Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
kālacakra ferris wheel
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a never ending wheel ride. \"Lost dreams,\" happen in abundance and people either adapt or fall to the wayside. This was a fantastic expression of life\'s ride and the desires of the riders. A great little poem with an intense message and colorful presentation . A keeper. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 09:17
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a never ending wheel ride. \"Lost dreams,\" happen in abundance and people either adapt or fall to the wayside. This was a fantastic expression of life\'s ride and the desires of the riders. A great little poem with an intense message and colorful presentation . A keeper. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 09:17
philosophical fragments #10
Goldfinch60 said:
The roots of life are often ignored but so very important.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
The roots of life are often ignored but so very important.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
the immersivity of pain
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Without shoes on Jon?
WOW
Great write I feel it
May 31st, 2019 06:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Without shoes on Jon?
WOW
Great write I feel it
May 31st, 2019 06:37
the immersivity of pain
Laura🌻 said:
Jon,
A powerful, succinct, and vivid write expressing a painful experience!
~Laura~
May 30th, 2019 19:40
Laura🌻 said:
Jon,
A powerful, succinct, and vivid write expressing a painful experience!
~Laura~
May 30th, 2019 19:40
the immersivity of pain
dusk arising said:
That is one huge loss. I feel the pain in your words.
May 30th, 2019 19:17
dusk arising said:
That is one huge loss. I feel the pain in your words.
May 30th, 2019 19:17
things that make me smile #2
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That\'s hose they live on Jon
Great emotion in this piece
May 26th, 2019 03:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That\'s hose they live on Jon
Great emotion in this piece
May 26th, 2019 03:08
things that make me smile #2
SoulMeetsBody said:
Incredibly simple, incredibly effective, whilst being sweet and nostalgic. Great job!
May 25th, 2019 18:31
SoulMeetsBody said:
Incredibly simple, incredibly effective, whilst being sweet and nostalgic. Great job!
May 25th, 2019 18:31
a soul bridge
Goldfinch60 said:
That parapet gives the strength to the bridge to ensure that it will never fail.
May 25th, 2019 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That parapet gives the strength to the bridge to ensure that it will never fail.
May 25th, 2019 00:10
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alleycat said:
Pain has many ingredients. others like to ingest our pain for there own satisfaction. I totally understand this thought
May 22nd, 2019 22:15
alleycat said:
Pain has many ingredients. others like to ingest our pain for there own satisfaction. I totally understand this thought
May 22nd, 2019 22:15
across the valley
Goldfinch60 said:
That stillness in life is so very important.
May 17th, 2019 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That stillness in life is so very important.
May 17th, 2019 00:43
the whole process was
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sounds messy and painful Jon
I feel for you
Great write
May 11th, 2019 16:45
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Sounds messy and painful Jon
I feel for you
Great write
May 11th, 2019 16:45
Coos Bay Drive in Late Summer
Goldfinch60 said:
The artwork of nature can be so inspiring.
May 10th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
The artwork of nature can be so inspiring.
May 10th, 2019 00:56
walking barefoot in the grass
Jhe said:
love this poem...
and to think,
some people say let go of the past!
☆ ★ ☆
May 9th, 2019 12:09
Jhe said:
love this poem...
and to think,
some people say let go of the past!
☆ ★ ☆
May 9th, 2019 12:09
Your touch is like the seabreeze in summer
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of passion.
May 8th, 2019 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words of passion.
May 8th, 2019 02:55
In this unquelled storm you beckon to me
Goldfinch60 said:
Being lost that love will find you with your fine words.
May 6th, 2019 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Being lost that love will find you with your fine words.
May 6th, 2019 00:50
In this unquelled storm you beckon to me
Goddess of the Mist said:
Intriguing and heartfelt. I really liked this!
May 5th, 2019 21:00
Goddess of the Mist said:
Intriguing and heartfelt. I really liked this!
May 5th, 2019 21:00
perhaps wanting is a kind of negation
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is the coming together of two people into one soul.
May 4th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is the coming together of two people into one soul.
May 4th, 2019 00:27
konstantin tréplev
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Jonathan Livingston Seagull...What a book
Great write Jon
April 30th, 2019 05:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Jonathan Livingston Seagull...What a book
Great write Jon
April 30th, 2019 05:08
konstantin tréplev
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Jon, that symbolism can be so meaningless at times.
April 30th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Jon, that symbolism can be so meaningless at times.
April 30th, 2019 00:27
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Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, thank you for my first smile of the day hear in the UK.
April 29th, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, thank you for my first smile of the day hear in the UK.
April 29th, 2019 01:06
to tell the truth
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking is so important, many people look but do not see.
April 24th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking is so important, many people look but do not see.
April 24th, 2019 00:27
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