Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher



Will I ever?
Neville said:

you have indeed crafted a poem of quite exceptional beauty and laid it out here for all to examine and enjoy... the several times repeated \'for you\' question works really well throughout... and the ending is quite special too......... Neville

June 24th, 2019 11:02

Will I ever?
Michael Edwards said:

It is a gem indeed - great write Sylvia.

June 24th, 2019 10:45

Will I ever?
dusk arising said:

This laying bare ones frailty and superbly written. You excel here. I feel the \'need\' carefully woven into your questions, the joy ready to escape at the right answers.
Into my favourites.

June 24th, 2019 10:03

Will I ever?
orchidee said:

Fido, me watchdog, can be a bit too keen. He might bark at the minimum hint of a poem needing to be 18+, if it\'s not marked up so. lol. Down, Fido, not now - no need to bark at this poem. He said you could remove the 18+ note. lol

June 24th, 2019 09:39

Will I ever?
Fay Slimm said:

This has to be one of your best Sylvia - a poetic gem indeed and one for my favourites.

June 24th, 2019 06:31

Instead of Being there was The Word
Neville said:

my pleasure

June 24th, 2019 04:32

Instead of Being there was The Word
Neville said:

the minor imperfection you draw attention to in the last stanza , pales to insignificance when set against the near flawless beauty of verses one and two..... Neville

June 24th, 2019 04:23

Instead of Being there was The Word
Suresh said:

Do not be \'reft, for your words have expressed themselves eloquently.

June 20th, 2019 12:45

Falling
Suresh said:

....continuing on last comment:
what difference does it make, he fell right into the bushes.....and now he\'ll be in heaven forever.

June 19th, 2019 16:25

Falling
orchidee said:

That\'s the question - Did he fall or was he pushed?! oohh.

June 19th, 2019 11:13

Falling
Neville said:

I thoroughly enjoyed this latest offering of yours which sounds good in my head...

June 19th, 2019 03:42

Worthy
Suresh said:

Your words are deeply thought, and something for all to self experience. Many a worthy quotations you have penned.

June 18th, 2019 11:21

Worthy
dusk arising said:

The spirit which brought the essence of these thoughts to you is your recognition of beauty. One cannot recognise beauty until beauty is within ones self. That being said, your spiritual beauty is within all which you describe here and shared with many of us poets today.

June 17th, 2019 10:09

Worthy
Neville said:

He takes her hand and listens for that sigh.................

Whether deeply within, or somewhere outside of her own comfort zone, the woman can write for sure.... .... Neville



June 17th, 2019 04:23

Worthy
Michael Edwards said:

Contrary to worthy
thinking, being popular isn\'t
something you recognise it\'s
something you earn.

That aside this is an inspired write - much enjoyed.

June 17th, 2019 03:30

A little less
Suresh said:

Wouldn\'t it be great to find the one in your poem to reach estacy every day.

Your words speak well for you.

June 15th, 2019 15:11

A little less
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

That warmth is a beautiful thing I hope you find it S
Great write with such a great flow
Thanks

June 14th, 2019 12:54

Teaching
Suresh said:

It\'s not the devastation that the waves the ocean caused that were too much, but the waves of dastardly humans

Pain so poetically expressed

June 12th, 2019 11:54

Teaching
dusk arising said:

Viking raiders all around are plundering again, arriving in their posh longboats to impress.
Leaving behind burning villages which the villagers rebuilt only to be plundered again. But wisdom is in the shadows. Beware vikings when next ye call.

June 11th, 2019 03:29

Fairytale
Michael Edwards said:

I can read much into this but the overall message, for me at least, is I\'ll make my decisions when and if I am ready - don\'t try to control me. Am I near the mark?

June 5th, 2019 10:19

Missing
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant. I could really feel a part of myself in this, I normally start switching off as it takes me awhile to read.

This was well worth it! I hope wherever this came from within you is just like this.

Somethings are just not ment to fit and let others see its beauty.

Thanks for this feeling
Much peace and respect

June 5th, 2019 08:56

Fairytale
Lorna said:

If I read you right you mean manipulated emotions....... but aren\'t they all!

June 5th, 2019 07:25

Fairytale
Neville said:

I think your recent sabbatical did you & your muse the world of good. bravo.

Neville


June 5th, 2019 04:47

Ode to the Artist
Neville said:

Take it from me, there is nothing wrong with the first verse..
and in my very humble opinion, you have every right to be both proud and pleased with this lovely poem... Furthermore, it is good to see you are still writing.. and I hope you can find the time and inclination to resume posting more often... Neville

June 4th, 2019 17:18

Ode to the Artist
SerenWise said:

Beautiful write, really conjures up some stirring images

June 4th, 2019 16:43

Ode to the Artist
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ll get my brushes out -great read Sylvia.

June 4th, 2019 13:18

Ode to the Artist
Fay Slimm said:

A beautiful and very poetic usage of imagery which leaves this reader loudly applausing your skill Sylvia. An engaging read from the very first lines

June 4th, 2019 06:23

Ode to the Artist
Lorna said:

Oh no!!! Your first verse pulled me right in Sylvia! I just loved this and I think it\'s the first time I\'ve read a poem using the paintwork itself to frame the feelings.......

June 4th, 2019 05:57

Pained
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Do you ever feel like you\'re screaming and no-one can hear you?
Great emotion I feel your pain S

May 22nd, 2019 11:02

Pained
Poetic Dan said:

A wonderful flow, we all look for that awakening.

May 22nd, 2019 08:40

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