Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Sick
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Sylvia. I just hope that this is not your life!
December 10th, 2019 22:02
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Sylvia. I just hope that this is not your life!
December 10th, 2019 22:02
Abuse
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Sylvia, I would buy your truth.
Andy.
December 9th, 2019 16:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Sylvia, I would buy your truth.
Andy.
December 9th, 2019 16:29
Reflections
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no way this is not a good poem, it brings your feelings to the page and into the heart and mind of the reader.
I am sure that precious land is there for you and you will never forget it. You will be who you want to be sylvia, and with words like these it is very close.
Andy.
December 4th, 2019 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no way this is not a good poem, it brings your feelings to the page and into the heart and mind of the reader.
I am sure that precious land is there for you and you will never forget it. You will be who you want to be sylvia, and with words like these it is very close.
Andy.
December 4th, 2019 01:16
Reflections
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow awesome poem as you muse in metaphoric way, then the ending stanza an appreciative turn. I like the bewitched line lots. Kudos for a great poem.
Pls pleez do review /comment my newest poem too.
December 3rd, 2019 15:57
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow awesome poem as you muse in metaphoric way, then the ending stanza an appreciative turn. I like the bewitched line lots. Kudos for a great poem.
Pls pleez do review /comment my newest poem too.
December 3rd, 2019 15:57
Without Purpose
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but as you say you are still here and the one thing about that is that you can still write your words which bring those who care into your life and I care.
May your words find the light and life get better each day.
\'Cool\' is the word that you and Unsub can use as you were there, I can say things are \'hip\' as that was when I was there, back in the historic realm of mods and rockers in the 60\'s, a time which changed life into a brighter time.
Those changes can be there for us all.
December 3rd, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but as you say you are still here and the one thing about that is that you can still write your words which bring those who care into your life and I care.
May your words find the light and life get better each day.
\'Cool\' is the word that you and Unsub can use as you were there, I can say things are \'hip\' as that was when I was there, back in the historic realm of mods and rockers in the 60\'s, a time which changed life into a brighter time.
Those changes can be there for us all.
December 3rd, 2019 01:42
Without Purpose
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Sylvia. i do hope you are not in this place.
December 2nd, 2019 13:13
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Sylvia. i do hope you are not in this place.
December 2nd, 2019 13:13
Dead Weight
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
My first read of the day.
Relatable to my state of mind at the present time.
Uncannily, you’ve have zeroed in, with your first two stanzas, on how I feel today!
“Today I am a restless away”...
Perhaps...
“Tomorrow I’ll be light”
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
December 1st, 2019 07:12
Laura🌻 said:
Sylvia,
My first read of the day.
Relatable to my state of mind at the present time.
Uncannily, you’ve have zeroed in, with your first two stanzas, on how I feel today!
“Today I am a restless away”...
Perhaps...
“Tomorrow I’ll be light”
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~
December 1st, 2019 07:12
Acceptance
Poetic Dan said:
O my days, this was breathtaking. I can still feel my heart beating, thank you!
Great stuff
November 27th, 2019 16:24
Poetic Dan said:
O my days, this was breathtaking. I can still feel my heart beating, thank you!
Great stuff
November 27th, 2019 16:24
Still
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sad write,loss is a hard thing to deal with,especially a lost love
November 26th, 2019 16:54
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sad write,loss is a hard thing to deal with,especially a lost love
November 26th, 2019 16:54
Still
RiverJordan said:
\" I will roam like an endlessness
I will unsettle sleepy shores
Yesterday you thought you heard me
Lost voice . Forevermore \" KAPOW
That chin checked my heart
November 26th, 2019 03:12
RiverJordan said:
\" I will roam like an endlessness
I will unsettle sleepy shores
Yesterday you thought you heard me
Lost voice . Forevermore \" KAPOW
That chin checked my heart
November 26th, 2019 03:12
Ode to the broken
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write sylivia, may that light be forever with you.
November 23rd, 2019 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write sylivia, may that light be forever with you.
November 23rd, 2019 01:03
Peaceful Pursuit
Fay Slimm. said:
No editing needed in my opinion for this inspiring verse on pursuing the feeling of peace.......... a lovely read Sylvia.
November 18th, 2019 13:52
Fay Slimm. said:
No editing needed in my opinion for this inspiring verse on pursuing the feeling of peace.......... a lovely read Sylvia.
November 18th, 2019 13:52
Dead
Suresh said:
Neither, your prose, your verse or your words to be dreaded, when expressed so eloquently. And when it comes to death, it should be naturally welcomed, the sooner the better.
November 1st, 2019 22:16
Suresh said:
Neither, your prose, your verse or your words to be dreaded, when expressed so eloquently. And when it comes to death, it should be naturally welcomed, the sooner the better.
November 1st, 2019 22:16
All
Poetic Dan said:
That was sadly beautiful, thank you. What a brilliant way to end it too, it felt some what peaceful or maybe at peace with it!
October 30th, 2019 09:17
Poetic Dan said:
That was sadly beautiful, thank you. What a brilliant way to end it too, it felt some what peaceful or maybe at peace with it!
October 30th, 2019 09:17
Resting Place?
Goldfinch60 said:
May her voice from the grave resound within us all.
October 28th, 2019 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
May her voice from the grave resound within us all.
October 28th, 2019 01:18
Resting Place?
orchidee said:
I\'m not familiar with her poems. Am I poetically un-cultured?! I have at least heard of her.
October 27th, 2019 08:06
orchidee said:
I\'m not familiar with her poems. Am I poetically un-cultured?! I have at least heard of her.
October 27th, 2019 08:06
Resting Place?
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant poetry and a wonderful tribute - -very moving to read and digest Sylvia.
October 27th, 2019 08:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Brilliant poetry and a wonderful tribute - -very moving to read and digest Sylvia.
October 27th, 2019 08:03
Resting Place?
Neville said:
I came here today..
this very important day,
only to read these words...
and to hear a voice,
now from the grave
and the universe slide from my side...
October 27th, 2019 06:56
Neville said:
I came here today..
this very important day,
only to read these words...
and to hear a voice,
now from the grave
and the universe slide from my side...
October 27th, 2019 06:56
Love Sick
RiverJordan said:
Well hey, you are genuine and authentic, that\'s a victory in of itself!
October 25th, 2019 06:25
RiverJordan said:
Well hey, you are genuine and authentic, that\'s a victory in of itself!
October 25th, 2019 06:25
Nothing and Stars
Neville said:
dark and disturbing but thoroughly enjoyed..
October 23rd, 2019 09:17
Neville said:
dark and disturbing but thoroughly enjoyed..
October 23rd, 2019 09:17
Nothing and Stars
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic questions, I\'m sure you can write great poetic answers!
Keep up the write!
October 23rd, 2019 06:52
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic questions, I\'m sure you can write great poetic answers!
Keep up the write!
October 23rd, 2019 06:52
The End
sylviasearcher said:
There is no high ground here on anywhere else.
The End.
September 24th, 2019 02:21
sylviasearcher said:
There is no high ground here on anywhere else.
The End.
September 24th, 2019 02:21
Disillusionment
Poetic Dan said:
Yet there all your words stand before, if there is no spoon then there is nothing to win or lose. Just be!
Brilliantly expressed, you got this!
September 23rd, 2019 11:49
Poetic Dan said:
Yet there all your words stand before, if there is no spoon then there is nothing to win or lose. Just be!
Brilliantly expressed, you got this!
September 23rd, 2019 11:49
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