Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Hmmm
FredPeyer said:
A great write, sylvia, it is still rambling through my mind after reading it twice. Love the line \'I hunt in the muds for words that make sense\'. I think that goes for every writer.
December 16th, 2020 12:00
FredPeyer said:
A great write, sylvia, it is still rambling through my mind after reading it twice. Love the line \'I hunt in the muds for words that make sense\'. I think that goes for every writer.
December 16th, 2020 12:00
Hmmm
peto said:
Hmmm, do you know what it means
For I do not
Great to see you writing sylvia
Always thought provoking
Hmmm
December 16th, 2020 07:48
peto said:
Hmmm, do you know what it means
For I do not
Great to see you writing sylvia
Always thought provoking
Hmmm
December 16th, 2020 07:48
Deconstruction
RDS said:
It\'s a shame there isn\'t a \'haunting\' category because this fits right in. Dark and atmospheric. Half glimpsed figures that aren\'t there when your attention is drawn to them. Great writing thanks Sylvia.
November 21st, 2020 17:40
RDS said:
It\'s a shame there isn\'t a \'haunting\' category because this fits right in. Dark and atmospheric. Half glimpsed figures that aren\'t there when your attention is drawn to them. Great writing thanks Sylvia.
November 21st, 2020 17:40
Deconstruction
dusk arising said:
Are these the words of unfulfilled emotion us poets experience when we cannot complete the piece we began to compose......
...... the frame of mind we entered to begin that composition somehow gets lost.... disappears as the practical side of finding the words to convey the emotion takes over......
I smile and put it away for another day..... and disappear too.
November 20th, 2020 06:18
dusk arising said:
Are these the words of unfulfilled emotion us poets experience when we cannot complete the piece we began to compose......
...... the frame of mind we entered to begin that composition somehow gets lost.... disappears as the practical side of finding the words to convey the emotion takes over......
I smile and put it away for another day..... and disappear too.
November 20th, 2020 06:18
Better for Seeing
Neville said:
... an exceptional post sylviasearcher and one my most favouritest of your poems to date .. good to see you back and hope you are both safe and well ...
November 12th, 2020 23:35
Neville said:
... an exceptional post sylviasearcher and one my most favouritest of your poems to date .. good to see you back and hope you are both safe and well ...
November 12th, 2020 23:35
Better for Seeing
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this perfectly created piece of poetic positivity - - an inspirational read my friend.
November 12th, 2020 12:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this perfectly created piece of poetic positivity - - an inspirational read my friend.
November 12th, 2020 12:56
You can tell everybody, this is my song
peto said:
Well
The chorus was
I\'m ok ta
Hope same with your good self
October 6th, 2020 10:07
peto said:
Well
The chorus was
I\'m ok ta
Hope same with your good self
October 6th, 2020 10:07
You can tell everybody, this is my song
peto said:
brilliant sylvia
Not exactly a catchy wee number
But
Superbly written
Emotion packed ditty
October 6th, 2020 08:40
peto said:
brilliant sylvia
Not exactly a catchy wee number
But
Superbly written
Emotion packed ditty
October 6th, 2020 08:40
You can tell everybody, this is my song
Fay Slimm. said:
The superb rhyming in this raw piece of deep introspection draws out the sheer pathos of the first stanza and moves the very heart of this reader. Your way with words never ceases to amaze dear Sylvia.
October 5th, 2020 10:52
Fay Slimm. said:
The superb rhyming in this raw piece of deep introspection draws out the sheer pathos of the first stanza and moves the very heart of this reader. Your way with words never ceases to amaze dear Sylvia.
October 5th, 2020 10:52
Unearthing the Daisy
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you say it in awesome flow and rhyming and I admire the intertwining of flowers and yourself, I like to blend in with flowers in poetry. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 07:23
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you say it in awesome flow and rhyming and I admire the intertwining of flowers and yourself, I like to blend in with flowers in poetry. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 07:23
Unearthing the Daisy
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightful flow to this read Sylvia - - I liked the rhyming too which seems to bring it all together so well. Must go into my list of faves this intriguing and very readable daisy-verse.
August 10th, 2020 02:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightful flow to this read Sylvia - - I liked the rhyming too which seems to bring it all together so well. Must go into my list of faves this intriguing and very readable daisy-verse.
