Comments received on poems by Neville
No Matter What Time it Is
Goldfinch60 said:
In my life there is music everywhere Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
In my life there is music everywhere Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2022 00:38
No Matter What Time it Is
Bella Shepard said:
OK, I googled \"There will always be Music on Clinton St.\" and came up with those lyrics
in the Leonard Cohen song \"Famous Blue Raincoat\". I found A Gospel group called Spencer Bridge Hall, and a bridge over the Yarra River/Melbourne called Spencer Bridge St. Judging from the song, it sounds possibly, like love, betrayal, forgiveness, acceptance. I may have it all wrong, but a very intriguing write, and the cryptic nature is just too good. Loved it!
October 21st, 2022 13:51
Bella Shepard said:
OK, I googled \"There will always be Music on Clinton St.\" and came up with those lyrics
in the Leonard Cohen song \"Famous Blue Raincoat\". I found A Gospel group called Spencer Bridge Hall, and a bridge over the Yarra River/Melbourne called Spencer Bridge St. Judging from the song, it sounds possibly, like love, betrayal, forgiveness, acceptance. I may have it all wrong, but a very intriguing write, and the cryptic nature is just too good. Loved it!
October 21st, 2022 13:51
No Matter What Time it Is
arqios said:
At the bridge of Spencer, if it connects to the road of same name, I wonder if the water ices over.
October 21st, 2022 06:05
arqios said:
At the bridge of Spencer, if it connects to the road of same name, I wonder if the water ices over.
October 21st, 2022 06:05
No Matter What Time it Is
Doggerel Dave said:
No probs with Clinton St o\' course, Nev....
Spencer Bridge Road, in Northampton boasts a Gospel hall (Prof Google)... not asking, just noting....
October 21st, 2022 05:37
Doggerel Dave said:
No probs with Clinton St o\' course, Nev....
Spencer Bridge Road, in Northampton boasts a Gospel hall (Prof Google)... not asking, just noting....
October 21st, 2022 05:37
No Matter What Time it Is
orchidee said:
I don\'t get it, of course! lol Is it about some gal I should meet? Oops, you said don\'t ask!
October 21st, 2022 04:38
orchidee said:
I don\'t get it, of course! lol Is it about some gal I should meet? Oops, you said don\'t ask!
October 21st, 2022 04:38
No Matter What Time it Is
L. B. Mek said:
my foggy mind can\'t place any context to your words, Hyung
but I can easily connect to your theme
of musically influenced states of mind
where post codes denote, more
than merely, a Time and a Place
where melodies intwine memory
within reality and in each blink
we cross decades
as we once again, relive and swim
in our much craved, ideal...
(Wonderfully tight lines Hyung
btw how\'s that sixth addition coming along)
October 21st, 2022 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
my foggy mind can\'t place any context to your words, Hyung
but I can easily connect to your theme
of musically influenced states of mind
where post codes denote, more
than merely, a Time and a Place
where melodies intwine memory
within reality and in each blink
we cross decades
as we once again, relive and swim
in our much craved, ideal...
(Wonderfully tight lines Hyung
btw how\'s that sixth addition coming along)
October 21st, 2022 04:13
No Matter What Time it Is
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for a write to think on a bit deeper Nev. - - Music ignores time or place to bring warmth to wintery memories; A comforting thought in this short but telling tribute to music\'s perpetual power...............x
October 21st, 2022 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for a write to think on a bit deeper Nev. - - Music ignores time or place to bring warmth to wintery memories; A comforting thought in this short but telling tribute to music\'s perpetual power...............x
October 21st, 2022 03:44
How on Earth Did She do That
dusk arising said:
On some women even lowly tattered rags manage to drape in a come and get me luscious mode
October 20th, 2022 10:09
dusk arising said:
On some women even lowly tattered rags manage to drape in a come and get me luscious mode
October 20th, 2022 10:09
How on Earth Did She do That
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev. - - that She left her mark on someone methinks. An age-old talent for flirting I would say made her behave that way - -- - - -- - - well at least my dear friend she is almost immortalised by this extra-beguiling and well penned verse............x
October 20th, 2022 07:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev. - - that She left her mark on someone methinks. An age-old talent for flirting I would say made her behave that way - -- - - -- - - well at least my dear friend she is almost immortalised by this extra-beguiling and well penned verse............x
October 20th, 2022 07:01
How on Earth Did She do That
Ninkasi said:
Quite a read that was and reading it all created a salt and pepper reaction in the mind. Drew a visual image gradually.
