Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Hurt
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah a fantastic extraordinary poem, and I was laughing nervously at \'fatal frowning\'. Sad and funny poem together. Kudos!!
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 26th, 2020 06:09
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah a fantastic extraordinary poem, and I was laughing nervously at \'fatal frowning\'. Sad and funny poem together. Kudos!!
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 26th, 2020 06:09
Death by Drowning
Michael Edwards said:
I got drawn into this - never heard of Cf until her death (not my idea of TV) but it was so tragic. Fine write Sylvia.
February 21st, 2020 03:24
Michael Edwards said:
I got drawn into this - never heard of Cf until her death (not my idea of TV) but it was so tragic. Fine write Sylvia.
February 21st, 2020 03:24
In the Interval
Goldfinch60 said:
Only 40! There is a great deal of life to live yet and it will all be good.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Only 40! There is a great deal of life to live yet and it will all be good.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 15:30
In the Interval
Neville said:
Although at first, this read and seemed both dark and morbid... On subsequent visits and therefore with greater familiarity, I recognise that it is in fact a great bit o literature (as like in a page from a book)… Or an outstanding bit o prose poetry.... It could quite easily be published as both....
Neville
February 11th, 2020 11:45
Neville said:
Although at first, this read and seemed both dark and morbid... On subsequent visits and therefore with greater familiarity, I recognise that it is in fact a great bit o literature (as like in a page from a book)… Or an outstanding bit o prose poetry.... It could quite easily be published as both....
Neville
February 11th, 2020 11:45
Different
Goldfinch60 said:
Superbly written words sylvia, the darkness is there but I am sure that if you keep your \'promise to try\' you will rise from the ashes into the light of a wonderful life.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Superbly written words sylvia, the darkness is there but I am sure that if you keep your \'promise to try\' you will rise from the ashes into the light of a wonderful life.
Andy
February 11th, 2020 01:22
Different
Fay Slimm. said:
First class rhyming in this deeply dark write Sylvia - -- the flow is sublime as is the honest feel of aloneness - -
must read this poem again so saved to my faves. Thanks for sharing your talented skill.
February 10th, 2020 17:24
Fay Slimm. said:
First class rhyming in this deeply dark write Sylvia - -- the flow is sublime as is the honest feel of aloneness - -
must read this poem again so saved to my faves. Thanks for sharing your talented skill.
February 10th, 2020 17:24
Different
dusk arising said:
This is really powerful and so well composed. I\'m envious of the skill and ability which went into this.
February 10th, 2020 10:34
dusk arising said:
This is really powerful and so well composed. I\'m envious of the skill and ability which went into this.
February 10th, 2020 10:34
Different
Fractured Dreams said:
Wow this was a nice read. I do like the darker writes. I think if I was in a fairytale, I would no doubt be the wicked witch or the snow queen. I am far too cold and unforgiving to be a princess who seeks only love. My heart, as your poem describes so well, is probably made of stone.
Thank you for this read today
February 10th, 2020 05:01
Fractured Dreams said:
Wow this was a nice read. I do like the darker writes. I think if I was in a fairytale, I would no doubt be the wicked witch or the snow queen. I am far too cold and unforgiving to be a princess who seeks only love. My heart, as your poem describes so well, is probably made of stone.
Thank you for this read today
February 10th, 2020 05:01
Chapter 23
Fractured Dreams said:
Enjoyed this read. The characters complex emotions and broken relationship are well depicted. I wanted to read more
February 7th, 2020 17:31
Fractured Dreams said:
Enjoyed this read. The characters complex emotions and broken relationship are well depicted. I wanted to read more
February 7th, 2020 17:31
Chapter 23
Poetic Dan said:
Sorry I don\'t have time but keep up your write!
February 7th, 2020 08:37
Poetic Dan said:
Sorry I don\'t have time but keep up your write!
