Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
this lotus of light
MendedFences27 said:
So true. Love comes uneasily to some, but when it does It causes one to blossom. Let the Love Light shine. Great write. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2019 19:53
MendedFences27 said:
So true. Love comes uneasily to some, but when it does It causes one to blossom. Let the Love Light shine. Great write. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2019 19:53
the high dive dream
Goldfinch60 said:
In life experience only comes to us when we do the things that frighten us.
March 31st, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
In life experience only comes to us when we do the things that frighten us.
March 31st, 2019 00:44
this last full moon
MendedFences27 said:
A lone shadow is a lonesome shadow. Omens such as these can be disheartening. A love gone missing will only heal when the Sun shines a newer and more permanent shadow. Much said here in a few words. Love the format, as a shadow of itself. Great write, deserves being a favorite of mine. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 16:02
MendedFences27 said:
A lone shadow is a lonesome shadow. Omens such as these can be disheartening. A love gone missing will only heal when the Sun shines a newer and more permanent shadow. Much said here in a few words. Love the format, as a shadow of itself. Great write, deserves being a favorite of mine. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 16:02
sliced pickled radish
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s no place like home, except Grandma\'s. Mine would cook biscuits in one of those old black iron stoves. Her\'s was modified from wood to run on kerosene. But those biscuits...ummmmmm. I guess I agree food can bring back memories, even food off of a truck. A great treat for this foodie, your poem made me hungry. Very emotional ending . - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:17
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s no place like home, except Grandma\'s. Mine would cook biscuits in one of those old black iron stoves. Her\'s was modified from wood to run on kerosene. But those biscuits...ummmmmm. I guess I agree food can bring back memories, even food off of a truck. A great treat for this foodie, your poem made me hungry. Very emotional ending . - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:17
sliced pickled radish
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, the food of the past can be so meaningful.
March 29th, 2019 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, the food of the past can be so meaningful.
March 29th, 2019 01:58
sorrow often illumines
Goldfinch60 said:
If we never question we will never learn.
March 28th, 2019 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
If we never question we will never learn.
March 28th, 2019 02:25
finding
Goldfinch60 said:
Salvation comes in many colours, you own colour is special to you.
March 27th, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Salvation comes in many colours, you own colour is special to you.
March 27th, 2019 01:24
billy told me
MendedFences27 said:
A sad but beautiful tale of unattainable happiness, lost to the horrors of war. You tell it well especially the last three lines. Great story, but oh, so sad. - Phil A.
March 26th, 2019 13:55
MendedFences27 said:
A sad but beautiful tale of unattainable happiness, lost to the horrors of war. You tell it well especially the last three lines. Great story, but oh, so sad. - Phil A.
March 26th, 2019 13:55
digging a hole
Nicholas Browning said:
Time flies, doesn\'t it. When faced with that fact many people find it hard to handle. It is no easy thing to do.
Best regards.
March 24th, 2019 20:46
Nicholas Browning said:
Time flies, doesn\'t it. When faced with that fact many people find it hard to handle. It is no easy thing to do.
Best regards.
March 24th, 2019 20:46
digging a hole
Fay Slimm. said:
This write tells its own story Jon as in just a few lines you open memories for me - - - finding small treasures can take us back in a moment to moons or years ago - - thanks for sharing it.
March 24th, 2019 17:23
Fay Slimm. said:
This write tells its own story Jon as in just a few lines you open memories for me - - - finding small treasures can take us back in a moment to moons or years ago - - thanks for sharing it.
March 24th, 2019 17:23
that first morning
Fay Slimm. said:
A beguiling read Jon - and penned to draw from just a few lines the vibrance of warmer days.
March 22nd, 2019 14:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A beguiling read Jon - and penned to draw from just a few lines the vibrance of warmer days.
March 22nd, 2019 14:02
that first morning
MendedFences27 said:
Spring is known for loosing Cupid\'s arrows. Your bowman takes on a flight to Summer and I can\'t wait. Yet, time is ever fleeting, and Summer burns off in a flash. Good one Joe, enjoyed the hell out of it. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 13:09
MendedFences27 said:
Spring is known for loosing Cupid\'s arrows. Your bowman takes on a flight to Summer and I can\'t wait. Yet, time is ever fleeting, and Summer burns off in a flash. Good one Joe, enjoyed the hell out of it. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 13:09
Art Show on Campus
Nicholas Browning said:
What a rough read. Although a lesson learned, I\'m sure.
March 20th, 2019 03:33
Nicholas Browning said:
What a rough read. Although a lesson learned, I\'m sure.
March 20th, 2019 03:33
summer love letters
Nicholas Browning said:
Not sure what style the poem is in, but I do like the shape the words make, and the third stanza is a good catch.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:41
Nicholas Browning said:
Not sure what style the poem is in, but I do like the shape the words make, and the third stanza is a good catch.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:41
let me tell you a story
MendedFences27 said:
Love it. Absolute truth. Today everyone has a story, and the word \"story\" has become synonymous with \"lie.\" It\'s an epidemic.Who can we trust? You have nailed it, here. I want this as a FAV. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2019 12:02
MendedFences27 said:
Love it. Absolute truth. Today everyone has a story, and the word \"story\" has become synonymous with \"lie.\" It\'s an epidemic.Who can we trust? You have nailed it, here. I want this as a FAV. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2019 12:02
let me tell you a story
Sunshinefalling said:
Wow. Really good work. Both in present day events and in general. Thank you for sharing.
March 8th, 2019 23:15
Sunshinefalling said:
Wow. Really good work. Both in present day events and in general. Thank you for sharing.
March 8th, 2019 23:15
how many times
MendedFences27 said:
Very thought-provoking. Just what is it that people are seeking when they give advice. Exactly, who can you trust. Sometimes the quickest way to get on the road to paradise , is to stay at home. Thanks for opening my day with a stir of thought. Nice work - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 11:17
MendedFences27 said:
Very thought-provoking. Just what is it that people are seeking when they give advice. Exactly, who can you trust. Sometimes the quickest way to get on the road to paradise , is to stay at home. Thanks for opening my day with a stir of thought. Nice work - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 11:17
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