Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Disillusionment
Poetic Dan said:
Yet there all your words stand before, if there is no spoon then there is nothing to win or lose. Just be!
Brilliantly expressed, you got this!
September 23rd, 2019 11:49
Poetic Dan said:
Yet there all your words stand before, if there is no spoon then there is nothing to win or lose. Just be!
Brilliantly expressed, you got this!
September 23rd, 2019 11:49
Band Class
Michael Edwards said:
Poetic craftsmanship - great work Sylvia.
September 20th, 2019 08:34
Michael Edwards said:
Poetic craftsmanship - great work Sylvia.
September 20th, 2019 08:34
Band Class
Neville said:
These words could not have been placed or stacked any better than they are stacked and placed here today...
and without doubt, one to remember...... Neville
September 20th, 2019 05:11
Neville said:
These words could not have been placed or stacked any better than they are stacked and placed here today...
and without doubt, one to remember...... Neville
September 20th, 2019 05:11
Band Class
Fay Slimm. said:
An astounding read Sylvia - a poet\'s poem and full of metaphored power - - thanks a load for this first rate writing and into my favourites to savour again.
September 20th, 2019 04:42
Fay Slimm. said:
An astounding read Sylvia - a poet\'s poem and full of metaphored power - - thanks a load for this first rate writing and into my favourites to savour again.
September 20th, 2019 04:42
Fuck
Poetic Dan said:
Loved it! I know a great tune that would go with this!
September 19th, 2019 10:04
Poetic Dan said:
Loved it! I know a great tune that would go with this!
September 19th, 2019 10:04
Pen Relief
orchidee said:
Everything has an end..... except my singing! I forgot that one. heehee.
September 17th, 2019 10:55
orchidee said:
Everything has an end..... except my singing! I forgot that one. heehee.
September 17th, 2019 10:55
Pen Relief
Neville said:
There are many of us who find writing to be supremely cathartic.. the only effective intervention.......... Good luck with your quest Sylviasearcher.........
Neville
September 17th, 2019 08:22
Neville said:
There are many of us who find writing to be supremely cathartic.. the only effective intervention.......... Good luck with your quest Sylviasearcher.........
Neville
September 17th, 2019 08:22
Pen Relief
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI SYLVIA ~ Thanks for sharing your PAIN ! We are thinking of YOU and praying for YOU. We have found that sharing our PAIN (of being 11,500 miles apart) in a POEM is very cathartic and we know that MPS Members are supporting us just as we are supporting you ~ AMEN ~ Love the structure (rhyming couplets) of your Poem it ameliorates the SUBJECT ~ Cri de Coeur !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
Five Healing Hearts for YOU !
September 17th, 2019 08:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI SYLVIA ~ Thanks for sharing your PAIN ! We are thinking of YOU and praying for YOU. We have found that sharing our PAIN (of being 11,500 miles apart) in a POEM is very cathartic and we know that MPS Members are supporting us just as we are supporting you ~ AMEN ~ Love the structure (rhyming couplets) of your Poem it ameliorates the SUBJECT ~ Cri de Coeur !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
Five Healing Hearts for YOU !
September 17th, 2019 08:20
Deep Purple
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m going for a blood test later in the week - thanks for this - ignore me - a super write.
September 16th, 2019 12:31
Michael Edwards said:
And I\'m going for a blood test later in the week - thanks for this - ignore me - a super write.
September 16th, 2019 12:31
Deep Purple
orchidee said:
You\'ve cut the veins then, and not the arteries, if it\'s purple blood. Oohh, shudder, what am I doing? I hate going on about \'cutting up\'.
The only \'sharp scratch\' I know is when medics say it just before they give us an injection.
September 16th, 2019 09:34
orchidee said:
You\'ve cut the veins then, and not the arteries, if it\'s purple blood. Oohh, shudder, what am I doing? I hate going on about \'cutting up\'.
The only \'sharp scratch\' I know is when medics say it just before they give us an injection.