February 7th, 2020 08:37
Distant
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for sharing SYLVIA ! A very heart searching Poem. We all face periods in our lives ~ which are Unreachable & Unfathomable ! The Seas roar and the last lingering Hope of Peace is lost ! BUT take heart & keep searching ! In my experience the periods of DESPAIR pass and HOPE prevails ! Im 31 and have wanted to be married and start a Family for the last ten years ~ but Potential Husbands ~ came & went ! BUT I met BRIAN over three years ago and we are getting married in APRIL ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
January 28th, 2020 17:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for sharing SYLVIA ! A very heart searching Poem. We all face periods in our lives ~ which are Unreachable & Unfathomable ! The Seas roar and the last lingering Hope of Peace is lost ! BUT take heart & keep searching ! In my experience the periods of DESPAIR pass and HOPE prevails ! Im 31 and have wanted to be married and start a Family for the last ten years ~ but Potential Husbands ~ came & went ! BUT I met BRIAN over three years ago and we are getting married in APRIL ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
January 28th, 2020 17:05
Distant
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
When all that\'s left is truth
Bravo! This is an awesome write Sylvia so soul searching... it bleeds with honesty to the stillness of the end
Excellent!
January 28th, 2020 05:11
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
When all that\'s left is truth
Bravo! This is an awesome write Sylvia so soul searching... it bleeds with honesty to the stillness of the end
Excellent!
January 28th, 2020 05:11
And they ended happily ever after
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, I to have been keeping many thoughts in my head. Thanks for trying to break the struggle!
May we create our bubble...
January 17th, 2020 10:50
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, I to have been keeping many thoughts in my head. Thanks for trying to break the struggle!
May we create our bubble...
January 17th, 2020 10:50
Passed
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful and very meaningful to me at this time, thank you sylvia.
January 4th, 2020 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful and very meaningful to me at this time, thank you sylvia.
January 4th, 2020 01:09
Passed
Michael Edwards said:
Where time goes
no man knows
dark then light
day then night
or is it vice versa?
January 3rd, 2020 11:15
Michael Edwards said:
Where time goes
no man knows
dark then light
day then night
or is it vice versa?
January 3rd, 2020 11:15
Coming Home for Christmas: A Short Story: Part 4
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon SYLVIA ~ Thanks for a Beautiful & Romantic conclusion to *Coming Home for Christmas* It happens *Strangers in the Night ~ Exchanging glances ................. Sharing LOVE before the night was through* We know because after a string of disappointing relationships we met each other @ a Hospital Social and Angela & I will be married in April 2020. Angela will be 32 & I will be 36 ~ so we are old enough to know our Love ~ really is True Love. Consequently we both love *LOVE STORIES* with perfect endings like yours ! Thanks for sharing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 21st, 2019 12:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon SYLVIA ~ Thanks for a Beautiful & Romantic conclusion to *Coming Home for Christmas* It happens *Strangers in the Night ~ Exchanging glances ................. Sharing LOVE before the night was through* We know because after a string of disappointing relationships we met each other @ a Hospital Social and Angela & I will be married in April 2020. Angela will be 32 & I will be 36 ~ so we are old enough to know our Love ~ really is True Love. Consequently we both love *LOVE STORIES* with perfect endings like yours ! Thanks for sharing ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💚🧡💚🧡💚
December 21st, 2019 12:15
Coming Home for Christmas: A Short Story: Part 3
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI SYLVIA - ANGELA HERE - Brian & I are both Romntics and this is developing into a LOVE STORY ! It opens with MAYA feeling that Her sudden & unexpected developing Relationship with ROIBEARD is quite natural. She cries when he indircectly calls her a Friend ! She even passes the CAT test by knowing *How to rub a Cat to make it feel content* a useful skill if a pet Cat stands between You & Your potential Lover ! Dogs are much more difficult because they are much more protective of their Master / Mistress ! Again you have touched on an area we can all relate to ! The HALLMARK of a Good Novel ! We are all on a Cliff Edge - Part 4 tomorrow PLEASE !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 20th, 2019 17:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI SYLVIA - ANGELA HERE - Brian & I are both Romntics and this is developing into a LOVE STORY ! It opens with MAYA feeling that Her sudden & unexpected developing Relationship with ROIBEARD is quite natural. She cries when he indircectly calls her a Friend ! She even passes the CAT test by knowing *How to rub a Cat to make it feel content* a useful skill if a pet Cat stands between You & Your potential Lover ! Dogs are much more difficult because they are much more protective of their Master / Mistress ! Again you have touched on an area we can all relate to ! The HALLMARK of a Good Novel ! We are all on a Cliff Edge - Part 4 tomorrow PLEASE !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 20th, 2019 17:38
Coming home for Christmas: A Short Story: Part 2
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI SYLVIA ~ THANKS FOR PART 2 ~ P. 1 - 5 You reveal that the Lady in Cafe is the Lady in the Church and they recognise each oher and chat ! having read Part 3 (comment later !) I now realise He is American and that ROME is Town in USA ! Is it in ORIEDA COUNTY ~ New York (Pop 34,000) ?
