Comments received on poems by Echo Seeker
Ice and Lava
tundrol said:
Interesting writing, ice magma girl. I guess people desire vulnerability because they don\'t want to be alone, and vulnerability is part of the package. Bonne chance!
March 21st, 2020 03:26
tundrol said:
Interesting writing, ice magma girl. I guess people desire vulnerability because they don\'t want to be alone, and vulnerability is part of the package. Bonne chance!
March 21st, 2020 03:26
White
tundrol said:
I have it on very good authority that the quest for perfection our society demands can leave the individual gasping for breath at every turn: Diana Spencer
March 19th, 2020 01:30
tundrol said:
I have it on very good authority that the quest for perfection our society demands can leave the individual gasping for breath at every turn: Diana Spencer
March 19th, 2020 01:30
An imagery poem
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so very true, I can see that library.
April 3rd, 2019 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so very true, I can see that library.
April 3rd, 2019 00:42
Diamonds & Glass
Nicholas Browning said:
This is really good. Free verse is my favorite form of poetry and here I believe you have done it justice. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2019 21:12
Nicholas Browning said:
This is really good. Free verse is my favorite form of poetry and here I believe you have done it justice. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2019 21:12
Why I Write
Neville said:
a good enough reason to keep writing my friend... I hope you feel better now you have incorporated those two lines you stored inside for such a long time into a delightful little poem... Neville
February 9th, 2019 11:31
Neville said:
a good enough reason to keep writing my friend... I hope you feel better now you have incorporated those two lines you stored inside for such a long time into a delightful little poem... Neville
February 9th, 2019 11:31
Artist\'s Irritation
siranswerer said:
words stuck in your head,
while youre stuck in bed,
a moments thought, with no where to go,
respite sought, letters left to sow.
February 8th, 2019 05:59
siranswerer said:
words stuck in your head,
while youre stuck in bed,
a moments thought, with no where to go,
respite sought, letters left to sow.
February 8th, 2019 05:59
I
psychofemale said:
gosh, do i know that feeling. this was awesome. well written
January 6th, 2019 22:39
psychofemale said:
gosh, do i know that feeling. this was awesome. well written
January 6th, 2019 22:39
Gentle Soul
Lorna said:
You are a sweet soul and this poem is very comforting...........
December 11th, 2018 07:41
Lorna said:
You are a sweet soul and this poem is very comforting...........
December 11th, 2018 07:41
Gentle Soul
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be always there. Wonderful words.
December 11th, 2018 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be always there. Wonderful words.
December 11th, 2018 01:37
My Wish
MissileOfUncertainty said:
First of all, this rhymes scheme is awesome. It flows very nicely.
Secondly, the message is soooo important and despite the sadness that’s laced in the words you still manage to relay a message of hope in the end for those suffering.
Great write, -MoT
December 2nd, 2018 12:21
MissileOfUncertainty said:
First of all, this rhymes scheme is awesome. It flows very nicely.
Secondly, the message is soooo important and despite the sadness that’s laced in the words you still manage to relay a message of hope in the end for those suffering.
Great write, -MoT
December 2nd, 2018 12:21
The Dangers of Sleepwalking
Ryuji said:
😏😏😏 Scarily enough I have woken up sleep walking 😂
March 22nd, 2018 06:40
Ryuji said:
😏😏😏 Scarily enough I have woken up sleep walking 😂
March 22nd, 2018 06:40
To Save a Life
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
great poem , so well expressed ! its hard to understand some peoples actions, if we do not know their reason/ or feelings behind it . personally , i do not judge people who attempt to do this , i just wish they didn\'t .. and i wish that people hurt less in the world, if there wasn\'t so much hurt and pain within peoples lives, then people would not be driven over the edge and they would still be alive..
March 21st, 2018 05:20
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
great poem , so well expressed ! its hard to understand some peoples actions, if we do not know their reason/ or feelings behind it . personally , i do not judge people who attempt to do this , i just wish they didn\'t .. and i wish that people hurt less in the world, if there wasn\'t so much hurt and pain within peoples lives, then people would not be driven over the edge and they would still be alive..
March 21st, 2018 05:20
Drip
Lorna said:
Yes its so hard to understand how Time can taunt you by going slowly and then rushing away! Good one......
March 21st, 2018 04:19
Lorna said:
Yes its so hard to understand how Time can taunt you by going slowly and then rushing away! Good one......
March 21st, 2018 04:19
Drip
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
a sad shame when people live their lives in such an empty manner, i can relate, too often has my life felt empty , too often have i felt empty and hurt inside and its not fair when one spends so much of their life feeling empty / hurting . they say life is for living .. if so , why do so many of us have to lead lives we hate? or be in pain for years? it makes no sense and its certainly unfair
March 21st, 2018 04:08
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
a sad shame when people live their lives in such an empty manner, i can relate, too often has my life felt empty , too often have i felt empty and hurt inside and its not fair when one spends so much of their life feeling empty / hurting . they say life is for living .. if so , why do so many of us have to lead lives we hate? or be in pain for years? it makes no sense and its certainly unfair
March 21st, 2018 04:08
Drip
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
so well expressed and so true. time is such a scary thing, and i find it goes too quickly too , and i struggle to understand where all the time has gone .. and how has it all passed me so damn fast.. its really quite scary and makes one sad.
i love how you kept repeating the word DRIP it made for a good effect in this poem
we can never get away from the racing of time, so scary
March 21st, 2018 04:06
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
so well expressed and so true. time is such a scary thing, and i find it goes too quickly too , and i struggle to understand where all the time has gone .. and how has it all passed me so damn fast.. its really quite scary and makes one sad.
i love how you kept repeating the word DRIP it made for a good effect in this poem
we can never get away from the racing of time, so scary
March 21st, 2018 04:06
Drip
blessednloved said:
This is so true! Especially when we wait for destiny to just fall in our laps when we may not be going after it. I can have a hammer in one hand and a nail In the other but I will never allow the nail to serve it’s purpose if I never hit it with the hammer!!!
March 20th, 2018 21:29
blessednloved said:
This is so true! Especially when we wait for destiny to just fall in our laps when we may not be going after it. I can have a hammer in one hand and a nail In the other but I will never allow the nail to serve it’s purpose if I never hit it with the hammer!!!
March 20th, 2018 21:29
Drip
Accidental Poet said:
Thank you for the friendship. I read your profile, you had me at chocolate. LOL. BTW, really nice write here. It does seem that way. First you\'re just a kid, then you blink and your 60.
March 20th, 2018 18:28
Accidental Poet said:
Thank you for the friendship. I read your profile, you had me at chocolate. LOL. BTW, really nice write here. It does seem that way. First you\'re just a kid, then you blink and your 60.
March 20th, 2018 18:28
To Save a Life
blessednloved said:
Brilliant! People really should put consideration into these things before judgement!
March 19th, 2018 16:21
blessednloved said:
Brilliant! People really should put consideration into these things before judgement!
March 19th, 2018 16:21
Ode To Kitten
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m no cat lover but did enjoy this \'fluffy\' little write
March 12th, 2018 01:43
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m no cat lover but did enjoy this \'fluffy\' little write
March 12th, 2018 01:43
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