Comments received on poems by Neville
Her Very Own Senryu
spilleronsheet said:
A word of love
A caution of humour
Inked was the love
In the heart of lover
What the ink define on body
When the soul buries deep inside
Beautiful and well crafted dear Neville
Clever lines dipped in sweet honey
February 25th, 2022 15:54
spilleronsheet said:
A word of love
A caution of humour
Inked was the love
In the heart of lover
What the ink define on body
When the soul buries deep inside
Beautiful and well crafted dear Neville
Clever lines dipped in sweet honey
February 25th, 2022 15:54
Her Very Own Senryu
dusk arising said:
For the passage of years to bear witness to a proud statement of love and for his eyes to fall upon undying devotion.
February 25th, 2022 10:56
dusk arising said:
For the passage of years to bear witness to a proud statement of love and for his eyes to fall upon undying devotion.
February 25th, 2022 10:56
Her Very Own Senryu
L. B. Mek said:
tattooing, nowadays
is seeming, more and more
like foreshadowing
our impending, regrets..
lol
(for some reason, reading your author\'s comments
made me chuckle, a fun read
thanks for sharing my friend
hope you have a Great weekend)
February 25th, 2022 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
tattooing, nowadays
is seeming, more and more
like foreshadowing
our impending, regrets..
lol
(for some reason, reading your author\'s comments
made me chuckle, a fun read
thanks for sharing my friend
hope you have a Great weekend)
February 25th, 2022 06:32
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words Neville very well written.
Andy
February 25th, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words Neville very well written.
Andy
February 25th, 2022 01:32
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
Rozina said:
Very moving poem. Thank you for sharing this memory.
February 24th, 2022 18:37
Rozina said:
Very moving poem. Thank you for sharing this memory.
February 24th, 2022 18:37
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Tiny blue flowers - you seen them four leaf clovers?! I not found one yet! lol.
February 24th, 2022 09:28
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Tiny blue flowers - you seen them four leaf clovers?! I not found one yet! lol.
February 24th, 2022 09:28
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
Christina8 said:
Love the imagery, getting me out of the winter scene I have here. Wonderful wonderful write!
February 24th, 2022 09:07
Christina8 said:
Love the imagery, getting me out of the winter scene I have here. Wonderful wonderful write!
February 24th, 2022 09:07
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
L. B. Mek said:
(for me its Sunflower\'s
and a faded, yellow hair clip...)
reading these words
took me to a place within myself
I try to say clear of
but this is why, the best Art
is that
which has a cathartic effect on us
forcing us to deal, with all that we repress
and try to avoid...
(a great write!
thank you, dear Poet)
February 24th, 2022 06:47
L. B. Mek said:
(for me its Sunflower\'s
and a faded, yellow hair clip...)
reading these words
took me to a place within myself
I try to say clear of
but this is why, the best Art
is that
which has a cathartic effect on us
forcing us to deal, with all that we repress
and try to avoid...
(a great write!
thank you, dear Poet)
February 24th, 2022 06:47
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
People come, and then they go, whether it was by choice or by nature. Even those you care about most cant stay, but they can last eternally inside you.
February 24th, 2022 05:14
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
People come, and then they go, whether it was by choice or by nature. Even those you care about most cant stay, but they can last eternally inside you.
February 24th, 2022 05:14
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
dusk arising said:
And he knew then that he should push it over the edge of the cliff like the rest of her all those years ago..... such fond memories.
February 24th, 2022 04:54
dusk arising said:
And he knew then that he should push it over the edge of the cliff like the rest of her all those years ago..... such fond memories.
February 24th, 2022 04:54
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
Fay Slimm. said:
A captivating few moments with scenic setting for the male character to emerge as the one left of a much missed partnership and his heart-touching find - -- such a moving read Nev -- this little opener holds the atmosphere of a novel if ever I saw one. Brilliant writing...................x
February 24th, 2022 04:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A captivating few moments with scenic setting for the male character to emerge as the one left of a much missed partnership and his heart-touching find - -- such a moving read Nev -- this little opener holds the atmosphere of a novel if ever I saw one. Brilliant writing...................x
February 24th, 2022 04:53
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
Doggerel Dave said:
An enigma of a write, Nev, rich in small detail. But had this one ended well?
February 24th, 2022 04:31
Doggerel Dave said:
An enigma of a write, Nev, rich in small detail. But had this one ended well?
