Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
mr. blue man
MendedFences27 said:
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies.\"
We all get checked on every day, we hope. Lately he\"s been dropping white flakes in the morning, What is it breakfast cereal for the flora? As for wrong turns: sometimes they get you to a shortcut, but mainly they drop you off the cliff. Some folks have a straight and narrow road of life, others, me included, travel on winding, uphill, treacherous roads through life. It\'s not the road you are on that matters it\'s how you choose to walk it. Blue skies to you, and thanks for the intriguing poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:06
MendedFences27 said:
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies.\"
We all get checked on every day, we hope. Lately he\"s been dropping white flakes in the morning, What is it breakfast cereal for the flora? As for wrong turns: sometimes they get you to a shortcut, but mainly they drop you off the cliff. Some folks have a straight and narrow road of life, others, me included, travel on winding, uphill, treacherous roads through life. It\'s not the road you are on that matters it\'s how you choose to walk it. Blue skies to you, and thanks for the intriguing poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:06
The Knotting of Days
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write John
Yes there have been some years
February 28th, 2019 04:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write John
Yes there have been some years
February 28th, 2019 04:41
The Knotting of Days
Michael Edwards said:
I very much enjoyed the read - thanks for posting.
February 28th, 2019 03:15
Michael Edwards said:
I very much enjoyed the read - thanks for posting.
February 28th, 2019 03:15
walking
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Jon
Sometimes we find things when we are not looking for them I find a lot of poems walking
Great write so many meanings in so few words a true tallent
February 22nd, 2019 08:46
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Jon
Sometimes we find things when we are not looking for them I find a lot of poems walking
Great write so many meanings in so few words a true tallent
February 22nd, 2019 08:46
walking
sylviasearcher said:
Love the different ways of reading this.
And know the feeling both ways up.
February 22nd, 2019 02:32
sylviasearcher said:
Love the different ways of reading this.
And know the feeling both ways up.
February 22nd, 2019 02:32
today the mask of the sky fell off
Goldfinch60 said:
May the hallucinations of your negative thoughts be dispersed to show the glory of the Universe.
Clever write Jon.
February 20th, 2019 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May the hallucinations of your negative thoughts be dispersed to show the glory of the Universe.
Clever write Jon.
February 20th, 2019 01:37
4 word poem #1
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all do that with the wonderful selections that are on offer in our lives.
February 18th, 2019 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all do that with the wonderful selections that are on offer in our lives.
February 18th, 2019 01:16
the sailor with a drowned future
Goldfinch60 said:
A very true write in many situations m never go back.
February 16th, 2019 16:06
Goldfinch60 said:
A very true write in many situations m never go back.
February 16th, 2019 16:06
The empty cage...
Neville said:
How sad is that.. you just gave me a lump in my throat, and I can\'t get rid...
February 15th, 2019 07:36
Neville said:
How sad is that.. you just gave me a lump in my throat, and I can\'t get rid...
February 15th, 2019 07:36
The empty cage...
Fay Slimm. said:
So powerful Jon are these few lines. Thanks for posting them.
February 15th, 2019 04:08
Fay Slimm. said:
So powerful Jon are these few lines. Thanks for posting them.
February 15th, 2019 04:08
The empty cage...
dusk arising said:
She is gone and somewhere, every now and again, a breeze catches my face and her song lingers on.
Your words inspired me to write this short piece which i shall publish today.
I really like your poem. I\'m a great fan of \'less is more\'
Definitely one to go into my favourites
February 15th, 2019 04:01
dusk arising said:
She is gone and somewhere, every now and again, a breeze catches my face and her song lingers on.
Your words inspired me to write this short piece which i shall publish today.
I really like your poem. I\'m a great fan of \'less is more\'
Definitely one to go into my favourites
February 15th, 2019 04:01
yesterday told me
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
February 6th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
February 6th, 2019 01:27
please tell me one more time
psychofemale said:
wow..
heart felt
so much in so few words
February 4th, 2019 21:57
psychofemale said:
wow..
heart felt
so much in so few words
February 4th, 2019 21:57
The Tin Man Laments
MendedFences27 said:
He became human. Shortly thereafter, a Tin Lizzy dumped him for an intelligent Scarecrow. He got a change of oil and a lube job and went back on the Y.B road. - Not to make light of your insightful poem, it just seemed to be to be the logical conclusion. Inspiring stuff. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:50
MendedFences27 said:
He became human. Shortly thereafter, a Tin Lizzy dumped him for an intelligent Scarecrow. He got a change of oil and a lube job and went back on the Y.B road. - Not to make light of your insightful poem, it just seemed to be to be the logical conclusion. Inspiring stuff. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:50
sitting on the edge
MendedFences27 said:
Psychologists just released a study saying that frequent visits to the beach keep us balanced, stable, grounded. Time alone is indeed important. A breath of fresh air clears the mind. - Another gem of a poem. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:42
MendedFences27 said:
Psychologists just released a study saying that frequent visits to the beach keep us balanced, stable, grounded. Time alone is indeed important. A breath of fresh air clears the mind. - Another gem of a poem. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:42
everything flies away
MendedFences27 said:
To me, Time is like a raging river carrying us along. It can\'t be stopped and we know not where it will take us.
Just hold your breath and go with the flow. On wind or water the destination remains the same. The big question is ..WHY? Intriguing work. Loved it. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:35
MendedFences27 said:
To me, Time is like a raging river carrying us along. It can\'t be stopped and we know not where it will take us.
Just hold your breath and go with the flow. On wind or water the destination remains the same. The big question is ..WHY? Intriguing work. Loved it. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:35
salisbury steak tv dinner
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s never as advertised. Even the lowliest T.V. dinner can breach the walls built between us. Mix it all together and it\'s stew. The world is a T.V, dinner with Billions of compartments and it is inevitable that they shall mix. So. now what do I do with my Mac & Cheese?
A very interesting poem that caught my imagination. Thank you for that. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:23
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s never as advertised. Even the lowliest T.V. dinner can breach the walls built between us. Mix it all together and it\'s stew. The world is a T.V, dinner with Billions of compartments and it is inevitable that they shall mix. So. now what do I do with my Mac & Cheese?
A very interesting poem that caught my imagination. Thank you for that. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 15:23
eyes that cast
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Jon. Indifference can be so painful.
January 29th, 2019 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Jon. Indifference can be so painful.
January 29th, 2019 02:04
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