Comments received on poems by Neville
Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
orchidee said:
Ahh, was the train on time that day? Doh!
October 10th, 2022 09:15
orchidee said:
Ahh, was the train on time that day? Doh!
October 10th, 2022 09:15
Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
arqios said:
Oh doubles. Sad it wasn\'t a tennis match or a café.
October 10th, 2022 07:52
arqios said:
Oh doubles. Sad it wasn\'t a tennis match or a café.
October 10th, 2022 07:52
Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Doggerel Dave said:
Too much Nev. Not sure why. I pride myself in an awareness of the realities of people\'s lives, yet i find this disturbing....
October 10th, 2022 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Too much Nev. Not sure why. I pride myself in an awareness of the realities of people\'s lives, yet i find this disturbing....
October 10th, 2022 04:28
Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing but experience could pen words that strike home so vividly this stark picture of very sudden and unexpected tragedy - -- a heart-wrenching read Nev. - -
October 10th, 2022 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing but experience could pen words that strike home so vividly this stark picture of very sudden and unexpected tragedy - -- a heart-wrenching read Nev. - -
October 10th, 2022 04:24
That Point Where We Each Begin
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange that time when two never know where the \"me\" ends and the\"you\" begins - -- you scribe it briliantly in this piece of perception my dear friend and tis a fave with me for sure..............x
October 8th, 2022 09:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange that time when two never know where the \"me\" ends and the\"you\" begins - -- you scribe it briliantly in this piece of perception my dear friend and tis a fave with me for sure..............x
October 8th, 2022 09:00
That Point Where We Each Begin
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! So satisfying, laying \"like this\', isn\'t it? Wonderful visual. Excellent!!
October 8th, 2022 08:52
Christina8 said:
I love this poem! So satisfying, laying \"like this\', isn\'t it? Wonderful visual. Excellent!!
October 8th, 2022 08:52
What Didn’t We Find in the Attic
SureshG said:
Thank God, or else the sirens will go off and the hand cuffs will shine with a lot of explaining to follow and if not well recalled could lead to undesired ride.
Just imagine all the history hidden in those objects that jar the sleeping memory glands, often leading to a smile, just as your words have done today.
October 8th, 2022 07:45
SureshG said:
Thank God, or else the sirens will go off and the hand cuffs will shine with a lot of explaining to follow and if not well recalled could lead to undesired ride.
Just imagine all the history hidden in those objects that jar the sleeping memory glands, often leading to a smile, just as your words have done today.
October 8th, 2022 07:45
What Didn’t We Find in the Attic
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many memories found when we explore our attics Neville.
Andy
October 8th, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many memories found when we explore our attics Neville.
Andy
October 8th, 2022 01:11
What Didn’t We Find in the Attic
Doggerel Dave said:
Not there (the bodies) \'cos there\'s no room for \'em... LOL. Selective flashes of recognition throughout, Neville - lead off to all manner of memories.
Thanks for that.
October 7th, 2022 20:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Not there (the bodies) \'cos there\'s no room for \'em... LOL. Selective flashes of recognition throughout, Neville - lead off to all manner of memories.
Thanks for that.
October 7th, 2022 20:22
What Didn’t We Find in the Attic
Fay Slimm. said:
What fun to find even half of these long-ago things in an attic - - your fertile mind thought up some almost forgotten mementos which I could relate to - - - re. those cigarette cards and always- kept milk teeth - - a really unique subject and a fab. read mon ami................x
October 7th, 2022 09:36
Fay Slimm. said:
What fun to find even half of these long-ago things in an attic - - your fertile mind thought up some almost forgotten mementos which I could relate to - - - re. those cigarette cards and always- kept milk teeth - - a really unique subject and a fab. read mon ami................x
October 7th, 2022 09:36
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
orchidee said:
Yep, reckon I\'ll meet her, but not get on the wrong side of her! lol.
October 6th, 2022 01:48
orchidee said:
Yep, reckon I\'ll meet her, but not get on the wrong side of her! lol.
October 6th, 2022 01:48
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I drag that last stanza completely out of context and make it mine, Nev?
October 6th, 2022 00:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I drag that last stanza completely out of context and make it mine, Nev?
October 6th, 2022 00:59
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
arqios said:
Fairer and gentler but equally able and capable. A little respect and prudence goes a long long way! At least the signal was there and the disclaimer. What more is needed to arrive at a suitable consensus?