February 24th, 2022 04:31
Another South West Coastal Path Miracle
Michael Edwards said:
This is so so good - inspired - hope you are well.
February 24th, 2022 04:26
Michael Edwards said:
This is so so good - inspired - hope you are well.
February 24th, 2022 04:26
Haiku #1 Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies had it right \"Make Love, Not War.\"
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies had it right \"Make Love, Not War.\"
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:39
Haiku #1 Maybe
spilleronsheet said:
I hope its the pandemics end
Many trips on halt
Thanks to awful Covid
February 23rd, 2022 13:10
spilleronsheet said:
I hope its the pandemics end
Many trips on halt
Thanks to awful Covid
February 23rd, 2022 13:10
Haiku #1 Maybe
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay, apart from finding it a little funny that we both decided to post haikus today this was really good (we were connected 😅) This is really the best \"way to go!\" 💖
February 23rd, 2022 10:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay, apart from finding it a little funny that we both decided to post haikus today this was really good (we were connected 😅) This is really the best \"way to go!\" 💖
February 23rd, 2022 10:51
Haiku #1 Maybe
Dove said:
Let’s party hardy
A Horizontal mambo
Warm flesh upon flesh
February 23rd, 2022 09:35
Dove said:
Let’s party hardy
A Horizontal mambo
Warm flesh upon flesh
February 23rd, 2022 09:35
Haiku #1 Maybe
Christina8 said:
Well the pandemic may not be over but what a fun way to go indeed! Wonderful haiku!
February 23rd, 2022 09:27
Christina8 said:
Well the pandemic may not be over but what a fun way to go indeed! Wonderful haiku!
February 23rd, 2022 09:27
Haiku #1 Maybe
orchidee said:
They think it\'s all over - is it now?!
Still Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc?
February 23rd, 2022 05:45
orchidee said:
They think it\'s all over - is it now?!
Still Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc?
February 23rd, 2022 05:45
Haiku #1 Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Over or not that way to go sounds real good to me - - so let\'s start a cult eh - - -- - maybe....................x
February 23rd, 2022 04:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Over or not that way to go sounds real good to me - - so let\'s start a cult eh - - -- - maybe....................x
February 23rd, 2022 04:49
Just a Series of Thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Neville your words must surely be worth a guinea.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Neville your words must surely be worth a guinea.
Andy
February 23rd, 2022 02:46
Just a Series of Thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:
Time passing....the florin, as it nears the horizon, becomes a half crown.................. (I hope that\'s right - I\'m mostly asleep then. Extrapolating from sunny experience)
February 22nd, 2022 22:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Time passing....the florin, as it nears the horizon, becomes a half crown.................. (I hope that\'s right - I\'m mostly asleep then. Extrapolating from sunny experience)
February 22nd, 2022 22:06
Just a Series of Thoughts
Rozina said:
The beautiful moon - loved your metaphor.
February 22nd, 2022 21:06
Rozina said:
The beautiful moon - loved your metaphor.
February 22nd, 2022 21:06
Just a Series of Thoughts
Dove said:
Well, I had to word search florin.. But after reading its meaning, I had a huge smile! Definitely great metaphor for the moon...
February 22nd, 2022 11:25
Dove said:
Well, I had to word search florin.. But after reading its meaning, I had a huge smile! Definitely great metaphor for the moon...
February 22nd, 2022 11:25
Just a Series of Thoughts
orchidee said:
I heard some jokes about nine-bob notes, and four pound notes. Sounds dodgy to me, that coinage! lol.
Was decimalisation about 5 million years ago now?
You appreciating my visits too?
What \'they\' saying? - Do shut up a while Orchi. lol.
February 22nd, 2022 09:40
orchidee said:
I heard some jokes about nine-bob notes, and four pound notes. Sounds dodgy to me, that coinage! lol.
Was decimalisation about 5 million years ago now?
You appreciating my visits too?
What \'they\' saying? - Do shut up a while Orchi. lol.
February 22nd, 2022 09:40
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem reminded me of Lana Del Rey\'s song \"Groupie Love\" and I totally recommend it. This poem is reminiscent to the whole \"fanatic scene\" that the song talks about. Great job! ✨💖
February 22nd, 2022 09:15
Rocky Lagou said:
This poem reminded me of Lana Del Rey\'s song \"Groupie Love\" and I totally recommend it. This poem is reminiscent to the whole \"fanatic scene\" that the song talks about. Great job! ✨💖
February 22nd, 2022 09:15
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