October 20th, 2022 05:51
Ninkasi said:
Quite a read that was and reading it all created a salt and pepper reaction in the mind. Drew a visual image gradually.
October 20th, 2022 05:51
How on Earth Did She do That
Doggerel Dave said:
Mystery, always mystery, but carnal relations could be imminent......
Worked for you, Nev?
October 20th, 2022 03:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Mystery, always mystery, but carnal relations could be imminent......
Worked for you, Nev?
October 20th, 2022 03:45
How on Earth Did She do That
arqios said:
Masters of communication once matriculating in the school of relationship arts has been successfully navigated. Some do take to that like a duck to water.
October 20th, 2022 03:29
arqios said:
Masters of communication once matriculating in the school of relationship arts has been successfully navigated. Some do take to that like a duck to water.
October 20th, 2022 03:29
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
Paul Bell said:
Putin\'s thumb along with his head should be amputated for the world\'s health.
October 19th, 2022 09:46
Paul Bell said:
Putin\'s thumb along with his head should be amputated for the world\'s health.
October 19th, 2022 09:46
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
Fay Slimm. said:
We may have grown accustomed to history repeating but not accepted that we become victims to belief that the spirit of hope has no future. - - - -- - -- well that\'s what i think mon ami despite that ominous thumb..........x
October 19th, 2022 04:27
Fay Slimm. said:
We may have grown accustomed to history repeating but not accepted that we become victims to belief that the spirit of hope has no future. - - - -- - -- well that\'s what i think mon ami despite that ominous thumb..........x
October 19th, 2022 04:27
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
arqios said:
And as the winter advances so shall the precedent of Napoleon and Aldolf\'s advances.
October 19th, 2022 03:26
arqios said:
And as the winter advances so shall the precedent of Napoleon and Aldolf\'s advances.
October 19th, 2022 03:26
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
Doggerel Dave said:
We have, Nev. Which in no way alters or modifies my contention that it need never have occurred at all.
(Best ignore - or this may once more end with a debate on the role of histo.....)
October 19th, 2022 03:23
Doggerel Dave said:
We have, Nev. Which in no way alters or modifies my contention that it need never have occurred at all.
(Best ignore - or this may once more end with a debate on the role of histo.....)
October 19th, 2022 03:23
Grandma Wears Denim
Goldfinch60 said:
Still in her youthful days Neville, that is great.
Andy
October 19th, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Still in her youthful days Neville, that is great.
Andy
October 19th, 2022 01:33
Grandma Wears Denim
arqios said:
Never caught any of my nan\'s in denim. It probably isn\'t as comfortable a garment to don at a certain age.
October 18th, 2022 07:45
arqios said:
Never caught any of my nan\'s in denim. It probably isn\'t as comfortable a garment to don at a certain age.
October 18th, 2022 07:45
Grandma Wears Denim
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Gal - forget \'mutton dressed as lamb\' - you are only as old as you feel: I\'m a bit of a Peter Pan meself, so p\'raps we could get together sometimes ..never thoughr the internet could.....
October 18th, 2022 07:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Gal - forget \'mutton dressed as lamb\' - you are only as old as you feel: I\'m a bit of a Peter Pan meself, so p\'raps we could get together sometimes ..never thoughr the internet could.....