October 5th, 2022 22:45
arqios said:
Fairer and gentler but equally able and capable. A little respect and prudence goes a long long way! At least the signal was there and the disclaimer. What more is needed to arrive at a suitable consensus?
October 5th, 2022 22:45
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
MendedFences27 said:
Look out mate, if provocation puts you in \"dangerous\" territory. Could be a rocky road ahead.
\"Excuse me, I love you,\" had me thinking this was to a whimsical love poem, but that thought ended with her declaration of self-reliance. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2022 16:26
MendedFences27 said:
Look out mate, if provocation puts you in \"dangerous\" territory. Could be a rocky road ahead.
\"Excuse me, I love you,\" had me thinking this was to a whimsical love poem, but that thought ended with her declaration of self-reliance. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2022 16:26
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a woman of good sense, as well as beguiling. Best to lay the ground works up front, no surprises? But then a surprise here and there lends a little spice. So playfully and temptingly written my friend!
October 5th, 2022 12:16
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a woman of good sense, as well as beguiling. Best to lay the ground works up front, no surprises? But then a surprise here and there lends a little spice. So playfully and temptingly written my friend!
October 5th, 2022 12:16
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
Fay Slimm. said:
What an alluring title mon ami - -- the lady was playing wisely with issues of future behaviour. and gentle or dangerous she knew the ropes before love moved in. Some readers will relate to these words - including me if I might say...........x
October 5th, 2022 11:25
Fay Slimm. said:
What an alluring title mon ami - -- the lady was playing wisely with issues of future behaviour. and gentle or dangerous she knew the ropes before love moved in. Some readers will relate to these words - including me if I might say...........x
October 5th, 2022 11:25
With Nothing More to Lose
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:36
With Nothing More to Lose
MendedFences27 said:
To begin it reads like a love poem with all the trappings: \"rainbows,\" \"waterfalls,\" \"stained glass,\" \"handkerchief,\" and her \"eyes.\' Then, it shifts to the tragedy that it becomes. Having read it several times one discovers that it is in fact a Love poem.
Well done, it drew me in and held me spellbound until the end. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2022 19:01
MendedFences27 said:
To begin it reads like a love poem with all the trappings: \"rainbows,\" \"waterfalls,\" \"stained glass,\" \"handkerchief,\" and her \"eyes.\' Then, it shifts to the tragedy that it becomes. Having read it several times one discovers that it is in fact a Love poem.
Well done, it drew me in and held me spellbound until the end. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2022 19:01
With Nothing More to Lose
Bella Shepard said:
The way you have used the imagery of color to bring this piece to life is extraordinary. Bittersweet, heartbreakingly beautiful. A true fav!
October 4th, 2022 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
The way you have used the imagery of color to bring this piece to life is extraordinary. Bittersweet, heartbreakingly beautiful. A true fav!
October 4th, 2022 13:40
With Nothing More to Lose
Fay Slimm. said:
A linguistic picture of heart-touching moments when tears tell more than one piece of a story through your expertise with the pen. Unmatched your ways with words my dear friend.
October 4th, 2022 09:27
Fay Slimm. said:
A linguistic picture of heart-touching moments when tears tell more than one piece of a story through your expertise with the pen. Unmatched your ways with words my dear friend.
October 4th, 2022 09:27
With Nothing More to Lose
arqios said:
Beauty and sadness all rolled up together. How could they co-exist and yet they do!
October 4th, 2022 05:43
arqios said:
Beauty and sadness all rolled up together. How could they co-exist and yet they do!
October 4th, 2022 05:43
The True Value of Dreaming
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldn\'t agree more with this.
Dreams are the flames that engulf us into action.
Thx dear poetic friend!
October 3rd, 2022 15:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldn\'t agree more with this.
Dreams are the flames that engulf us into action.
Thx dear poetic friend!
October 3rd, 2022 15:36
The True Value of Dreaming
Christina8 said:
An accurate description of dream life.....I wish to dream during my waking hours....your last two lines are so true and wonderful!
October 3rd, 2022 14:10
Christina8 said:
An accurate description of dream life.....I wish to dream during my waking hours....your last two lines are so true and wonderful!
October 3rd, 2022 14:10
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