Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
this lotus of light
MendedFences27 said:
So true. Love comes uneasily to some, but when it does It causes one to blossom. Let the Love Light shine. Great write. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2019 19:53
MendedFences27 said:
So true. Love comes uneasily to some, but when it does It causes one to blossom. Let the Love Light shine. Great write. - Phil A.
April 14th, 2019 19:53
the high dive dream
Goldfinch60 said:
In life experience only comes to us when we do the things that frighten us.
March 31st, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
In life experience only comes to us when we do the things that frighten us.
March 31st, 2019 00:44
this last full moon
MendedFences27 said:
A lone shadow is a lonesome shadow. Omens such as these can be disheartening. A love gone missing will only heal when the Sun shines a newer and more permanent shadow. Much said here in a few words. Love the format, as a shadow of itself. Great write, deserves being a favorite of mine. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 16:02
MendedFences27 said:
A lone shadow is a lonesome shadow. Omens such as these can be disheartening. A love gone missing will only heal when the Sun shines a newer and more permanent shadow. Much said here in a few words. Love the format, as a shadow of itself. Great write, deserves being a favorite of mine. - Phil A.
March 30th, 2019 16:02
sliced pickled radish
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s no place like home, except Grandma\'s. Mine would cook biscuits in one of those old black iron stoves. Her\'s was modified from wood to run on kerosene. But those biscuits...ummmmmm. I guess I agree food can bring back memories, even food off of a truck. A great treat for this foodie, your poem made me hungry. Very emotional ending . - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:17
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s no place like home, except Grandma\'s. Mine would cook biscuits in one of those old black iron stoves. Her\'s was modified from wood to run on kerosene. But those biscuits...ummmmmm. I guess I agree food can bring back memories, even food off of a truck. A great treat for this foodie, your poem made me hungry. Very emotional ending . - Phil A.
March 29th, 2019 14:17
sliced pickled radish
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, the food of the past can be so meaningful.
March 29th, 2019 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, the food of the past can be so meaningful.
March 29th, 2019 01:58
sorrow often illumines
Goldfinch60 said:
If we never question we will never learn.
March 28th, 2019 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
If we never question we will never learn.
March 28th, 2019 02:25
finding
Goldfinch60 said:
Salvation comes in many colours, you own colour is special to you.
March 27th, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Salvation comes in many colours, you own colour is special to you.
March 27th, 2019 01:24
billy told me
MendedFences27 said:
A sad but beautiful tale of unattainable happiness, lost to the horrors of war. You tell it well especially the last three lines. Great story, but oh, so sad. - Phil A.
March 26th, 2019 13:55
MendedFences27 said:
A sad but beautiful tale of unattainable happiness, lost to the horrors of war. You tell it well especially the last three lines. Great story, but oh, so sad. - Phil A.
March 26th, 2019 13:55
digging a hole
Nicholas Browning said:
Time flies, doesn\'t it. When faced with that fact many people find it hard to handle. It is no easy thing to do.
Best regards.
March 24th, 2019 20:46
Nicholas Browning said:
Time flies, doesn\'t it. When faced with that fact many people find it hard to handle. It is no easy thing to do.
Best regards.
March 24th, 2019 20:46
digging a hole
Fay Slimm. said:
This write tells its own story Jon as in just a few lines you open memories for me - - - finding small treasures can take us back in a moment to moons or years ago - - thanks for sharing it.
March 24th, 2019 17:23
Fay Slimm. said:
This write tells its own story Jon as in just a few lines you open memories for me - - - finding small treasures can take us back in a moment to moons or years ago - - thanks for sharing it.
March 24th, 2019 17:23
that first morning
Fay Slimm. said:
A beguiling read Jon - and penned to draw from just a few lines the vibrance of warmer days.
March 22nd, 2019 14:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A beguiling read Jon - and penned to draw from just a few lines the vibrance of warmer days.
March 22nd, 2019 14:02
that first morning
MendedFences27 said:
Spring is known for loosing Cupid\'s arrows. Your bowman takes on a flight to Summer and I can\'t wait. Yet, time is ever fleeting, and Summer burns off in a flash. Good one Joe, enjoyed the hell out of it. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 13:09
MendedFences27 said:
Spring is known for loosing Cupid\'s arrows. Your bowman takes on a flight to Summer and I can\'t wait. Yet, time is ever fleeting, and Summer burns off in a flash. Good one Joe, enjoyed the hell out of it. - Phil A.
March 22nd, 2019 13:09
Art Show on Campus
Nicholas Browning said:
What a rough read. Although a lesson learned, I\'m sure.
March 20th, 2019 03:33
Nicholas Browning said:
What a rough read. Although a lesson learned, I\'m sure.
March 20th, 2019 03:33
summer love letters
Nicholas Browning said:
Not sure what style the poem is in, but I do like the shape the words make, and the third stanza is a good catch.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:41
Nicholas Browning said:
Not sure what style the poem is in, but I do like the shape the words make, and the third stanza is a good catch.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:41
let me tell you a story
MendedFences27 said:
Love it. Absolute truth. Today everyone has a story, and the word \"story\" has become synonymous with \"lie.\" It\'s an epidemic.Who can we trust? You have nailed it, here. I want this as a FAV. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2019 12:02
MendedFences27 said:
Love it. Absolute truth. Today everyone has a story, and the word \"story\" has become synonymous with \"lie.\" It\'s an epidemic.Who can we trust? You have nailed it, here. I want this as a FAV. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2019 12:02
let me tell you a story
Sunshinefalling said:
Wow. Really good work. Both in present day events and in general. Thank you for sharing.
March 8th, 2019 23:15
Sunshinefalling said:
Wow. Really good work. Both in present day events and in general. Thank you for sharing.
March 8th, 2019 23:15
how many times
MendedFences27 said:
Very thought-provoking. Just what is it that people are seeking when they give advice. Exactly, who can you trust. Sometimes the quickest way to get on the road to paradise , is to stay at home. Thanks for opening my day with a stir of thought. Nice work - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 11:17
MendedFences27 said:
Very thought-provoking. Just what is it that people are seeking when they give advice. Exactly, who can you trust. Sometimes the quickest way to get on the road to paradise , is to stay at home. Thanks for opening my day with a stir of thought. Nice work - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 11:17
mr. blue man
MendedFences27 said:
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies.\"
We all get checked on every day, we hope. Lately he\"s been dropping white flakes in the morning, What is it breakfast cereal for the flora? As for wrong turns: sometimes they get you to a shortcut, but mainly they drop you off the cliff. Some folks have a straight and narrow road of life, others, me included, travel on winding, uphill, treacherous roads through life. It\'s not the road you are on that matters it\'s how you choose to walk it. Blue skies to you, and thanks for the intriguing poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:06
MendedFences27 said:
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies.\"
We all get checked on every day, we hope. Lately he\"s been dropping white flakes in the morning, What is it breakfast cereal for the flora? As for wrong turns: sometimes they get you to a shortcut, but mainly they drop you off the cliff. Some folks have a straight and narrow road of life, others, me included, travel on winding, uphill, treacherous roads through life. It\'s not the road you are on that matters it\'s how you choose to walk it. Blue skies to you, and thanks for the intriguing poem. Loved it. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2019 17:06
The Knotting of Days
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write John
Yes there have been some years
February 28th, 2019 04:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write John
Yes there have been some years
February 28th, 2019 04:41
The Knotting of Days
Michael Edwards said:
I very much enjoyed the read - thanks for posting.
February 28th, 2019 03:15
Michael Edwards said:
I very much enjoyed the read - thanks for posting.
February 28th, 2019 03:15
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