Comments received on poems by lasergraph
CHALLENGES
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Each day has different challenges for us to face.
June 1st, 2018 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Each day has different challenges for us to face.
June 1st, 2018 00:53
CHALLENGES
poetboy123 said:
Wow, this poem displays stupendous control, craftsmanship, and flow; a fine poem!
May 31st, 2018 10:07
poetboy123 said:
Wow, this poem displays stupendous control, craftsmanship, and flow; a fine poem!
May 31st, 2018 10:07
LITTLE JOHNNY (A tragedy)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wow, what a strong write and that last stanza brought me to tears.
I just cannot understand why a man should hit a woman, never could in all my 70 years, but as you say Edward it is hidden in the shadows.
May 8th, 2018 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Wow, what a strong write and that last stanza brought me to tears.
I just cannot understand why a man should hit a woman, never could in all my 70 years, but as you say Edward it is hidden in the shadows.
May 8th, 2018 00:20
ON WRITING
orchidee said:
A fine write laser. You\'ll soon get there. Just use 20 words when 5 will do - like I do! heehee.
May 4th, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write laser. You\'ll soon get there. Just use 20 words when 5 will do - like I do! heehee.
May 4th, 2018 01:33
ON WRITING
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Edward, even at our age there are so many words still to be written.
My preferred drink is a good Scottish Malt such as Laphroaig Triple Wood.
May 4th, 2018 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Edward, even at our age there are so many words still to be written.
My preferred drink is a good Scottish Malt such as Laphroaig Triple Wood.
May 4th, 2018 00:47
STORMY WATERS
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
I agree with Christina about your poem and its message!
Also, I was reminded of a poem I once read to my children, āWhether The Weather Be Fineā!
So far, we are weathering the weather!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 15:51
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
I agree with Christina about your poem and its message!
Also, I was reminded of a poem I once read to my children, āWhether The Weather Be Fineā!
So far, we are weathering the weather!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 15:51
STORMY WATERS
Christina8 said:
Another great poem, laser! Love the positive message.
April 24th, 2018 14:09
Christina8 said:
Another great poem, laser! Love the positive message.
April 24th, 2018 14:09
The Dance
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Edward, there must have been smiles everywhere especially in your heart.
April 24th, 2018 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Edward, there must have been smiles everywhere especially in your heart.
April 24th, 2018 00:25
The Dance
Christina8 said:
So happy for you laser, there must have been enough smiles to fill many rooms! A happy write, I\'m glad I read it! A lovely rhyme that will live on.
April 23rd, 2018 20:28
Christina8 said:
So happy for you laser, there must have been enough smiles to fill many rooms! A happy write, I\'m glad I read it! A lovely rhyme that will live on.
April 23rd, 2018 20:28
The Dance
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how wonderful for you be there when your five year old grandchild performed so well Laser - - ;moments you and indeed her dear self will never forget. Thank you sharing the lovely occasion with such an engaging rhyme.
April 23rd, 2018 16:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh how wonderful for you be there when your five year old grandchild performed so well Laser - - ;moments you and indeed her dear self will never forget. Thank you sharing the lovely occasion with such an engaging rhyme.
April 23rd, 2018 16:03
The Dance
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
Congratulations Grandad!
I love your beautiful and very precious poem for your granddaughter! Ready to be framed!
It is so rewarding watching them perform! I donāt have a granddaughter, but your poem just reminded me of my daughterās first dance recital!
~Laura~
April 23rd, 2018 15:57
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
Congratulations Grandad!
I love your beautiful and very precious poem for your granddaughter! Ready to be framed!
It is so rewarding watching them perform! I donāt have a granddaughter, but your poem just reminded me of my daughterās first dance recital!
~Laura~
April 23rd, 2018 15:57
THE LITTLE HOUSE ON THE HILL
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
A beautiful and relatable write! I will never forget where I was born and spent the first three years of my childhood! (On a small farm/vineyard with my paternal grandmother)! The best first three years of my childhood!
Thank you for sharing your memories!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 16:22
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
A beautiful and relatable write! I will never forget where I was born and spent the first three years of my childhood! (On a small farm/vineyard with my paternal grandmother)! The best first three years of my childhood!
