Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



the turkey is in the fridge
Goldfinch60 said:

A telling thought indeed.

November 25th, 2019 01:54

near the dark stream that flows through all hearts
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I have so far avoided the hook for many years, it got close once but I managed to throw out the hook.

November 24th, 2019 01:56

near the dark stream that flows through all hearts
FredPeyer said:

Great metaphors and visual design!

November 23rd, 2019 22:56

this year i have been a punching bag
FredPeyer said:

There are days when I would love to hear that bell!
Well said, Jon.

November 23rd, 2019 13:56

this year i have been a punching bag
Goldfinch60 said:

The round is now over Jon as I have rung the bell.

November 23rd, 2019 01:12

hiding behind a mirror
Goldfinch60 said:

I take it that you won the contest with this incredible write.

November 21st, 2019 02:17

happiness
Goldfinch60 said:

Happiness will be there waiting for you when you wake.

November 15th, 2019 01:52

never
Goldfinch60 said:

I have been working very hard at it for many years, it is nearly complete.

November 14th, 2019 01:22

the
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jon.

November 13th, 2019 03:23

think
Goldfinch60 said:

Her box is so full of questions that may never be answered.

November 8th, 2019 02:00

my legal ponderings #1
Goldfinch60 said:

So many questions of legality get asked and explained in words that can be misunderstood by many.

November 7th, 2019 01:26

[under amplified concern]
Aislinn Wilson said:

The last line really drives your whole poem home.

November 5th, 2019 22:23

realization
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true.

November 5th, 2019 01:55

which leads me to question
Goldfinch60 said:

Trust is so important in our lives and once that trust is lost it i almost impossible to get back.

November 2nd, 2019 02:07

fear
FredPeyer said:

a very apt description. kudos!

October 29th, 2019 18:05

fear
Goldfinch60 said:

that fear can be conquered.

October 29th, 2019 01:28

now with virtual grilling
Goldfinch60 said:

Such an emotive write. Nobody should be hungry in our world.

October 23rd, 2019 00:43

often
Goldfinch60 said:

Can be very true but that sorrow can be unlocked in time.

October 22nd, 2019 00:39

belief
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true.

October 12th, 2019 00:25

i
FredPeyer said:

Jon, here in Hawaii I don\'t have to worry about being an early bird. We live on Hawaiian time....always 30 minutes late!!!
I enjoyed your poem.

October 10th, 2019 20:48

a
Goldfinch60 said:

Oh yes.

October 10th, 2019 01:00

time
Goldfinch60 said:

....and passing quicker each day.

October 8th, 2019 23:39

tell
Goldfinch60 said:

OK I won\'t.

October 7th, 2019 00:12

love is the kindling
Goldfinch60 said:

So true.

October 4th, 2019 00:41

love is the kindling
FredPeyer said:

A great shortie, Jon. Love it!

October 3rd, 2019 18:10

dont
Goldfinch60 said:

So true.

October 2nd, 2019 01:35

you can see
Laura🌻 said:

Jon,

Listen to the voice!
As Andy said, “Yes
the light is there.”

~Laura~🌻

October 1st, 2019 17:14

you can see
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes the light is there.

October 1st, 2019 00:55

remember
Goldfinch60 said:

Like the butterfly flapping its wings.

September 26th, 2019 00:31

the wall around your heart
FredPeyer said:

Jon you say it well. Too often all we see in another person is that wall and not the beauty inside.

September 24th, 2019 12:18

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