Comments received on poems by sylviasearcher
Escape
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks T. I am having some problem with the spacing though!
It was written for one person and will always be for that person 😕
April 12th, 2018 08:21
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks T. I am having some problem with the spacing though!
It was written for one person and will always be for that person 😕
April 12th, 2018 08:21
Rejoin the Dance
Daveyboyz said:
The key is to be in the moment, nice work Sylvia.
April 11th, 2018 15:49
Daveyboyz said:
The key is to be in the moment, nice work Sylvia.
April 11th, 2018 15:49
Rejoin the Dance
Goldfinch60 said:
Dancing conveys music into elegant actions. Good write Sylvia.
April 11th, 2018 08:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Dancing conveys music into elegant actions. Good write Sylvia.
April 11th, 2018 08:17
Rejoin the Dance
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks Nicholas.
That is interesting. Maybe too much counting...🙃
The dance is actually a metaphor...
April 11th, 2018 02:38
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks Nicholas.
That is interesting. Maybe too much counting...🙃
The dance is actually a metaphor...
April 11th, 2018 02:38
Rejoin the Dance
Nicholas Browning said:
Well, as for the context I assume it has something to do with dancing. If you\'re using it in a context specific script then I can\'t really say for certain, but to me it gives off the impression of a gentleman or a woman attempting to get someone to dance with them, or just relax. I haven\'t counted that much since high school I might add. Haha.
April 11th, 2018 02:33
Nicholas Browning said:
Well, as for the context I assume it has something to do with dancing. If you\'re using it in a context specific script then I can\'t really say for certain, but to me it gives off the impression of a gentleman or a woman attempting to get someone to dance with them, or just relax. I haven\'t counted that much since high school I might add. Haha.
April 11th, 2018 02:33
I died again today
The_One_That_Got_Away said:
I can feel the emotions as they were mine. Like its my translation and not yours. Well phrased.
April 10th, 2018 16:40
The_One_That_Got_Away said:
I can feel the emotions as they were mine. Like its my translation and not yours. Well phrased.
April 10th, 2018 16:40
An Apology
Goldfinch60 said:
Asking for forgiveness is the first step to going into a better life. You have seen the light, go towards it.
April 10th, 2018 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Asking for forgiveness is the first step to going into a better life. You have seen the light, go towards it.
April 10th, 2018 00:19
An Apology
Just-A-Dude said:
I understand what you mean by the sentiments in my poem after reading yours. Great stuff and very honest. We all have the dark side, flawed.
April 9th, 2018 11:00
Just-A-Dude said:
I understand what you mean by the sentiments in my poem after reading yours. Great stuff and very honest. We all have the dark side, flawed.
April 9th, 2018 11:00
An Apology
sylviasearcher said:
I guess I never wanted to realise I was pathetic and flawed.... Maybe I can cope with flawed...
April 9th, 2018 10:06
sylviasearcher said:
I guess I never wanted to realise I was pathetic and flawed.... Maybe I can cope with flawed...
April 9th, 2018 10:06
An Apology
onepauly said:
I think daveyboyz has it
with, once we relies what pathetic and flawed creatures we are.
April 9th, 2018 09:53
onepauly said:
I think daveyboyz has it
with, once we relies what pathetic and flawed creatures we are.
April 9th, 2018 09:53
An Apology
Daveyboyz said:
What a great poem, and once we realise what pathetic and flawed creatures we are we can start to address this. Every evil screams \"I am good\"
April 9th, 2018 05:45
Daveyboyz said:
What a great poem, and once we realise what pathetic and flawed creatures we are we can start to address this. Every evil screams \"I am good\"
April 9th, 2018 05:45
An Apology
Lorna said:
I think we\'ve all felt this sometimes........... and wish we could fix something we did. It\'s a great apology..........
April 9th, 2018 04:39
Lorna said:
I think we\'ve all felt this sometimes........... and wish we could fix something we did. It\'s a great apology..........
April 9th, 2018 04:39
Talking Therapy
FineB said:
Thank you sylviasearcher for this wonderful poem.
Your poem is evocative, vivid with an interesting perspective on mental health.
Having worked in mental health. talking therapies was highly regarded as a very effective method of treatment.
Keep on writing
FineB
April 7th, 2018 08:41
FineB said:
Thank you sylviasearcher for this wonderful poem.
Your poem is evocative, vivid with an interesting perspective on mental health.
Having worked in mental health. talking therapies was highly regarded as a very effective method of treatment.
Keep on writing
FineB
April 7th, 2018 08:41
Talking Therapy
Daveyboyz said:
Talking is thinking, and as humans we talk order into the world. I guess that is a kind of magic.
April 6th, 2018 03:36
Daveyboyz said:
Talking is thinking, and as humans we talk order into the world. I guess that is a kind of magic.
April 6th, 2018 03:36
The light in my dreams
G.K said:
wow,as i read along the lines,i can envision the paint spring to life on my canvas ..like the darkness being engulf by light
April 5th, 2018 04:18
G.K said:
wow,as i read along the lines,i can envision the paint spring to life on my canvas ..like the darkness being engulf by light
April 5th, 2018 04:18
Tunnel Vision
Fay Slimm. said:
A clever form to explain the feel of narrowing tunnel when vision seems lost and dark folds us in. An engaging read Sylvia and thanks for sharing.
April 4th, 2018 16:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A clever form to explain the feel of narrowing tunnel when vision seems lost and dark folds us in. An engaging read Sylvia and thanks for sharing.
April 4th, 2018 16:16
Tunnel Vision
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really like this and i love the layout to this
April 4th, 2018 02:51
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i really like this and i love the layout to this
April 4th, 2018 02:51
Blackbird\'s Song
sylviasearcher said:
Keats would say beauty is truth, truth beauty, that is all he know in earth and all he need to know...
It is a sad poem, I\'m glad it\'s sadness does not make it less beautiful
April 4th, 2018 01:53
sylviasearcher said:
Keats would say beauty is truth, truth beauty, that is all he know in earth and all he need to know...
It is a sad poem, I\'m glad it\'s sadness does not make it less beautiful
April 4th, 2018 01:53
Blackbird\'s Song
sylviasearcher said:
Keats would say beauty is truth, truth beauty, that is all he know in earth and all he need to know...
It is a sad poem, I\'m glad it\'s sadness does not make it less beautiful
April 4th, 2018 01:39
sylviasearcher said:
Keats would say beauty is truth, truth beauty, that is all he know in earth and all he need to know...
It is a sad poem, I\'m glad it\'s sadness does not make it less beautiful
April 4th, 2018 01:39
Blackbird\'s Song
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
very beautiful but sad ending
April 3rd, 2018 14:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
very beautiful but sad ending
April 3rd, 2018 14:30
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