Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
jimmy tells me the flying saucers are coming
Christina8 said:
That is actually the saddest thing I have read all day and i have read a lot of poetry!! Hoping your friend finds a warm cozy bed and peace of mind.
August 9th, 2019 23:30
Christina8 said:
That is actually the saddest thing I have read all day and i have read a lot of poetry!! Hoping your friend finds a warm cozy bed and peace of mind.
August 9th, 2019 23:30
and constellations of silver
Goldfinch60 said:
May those constellations fill our lives with light.
August 9th, 2019 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
May those constellations fill our lives with light.
August 9th, 2019 00:15
cleaning out my garage
Goldfinch60 said:
It is most surprising when you go clean out garages and lofts and see the memories that you may have forgotten.
August 5th, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
It is most surprising when you go clean out garages and lofts and see the memories that you may have forgotten.
August 5th, 2019 00:54
one day the granularity of life whispers to you
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so insignificant in our Universe that we must let ourselves go and and let the water carry us to the wonder that is out there.
July 28th, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
We are so insignificant in our Universe that we must let ourselves go and and let the water carry us to the wonder that is out there.
July 28th, 2019 01:10
the summer moon is a cruel marionettist
Goldfinch60 said:
That bait pulls so many of us in.
July 27th, 2019 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That bait pulls so many of us in.
July 27th, 2019 00:33
the dog days of summer
Goldfinch60 said:
Those autumn stars show that we are going to make it to winter.
July 24th, 2019 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those autumn stars show that we are going to make it to winter.
July 24th, 2019 01:14
the thorn queen of bitter kisses
Goldfinch60 said:
That poison honey can affect many peoples hearts - politicians?
July 23rd, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
That poison honey can affect many peoples hearts - politicians?
July 23rd, 2019 01:06
long poem part 78
Goldfinch60 said:
That day will never happen, your dreams will always believe in you.
July 16th, 2019 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
That day will never happen, your dreams will always believe in you.
July 16th, 2019 01:11
conversation with a weed
Neville said:
I\'m not proud, I talk to anything.. and often.... I also enjoyed this poem of yours very much sir...... N
July 13th, 2019 05:12
Neville said:
I\'m not proud, I talk to anything.. and often.... I also enjoyed this poem of yours very much sir...... N
July 13th, 2019 05:12
conversation with a weed
Goldfinch60 said:
A weed is any plant in the wrong place.
July 13th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
A weed is any plant in the wrong place.
July 13th, 2019 00:35
100 books you must not read before you die #28
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a list of books that i \'should\' read, it gets longer all the time.
July 12th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a list of books that i \'should\' read, it gets longer all the time.
July 12th, 2019 01:00
i have been parking my car as of late
Goldfinch60 said:
That manna will fill you with the love of life.
July 9th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That manna will fill you with the love of life.
July 9th, 2019 00:57
the masks
Goldfinch60 said:
Masks are worn by us all to cope with differing circumstances.
July 8th, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Masks are worn by us all to cope with differing circumstances.
July 8th, 2019 00:22
long poem part 34
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, some of those seats afforded are in very strange places.
July 7th, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, some of those seats afforded are in very strange places.
July 7th, 2019 00:34
Utpala-Naraka
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure the warmth of your soul would give succour to any flower.
July 6th, 2019 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure the warmth of your soul would give succour to any flower.
July 6th, 2019 00:07
poetic reflections #4
Goldfinch60 said:
That future must be approached from the experience of the past and all miscalculated experience be consigned to history and the experiences of the good things be used in the future to make a better life FOR ALL!
July 3rd, 2019 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That future must be approached from the experience of the past and all miscalculated experience be consigned to history and the experiences of the good things be used in the future to make a better life FOR ALL!
July 3rd, 2019 00:43
questions i would like to ask someone much smarter than i am #2
Goldfinch60 said:
What shall we do indeed?
June 22nd, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
What shall we do indeed?
June 22nd, 2019 00:16
poetic story part 3
Goldfinch60 said:
Digression and context can always be intermixed.
June 17th, 2019 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Digression and context can always be intermixed.
June 17th, 2019 00:08
beauty
FineB said:
Hi Jon,
A vivid and good reflection on beauty.
Great.
Sometimes people with beauty are annoyed when at times you don\'t give them the attention they always crave.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:47
FineB said:
Hi Jon,
A vivid and good reflection on beauty.
Great.
Sometimes people with beauty are annoyed when at times you don\'t give them the attention they always crave.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:47
the cabin boy
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, those things we sometimes do we can regret for the rest of our lives.
June 14th, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, those things we sometimes do we can regret for the rest of our lives.
June 14th, 2019 00:36
kālacakra ferris wheel
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a never ending wheel ride. \"Lost dreams,\" happen in abundance and people either adapt or fall to the wayside. This was a fantastic expression of life\'s ride and the desires of the riders. A great little poem with an intense message and colorful presentation . A keeper. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 09:17
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a never ending wheel ride. \"Lost dreams,\" happen in abundance and people either adapt or fall to the wayside. This was a fantastic expression of life\'s ride and the desires of the riders. A great little poem with an intense message and colorful presentation . A keeper. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 09:17
philosophical fragments #10
Goldfinch60 said:
The roots of life are often ignored but so very important.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
The roots of life are often ignored but so very important.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
the immersivity of pain
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Without shoes on Jon?
WOW
Great write I feel it
May 31st, 2019 06:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Without shoes on Jon?
WOW
Great write I feel it
May 31st, 2019 06:37
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