Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



There is alway someone better off
Goldfinch60 said:

That place is within you.

May 18th, 2019 00:31

across the valley
Goldfinch60 said:

That stillness in life is so very important.

May 17th, 2019 00:43

flagged so
Lorna said:

Depressing indeed.

May 13th, 2019 03:56

the whole process was
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Sounds messy and painful Jon
I feel for you
Great write

May 11th, 2019 16:45

Coos Bay Drive in Late Summer
Goldfinch60 said:

The artwork of nature can be so inspiring.

May 10th, 2019 00:56

walking barefoot in the grass
Jhe said:

love this poem...
and to think,
some people say let go of the past!
☆ ★ ☆

May 9th, 2019 12:09

broken
Jhe said:


only the bad ones ;-)

May 9th, 2019 12:01

My quote of the day #17
Goldfinch60 said:

A very true thought.

May 9th, 2019 00:51

Your touch is like the seabreeze in summer
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words of passion.

May 8th, 2019 02:55

In this unquelled storm you beckon to me
Goldfinch60 said:

Being lost that love will find you with your fine words.

May 6th, 2019 00:50

In this unquelled storm you beckon to me
Goddess of the Mist said:

Intriguing and heartfelt. I really liked this!

May 5th, 2019 21:00

perhaps wanting is a kind of negation
Goldfinch60 said:

True love is the coming together of two people into one soul.

May 4th, 2019 00:27

konstantin tréplev
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Jonathan Livingston Seagull...What a book
Great write Jon

April 30th, 2019 05:08

konstantin tréplev
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Jon, that symbolism can be so meaningless at times.

April 30th, 2019 00:27

a
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, thank you for my first smile of the day hear in the UK.

April 29th, 2019 01:06

take the
Sunshinefalling said:

Wonderful

April 28th, 2019 19:15

as the last star
Goldfinch60 said:

Unfortunately this could be so true.

April 28th, 2019 00:43

husk heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Can be so true in many cases.

April 27th, 2019 00:26

take the
Goldfinch60 said:

May those petals fill your heart.

April 26th, 2019 00:22

to tell the truth
Goldfinch60 said:

Looking is so important, many people look but do not see.

April 24th, 2019 00:27

the liquidity of your gestures
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write Jon.

April 21st, 2019 00:39

goodbye
Neville said:

sweet

April 19th, 2019 01:53

buried in wanting
Sunshinefalling said:

❤️

April 17th, 2019 21:53

this lotus of light
Goldfinch60 said:

May that light forever grow.

April 15th, 2019 00:09

this lotus of light
MendedFences27 said:

So true. Love comes uneasily to some, but when it does It causes one to blossom. Let the Love Light shine. Great write. - Phil A.

April 14th, 2019 19:53

tv commercials from the edge #1
Sunshinefalling said:

😆

April 8th, 2019 21:25

unnamed color
Goldfinch60 said:

That colour can be so blinding.

April 8th, 2019 00:36

all the talking
Goldfinch60 said:

Those first dates were so special.

April 6th, 2019 00:00

in a dark glass tower
Sunshinefalling said:

I like it. Enchanting.

April 5th, 2019 11:36

the high dive dream
Goldfinch60 said:

In life experience only comes to us when we do the things that frighten us.

March 31st, 2019 00:44

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