Comments received on poems by Neville



How Well Will You Remember Me
orchidee said:

I remember when... I met a lass....!
oh no, not one in your \'I remember when\' series of about 10 million Orchi. Argghh! lol.

March 7th, 2022 02:35

How Well Will You Remember Me
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure those fondest terms of remembering will always be there Neville.

Andy

March 7th, 2022 02:30

No Ordinary Woman
Crowns4Christ said:

What is ordinary anyway,each one of us, sparkles like a precious gem, even if we\'re a diamond in the rough.
And there sure isn\'t an ordinary man either, each one of you are special to us women, I\'m partial to my husband Dion of course,the most important man in my life, other than God and Christ Jesus.good piece Neville

March 6th, 2022 17:05

No Ordinary Woman
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

From a man’s point of view, what is an ordinary woman, anyway?!………

Laura🌻

March 6th, 2022 16:09

No Ordinary Woman
SureshG said:

ordinary woman
an oxymoron

a poem well penned

March 6th, 2022 13:39

No Ordinary Woman
Christina8 said:

I think most women are extraordinary holding together households and men alike.....This is a beautiful write and it\'s going in my fav\'s...C

March 6th, 2022 10:28

No Ordinary Woman
Thekkinkkattil said:

So very true, only a women can hold a broken man with glue.May it be your mother sis or wife

March 6th, 2022 07:43

Not Wanting to be Famous
Doggerel Dave said:

Nearly missed this one, Neville -sorry.
Today no time to be famous when Social Media so rampant.
There\'s appalling damage done to people via that medium where anonymity is assured

March 6th, 2022 06:35

Not Wanting to be Famous
Paul Bell said:

Sort of reminds me of Captain Tom. Just wanted to raise a few quid for charity, which he did. Now the fallout has happened, the charity\'s being investigated, the family are getting abuse, and it just goes on.

March 6th, 2022 06:14

No Ordinary Woman
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - - truly agreed Nev. - the word ordinary can never be applied to the female gender or in fact for any of your unique versing dear friend........x

March 6th, 2022 05:32

No Ordinary Woman
orchidee said:

Good write N.
I can\'t recall if I met her or not. lol.

March 6th, 2022 03:03

No Ordinary Woman
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Neville.

Andy

March 6th, 2022 02:53

No Ordinary Woman
Michael Edwards said:

And long may that be the case, mine shore aint no ordinary woman - bless her.

March 6th, 2022 02:45

No Ordinary Woman
dusk arising said:

Deffo no such thing as an ordinary woman exists.... i can show you the scars to prove it.

March 6th, 2022 02:10

Not Wanting to be Famous
Rozina said:

Famous, rich, seem to have everything (in our eyes), and then news about their suicides. Incomprehensible to many of us. Masks on hiding their real anguish. Sad one.

March 5th, 2022 23:00

Not Wanting to be Famous
Christina8 said:

Very sad write but well written....It is true that not everyone is cut out to be famous....no privacy! Poignant ending.....C

March 5th, 2022 14:27

Not Wanting to be Famous
Dove said:

Famous is like being naked... They can see all your private stuff. 😎

March 5th, 2022 06:10

Not Wanting to be Famous
Fay Slimm. said:

Fame can be dangerous to talented souls who need no glory - - there are many come to mind who ended it by choosing suicide through anguish - - you poem their lives with more than compassion here Nev.........................x

March 5th, 2022 04:47

Not Wanting to be Famous
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

March 5th, 2022 04:39

Not Wanting to be Famous
Michael Edwards said:

But he died in peace - such an emotive write - great stuff Neville.

March 5th, 2022 04:20

Not Wanting to be Famous
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sad writing . Sometimes we want things in life that are not what we truly want .. and it just makes us miserable . So why reach for things that just leave us hurting .

March 5th, 2022 03:53

The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Neville.

Andy

March 5th, 2022 02:05

The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Rozina said:

Hot!! In the beginning I thought it was a continuation of your dog story! (The rudder and I got it wrong till the end).

March 4th, 2022 22:52

The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Rocky Lagou said:

They say you should trace your name with your tongue when kissing someone. So I\'m guessing she must have like 10 middle names in order to have her kiss so memorable! 😅 Well done!

March 4th, 2022 09:34

The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Christina8 said:

You\'ve well captured the taste and the feel of a lovers tongue..I really enjoyed myself with this poem...C

March 4th, 2022 09:06

The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Dove said:

I guess, we are on the same theme , but
yours are so much more juicy! Lol
I meant the poem. 😀😍

March 4th, 2022 08:59

The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
L. B. Mek said:

\'it’s never the same
But unique and refreshing
thirst quenching
And otherwise welcome
given free\'..
what a poetic escape, gift
of a read
after such a gruelling week
of negativity
and dispiriting, reality..
(had my mind, skipping back
to
those now, cobwebbed
teenage years of spontaneous, crushes
where the slightest detail
was enough, fuel
for us to daydream, free
of life\'s bruises, as safety wheel
limitations...)


March 4th, 2022 06:39

The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Fay Slimm. said:

So seriously sensual I could sip and savour each line - - so smoothly mmmmmmorish ..................x

March 4th, 2022 04:51

The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
dusk arising said:

the torrid tingling of touching tongue tips tenderly mmmmm ...... rather near the top of my list in sensual matters.

Dammit my windows have steamed up.

March 4th, 2022 03:34

The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
orchidee said:

Should I meet her?! lol.

March 4th, 2022 03:18



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