Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
the dog days of summer
Goldfinch60 said:
Those autumn stars show that we are going to make it to winter.
July 24th, 2019 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those autumn stars show that we are going to make it to winter.
July 24th, 2019 01:14
the thorn queen of bitter kisses
Goldfinch60 said:
That poison honey can affect many peoples hearts - politicians?
July 23rd, 2019 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
That poison honey can affect many peoples hearts - politicians?
July 23rd, 2019 01:06
long poem part 78
Goldfinch60 said:
That day will never happen, your dreams will always believe in you.
July 16th, 2019 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
That day will never happen, your dreams will always believe in you.
July 16th, 2019 01:11
conversation with a weed
Neville said:
I\'m not proud, I talk to anything.. and often.... I also enjoyed this poem of yours very much sir...... N
July 13th, 2019 05:12
Neville said:
I\'m not proud, I talk to anything.. and often.... I also enjoyed this poem of yours very much sir...... N
July 13th, 2019 05:12
conversation with a weed
Goldfinch60 said:
A weed is any plant in the wrong place.
July 13th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
A weed is any plant in the wrong place.
July 13th, 2019 00:35
100 books you must not read before you die #28
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a list of books that i \'should\' read, it gets longer all the time.
July 12th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a list of books that i \'should\' read, it gets longer all the time.
July 12th, 2019 01:00
i have been parking my car as of late
Goldfinch60 said:
That manna will fill you with the love of life.
July 9th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That manna will fill you with the love of life.
July 9th, 2019 00:57
the masks
Goldfinch60 said:
Masks are worn by us all to cope with differing circumstances.
July 8th, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Masks are worn by us all to cope with differing circumstances.
July 8th, 2019 00:22
long poem part 34
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, some of those seats afforded are in very strange places.
July 7th, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, some of those seats afforded are in very strange places.
July 7th, 2019 00:34
Utpala-Naraka
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure the warmth of your soul would give succour to any flower.
July 6th, 2019 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure the warmth of your soul would give succour to any flower.
July 6th, 2019 00:07
poetic reflections #4
Goldfinch60 said:
That future must be approached from the experience of the past and all miscalculated experience be consigned to history and the experiences of the good things be used in the future to make a better life FOR ALL!
July 3rd, 2019 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That future must be approached from the experience of the past and all miscalculated experience be consigned to history and the experiences of the good things be used in the future to make a better life FOR ALL!
July 3rd, 2019 00:43
questions i would like to ask someone much smarter than i am #2
Goldfinch60 said:
What shall we do indeed?
June 22nd, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
What shall we do indeed?
June 22nd, 2019 00:16
poetic story part 3
Goldfinch60 said:
Digression and context can always be intermixed.
June 17th, 2019 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Digression and context can always be intermixed.
June 17th, 2019 00:08
beauty
FineB said:
Hi Jon,
A vivid and good reflection on beauty.
Great.
Sometimes people with beauty are annoyed when at times you don\'t give them the attention they always crave.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:47
FineB said:
Hi Jon,
A vivid and good reflection on beauty.
Great.
Sometimes people with beauty are annoyed when at times you don\'t give them the attention they always crave.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:47
the cabin boy
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, those things we sometimes do we can regret for the rest of our lives.
June 14th, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, those things we sometimes do we can regret for the rest of our lives.
June 14th, 2019 00:36
kālacakra ferris wheel
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a never ending wheel ride. \"Lost dreams,\" happen in abundance and people either adapt or fall to the wayside. This was a fantastic expression of life\'s ride and the desires of the riders. A great little poem with an intense message and colorful presentation . A keeper. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 09:17
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a never ending wheel ride. \"Lost dreams,\" happen in abundance and people either adapt or fall to the wayside. This was a fantastic expression of life\'s ride and the desires of the riders. A great little poem with an intense message and colorful presentation . A keeper. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2019 09:17
philosophical fragments #10
Goldfinch60 said:
The roots of life are often ignored but so very important.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
The roots of life are often ignored but so very important.
June 9th, 2019 00:25
the immersivity of pain
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Without shoes on Jon?
WOW
Great write I feel it
May 31st, 2019 06:37
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Without shoes on Jon?
WOW
Great write I feel it
May 31st, 2019 06:37
the immersivity of pain
Laura🌻 said:
Jon,
A powerful, succinct, and vivid write expressing a painful experience!
~Laura~
May 30th, 2019 19:40
Laura🌻 said:
Jon,
A powerful, succinct, and vivid write expressing a painful experience!
~Laura~
May 30th, 2019 19:40
the immersivity of pain
dusk arising said:
That is one huge loss. I feel the pain in your words.
May 30th, 2019 19:17
dusk arising said:
That is one huge loss. I feel the pain in your words.
May 30th, 2019 19:17
things that make me smile #2
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That\'s hose they live on Jon
Great emotion in this piece
May 26th, 2019 03:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
That\'s hose they live on Jon
Great emotion in this piece
May 26th, 2019 03:08
things that make me smile #2
SoulMeetsBody said:
Incredibly simple, incredibly effective, whilst being sweet and nostalgic. Great job!
May 25th, 2019 18:31
SoulMeetsBody said:
Incredibly simple, incredibly effective, whilst being sweet and nostalgic. Great job!
May 25th, 2019 18:31
a soul bridge
Goldfinch60 said:
That parapet gives the strength to the bridge to ensure that it will never fail.
May 25th, 2019 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That parapet gives the strength to the bridge to ensure that it will never fail.
May 25th, 2019 00:10
is
alleycat said:
Pain has many ingredients. others like to ingest our pain for there own satisfaction. I totally understand this thought
May 22nd, 2019 22:15
alleycat said:
Pain has many ingredients. others like to ingest our pain for there own satisfaction. I totally understand this thought
May 22nd, 2019 22:15
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