Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
summer love letters
Nicholas Browning said:
Not sure what style the poem is in, but I do like the shape the words make, and the third stanza is a good catch.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:41
Nicholas Browning said:
Not sure what style the poem is in, but I do like the shape the words make, and the third stanza is a good catch.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:41
let me tell you a story
MendedFences27 said:
Love it. Absolute truth. Today everyone has a story, and the word \"story\" has become synonymous with \"lie.\" It\'s an epidemic.Who can we trust? You have nailed it, here. I want this as a FAV. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2019 12:02
MendedFences27 said:
Love it. Absolute truth. Today everyone has a story, and the word \"story\" has become synonymous with \"lie.\" It\'s an epidemic.Who can we trust? You have nailed it, here. I want this as a FAV. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2019 12:02
let me tell you a story
Sunshinefalling said:
Wow. Really good work. Both in present day events and in general. Thank you for sharing.
March 8th, 2019 23:15
Sunshinefalling said:
Wow. Really good work. Both in present day events and in general. Thank you for sharing.
March 8th, 2019 23:15
how many times
MendedFences27 said:
Very thought-provoking. Just what is it that people are seeking when they give advice. Exactly, who can you trust. Sometimes the quickest way to get on the road to paradise , is to stay at home. Thanks for opening my day with a stir of thought. Nice work - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 11:17
MendedFences27 said:
Very thought-provoking. Just what is it that people are seeking when they give advice. Exactly, who can you trust. Sometimes the quickest way to get on the road to paradise , is to stay at home. Thanks for opening my day with a stir of thought. Nice work - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 11:17
mr. blue man
MendedFences27 said:
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies.\"
We all get checked on every day, we hope. Lately he\"s been dropping white flakes in the morning, What is it breakfast cereal for the flora? As for wrong turns: sometimes they get you to a shortcut, but mainly they drop you off the cliff. Some folks have a straight and narrow road of life, others, me included, travel on winding, uphill, treacherous roads through life. It\'s not the road you are on that matters it\'s how you choose to walk it. Blue skies to you, and thanks for the intriguing poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:06
MendedFences27 said:
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies.\"
We all get checked on every day, we hope. Lately he\"s been dropping white flakes in the morning, What is it breakfast cereal for the flora? As for wrong turns: sometimes they get you to a shortcut, but mainly they drop you off the cliff. Some folks have a straight and narrow road of life, others, me included, travel on winding, uphill, treacherous roads through life. It\'s not the road you are on that matters it\'s how you choose to walk it. Blue skies to you, and thanks for the intriguing poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:06
The Knotting of Days
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write John
Yes there have been some years
February 28th, 2019 04:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write John
Yes there have been some years
February 28th, 2019 04:41
The Knotting of Days
Michael Edwards said:
I very much enjoyed the read - thanks for posting.
February 28th, 2019 03:15
Michael Edwards said:
I very much enjoyed the read - thanks for posting.
February 28th, 2019 03:15
walking
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Jon
Sometimes we find things when we are not looking for them I find a lot of poems walking
Great write so many meanings in so few words a true tallent
February 22nd, 2019 08:46
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Jon
Sometimes we find things when we are not looking for them I find a lot of poems walking
Great write so many meanings in so few words a true tallent
February 22nd, 2019 08:46
walking
sylviasearcher said:
Love the different ways of reading this.
And know the feeling both ways up.
February 22nd, 2019 02:32
sylviasearcher said:
Love the different ways of reading this.
And know the feeling both ways up.
February 22nd, 2019 02:32
today the mask of the sky fell off
Goldfinch60 said:
May the hallucinations of your negative thoughts be dispersed to show the glory of the Universe.
Clever write Jon.
February 20th, 2019 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May the hallucinations of your negative thoughts be dispersed to show the glory of the Universe.
Clever write Jon.
February 20th, 2019 01:37
4 word poem #1
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all do that with the wonderful selections that are on offer in our lives.
February 18th, 2019 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all do that with the wonderful selections that are on offer in our lives.
February 18th, 2019 01:16
the sailor with a drowned future
Goldfinch60 said:
A very true write in many situations m never go back.
February 16th, 2019 16:06
Goldfinch60 said:
A very true write in many situations m never go back.
February 16th, 2019 16:06
The empty cage...
Neville said:
How sad is that.. you just gave me a lump in my throat, and I can\'t get rid...
February 15th, 2019 07:36
Neville said:
How sad is that.. you just gave me a lump in my throat, and I can\'t get rid...
February 15th, 2019 07:36
The empty cage...
Fay Slimm. said:
So powerful Jon are these few lines. Thanks for posting them.
February 15th, 2019 04:08
Fay Slimm. said:
So powerful Jon are these few lines. Thanks for posting them.
February 15th, 2019 04:08
The empty cage...
dusk arising said:
She is gone and somewhere, every now and again, a breeze catches my face and her song lingers on.
Your words inspired me to write this short piece which i shall publish today.
I really like your poem. I\'m a great fan of \'less is more\'
Definitely one to go into my favourites
February 15th, 2019 04:01
dusk arising said:
She is gone and somewhere, every now and again, a breeze catches my face and her song lingers on.
Your words inspired me to write this short piece which i shall publish today.
I really like your poem. I\'m a great fan of \'less is more\'
Definitely one to go into my favourites
February 15th, 2019 04:01
yesterday told me
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
February 6th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
February 6th, 2019 01:27
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