September 16th, 2019 09:34
Deep Purple
orchidee said:
You\'ve cut the veins then, and not the arteries, if it\'s purple blood. Oohh, shudder, what am I doing? I hate going on about \'cutting up\'.
The only \'sharp scratch\' I know is when medics say it just before they give us an injection.
September 16th, 2019 09:34
orchidee said:
You\'ve cut the veins then, and not the arteries, if it\'s purple blood. Oohh, shudder, what am I doing? I hate going on about \'cutting up\'.
The only \'sharp scratch\' I know is when medics say it just before they give us an injection.
September 16th, 2019 09:34
Deep Purple
Neville said:
Profoundly poetic yet not without also being mildly disturbing ....
Plathesque if there was ever such a thing, or word...... Neville
September 16th, 2019 04:29
Neville said:
Profoundly poetic yet not without also being mildly disturbing ....
Plathesque if there was ever such a thing, or word...... Neville
September 16th, 2019 04:29
My Solitary Magpie
kevin browne said:
The crafty little so and so\'s will create moments you very rarely see these days. ThEy ruffle up their feathers ab=nd battle on until his target is rewarded with a silver milk top split open...Good write, my friend...
September 13th, 2019 11:11
kevin browne said:
The crafty little so and so\'s will create moments you very rarely see these days. ThEy ruffle up their feathers ab=nd battle on until his target is rewarded with a silver milk top split open...Good write, my friend...
September 13th, 2019 11:11
My Solitary Magpie
H.M. Reynolds, hmrwrites said:
So thought provoking, here for this and can\'t wait to see more of your work!
September 13th, 2019 08:58
H.M. Reynolds, hmrwrites said:
So thought provoking, here for this and can\'t wait to see more of your work!
September 13th, 2019 08:58
My Solitary Magpie
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent I have one too it sits on he house roof opposite mine...
Sometimes I wonder if it\'s watching me rather than the other way round
Great thoughts S
Thank you
September 13th, 2019 04:04
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent I have one too it sits on he house roof opposite mine...
Sometimes I wonder if it\'s watching me rather than the other way round
Great thoughts S
Thank you
September 13th, 2019 04:04
My Solitary Magpie
Fay Slimm. said:
Birds like the magpie though beautiful in feather have a reputation for drawing attention to the what, when and where........ a good source of reflection in this inspired verse Sylvia.
September 13th, 2019 03:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Birds like the magpie though beautiful in feather have a reputation for drawing attention to the what, when and where........ a good source of reflection in this inspired verse Sylvia.
September 13th, 2019 03:55
My Solitary Magpie
orchidee said:
A fine write Sylvia. Is it the same magpie each time? And how would we know?! heehee.
September 13th, 2019 03:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Sylvia. Is it the same magpie each time? And how would we know?! heehee.
September 13th, 2019 03:38
My Solitary Magpie
Neville said:
an interesting and unusual subject ..
One for sorrow dont they say.. but then not everything unlike magpies are straight forward black & white... write....
Neville
September 13th, 2019 03:33
Neville said:
an interesting and unusual subject ..
One for sorrow dont they say.. but then not everything unlike magpies are straight forward black & white... write....
Neville
September 13th, 2019 03:33
Cease
orchidee said:
A fine write Sylvia. It\'s a mystery - well, sometimes. But understandable sometimes - too much hurt, pain - of body, soul, or spirit.
If it wasn\'t so serious a theme I would say: \'Doh, tried it once; jumped in the duck pond; the water only came up to me ankles. I can\'t do anything right!\' (heehee).
September 10th, 2019 07:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Sylvia. It\'s a mystery - well, sometimes. But understandable sometimes - too much hurt, pain - of body, soul, or spirit.
If it wasn\'t so serious a theme I would say: \'Doh, tried it once; jumped in the duck pond; the water only came up to me ankles. I can\'t do anything right!\' (heehee).
September 10th, 2019 07:58
Cease
dusk arising said:
Courageous writing from the heart of your very soul.
What fear of death when it bids a new beginning one may ask. What judgement may be made upon one in the hereafter.
