Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
eyes that cast
magic_in_the_pages said:
Honestly this really spoke to me. It’s gorgeous.
January 28th, 2019 20:23
magic_in_the_pages said:
Honestly this really spoke to me. It’s gorgeous.
January 28th, 2019 20:23
the rain
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Like this Jon clever how the form expands like the sublect
BRAVO!
January 27th, 2019 16:51
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Like this Jon clever how the form expands like the sublect
BRAVO!
January 27th, 2019 16:51
running away
Goldfinch60 said:
The wiles of people can be so confusing at times.
January 27th, 2019 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
The wiles of people can be so confusing at times.
January 27th, 2019 02:41
Circe/Medusa Tag Team
Neville said:
Not entirely sure why, but I really like this, cheers..
December 14th, 2018 07:09
Neville said:
Not entirely sure why, but I really like this, cheers..
December 14th, 2018 07:09
looking for the end of the rainbow
Lorna said:
Perfectly lovely.... and the perfect song to go with it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1bFr2SWP1I
December 11th, 2018 07:43
Lorna said:
Perfectly lovely.... and the perfect song to go with it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1bFr2SWP1I
December 11th, 2018 07:43
looking for the end of the rainbow
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those times together are worth more than gold.
December 11th, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those times together are worth more than gold.
December 11th, 2018 01:34
hamlet - deleted scenes #4
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is so honest and brutal. It makes me think and I like that. It’s also short enough to keep my attention. At times less is more. Thanks for sharing.
December 5th, 2018 00:10
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is so honest and brutal. It makes me think and I like that. It’s also short enough to keep my attention. At times less is more. Thanks for sharing.
December 5th, 2018 00:10
plastic dinosaurs
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
plastic dinosaurs
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great write and it\'s so true..I totally get what you mean
November 21st, 2018 06:41
no more sandwiches
Lorna said:
Such sweet sentiment Jon - my husband has this awful disease although he still maintains his core personality with all his might!
November 8th, 2018 04:58
Lorna said:
Such sweet sentiment Jon - my husband has this awful disease although he still maintains his core personality with all his might!
November 8th, 2018 04:58
no more sandwiches
Goldfinch60 said:
This really strikes home Jon. My wife has dementia and she too cannot make sandwiches or do any other cooking. she cannot make a cup of tea or coffee any more - it is too dangerous.
Dementia is a pain the proverbial and there is no cure for it - it can only get worse. I feel for your friend .
November 8th, 2018 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
This really strikes home Jon. My wife has dementia and she too cannot make sandwiches or do any other cooking. she cannot make a cup of tea or coffee any more - it is too dangerous.
Dementia is a pain the proverbial and there is no cure for it - it can only get worse. I feel for your friend .
November 8th, 2018 01:56
[ pouring out the ashes ]
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, meet you in eternity.
October 14th, 2018 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, meet you in eternity.
October 14th, 2018 00:52
At the Gym
Goldfinch60 said:
I thought of going to a gym once; I went a lay down in a darkened room until the feeling wore off.
This type of action can happen in many other ways, good observation.
October 13th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
I thought of going to a gym once; I went a lay down in a darkened room until the feeling wore off.
This type of action can happen in many other ways, good observation.
October 13th, 2018 00:38
the
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Jon great thoughts
Autumn is a time for reflection mourn the summer pepare to face the winter like waiting for old age
Bravo!
October 8th, 2018 05:21
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks Jon great thoughts
Autumn is a time for reflection mourn the summer pepare to face the winter like waiting for old age
Bravo!
October 8th, 2018 05:21
the talking of it is over
Quemis said:
This is like a perfect circle drawn in the sand.
Simple, visual, powerful.
I like it.
October 4th, 2018 15:23
Quemis said:
This is like a perfect circle drawn in the sand.
Simple, visual, powerful.
I like it.
October 4th, 2018 15:23
dew on a dead leaf
sylviasearcher said:
Sad image, but when the leaf falls to the floor and becomes part of the earth which nourishes the tree. It will become endless.
September 25th, 2018 07:18
sylviasearcher said:
Sad image, but when the leaf falls to the floor and becomes part of the earth which nourishes the tree. It will become endless.
September 25th, 2018 07:18
dew on a dead leaf
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, your poem is indeed sad, but loaded with food for thought. Nicely written. :)
Keep posting!
September 24th, 2018 17:58
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, your poem is indeed sad, but loaded with food for thought. Nicely written. :)
Keep posting!
September 24th, 2018 17:58
moon
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I onna put that on the back of a T shirt and walk around with a blobde wig
Glad I found your work!
September 19th, 2018 16:01
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I onna put that on the back of a T shirt and walk around with a blobde wig
Glad I found your work!
September 19th, 2018 16:01
one day
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful depiction of the seniment Jon love the last line very powerful
September 19th, 2018 15:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wonderful depiction of the seniment Jon love the last line very powerful
September 19th, 2018 15:57
Moonroof
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well captured Jon sounds like a what if moment... quite beautifully sad
Thank you for sharing
September 19th, 2018 15:30
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well captured Jon sounds like a what if moment... quite beautifully sad
Thank you for sharing
September 19th, 2018 15:30
hollow dreams
The Gifted One said:
That short beautiful reflection packed so much emotions. Very nicely written.
The Gifted One
September 15th, 2018 17:47
The Gifted One said:
That short beautiful reflection packed so much emotions. Very nicely written.
The Gifted One
September 15th, 2018 17:47
orange drops through gauze
Crystal Hope said:
your description was outstanding on this piece. Well done work!
September 2nd, 2018 20:00
Crystal Hope said:
your description was outstanding on this piece. Well done work!
September 2nd, 2018 20:00
walking barefoot in the grass
ExistentialSarah said:
I feel like this one is going to rattle around in my brain for a while, in a good way, until I can find personal application. \"Young answers to old Lies\". Why is that so profound to me? Maybe because...as simple as the grass beneath our feet, experiences and sensations on a basic human level...we can so easily get lost in our own complicated headspace. We forget to connect to the things that are just...solid and real. There are more than a few \"lies\" of perception, negatively held, dysfunctional beliefs, that I have to overturn with new insights in order to find peace.
August 26th, 2018 10:31
ExistentialSarah said:
I feel like this one is going to rattle around in my brain for a while, in a good way, until I can find personal application. \"Young answers to old Lies\". Why is that so profound to me? Maybe because...as simple as the grass beneath our feet, experiences and sensations on a basic human level...we can so easily get lost in our own complicated headspace. We forget to connect to the things that are just...solid and real. There are more than a few \"lies\" of perception, negatively held, dysfunctional beliefs, that I have to overturn with new insights in order to find peace.
August 26th, 2018 10:31
after a hive is destroyed
Michael Edwards said:
An enjoyable read that says a lot.
August 24th, 2018 00:34
Michael Edwards said:
An enjoyable read that says a lot.
August 24th, 2018 00:34
whispered confession
Resa71 said:
Love always finds a way of coming around again.
Even when we don’t really want it to.
It’s like magic!
Even though in my case, it always ends tragically or suddenly, the same way it first appeared
Out of nowhere.
Nice write.
Resa
August 11th, 2018 03:19
Resa71 said:
Love always finds a way of coming around again.
Even when we don’t really want it to.
It’s like magic!
Even though in my case, it always ends tragically or suddenly, the same way it first appeared
Out of nowhere.
Nice write.
Resa
August 11th, 2018 03:19
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