Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
The pretensions of a poet misunderstood
Fay Slimm. said:
Freedom to be just who we are is priceless and you write its absence most movingly Sylvia.
September 2nd, 2019 05:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Freedom to be just who we are is priceless and you write its absence most movingly Sylvia.
September 2nd, 2019 05:37
The pretensions of a poet misunderstood
dusk arising said:
I feel there is someone being undervalued and ignored crying out from your writing.
Free free free? Are you now free? For freedom from such mistreatment surely is the life tonic one needs.
Just imagine, losing that sad black hollow hurtful burdern and actually being free to be you. To be heard and enjoyed..... to live!
Be free, i hope you are.
September 2nd, 2019 05:28
dusk arising said:
I feel there is someone being undervalued and ignored crying out from your writing.
Free free free? Are you now free? For freedom from such mistreatment surely is the life tonic one needs.
Just imagine, losing that sad black hollow hurtful burdern and actually being free to be you. To be heard and enjoyed..... to live!
Be free, i hope you are.
September 2nd, 2019 05:28
Imagine
dusk arising said:
At 15 i left home. There was much imagining and scant success but the will to stay above rock bottom eventually raised me to whatever i have become.
Imagination never dies but the plinth from where we imagine matures with the years.
Imagine a dream. It created the poet within you.
August 29th, 2019 16:14
dusk arising said:
At 15 i left home. There was much imagining and scant success but the will to stay above rock bottom eventually raised me to whatever i have become.
Imagination never dies but the plinth from where we imagine matures with the years.
Imagine a dream. It created the poet within you.
August 29th, 2019 16:14
Imagine
Suresh said:
I don\'t have to, as I have been its occupant, and your poetic words do stir such imaginations
August 29th, 2019 09:48
Suresh said:
I don\'t have to, as I have been its occupant, and your poetic words do stir such imaginations
August 29th, 2019 09:48
Imagine
Poetic Dan said:
Knowing a home was long ago
Never to return but make my own
Thank you for your words
Much peace and respect
Always appreciated
August 29th, 2019 09:10
Poetic Dan said:
Knowing a home was long ago
Never to return but make my own
Thank you for your words
Much peace and respect
Always appreciated
August 29th, 2019 09:10
Imagine
Neville said:
the only thing about this page that does not have a lonely feel, is that each of your poetic lines consists of a single unhurried and unperturbed word..... excellent... N
August 29th, 2019 04:52
Neville said:
the only thing about this page that does not have a lonely feel, is that each of your poetic lines consists of a single unhurried and unperturbed word..... excellent... N
August 29th, 2019 04:52
Imagine
orchidee said:
Yet sometimes we may wish, and even say, \'Ohh, everyone - go away, leave me be a while!\'
August 29th, 2019 04:14
orchidee said:
Yet sometimes we may wish, and even say, \'Ohh, everyone - go away, leave me be a while!\'
August 29th, 2019 04:14
Imagine
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-ache of a read dear Sylvia and worded so clear that readers like me would remember the feel of utter aloneness long after the write was ended. Needs deep as this often never get met and you told it so well.
August 29th, 2019 04:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-ache of a read dear Sylvia and worded so clear that readers like me would remember the feel of utter aloneness long after the write was ended. Needs deep as this often never get met and you told it so well.
August 29th, 2019 04:05
I believe
Neville said:
I dont know whether you are old enough to remember The Young Ones with Rick Mayall, Nigel Planer et al... but this poem would certainly .. according to Neil (Nigel Plane) something of a heavy concept..... N
August 28th, 2019 10:14
Neville said:
I dont know whether you are old enough to remember The Young Ones with Rick Mayall, Nigel Planer et al... but this poem would certainly .. according to Neil (Nigel Plane) something of a heavy concept..... N
August 28th, 2019 10:14
Release
Suresh said:
Unrequited love\'s pain so emotionally expressed by your poem
August 24th, 2019 10:37
Suresh said:
Unrequited love\'s pain so emotionally expressed by your poem
August 24th, 2019 10:37
Release
Neville said:
the following words are the envy of all us scribblers
I am no more here than you are dead
From all the many lies we bred
and I liked the accompanying track.. so there ya go.. nuff said.. N
August 22nd, 2019 09:54
Neville said:
the following words are the envy of all us scribblers
I am no more here than you are dead
From all the many lies we bred
and I liked the accompanying track.. so there ya go.. nuff said.. N
August 22nd, 2019 09:54
Release
Fay Slimm. said:
A cry in love\'s wilderness if ever I read one and written with such expertise I felt the emptiness - an emotive write Sylvia.
August 22nd, 2019 03:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A cry in love\'s wilderness if ever I read one and written with such expertise I felt the emptiness - an emotive write Sylvia.