What faith, hope and solace can i give to one who finds our world too cruel for their existence? What right have those who stand in the way of self extinction?
Where does any right to be judgemental originate?
September 10th, 2019 06:59
dusk arising said:
Courageous writing from the heart of your very soul.
What fear of death when it bids a new beginning one may ask. What judgement may be made upon one in the hereafter.
What faith, hope and solace can i give to one who finds our world too cruel for their existence? What right have those who stand in the way of self extinction?
Where does any right to be judgemental originate?
September 10th, 2019 06:59
Cease
Neville said:
Probably most people struggle to understand why someone will go to the extreme length of self determination or suicide... historically known as self murder... I for one , having worked with many hundreds, maybe thousands of people with suicidal ideation and intentions over many years can see that there are as many reasons as there are would be self murderers... Some folk, just can not be prevented from committing suicide .. that does not make them necessarily bad, selfish, weak or wrong... I Know if for example I was in chronic pain, or aware that my cognitive faculties were failing there would be a good chance of me trying to find a way out of the humiliation, agony and despair....
Jeez.. rant over I thought today\'s poem was very poignant my friend .. well constructed and hope it serves to make folk appreciate life and poetry if nothing else..... N
September 10th, 2019 06:39
Neville said:
Probably most people struggle to understand why someone will go to the extreme length of self determination or suicide... historically known as self murder... I for one , having worked with many hundreds, maybe thousands of people with suicidal ideation and intentions over many years can see that there are as many reasons as there are would be self murderers... Some folk, just can not be prevented from committing suicide .. that does not make them necessarily bad, selfish, weak or wrong... I Know if for example I was in chronic pain, or aware that my cognitive faculties were failing there would be a good chance of me trying to find a way out of the humiliation, agony and despair....
Jeez.. rant over I thought today\'s poem was very poignant my friend .. well constructed and hope it serves to make folk appreciate life and poetry if nothing else..... N
September 10th, 2019 06:39
The Sum of our parts/ Gestalt’s antidote
dusk arising said:
In all we do, in all our vanity, every strain and effort to achieve, to give, to love, to lose.... shall account as of nothing.
September 4th, 2019 11:33
dusk arising said:
In all we do, in all our vanity, every strain and effort to achieve, to give, to love, to lose.... shall account as of nothing.
September 4th, 2019 11:33
The pretensions of a poet misunderstood
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely brilliant and that last part was perfect. I never know if I\'m free but when I write I feel it becomes me!
Always appreciated!
September 4th, 2019 08:56
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely brilliant and that last part was perfect. I never know if I\'m free but when I write I feel it becomes me!
Always appreciated!
September 4th, 2019 08:56
The Sum of our parts/ Gestalt’s antidote
Neville said:
good old Fritz Perls.. he knew a thing or two didn\'t he ... as of course do you sylviasearcher..... Neville enjoyed this very much.....
September 3rd, 2019 06:47
Neville said:
good old Fritz Perls.. he knew a thing or two didn\'t he ... as of course do you sylviasearcher..... Neville enjoyed this very much.....
September 3rd, 2019 06:47
The Sum of our parts/ Gestalt’s antidote
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure what it is about this but it really appeals - great work Sylvia.
September 3rd, 2019 03:28
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure what it is about this but it really appeals - great work Sylvia.
September 3rd, 2019 03:28
The Sum of our parts/ Gestalt’s antidote
orchidee said:
Well, they are fine words, Sylvia, meaning \'something\'! I\'m often on about us being \'dust\' in some of my poems, I know.
September 3rd, 2019 03:28
orchidee said:
Well, they are fine words, Sylvia, meaning \'something\'! I\'m often on about us being \'dust\' in some of my poems, I know.
September 3rd, 2019 03:28
The pretensions of a poet misunderstood
Neville said:
a great title and what followed on through and behind it was pretty darned cool too..... just my opinion but am sticking with it..... N
September 3rd, 2019 02:58
Neville said:
a great title and what followed on through and behind it was pretty darned cool too..... just my opinion but am sticking with it..... N
September 3rd, 2019 02:58
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