He aked her what brought her to America and she said she was researching for BOOK and tells Him her name is MAYA ! (P.10) She has green EYES (Irish) but also HAZEL ones ~ her MOM is Greek 1 (P. 11 - 14). They chatted like Old Friends but ANNE said she had to close. Riobeard asked
her where she was spending Christmas and she said alone in the HOTEL - So he asks her home for a Whiskey and she agrees ! Thanks for sharing PART 3 ~ comment later !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours Angela & Brian
🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 20th, 2019 16:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI SYLVIA ~ THANKS FOR PART 2 ~ P. 1 - 5 You reveal that the Lady in Cafe is the Lady in the Church and they recognise each oher and chat ! having read Part 3 (comment later !) I now realise He is American and that ROME is Town in USA ! Is it in ORIEDA COUNTY ~ New York (Pop 34,000) ?
He aked her what brought her to America and she said she was researching for BOOK and tells Him her name is MAYA ! (P.10) She has green EYES (Irish) but also HAZEL ones ~ her MOM is Greek 1 (P. 11 - 14). They chatted like Old Friends but ANNE said she had to close. Riobeard asked
her where she was spending Christmas and she said alone in the HOTEL - So he asks her home for a Whiskey and she agrees ! Thanks for sharing PART 3 ~ comment later !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours Angela & Brian
🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 20th, 2019 16:37
Coming Home for Christmas: A Short Story: Part 3
sylviasearcher said:
I am really worried everyone will be disappointed!
Hope you get back to sleep 😊
December 20th, 2019 04:25
sylviasearcher said:
I am really worried everyone will be disappointed!
Hope you get back to sleep 😊
December 20th, 2019 04:25
Coming Home for Christmas: A Short Story: Part 3
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
I’m loving this.
I want more to read!
I hope it will be ‘‘a beautifully romantic ending’’ (to quote Unsub) ... because I am the HOPELESS ROMANTIC!
Looking forward to part 3!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 20th, 2019 03:56
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
I’m loving this.
I want more to read!
I hope it will be ‘‘a beautifully romantic ending’’ (to quote Unsub) ... because I am the HOPELESS ROMANTIC!
Looking forward to part 3!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 20th, 2019 03:56
Coming home for Christmas: A Short Story: Part 2
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
Just finished reading part 1&2.
Fascinating!
Looking forward to more of this story!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 19th, 2019 08:46
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
Just finished reading part 1&2.
Fascinating!
Looking forward to more of this story!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 19th, 2019 08:46
Coming Home for Christmas: A Short Story: Part 1
FineB said:
Thank you Sylvia,
A very interesting story. I look forward to reading the second part.
Excellent write
Keep writing FineB
December 19th, 2019 05:58
FineB said:
Thank you Sylvia,
A very interesting story. I look forward to reading the second part.
Excellent write
Keep writing FineB
December 19th, 2019 05:58
Coming Home for Christmas: A Short Story: Part 1
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening SYLVIA ! There is always room for a good story on MPS despite its Title ! I too like writing STORIES - But BRIAN is teaching me to write Poetry - usually constrained as ACROSTICS or Sonnets (14 lines !). Brevity is the norm on MPS !
