Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



summer traversed so hard this year
Goldfinch60 said:

Time flows and seems to get faster as we get older.

August 29th, 2019 00:57

summer winds
Goldfinch60 said:

Dr No Eh?

August 25th, 2019 01:04

the fidelity of lying
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Lying... the new truth?
Great dip in to the questioning Jon I liked this

August 14th, 2019 02:36

the fidelity of lying
Goldfinch60 said:

Thought provoking write Jon.

Can there be fidelity in lying. Is it lying to others or lying to ourselves that creates the chaos within ourselves.

August 14th, 2019 00:51

love is a labyrinth of wanting
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, I have found it.

August 13th, 2019 01:05

cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1
Goldfinch60 said:

I do enjoy a good bacon sandwich.

August 11th, 2019 15:23

cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1
dusk arising said:

Address please.


August 11th, 2019 15:03

cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1
dusk arising said:

Address please.


August 11th, 2019 14:34

greatness
Goldfinch60 said:

and
is
shown
in
your
words.

August 11th, 2019 00:49

jimmy tells me the flying saucers are coming
Goldfinch60 said:

A wonderful write Jon. So many are homeless in a world where it needn\'t happen.
So good of you to help Jimmy, I hope I will be in the cage next to you.

August 10th, 2019 00:35

jimmy tells me the flying saucers are coming
Christina8 said:

That is actually the saddest thing I have read all day and i have read a lot of poetry!! Hoping your friend finds a warm cozy bed and peace of mind.

August 9th, 2019 23:30

and constellations of silver
Goldfinch60 said:

May those constellations fill our lives with light.

August 9th, 2019 00:15

cleaning out my garage
Goldfinch60 said:

It is most surprising when you go clean out garages and lofts and see the memories that you may have forgotten.

August 5th, 2019 00:54

sorrow
Goldfinch60 said:

That sorrow can be deflected by the light.

July 29th, 2019 02:00

one day the granularity of life whispers to you
Goldfinch60 said:

We are so insignificant in our Universe that we must let ourselves go and and let the water carry us to the wonder that is out there.

July 28th, 2019 01:10

the summer moon is a cruel marionettist
Goldfinch60 said:

That bait pulls so many of us in.

July 27th, 2019 00:33

today
Goldfinch60 said:

Sounds like a great idea.

July 26th, 2019 01:03

money
Goldfinch60 said:

So true.

July 25th, 2019 01:05

the dog days of summer
Goldfinch60 said:

Those autumn stars show that we are going to make it to winter.

July 24th, 2019 01:14

the thorn queen of bitter kisses
Goldfinch60 said:

That poison honey can affect many peoples hearts - politicians?

July 23rd, 2019 01:06

long poem part 78
Goldfinch60 said:

That day will never happen, your dreams will always believe in you.

July 16th, 2019 01:11

pick me up
Goldfinch60 said:

Those little things are so meaningful.

July 14th, 2019 01:10

conversation with a weed
Neville said:

I\'m not proud, I talk to anything.. and often.... I also enjoyed this poem of yours very much sir...... N

July 13th, 2019 05:12

conversation with a weed
Goldfinch60 said:

A weed is any plant in the wrong place.

July 13th, 2019 00:35

100 books you must not read before you die #28
Goldfinch60 said:

I have a list of books that i \'should\' read, it gets longer all the time.

July 12th, 2019 01:00

long poem part 50
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful imaginative write.

July 10th, 2019 00:15

i have been parking my car as of late
Goldfinch60 said:

That manna will fill you with the love of life.

July 9th, 2019 00:57

the masks
Goldfinch60 said:

Masks are worn by us all to cope with differing circumstances.

July 8th, 2019 00:22

long poem part 34
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes, some of those seats afforded are in very strange places.

July 7th, 2019 00:34

Utpala-Naraka
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure the warmth of your soul would give succour to any flower.

July 6th, 2019 00:07

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