August 10th, 2020 02:03
Nirvana
MendedFences27 said:
I hate myself, I hate the things I\'ve done, but I want to live. Sounds like a tormented existence. Your poem paints a very dark picture of one struggling to survive. Some very powerful phrases help to delineate that picture: \"break my face on that shiny spectre\'\" \"Bleed my heart with that same syringe,\" \"that massaged my ego into orgasm.\" These are powerful images that you have created. They take your lament and infuse life into it. Well done. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2020 11:13
MendedFences27 said:
I hate myself, I hate the things I\'ve done, but I want to live. Sounds like a tormented existence. Your poem paints a very dark picture of one struggling to survive. Some very powerful phrases help to delineate that picture: \"break my face on that shiny spectre\'\" \"Bleed my heart with that same syringe,\" \"that massaged my ego into orgasm.\" These are powerful images that you have created. They take your lament and infuse life into it. Well done. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2020 11:13
Nirvana
Neville said:
I think this is exceptionally good.. but personally, I would prefer some other way...
August 8th, 2020 08:43
Neville said:
I think this is exceptionally good.. but personally, I would prefer some other way...
August 8th, 2020 08:43
Chasing the word
MendedFences27 said:
Words flatter
poetic beauty created.
collected, structured, written, printed.
Here for all to appreciate.
Lovely poem, most satisfying, Must save.- Phil A.
July 30th, 2020 09:13
MendedFences27 said:
Words flatter
poetic beauty created.
collected, structured, written, printed.
Here for all to appreciate.
Lovely poem, most satisfying, Must save.- Phil A.
July 30th, 2020 09:13
Birth-day
TWENTY3 said:
youve written one of the best poems i have ever read on this site. It has everything and all covered in a downpour of torrential rain. miserable to the end. Wonderduby!
July 24th, 2020 07:08
TWENTY3 said:
youve written one of the best poems i have ever read on this site. It has everything and all covered in a downpour of torrential rain. miserable to the end. Wonderduby!
July 24th, 2020 07:08
Tall Grasses
dusk arising said:
Yay, for in what form will reincarnation be, and where, when? For it is a huge theory to conjecture.
Physically though reincarnation is plain to see for out physical being returns to the carbon of the environment only to manifest again as a part of who knows how many different carbon based existences.
A very thought provoking read from you.
July 20th, 2020 14:15
dusk arising said:
Yay, for in what form will reincarnation be, and where, when? For it is a huge theory to conjecture.
Physically though reincarnation is plain to see for out physical being returns to the carbon of the environment only to manifest again as a part of who knows how many different carbon based existences.
A very thought provoking read from you.
July 20th, 2020 14:15
Juxtaposition
peto said:
Brilliant writing as usual sylvia
Very painful though
I think someone needs a hug
July 10th, 2020 14:54
peto said:
Brilliant writing as usual sylvia
Very painful though
I think someone needs a hug
July 10th, 2020 14:54
The Clique
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cliques only want things for themselves and do not care for others.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those cliques only want things for themselves and do not care for others.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 00:35
The Clique
peto said:
Out
Everyone in a clique wishes they could be an individual
Like your good self
My clique is nodding in agreement
This time lol
June 25th, 2020 04:49
peto said:
Out
Everyone in a clique wishes they could be an individual
Like your good self
My clique is nodding in agreement
This time lol
June 25th, 2020 04:49
The Clique
Fay Slimm. said:
You sum up cliques so well in this outing of reasons for social divides and separation of Me and Them........ an interesting form and style too Sylvia .
June 25th, 2020 03:58
Fay Slimm. said:
You sum up cliques so well in this outing of reasons for social divides and separation of Me and Them........ an interesting form and style too Sylvia .
June 25th, 2020 03:58
Enlightenment
peto said:
Oh won\'t you?
Ever lower the superb standard of your writing
Hope not
June 19th, 2020 14:20
peto said:
Oh won\'t you?
Ever lower the superb standard of your writing
Hope not
June 19th, 2020 14:20
Enlightenment
AwHec8 said:
Yeah but do you remember which way to the door? Maybe it has been left unlocked? Maybe someone else has a key, too. Just a thought a theory
June 18th, 2020 06:50
AwHec8 said:
Yeah but do you remember which way to the door? Maybe it has been left unlocked? Maybe someone else has a key, too. Just a thought a theory
June 18th, 2020 06:50
Romancing the Dead
Fay Slimm. said:
A brilliant interpretation of endless non-existence. Into my faves with this one Sylvia. Great write.
June 15th, 2020 03:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A brilliant interpretation of endless non-existence. Into my faves with this one Sylvia. Great write.
June 15th, 2020 03:43
Stench
peto said:
Love how you question almost as much as you state when writing
Another top read
June 9th, 2020 06:50
peto said:
Love how you question almost as much as you state when writing
Another top read
June 9th, 2020 06:50
Stench
Neville said:
I dont suppose there is any point in saying things can only get better ..
okay, I thought not, but pushed the button anyway..
June 9th, 2020 04:54
Neville said:
I dont suppose there is any point in saying things can only get better ..
okay, I thought not, but pushed the button anyway..
June 9th, 2020 04:54
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