Your STORY had me hooked in the first three paragraphs. I love OLD CONTINENTAL CHURCHES - especially Spanish ! You introduce a mystery LADY (P 6.) and a LADY reappears (P 13. ?). She drink - TEA (P 15.). Is she ENGLISH - are we in Continental Europe ? The Man is unmarried & lonely living with his MOM and CATS (P 10.) ! Where are we ? ROME - Italy is not a small place and USA Towns do not ususally have OLD CHURCHES ! His name is French (ROI = KING) ? and Coffee (not TEA) is the normal drink in Continental Europe - rather than in the UK ! Please please post PART 2 - tomorrow !
Loved the story in your PROFILE. *Now is the hour of Departure* Very spooky - very deja vu ! It obviously was her Appointed Time ! You are an excellent racconteur !
Blessings & Peace & JOY
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
December 18th, 2019 14:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening SYLVIA ! There is always room for a good story on MPS despite its Title ! I too like writing STORIES - But BRIAN is teaching me to write Poetry - usually constrained as ACROSTICS or Sonnets (14 lines !). Brevity is the norm on MPS !
Your STORY had me hooked in the first three paragraphs. I love OLD CONTINENTAL CHURCHES - especially Spanish ! You introduce a mystery LADY (P 6.) and a LADY reappears (P 13. ?). She drink - TEA (P 15.). Is she ENGLISH - are we in Continental Europe ? The Man is unmarried & lonely living with his MOM and CATS (P 10.) ! Where are we ? ROME - Italy is not a small place and USA Towns do not ususally have OLD CHURCHES ! His name is French (ROI = KING) ? and Coffee (not TEA) is the normal drink in Continental Europe - rather than in the UK ! Please please post PART 2 - tomorrow !
Loved the story in your PROFILE. *Now is the hour of Departure* Very spooky - very deja vu ! It obviously was her Appointed Time ! You are an excellent racconteur !
Blessings & Peace & JOY
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
December 18th, 2019 14:04
The Music that Nobody Likes
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful write Sylvia and the music enhances it. May that music in your head play the right tune.
December 15th, 2019 16:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful write Sylvia and the music enhances it. May that music in your head play the right tune.
December 15th, 2019 16:35
The Music that Nobody Likes
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s music it\'s art it\'s life and death and it\'s perfectly captured in these lines...
\"The real pain is not the killing it\'s what leads you there\"
To kill or love now that\'s a question
Bravo Sylvia
December 15th, 2019 14:54
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s music it\'s art it\'s life and death and it\'s perfectly captured in these lines...
\"The real pain is not the killing it\'s what leads you there\"
To kill or love now that\'s a question
Bravo Sylvia
December 15th, 2019 14:54
Poetry’s Purpose
Goldfinch60 said:
Life has so many streams to explore some can be lonely but many lead you to the wonders of life.
As Lawless has said your words written to us on here will ensure that you are never lonely.
Andy
December 14th, 2019 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Life has so many streams to explore some can be lonely but many lead you to the wonders of life.
As Lawless has said your words written to us on here will ensure that you are never lonely.
Andy
December 14th, 2019 01:41
Poetry’s Purpose
myself and me said:
You might still be alone in the end, but I hope you are not lonely anymore.
December 13th, 2019 18:40
myself and me said:
You might still be alone in the end, but I hope you are not lonely anymore.
December 13th, 2019 18:40
Poetry’s Purpose
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
You’ve definitely taken a peek...
into my mind.
I’ve been thinking similar thoughts since 2:00a.m.! I was pondering whether I should write them down or not.
I didn’t...
as usual...
and lo and behold ...
you’ve done it for me!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 13th, 2019 11:35
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
You’ve definitely taken a peek...
into my mind.
I’ve been thinking similar thoughts since 2:00a.m.! I was pondering whether I should write them down or not.
I didn’t...
as usual...
and lo and behold ...
you’ve done it for me!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 13th, 2019 11:35
Sick
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Sylvia but as Fred says I do hope it is not your life.
Andy
December 11th, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Sylvia but as Fred says I do hope it is not your life.
Andy
December 11th, 2019 01:10
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