Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
please tell me one more time
psychofemale said:
wow..
heart felt
so much in so few words
February 4th, 2019 21:57
psychofemale said:
wow..
heart felt
so much in so few words
February 4th, 2019 21:57
The Tin Man Laments
MendedFences27 said:
He became human. Shortly thereafter, a Tin Lizzy dumped him for an intelligent Scarecrow. He got a change of oil and a lube job and went back on the Y.B road. - Not to make light of your insightful poem, it just seemed to be to be the logical conclusion. Inspiring stuff. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:50
MendedFences27 said:
He became human. Shortly thereafter, a Tin Lizzy dumped him for an intelligent Scarecrow. He got a change of oil and a lube job and went back on the Y.B road. - Not to make light of your insightful poem, it just seemed to be to be the logical conclusion. Inspiring stuff. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:50
sitting on the edge
MendedFences27 said:
Psychologists just released a study saying that frequent visits to the beach keep us balanced, stable, grounded. Time alone is indeed important. A breath of fresh air clears the mind. - Another gem of a poem. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:42
MendedFences27 said:
Psychologists just released a study saying that frequent visits to the beach keep us balanced, stable, grounded. Time alone is indeed important. A breath of fresh air clears the mind. - Another gem of a poem. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:42
everything flies away
MendedFences27 said:
To me, Time is like a raging river carrying us along. It can\'t be stopped and we know not where it will take us.
Just hold your breath and go with the flow. On wind or water the destination remains the same. The big question is ..WHY? Intriguing work. Loved it. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:35
MendedFences27 said:
To me, Time is like a raging river carrying us along. It can\'t be stopped and we know not where it will take us.
Just hold your breath and go with the flow. On wind or water the destination remains the same. The big question is ..WHY? Intriguing work. Loved it. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:35
salisbury steak tv dinner
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s never as advertised. Even the lowliest T.V. dinner can breach the walls built between us. Mix it all together and it\'s stew. The world is a T.V, dinner with Billions of compartments and it is inevitable that they shall mix. So. now what do I do with my Mac & Cheese?
A very interesting poem that caught my imagination. Thank you for that. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:23
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s never as advertised. Even the lowliest T.V. dinner can breach the walls built between us. Mix it all together and it\'s stew. The world is a T.V, dinner with Billions of compartments and it is inevitable that they shall mix. So. now what do I do with my Mac & Cheese?
A very interesting poem that caught my imagination. Thank you for that. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:23
eyes that cast
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Jon. Indifference can be so painful.
January 29th, 2019 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Jon. Indifference can be so painful.
January 29th, 2019 02:04
eyes that cast
magic_in_the_pages said:
Honestly this really spoke to me. It’s gorgeous.
January 28th, 2019 20:23
magic_in_the_pages said:
Honestly this really spoke to me. It’s gorgeous.
January 28th, 2019 20:23
the rain
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Like this Jon clever how the form expands like the sublect
BRAVO!
January 27th, 2019 16:51
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Like this Jon clever how the form expands like the sublect
BRAVO!
January 27th, 2019 16:51
running away
Goldfinch60 said:
The wiles of people can be so confusing at times.
January 27th, 2019 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
The wiles of people can be so confusing at times.
January 27th, 2019 02:41
Circe/Medusa Tag Team
Neville said:
Not entirely sure why, but I really like this, cheers..
December 14th, 2018 07:09
Neville said:
Not entirely sure why, but I really like this, cheers..
December 14th, 2018 07:09
looking for the end of the rainbow
Lorna said:
Perfectly lovely.... and the perfect song to go with it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1bFr2SWP1I
December 11th, 2018 07:43
Lorna said:
Perfectly lovely.... and the perfect song to go with it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1bFr2SWP1I
December 11th, 2018 07:43
looking for the end of the rainbow
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those times together are worth more than gold.
December 11th, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those times together are worth more than gold.
December 11th, 2018 01:34
hamlet - deleted scenes #4
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is so honest and brutal. It makes me think and I like that. It’s also short enough to keep my attention. At times less is more. Thanks for sharing.
December 5th, 2018 00:10
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is so honest and brutal. It makes me think and I like that. It’s also short enough to keep my attention. At times less is more. Thanks for sharing.
December 5th, 2018 00:10
plastic dinosaurs
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
plastic dinosaurs
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
no more sandwiches
Lorna said:
Such sweet sentiment Jon - my husband has this awful disease although he still maintains his core personality with all his might!
November 8th, 2018 04:58
Lorna said:
Such sweet sentiment Jon - my husband has this awful disease although he still maintains his core personality with all his might!
November 8th, 2018 04:58
no more sandwiches
Goldfinch60 said:
This really strikes home Jon. My wife has dementia and she too cannot make sandwiches or do any other cooking. she cannot make a cup of tea or coffee any more - it is too dangerous.
Dementia is a pain the proverbial and there is no cure for it - it can only get worse. I feel for your friend .
November 8th, 2018 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
This really strikes home Jon. My wife has dementia and she too cannot make sandwiches or do any other cooking. she cannot make a cup of tea or coffee any more - it is too dangerous.
Dementia is a pain the proverbial and there is no cure for it - it can only get worse. I feel for your friend .
November 8th, 2018 01:56
[ pouring out the ashes ]
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, meet you in eternity.
October 14th, 2018 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, meet you in eternity.
October 14th, 2018 00:52
At the Gym
Goldfinch60 said:
I thought of going to a gym once; I went a lay down in a darkened room until the feeling wore off.
This type of action can happen in many other ways, good observation.
October 13th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
I thought of going to a gym once; I went a lay down in a darkened room until the feeling wore off.
This type of action can happen in many other ways, good observation.
October 13th, 2018 00:38
the
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Jon great thoughts
Autumn is a time for reflection mourn the summer pepare to face the winter like waiting for old age
Bravo!
October 8th, 2018 05:21
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Jon great thoughts
Autumn is a time for reflection mourn the summer pepare to face the winter like waiting for old age
Bravo!
October 8th, 2018 05:21
the talking of it is over
Quemis said:
This is like a perfect circle drawn in the sand.
Simple, visual, powerful.
I like it.
October 4th, 2018 15:23
Quemis said:
This is like a perfect circle drawn in the sand.
Simple, visual, powerful.
I like it.
October 4th, 2018 15:23
dew on a dead leaf
sylviasearcher said:
Sad image, but when the leaf falls to the floor and becomes part of the earth which nourishes the tree. It will become endless.
September 25th, 2018 07:18
sylviasearcher said:
Sad image, but when the leaf falls to the floor and becomes part of the earth which nourishes the tree. It will become endless.
September 25th, 2018 07:18
dew on a dead leaf
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, your poem is indeed sad, but loaded with food for thought. Nicely written. :)
Keep posting!
September 24th, 2018 17:58
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, your poem is indeed sad, but loaded with food for thought. Nicely written. :)
Keep posting!
September 24th, 2018 17:58
moon
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I onna put that on the back of a T shirt and walk around with a blobde wig
Glad I found your work!
September 19th, 2018 16:01
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I onna put that on the back of a T shirt and walk around with a blobde wig
Glad I found your work!
September 19th, 2018 16:01
one day
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful depiction of the seniment Jon love the last line very powerful
September 19th, 2018 15:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful depiction of the seniment Jon love the last line very powerful
September 19th, 2018 15:57
Moonroof
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well captured Jon sounds like a what if moment... quite beautifully sad
Thank you for sharing
September 19th, 2018 15:30
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well captured Jon sounds like a what if moment... quite beautifully sad
Thank you for sharing
September 19th, 2018 15:30
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