always Laser! So much truth in that!
April 4th, 2018 19:26
MODERN DAY BLUES
Laura🌻 said:
That’s a great poem, Laser!
I cannot even imagine being addicted to all those apps! We would need more than 24 hours in a day...and there still wouldn’t be any time for anything else!
~Laura~
April 4th, 2018 15:06
Laura🌻 said:
That’s a great poem, Laser!
I cannot even imagine being addicted to all those apps! We would need more than 24 hours in a day...and there still wouldn’t be any time for anything else!
~Laura~
April 4th, 2018 15:06
HER LAST BREATH
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so very true in many, many cases.
March 23rd, 2018 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so very true in many, many cases.
March 23rd, 2018 01:41
HER LAST BREATH
w c said:
Enjoyed this poem. Homelessness is a tragic reality for many.
March 22nd, 2018 19:26
w c said:
Enjoyed this poem. Homelessness is a tragic reality for many.
March 22nd, 2018 19:26
HER LAST BREATH
Laura🌻 said:
Laser,
A poignant write!
So glad you brought this
horrible problem to our
attention! I belong to an
organization that helps
and assists these “street people”.
One day, to my surprise,
my son’s high school teacher was found in the street with his “brown paper sack” and nowhere to go! It is such a devastating situation!
~Laura~
March 22nd, 2018 18:13
Laura🌻 said:
Laser,
A poignant write!
So glad you brought this
horrible problem to our
attention! I belong to an
organization that helps
and assists these “street people”.
One day, to my surprise,
my son’s high school teacher was found in the street with his “brown paper sack” and nowhere to go! It is such a devastating situation!
~Laura~
March 22nd, 2018 18:13
HER LAST BREATH
Christina8 said:
Wonderful message. Thanks for sharing! Very well written!
March 22nd, 2018 17:58
Christina8 said:
Wonderful message. Thanks for sharing! Very well written!
March 22nd, 2018 17:58
HER LAST BREATH
John Prophet said:
Wow very poignant powerful piece.
Nicely written!
March 22nd, 2018 17:34
John Prophet said:
Wow very poignant powerful piece.
Nicely written!
March 22nd, 2018 17:34
FACE BOOK
Laura🌻 said:
Laser,
An interesting write!
One thing we know
for certain...we will
not be reading about
our own demise! Let’s
keep on working and
keep track of the present!
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 02:34
Laura🌻 said:
Laser,
An interesting write!
One thing we know
for certain...we will
not be reading about
our own demise! Let’s
keep on working and
keep track of the present!
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 02:34
FACE BOOK
orchidee said:
Arrghh not-too-distant future I hope! Stay around and write plenty more good stuff! :)
Know what you mean though. I been sending Christmas cards to people who have moved away - or even died! Oh dear!
March 6th, 2018 14:00
orchidee said:
Arrghh not-too-distant future I hope! Stay around and write plenty more good stuff! :)
Know what you mean though. I been sending Christmas cards to people who have moved away - or even died! Oh dear!
March 6th, 2018 14:00
FACE BOOK
Christina8 said:
At least you use facebook in a good way. Some people spend all day on it! Excellent writing, laser!
March 6th, 2018 12:49
Christina8 said:
At least you use facebook in a good way. Some people spend all day on it! Excellent writing, laser!
March 6th, 2018 12:49
FACE BOOK
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the rhyme used in this wry viewpoint on why Facebook is used. A thought-provoking read Lazer.
March 6th, 2018 09:51
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the rhyme used in this wry viewpoint on why Facebook is used. A thought-provoking read Lazer.
March 6th, 2018 09:51
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