Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher



What I don’t know
Suresh said:

Marvelous

April 6th, 2019 03:55

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Sunshinefalling said:

Another beautiful write. Thank you!

April 5th, 2019 11:30

What I don’t know
Goldfinch60 said:

Very powerful write Sylvia. May you find true peace in your heart and mind as you take your breathe, but be back soon.

April 4th, 2019 15:13

What I don’t know
Joker44 said:

I wanna give you my hand after reading the poem.
Will my hand reach you?

Blessings, Love, and Laughter to you.

April 4th, 2019 09:10

What I don’t know
Poetic Dan said:

They say home is where you\'re missed and this you\'ll truly be it!
But what an outstanding write to take a break
I wish I had more words to say everything will be okay

But I\'d offer a tea with biscuits and shoulder
If you was ever my way!

Thank you
For everything you gave
Perfectly as your are!

April 4th, 2019 08:49

What I don’t know
Neville said:

We all have bad days.. dont be away too long...

April 4th, 2019 07:45

What I don’t know
tepo said:

It is a lovely poem
But hey
Who am I to judge

April 4th, 2019 04:33

Truth
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Sylvia, so many truths within your words.

April 4th, 2019 00:02

Truth
LittleGift said:

Truth can be tricky to believe. Especially if we have had too many lies. I liked this short Sylv. Truth can cause problems even if it is the truth. It can weigh heavy on people’s minds

April 3rd, 2019 18:07

Truth
Poetic Dan said:

I believe in mine!
The trouble has been learning to trust the others.
Thanks for this

Much peace and respect

April 3rd, 2019 09:02

Truth
Johnny Lawless said:

Yes, definitely some truth to this one. “Dust to dust” and what not. A fine shortie.

April 3rd, 2019 07:11

Truth
Neville said:

now aint that the truth.. a fine haiku, for sure

April 3rd, 2019 04:01

Hopeful
Fay Slimm said:

The chorus appeals as it has musical undertones - and my favourtie verse is - -- River rushes revealing reflections
But I don’t know my face
Aching fingers destroy the vision
Darkness, my friend and last embrace. It could be a fine soulful number with a bit more tweaking Sylvia - at least in my simple opinion that is.


April 2nd, 2019 08:58

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LittleGift said:

Never say sorry when you are posting such a wonderful read Sylv. I was immersed so easily. Such a beautiful piece. You painted the scene perfectly and delivered a thought provoking story, with such delicate detail. A sheer delight. I have saved to read again

March 31st, 2019 10:11

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Neville said:

this is an incredibly well written extract from an incredibly well crafted and much larger piece of work methinks.... It has a magical poetic quality rarely encountered and If I had written it, I would be very pleased with myself.. very pleased indeed..... Neville

March 31st, 2019 06:20

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Fay Slimm said:

This piece of admirable prose aptly describes the glories of regeneration with fantastic metaphor and has to be one of your best postings Sylvia. Saved to my favourites.

March 31st, 2019 04:16

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Suresh said:

Circumstances makes one a prisoner of unimaginable situations, and unless one experiences likewise, it is difficult to comprehend the sadistic hold you so composed.
Take flight, your true self, and find a way to be earnestly free.



March 29th, 2019 15:50

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Neville said:

without a shred of a doubt.. enigmatic and intriguing ..

March 29th, 2019 05:09

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Poetic Dan said:

Lean on my pride, it\'s okay I\'m a lion! Loved that line!
I hope you see one day we can unclip them!
Great stuff

March 29th, 2019 03:37

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Goldfinch60 said:

Super write Sylvia, so much within those few words, that is the beauty of 5-7-5s.

March 29th, 2019 02:23

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Michael Edwards said:

Nice one Sylvia - great use of language - enigmatic and intriguing.

March 29th, 2019 02:13

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Goldfinch60 said:

What a powerful write, these types of poems are important to us and need writing and need to be seen by others to understand the hurt and despair that can be within us.
Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts Sylvia.

March 29th, 2019 01:42

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Sunshinefalling said:

I enjoyed it. Leave me to my peace. Thanks for sharing.

March 28th, 2019 23:47

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LittleGift said:

This is such a strong piece Sylv, I could feel her pain, her suffering yet her discovery when she found herself again and realised he was no good for her. Hope she stays free to be herself. No one should be caged in

A great piece

March 28th, 2019 12:27

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Fay Slimm said:

Agree wholeheartedly with Neville\'s comment on the total injustice to those who bear heavy loads of abuse. Hoping this is not from experience dear Sylvia but if so hats off to you for describing such undeserved guilt and the feelings of freedom when left alone. Thank you dear lady for sharing this write on a powerful subject.

March 28th, 2019 05:07

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Neville said:

No one, whoever they might be has the right to make another feel this way... it happens tho of course, and well done to you for both acknowledging the fact and drawing our attention to it so adeptly .... Nevile

March 28th, 2019 04:51

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Poetic Dan said:

Wow... I felt such pain and power at the same time. Thank you for this heartfelt write, I slowly wipe the tears from my eyes.

March 28th, 2019 03:51

Promise
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write, we all fail sometimes but having the strength to find the will to carry on is vital or a fulfilling way ahead

March 28th, 2019 01:40

Promise
Fay Slimm said:

An ache for love could not have been written better dear Sylvia.

March 27th, 2019 12:37

Promise
Michael Edwards said:

Dusk is right - so uplifting and brings hope and promise in contrast to much posted work. Fine as ever Fay.

March 27th, 2019 09:44

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