Comments received on poems by Neville
Pre-date-Her
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a feeling for the folks in the latter half of your write, Nev: them as can mind their own business.....
February 6th, 2023 21:15
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a feeling for the folks in the latter half of your write, Nev: them as can mind their own business.....
February 6th, 2023 21:15
Pre-date-Her
Bella Shepard said:
Your analogy to a predator waiting patiently, stimulated by movement of it\'s prey is most engaging. Little do we know what lurks when we do not observe. Such a good write my friend.
February 6th, 2023 16:44
Bella Shepard said:
Your analogy to a predator waiting patiently, stimulated by movement of it\'s prey is most engaging. Little do we know what lurks when we do not observe. Such a good write my friend.
February 6th, 2023 16:44
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Rocky Lagou said:
I adore this!
The way in which you breathe something special into each of your poems is amazing.
I feel like at the heart of small talk is always the weather. It\'s what comes most natural to us. But sometimes those small conversations can lead to a lifetime of love and admiration for one another. A seemingly trivial interaction can hold the key to a rich and intimate bond.
February 6th, 2023 10:49
Rocky Lagou said:
I adore this!
The way in which you breathe something special into each of your poems is amazing.
I feel like at the heart of small talk is always the weather. It\'s what comes most natural to us. But sometimes those small conversations can lead to a lifetime of love and admiration for one another. A seemingly trivial interaction can hold the key to a rich and intimate bond.
February 6th, 2023 10:49
Pre-date-Her
arqios said:
...\"pre-date\" that is quite an intriguing concept. That sounds almost quite like a functional screening process.
February 6th, 2023 07:54
arqios said:
...\"pre-date\" that is quite an intriguing concept. That sounds almost quite like a functional screening process.
February 6th, 2023 07:54
Pre-date-Her
orchidee said:
All I know is, KP waits like an old trout!
Bet you knew I was gonna say that. lol. It\'s the botox, you see.
February 6th, 2023 06:42
orchidee said:
All I know is, KP waits like an old trout!
Bet you knew I was gonna say that. lol. It\'s the botox, you see.
February 6th, 2023 06:42
Pre-date-Her
L. B. Mek said:
a beautifully picturesque scene
love the playful elements
couldn\'t help but be inspired to try
and scribble a feeble poetic reply
thank you Hyung, yet again
cheque\'s in da post
(vivid memento\'s burdened
with a twinning paradoxical
reservoir
of pooling significance..
see
those scenic recalling, reverie\'s
however idyllic, come served
aside a biting, searing
afterglow, resonance of that longing
to experience it all, afresh
anew
again n again, in a loop
of rewardingly effervescent
cyclicality..
\'once more, dear fate
take us back, once more...\')
February 6th, 2023 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
a beautifully picturesque scene
love the playful elements
couldn\'t help but be inspired to try
and scribble a feeble poetic reply
thank you Hyung, yet again
cheque\'s in da post
(vivid memento\'s burdened
with a twinning paradoxical
reservoir
of pooling significance..
see
those scenic recalling, reverie\'s
however idyllic, come served
aside a biting, searing
afterglow, resonance of that longing
to experience it all, afresh
anew
again n again, in a loop
of rewardingly effervescent
cyclicality..
\'once more, dear fate
take us back, once more...\')
February 6th, 2023 04:36
Pre-date-Her
Fay Slimm. said:
A wee peep into group excitement remembered and recounted with expert ability in just a few intriguing lines. Fantastic word-play again dear Sir N............x
February 6th, 2023 04:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A wee peep into group excitement remembered and recounted with expert ability in just a few intriguing lines. Fantastic word-play again dear Sir N............x
February 6th, 2023 04:36
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
L. B. Mek said:
\'and smiling vaguely\'
that smile, blossoming
from a heart, in a most
contemplatively melancholic
frame
of remembrance and appreciation
..
for those who know, Hyung
these words will hit home
deeper, than any love song...
(Brilliant!)
February 6th, 2023 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'and smiling vaguely\'
that smile, blossoming
from a heart, in a most
contemplatively melancholic
frame
of remembrance and appreciation
..
for those who know, Hyung
these words will hit home
deeper, than any love song...
(Brilliant!)
February 6th, 2023 04:24
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
\'she
was a poem
broken\'
I\'m sorry, but this line by itself
is a complete poem
what arrangement of wording
so many of us wannabees
would have rushed it as \'broken poem\'
and render it a meaningless line...
as-ever, dear Poet supreme
I so gratefully, read and learn
thank you! Hyung
(oh and yes, I read the whole
of this wonderfully poignant poem
lol)
February 6th, 2023 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'she
was a poem
broken\'
I\'m sorry, but this line by itself
is a complete poem
what arrangement of wording
so many of us wannabees
would have rushed it as \'broken poem\'
and render it a meaningless line...
as-ever, dear Poet supreme
I so gratefully, read and learn
thank you! Hyung
(oh and yes, I read the whole
of this wonderfully poignant poem
lol)
February 6th, 2023 04:19
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I got up before dawn this morning the moon was shining brightly starting my day with wonder.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 03:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, when I got up before dawn this morning the moon was shining brightly starting my day with wonder.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 03:14
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Doggerel Dave said:
Cool and enigmatic, Nev...enjoyed.