Thank you for sharing your memories!
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 16:22
HER JOB
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
A beautiful write!
She didnāt get the pay because she never asked for one! Sheās a special woman I admire!
When you love what you do FOR YOUR FAMILY, remuneration is neither expected nor wanted! All we want is to be LOVED, HONORED, and RESPECTED! Itās a club of the elite!
~Laura~
April 13th, 2018 17:21
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
A beautiful write!
She didnāt get the pay because she never asked for one! Sheās a special woman I admire!
When you love what you do FOR YOUR FAMILY, remuneration is neither expected nor wanted! All we want is to be LOVED, HONORED, and RESPECTED! Itās a club of the elite!
~Laura~
April 13th, 2018 17:21
WRITER\'S BLOCK
Lauraš» said:
You did it again, Laser!
You found the solution.
You certainly did fill that blank page with a fine write!
~Laura~
April 13th, 2018 16:54
Lauraš» said:
You did it again, Laser!
You found the solution.
You certainly did fill that blank page with a fine write!
~Laura~
April 13th, 2018 16:54
Simple Words
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
I enjoyed this write very much!
It is a gift to be able to say a lot with a minimal amount of words! You accomplished what you set out to do! Bravo!
Ideally, I wouldāve etched such a message in the sand. However, in order not to lose the moment, we have to seize it! We do have to make a choice!
~Laura~
April 13th, 2018 16:34
Lauraš» said:
Laser,
I enjoyed this write very much!
It is a gift to be able to say a lot with a minimal amount of words! You accomplished what you set out to do! Bravo!
Ideally, I wouldāve etched such a message in the sand. However, in order not to lose the moment, we have to seize it! We do have to make a choice!
~Laura~
April 13th, 2018 16:34
THE LITTLE HOUSE ON THE HILL
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are so special and take you back to wonderful times when you see something that triggers them as the house where you used to live has done in this wonderful write.
April 13th, 2018 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are so special and take you back to wonderful times when you see something that triggers them as the house where you used to live has done in this wonderful write.
April 13th, 2018 00:50
THE LITTLE HOUSE ON THE HILL
Nicholas Browning said:
Once again a lovely heart filled piece of work. Thank you.
April 12th, 2018 15:52
Nicholas Browning said:
Once again a lovely heart filled piece of work. Thank you.
April 12th, 2018 15:52
THE LITTLE HOUSE ON THE HILL
orchidee said:
Good write laser.Eh - copyright? Well, I read them. I think they are all copyright anyway for everyone.
April 12th, 2018 13:24
orchidee said:
Good write laser.Eh - copyright? Well, I read them. I think they are all copyright anyway for everyone.
April 12th, 2018 13:24
THE LITTLE HOUSE ON THE HILL
onepauly said:
I never read poems with a copywrite.
April 12th, 2018 13:13
onepauly said:
I never read poems with a copywrite.
April 12th, 2018 13:13
HER JOB
Goldfinch60 said:
What a superb write, the ladies of the house do an amazing job.
April 12th, 2018 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
What a superb write, the ladies of the house do an amazing job.
April 12th, 2018 00:59
HER JOB
orchidee said:
A fine write laser. We sit and wait in places sometimes. We may worry; then confidence seeps away. The longer we wait, the worse it can get. Then we\'re all in a heap when the time comes for the interview, or whatever we\'re waiting for, and worn out before we\'ve started, as in mentally exhausted!
April 11th, 2018 13:42
orchidee said:
A fine write laser. We sit and wait in places sometimes. We may worry; then confidence seeps away. The longer we wait, the worse it can get. Then we\'re all in a heap when the time comes for the interview, or whatever we\'re waiting for, and worn out before we\'ve started, as in mentally exhausted!
April 11th, 2018 13:42
HER JOB
Nicholas Browning said:
Your poetry is so down-to-earth that every time I read it, I feel like I\'m heading home. A pleasant read every single time. Well done sir.
April 11th, 2018 13:00
Nicholas Browning said:
Your poetry is so down-to-earth that every time I read it, I feel like I\'m heading home. A pleasant read every single time. Well done sir.
April 11th, 2018 13:00
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