Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
the wall around your heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shattered dreams WERE there, but they will dull and finding the beauty of their heart will come.
September 23rd, 2019 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Those shattered dreams WERE there, but they will dull and finding the beauty of their heart will come.
September 23rd, 2019 00:07
navigating past the horizon
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are so fulfilling Jon.
When you get to the horizon never forget \"Here be Dragons!\"
September 16th, 2019 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are so fulfilling Jon.
When you get to the horizon never forget \"Here be Dragons!\"
September 16th, 2019 01:19
my
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Very true even if our own sun blows up it will be a full six minutes before we see it happen
Great write Jon
September 14th, 2019 03:02
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Very true even if our own sun blows up it will be a full six minutes before we see it happen
Great write Jon
September 14th, 2019 03:02
my
Goldfinch60 said:
May
those
wishes
still
come
true
in
our
wonderful
lives.
September 14th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
May
those
wishes
still
come
true
in
our
wonderful
lives.
September 14th, 2019 00:25
Un Chien Andalou
Neville said:
surreal and much enjoyed......
........ like the great man himself
that dog was a lobster with a telephone in its hand.......Kinda maybe...
:)
September 12th, 2019 01:23
Neville said:
surreal and much enjoyed......
........ like the great man himself
that dog was a lobster with a telephone in its hand.......Kinda maybe...
:)
September 12th, 2019 01:23
Un Chien Andalou
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much out there that people look at but never see.
September 12th, 2019 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much out there that people look at but never see.
September 12th, 2019 01:14
Un Chien Andalou
SerenWise said:
Interesting poem about an interesting film!
September 11th, 2019 21:41
SerenWise said:
Interesting poem about an interesting film!
September 11th, 2019 21:41
embers falling on frost
Goldfinch60 said:
But that embrace will be remembered for eternity.
September 9th, 2019 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
But that embrace will be remembered for eternity.
September 9th, 2019 01:05
crickets
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories always bring back the good times.
September 2nd, 2019 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories always bring back the good times.
September 2nd, 2019 01:37
sometimes a mask
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in our different ways in life\'s journey, may your mask be full of happiness.
August 31st, 2019 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in our different ways in life\'s journey, may your mask be full of happiness.
August 31st, 2019 00:26
bumper tap at the supermarket
Goldfinch60 said:
Kindness into words - wonderful.
August 30th, 2019 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Kindness into words - wonderful.
August 30th, 2019 01:11
summer traversed so hard this year
Goldfinch60 said:
Time flows and seems to get faster as we get older.
August 29th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Time flows and seems to get faster as we get older.
August 29th, 2019 00:57
the fidelity of lying
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Lying... the new truth?
Great dip in to the questioning Jon I liked this
August 14th, 2019 02:36
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Lying... the new truth?
Great dip in to the questioning Jon I liked this
August 14th, 2019 02:36
the fidelity of lying
Goldfinch60 said:
Thought provoking write Jon.
Can there be fidelity in lying. Is it lying to others or lying to ourselves that creates the chaos within ourselves.
August 14th, 2019 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Thought provoking write Jon.
Can there be fidelity in lying. Is it lying to others or lying to ourselves that creates the chaos within ourselves.
August 14th, 2019 00:51
cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1
Goldfinch60 said:
I do enjoy a good bacon sandwich.
August 11th, 2019 15:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I do enjoy a good bacon sandwich.
August 11th, 2019 15:23
cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1
dusk arising said:
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 15:03
dusk arising said:
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 15:03
cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1
dusk arising said:
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 14:34
dusk arising said:
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 14:34
jimmy tells me the flying saucers are coming
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful write Jon. So many are homeless in a world where it needn\'t happen.
So good of you to help Jimmy, I hope I will be in the cage next to you.
August 10th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful write Jon. So many are homeless in a world where it needn\'t happen.
So good of you to help Jimmy, I hope I will be in the cage next to you.
August 10th, 2019 00:35
jimmy tells me the flying saucers are coming
Christina8 said:
That is actually the saddest thing I have read all day and i have read a lot of poetry!! Hoping your friend finds a warm cozy bed and peace of mind.
August 9th, 2019 23:30
Christina8 said:
That is actually the saddest thing I have read all day and i have read a lot of poetry!! Hoping your friend finds a warm cozy bed and peace of mind.
August 9th, 2019 23:30
and constellations of silver
Goldfinch60 said:
May those constellations fill our lives with light.
August 9th, 2019 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
May those constellations fill our lives with light.
August 9th, 2019 00:15
cleaning out my garage
Goldfinch60 said:
It is most surprising when you go clean out garages and lofts and see the memories that you may have forgotten.
August 5th, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
It is most surprising when you go clean out garages and lofts and see the memories that you may have forgotten.
August 5th, 2019 00:54
one day the granularity of life whispers to you
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so insignificant in our Universe that we must let ourselves go and and let the water carry us to the wonder that is out there.
July 28th, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so insignificant in our Universe that we must let ourselves go and and let the water carry us to the wonder that is out there.
July 28th, 2019 01:10
the summer moon is a cruel marionettist
Goldfinch60 said:
That bait pulls so many of us in.
July 27th, 2019 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That bait pulls so many of us in.
July 27th, 2019 00:33
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