Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
poetic reflections #4
Goldfinch60 said:
That future must be approached from the experience of the past and all miscalculated experience be consigned to history and the experiences of the good things be used in the future to make a better life FOR ALL!
July 3rd, 2019 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That future must be approached from the experience of the past and all miscalculated experience be consigned to history and the experiences of the good things be used in the future to make a better life FOR ALL!
July 3rd, 2019 00:43
questions i would like to ask someone much smarter than i am #2
Goldfinch60 said:
What shall we do indeed?
June 22nd, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
What shall we do indeed?
June 22nd, 2019 00:16
poetic story part 3
Goldfinch60 said:
Digression and context can always be intermixed.
June 17th, 2019 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Digression and context can always be intermixed.
June 17th, 2019 00:08
beauty
FineB said:
Hi Jon,
A vivid and good reflection on beauty.
Great.
Sometimes people with beauty are annoyed when at times you don\'t give them the attention they always crave.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:47
FineB said:
Hi Jon,
A vivid and good reflection on beauty.
Great.
Sometimes people with beauty are annoyed when at times you don\'t give them the attention they always crave.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:47
the cabin boy
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, those things we sometimes do we can regret for the rest of our lives.
June 14th, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, those things we sometimes do we can regret for the rest of our lives.
June 14th, 2019 00:36
kālacakra ferris wheel
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a never ending wheel ride. \"Lost dreams,\" happen in abundance and people either adapt or fall to the wayside. This was a fantastic expression of life\'s ride and the desires of the riders. A great little poem with an intense message and colorful presentation . A keeper. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 09:17
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a never ending wheel ride. \"Lost dreams,\" happen in abundance and people either adapt or fall to the wayside. This was a fantastic expression of life\'s ride and the desires of the riders. A great little poem with an intense message and colorful presentation . A keeper. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 09:17
philosophical fragments #10
Goldfinch60 said:
The roots of life are often ignored but so very important.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
The roots of life are often ignored but so very important.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
the immersivity of pain
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Without shoes on Jon?
WOW
Great write I feel it
May 31st, 2019 06:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Without shoes on Jon?
WOW
Great write I feel it
May 31st, 2019 06:37
the immersivity of pain
Laura🌻 said:
Jon,
A powerful, succinct, and vivid write expressing a painful experience!
~Laura~
May 30th, 2019 19:40
Laura🌻 said:
Jon,
A powerful, succinct, and vivid write expressing a painful experience!
~Laura~
May 30th, 2019 19:40
the immersivity of pain
dusk arising said:
That is one huge loss. I feel the pain in your words.
May 30th, 2019 19:17
dusk arising said:
That is one huge loss. I feel the pain in your words.
May 30th, 2019 19:17
things that make me smile #2
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That\'s hose they live on Jon
Great emotion in this piece
May 26th, 2019 03:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That\'s hose they live on Jon
Great emotion in this piece
May 26th, 2019 03:08
things that make me smile #2
SoulMeetsBody said:
Incredibly simple, incredibly effective, whilst being sweet and nostalgic. Great job!
May 25th, 2019 18:31
SoulMeetsBody said:
Incredibly simple, incredibly effective, whilst being sweet and nostalgic. Great job!
May 25th, 2019 18:31
a soul bridge
Goldfinch60 said:
That parapet gives the strength to the bridge to ensure that it will never fail.
May 25th, 2019 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That parapet gives the strength to the bridge to ensure that it will never fail.
May 25th, 2019 00:10
is
alleycat said:
Pain has many ingredients. others like to ingest our pain for there own satisfaction. I totally understand this thought
May 22nd, 2019 22:15
alleycat said:
Pain has many ingredients. others like to ingest our pain for there own satisfaction. I totally understand this thought
May 22nd, 2019 22:15
across the valley
Goldfinch60 said:
That stillness in life is so very important.
May 17th, 2019 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That stillness in life is so very important.
May 17th, 2019 00:43
the whole process was
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sounds messy and painful Jon
I feel for you
Great write
May 11th, 2019 16:45
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sounds messy and painful Jon
I feel for you
Great write
May 11th, 2019 16:45
Coos Bay Drive in Late Summer
Goldfinch60 said:
The artwork of nature can be so inspiring.
May 10th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
The artwork of nature can be so inspiring.
May 10th, 2019 00:56
walking barefoot in the grass
Jhe said:
love this poem...
and to think,
some people say let go of the past!
☆ ★ ☆
May 9th, 2019 12:09
Jhe said:
love this poem...
and to think,
some people say let go of the past!
☆ ★ ☆
May 9th, 2019 12:09
Your touch is like the seabreeze in summer
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of passion.
May 8th, 2019 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of passion.
May 8th, 2019 02:55
In this unquelled storm you beckon to me
Goldfinch60 said:
Being lost that love will find you with your fine words.
May 6th, 2019 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Being lost that love will find you with your fine words.
May 6th, 2019 00:50
In this unquelled storm you beckon to me
Goddess of the Mist said:
Intriguing and heartfelt. I really liked this!
May 5th, 2019 21:00
Goddess of the Mist said:
Intriguing and heartfelt. I really liked this!
May 5th, 2019 21:00
perhaps wanting is a kind of negation
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is the coming together of two people into one soul.
May 4th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is the coming together of two people into one soul.
May 4th, 2019 00:27
konstantin tréplev
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Jonathan Livingston Seagull...What a book
Great write Jon
April 30th, 2019 05:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Jonathan Livingston Seagull...What a book
Great write Jon
April 30th, 2019 05:08
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