August 22nd, 2019 03:36
Reaching
Neville said:
there is a certain gentle tho very felt plea running the length of this very fine poem .. more prose like and I like it a lot.. having said that.. I also detect a catchy beat and that does well too.....
Neville
August 21st, 2019 11:57
Neville said:
there is a certain gentle tho very felt plea running the length of this very fine poem .. more prose like and I like it a lot.. having said that.. I also detect a catchy beat and that does well too.....
Neville
August 21st, 2019 11:57
Reaching
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful appeal in these fervent lines - - your captured the title so clearly Sylvia.....
August 21st, 2019 11:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful appeal in these fervent lines - - your captured the title so clearly Sylvia.....
August 21st, 2019 11:20
Love Fulfill
dusk arising said:
A beautiful prayer for love\'s passion. Complete and fulfilling ecstacy.
August 16th, 2019 19:46
dusk arising said:
A beautiful prayer for love\'s passion. Complete and fulfilling ecstacy.
August 16th, 2019 19:46
Hemlock
Fay Slimm. said:
A potent though gloomy look at what \"love\" does to some - -wonderfully alliterated throughout - thanks Sylvia for wording such pain so realistically.-
August 14th, 2019 04:25
Fay Slimm. said:
A potent though gloomy look at what \"love\" does to some - -wonderfully alliterated throughout - thanks Sylvia for wording such pain so realistically.-
August 14th, 2019 04:25
Hemlock
FineB said:
Hello sylviasearcher,
A superb write with vivid and evocative imagery.
Keep writing
FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:20
FineB said:
Hello sylviasearcher,
A superb write with vivid and evocative imagery.
Keep writing
FineB
August 14th, 2019 04:20
Hemlock
Neville said:
This is intoxicatingly good, you just wont believe it....
Neville
August 14th, 2019 03:46
Neville said:
This is intoxicatingly good, you just wont believe it....
Neville
August 14th, 2019 03:46
Hemlock
orchidee said:
I told her not to eat that plant - it\'s poisonous! (ooh. lol).
August 14th, 2019 03:00
orchidee said:
I told her not to eat that plant - it\'s poisonous! (ooh. lol).
August 14th, 2019 03:00
Hemlock
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Such sweet sorrow in these lines I sense a pain longing to end
Excellent portrayal of suffering S
BRAVO!
August 14th, 2019 02:14
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Such sweet sorrow in these lines I sense a pain longing to end
Excellent portrayal of suffering S
BRAVO!
August 14th, 2019 02:14
Living Dead
Neville said:
this is very dark indeed..
it feels like there may be sunshine behind those drawn curtains.... ........ ..... maybe
August 13th, 2019 17:04
Neville said:
this is very dark indeed..
it feels like there may be sunshine behind those drawn curtains.... ........ ..... maybe
August 13th, 2019 17:04
Living Dead
Michael Edwards said:
A great write Sylvia - I don\'t quite know why but it\'s reminded me of a reggae song I used to listen to in about 1960. All I can remember are the lines:
Back to back
belly to belly
i don\'t give a damn
I\'m done dead already.
Must try and look it up.
August 13th, 2019 10:37
Michael Edwards said:
A great write Sylvia - I don\'t quite know why but it\'s reminded me of a reggae song I used to listen to in about 1960. All I can remember are the lines:
Back to back
belly to belly
i don\'t give a damn
I\'m done dead already.
Must try and look it up.
August 13th, 2019 10:37
Living Dead
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
many questions... very thought provoking
Great piece well penned
August 13th, 2019 03:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
many questions... very thought provoking
Great piece well penned
August 13th, 2019 03:37
Candles
Chagrined said:
I love this and I sense a note of positive energy, here. Maybe this is based upon a muse or the idea of being happy no matter what the risk. Maybe?
August 11th, 2019 17:10
Chagrined said:
I love this and I sense a note of positive energy, here. Maybe this is based upon a muse or the idea of being happy no matter what the risk. Maybe?
August 11th, 2019 17:10
Requiem
Chagrined said:
Beautiful work in it\'s dark sadness. Once again, you thrive in these dark nooks and crannies and you force me to bring out my interrogation light to flush you out of such a mindset. Such a talent you are.
August 11th, 2019 16:15
Chagrined said:
Beautiful work in it\'s dark sadness. Once again, you thrive in these dark nooks and crannies and you force me to bring out my interrogation light to flush you out of such a mindset. Such a talent you are.
August 11th, 2019 16:15
Wasted
Michael Edwards said:
Forget the format - it stands up as it is. Super work.
August 8th, 2019 10:53
Michael Edwards said:
Forget the format - it stands up as it is. Super work.
August 8th, 2019 10:53
Wasted
Suresh said:
No, no dead end yet, if we can put out words like this,,,,,,
August 8th, 2019 10:16
Suresh said:
No, no dead end yet, if we can put out words like this,,,,,,
August 8th, 2019 10:16
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