October 18th, 2022 07:02
Grandma Wears Denim
Fay Slimm. said:
Whew - - what a gal -- Who wouldn\'t be proud of a Granny like that.........x
October 18th, 2022 05:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Whew - - what a gal -- Who wouldn\'t be proud of a Granny like that.........x
October 18th, 2022 05:59
With All My Fondest Regards
Fay Slimm. said:
No more respectful approach to end an acid affair than contained in these lines of gentle reminders that love means loyalty. Quite moving these fondest regards and Nev.
I hope they arrived via your poetic need for expression and not from experience my luverly friend..........x
October 17th, 2022 12:38
Fay Slimm. said:
No more respectful approach to end an acid affair than contained in these lines of gentle reminders that love means loyalty. Quite moving these fondest regards and Nev.
I hope they arrived via your poetic need for expression and not from experience my luverly friend..........x
October 17th, 2022 12:38
With All My Fondest Regards
sorenbarrett said:
Not limited to ex-lovers, this could easily be sent to many so called friends or even relatives that choose to fall out of relationships. Nicely done.
October 17th, 2022 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
Not limited to ex-lovers, this could easily be sent to many so called friends or even relatives that choose to fall out of relationships. Nicely done.
October 17th, 2022 11:24
With All My Fondest Regards
orchidee said:
I got back to ya quick. I didn\'t give ya a moment\'s peace! lol
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido, and gimme a bone!
October 17th, 2022 10:26
orchidee said:
I got back to ya quick. I didn\'t give ya a moment\'s peace! lol
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido, and gimme a bone!
October 17th, 2022 10:26
When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
Rocky Lagou said:
This is so lovely dear poet! I mean jeez I felt this experience as it was happening, and your godsent rhetoric and style just ties it all together. \"I shall focus entirely on / love songs, / our survival and poetry ..\" is actually such a beautiful line. Whilst your lover (I\'m assuming) is getting ready for what seems like a good time, you\'re already looking further to the \"survival\" of the relationship. This is wonderful!
October 17th, 2022 08:28
Rocky Lagou said:
This is so lovely dear poet! I mean jeez I felt this experience as it was happening, and your godsent rhetoric and style just ties it all together. \"I shall focus entirely on / love songs, / our survival and poetry ..\" is actually such a beautiful line. Whilst your lover (I\'m assuming) is getting ready for what seems like a good time, you\'re already looking further to the \"survival\" of the relationship. This is wonderful!
October 17th, 2022 08:28
With All My Fondest Regards
arqios said:
The moving on part of love\'s expression.
October 17th, 2022 04:59
arqios said:
The moving on part of love\'s expression.
October 17th, 2022 04:59
With All My Fondest Regards
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to look back from afar. Usually a million miles back. Sadly, communication is inbuilt now and there\'s no hiding place.
October 17th, 2022 04:42
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to look back from afar. Usually a million miles back. Sadly, communication is inbuilt now and there\'s no hiding place.
October 17th, 2022 04:42
With All My Fondest Regards
Doggerel Dave said:
Not (I dare to contradict) a love poem to be found here, and not sad in that context - refreshing. But tragically a message I wish I\'d sent to at least one of the friends/lovers who touched my life....but has....
Much appreciated, Neville.
October 17th, 2022 04:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Not (I dare to contradict) a love poem to be found here, and not sad in that context - refreshing. But tragically a message I wish I\'d sent to at least one of the friends/lovers who touched my life....but has....
Much appreciated, Neville.
October 17th, 2022 04:18
When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
Doggerel Dave said:
Your imagery rich lines sent me off in a number of different directions individually, Nev; but once more my pedestrian mind floundered in the depths...
Enjoyable trip as tourist, though.
October 16th, 2022 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Your imagery rich lines sent me off in a number of different directions individually, Nev; but once more my pedestrian mind floundered in the depths...
Enjoyable trip as tourist, though.
October 16th, 2022 18:01
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