Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Unrest and The END
Goldfinch60 said:
That end will come to us all on this earth but will there be more ahead?
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That end will come to us all on this earth but will there be more ahead?
Andy
June 2nd, 2020 00:49
Unrest and The END
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - well said my friend - in the end is the end........as far as we earthlings know.......... hoping however the best will be yet to come.
June 1st, 2020 13:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes - well said my friend - in the end is the end........as far as we earthlings know.......... hoping however the best will be yet to come.
June 1st, 2020 13:40
Unrest and The END
Neville said:
I have no doubt that one day I shall nourish your garden..
somethings should be taken for granted, so let\'s not pretend otherwise....
Characteristically dark, but as almost always, very much enjoyed..
I hope you are well
Neville
June 1st, 2020 12:08
Neville said:
I have no doubt that one day I shall nourish your garden..
somethings should be taken for granted, so let\'s not pretend otherwise....
Characteristically dark, but as almost always, very much enjoyed..
I hope you are well
Neville
June 1st, 2020 12:08
More! More! More!
dusk arising said:
It\'s like being forced to watch daytime television.
May 11th, 2020 11:14
dusk arising said:
It\'s like being forced to watch daytime television.
May 11th, 2020 11:14
More! More! More!
Neville said:
sound like another groundhog day..
nevertheless, enjoyed... at least by me..
May 11th, 2020 07:23
Neville said:
sound like another groundhog day..
nevertheless, enjoyed... at least by me..
May 11th, 2020 07:23
Lunar Being
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow awesome how you liken the dream state to a lunar phase ! A lovely sensational dreamy poem. Kudos.
Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2020 12:29
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow awesome how you liken the dream state to a lunar phase ! A lovely sensational dreamy poem. Kudos.
Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2020 12:29
Lunar Being
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens so often that in the realms of a dream heading for that wonderful ending when you awake and the dream remains a figment of imagination. Wonderful words sylvia.
Andy
May 8th, 2020 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens so often that in the realms of a dream heading for that wonderful ending when you awake and the dream remains a figment of imagination. Wonderful words sylvia.
Andy
May 8th, 2020 00:59
Lunar Being
Fay Slimm. said:
This write with its lilting pathos must be one of your best yet Sylvia - - I love the flow and rhyme of that final question.
May 7th, 2020 15:52
Fay Slimm. said:
This write with its lilting pathos must be one of your best yet Sylvia - - I love the flow and rhyme of that final question.
May 7th, 2020 15:52
Lunar Being
myself and me said:
Lunar bring you such a wonderful dream. Who wouldn\'t want to stay there longer?
May 7th, 2020 11:57
myself and me said:
Lunar bring you such a wonderful dream. Who wouldn\'t want to stay there longer?
May 7th, 2020 11:57
Secrets
Goldfinch60 said:
Those whispers from our winged friends in the morning assure me that life is fine.
Good words sylvia.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Those whispers from our winged friends in the morning assure me that life is fine.
Good words sylvia.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:17
Secrets
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a feel of peace in this description of something we often question and never seem able to find the right answer - that final stanza is so inspiring - thank you for sharing it Sylvia.
May 5th, 2020 07:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a feel of peace in this description of something we often question and never seem able to find the right answer - that final stanza is so inspiring - thank you for sharing it Sylvia.
May 5th, 2020 07:40
Secrets
Poetic Dan said:
Well needed as I woke up at 5:55 this morning with a random song, now I understand the whisper... I was never ment to belong...
Great stuff as ever, keep up the write!
May 5th, 2020 07:39
Poetic Dan said:
Well needed as I woke up at 5:55 this morning with a random song, now I understand the whisper... I was never ment to belong...
Great stuff as ever, keep up the write!
May 5th, 2020 07:39
After the Clapping
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s the fireworks that are getting to me but what a punch! Always appreciate your spirit
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
April 29th, 2020 15:16
Poetic Dan said:
It\'s the fireworks that are getting to me but what a punch! Always appreciate your spirit
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
April 29th, 2020 15:16
After the Clapping
dusk arising said:
Brings it home in bucket fulls. Thank you. It\'s all so familiar, we are \'so close to the trees that we cannot see the wood\' as my old mum would say. But you have said it as it is here. Who knows what is going on next door but one.
You brought the situation inside my door today, and i\'m on that extremely vulnerable list staying home for 12 weeks.
April 29th, 2020 03:42
dusk arising said:
Brings it home in bucket fulls. Thank you. It\'s all so familiar, we are \'so close to the trees that we cannot see the wood\' as my old mum would say. But you have said it as it is here. Who knows what is going on next door but one.
You brought the situation inside my door today, and i\'m on that extremely vulnerable list staying home for 12 weeks.
April 29th, 2020 03:42
After the Clapping
Fay Slimm. said:
A very perceptive write which outlines isolation\'s real contribution to the fight for life and which after reading your powerful lines surely needs a special round of applause - - this one goes into my favourites and thanks for sharing it Sylvia.
April 29th, 2020 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A very perceptive write which outlines isolation\'s real contribution to the fight for life and which after reading your powerful lines surely needs a special round of applause - - this one goes into my favourites and thanks for sharing it Sylvia.
April 29th, 2020 03:19
After the Clapping
MendedFences27 said:
I think they deserve a round of applause; putting their lives on the line from being in contact with the virus every minute of their workshift, sometimes without proper protection. They face a horrible death alone, gasping for air. Those who can clap and return to their safe place at home face only boredom and tedious living. I guess they help by reducing the overall risks for all of us. Please stay home. And as you say they are \"Saving lives\" by \"staying home. - nice poem - Phil A.
April 28th, 2020 16:30
MendedFences27 said:
I think they deserve a round of applause; putting their lives on the line from being in contact with the virus every minute of their workshift, sometimes without proper protection. They face a horrible death alone, gasping for air. Those who can clap and return to their safe place at home face only boredom and tedious living. I guess they help by reducing the overall risks for all of us. Please stay home. And as you say they are \"Saving lives\" by \"staying home. - nice poem - Phil A.
April 28th, 2020 16:30
After the Clapping
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write Sylvia, if only we knew what goes on behind those closed doors.
When we go out to clap the neighbours and I stay out talking and last week we were talking about having a street party when it is all clear.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 14:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write Sylvia, if only we knew what goes on behind those closed doors.
When we go out to clap the neighbours and I stay out talking and last week we were talking about having a street party when it is all clear.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 14:54
After the Clapping
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a strong write and puts in words the very emotions of many of us - and I will clap again this week. I will be grateful that I do have a wife and a garden but the hurt and effects of the virus still digs as deep.
April 28th, 2020 14:10
Michael Edwards said:
This is such a strong write and puts in words the very emotions of many of us - and I will clap again this week. I will be grateful that I do have a wife and a garden but the hurt and effects of the virus still digs as deep.
April 28th, 2020 14:10
I heard an owl in the night
Goldfinch60 said:
The silence of flying owls will never be heard
By things that attract this wonderful bird.
It flies through the night on its silent wings
But you will not hear it until it sings.
Good write sylvia.
Andy
March 14th, 2020 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
The silence of flying owls will never be heard
By things that attract this wonderful bird.
It flies through the night on its silent wings
But you will not hear it until it sings.
Good write sylvia.
Andy
March 14th, 2020 01:51
I heard an owl in the night
dusk arising said:
I don\'t think a wise owl will come anywhere near. There are far more willing victims of the night.
Wooo - hoooo
March 13th, 2020 10:16
dusk arising said:
I don\'t think a wise owl will come anywhere near. There are far more willing victims of the night.
Wooo - hoooo
March 13th, 2020 10:16
Perfection
Goldfinch60 said:
When we put our heart on paper so many things come to mind. It does not matter whether it rhymes or not, it is what you want to say at that moment that is real.
Andy
March 13th, 2020 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
When we put our heart on paper so many things come to mind. It does not matter whether it rhymes or not, it is what you want to say at that moment that is real.
Andy
March 13th, 2020 01:09
Perfection
Neville said:
I wanna like it and have read it a lot
but I fear it aint perfect and there\'s much it aint got
reminds me of summat but I aint sure what...
although I think probably it is the form rather than any specific message it conveys.... Stay well..
March 12th, 2020 09:33
Neville said:
I wanna like it and have read it a lot
but I fear it aint perfect and there\'s much it aint got
reminds me of summat but I aint sure what...
although I think probably it is the form rather than any specific message it conveys.... Stay well..
March 12th, 2020 09:33
Perfection
Saxon Crow said:
Love it. Everyone knows poems should rhyme! Unless you\'re a creative genius of course.... or not
March 12th, 2020 07:26
Saxon Crow said:
Love it. Everyone knows poems should rhyme! Unless you\'re a creative genius of course.... or not
March 12th, 2020 07:26
Diseased
Poetic Dan said:
Wow my first read in a while and o what a punch, your words sit with my soul in the empty pit of my stomach.
Was it them or me, you or I
Either way we all have to live them die...
Sorry... not sure where that came from but it was all done in the moment after reading your vibe
Keep up the write
See you on the other side ;)
March 10th, 2020 03:23
Poetic Dan said:
Wow my first read in a while and o what a punch, your words sit with my soul in the empty pit of my stomach.
Was it them or me, you or I
Either way we all have to live them die...
Sorry... not sure where that came from but it was all done in the moment after reading your vibe
Keep up the write
See you on the other side ;)
March 10th, 2020 03:23
Hurt (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
A solemn look at difference. Three lines that say it all.
February 26th, 2020 11:01
Fay Slimm. said:
A solemn look at difference. Three lines that say it all.
February 26th, 2020 11:01
Hurt (2)
dusk arising said:
Short, sweet and punchy.
The suffering of nature amid it\'s beauty.
February 26th, 2020 06:19
dusk arising said:
Short, sweet and punchy.
The suffering of nature amid it\'s beauty.
February 26th, 2020 06:19
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