February 5th, 2023 20:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Cool and enigmatic, Nev...enjoyed.
February 5th, 2023 20:13
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Fay Slimm. said:
A warm moment of weather talk before that vague smile in a lover\'s direction means she knows there is heat in the air despite any forecast of snow - -- and methinks t\'will grow even hotter when weather\'s forgotten...................x
February 5th, 2023 11:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A warm moment of weather talk before that vague smile in a lover\'s direction means she knows there is heat in the air despite any forecast of snow - -- and methinks t\'will grow even hotter when weather\'s forgotten...................x
February 5th, 2023 11:38
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Christina8 said:
How am I the first to review this? lol Anyway, i love how you ended the poem \"smiling vaguely....\" lets not talk about the weather....it is horrible! LOL Beautiful poem, N!
February 5th, 2023 09:03
Christina8 said:
How am I the first to review this? lol Anyway, i love how you ended the poem \"smiling vaguely....\" lets not talk about the weather....it is horrible! LOL Beautiful poem, N!
February 5th, 2023 09:03
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope your eyes are blue Neville.
Andy
February 5th, 2023 05:53
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope your eyes are blue Neville.
Andy
February 5th, 2023 05:53
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
Doggerel Dave said:
Such smooth poetry, beautifully formed.....but why make a thing of wonder out of blatant discrimination?🙂
(The remainder of her idiosyncrasies I intend to ignore within the frame of this discussion).
February 4th, 2023 18:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Such smooth poetry, beautifully formed.....but why make a thing of wonder out of blatant discrimination?🙂
(The remainder of her idiosyncrasies I intend to ignore within the frame of this discussion).
February 4th, 2023 18:51
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
orchidee said:
Ohh, I don\'t care! I\'m gonna meet her, or one of your other lasses. Makes a break from KP - who I never see 99% of the time anyway. Well, not in person. On TV, in the papers, in jail (oops, she got away with something yet again) - yes!
I paid the jailer the bail money to keep her IN. heehee.
February 4th, 2023 10:10
orchidee said:
Ohh, I don\'t care! I\'m gonna meet her, or one of your other lasses. Makes a break from KP - who I never see 99% of the time anyway. Well, not in person. On TV, in the papers, in jail (oops, she got away with something yet again) - yes!
I paid the jailer the bail money to keep her IN. heehee.
February 4th, 2023 10:10
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
Christina8 said:
this is so descriptive. I just love it! I don\'t often favorite things but this is such a fine poem! You had me at the very beginning....blue eyes!
February 4th, 2023 08:17
Christina8 said:
this is so descriptive. I just love it! I don\'t often favorite things but this is such a fine poem! You had me at the very beginning....blue eyes!
February 4th, 2023 08:17
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
An outstanding write -- your short-line technique of presenting intrigue in a few short lines is amazing - -this has to be one of your best and is now in my fave. list Sir N.............x
February 4th, 2023 04:06
Fay Slimm. said:
An outstanding write -- your short-line technique of presenting intrigue in a few short lines is amazing - -this has to be one of your best and is now in my fave. list Sir N.............x
February 4th, 2023 04:06
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
orchidee said:
If she pops round to see me, I will swoon. I\'m a blue eyed boy, ya know! lol. Will she know I am, if I wear shades?!
February 4th, 2023 03:30
orchidee said:
If she pops round to see me, I will swoon. I\'m a blue eyed boy, ya know! lol. Will she know I am, if I wear shades?!
February 4th, 2023 03:30
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2023 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2023 02:55
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Kinsey Peterson said:
I would love nothing more than to see someone put your words to music. I feel as though they would make lovely songs.
February 3rd, 2023 09:43
Kinsey Peterson said:
I would love nothing more than to see someone put your words to music. I feel as though they would make lovely songs.
February 3rd, 2023 09:43
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Doggerel Dave said:
If the beams, the inglenook, the Aga (that woz the one I had in my days of plenty) range are there, don\'t chuck \'em out...(bible is a different matter) but bathe in the \'smiles and laughter,\' plus the \'joy, peace, love and hope\' for as long as it lasts..... I did enjoy the piece Nev, but fear I might be turning myself into an advice maiden - Dorothy Dix (Aust), UK - Edith Home if I remember....
February 3rd, 2023 07:03
Doggerel Dave said:
If the beams, the inglenook, the Aga (that woz the one I had in my days of plenty) range are there, don\'t chuck \'em out...(bible is a different matter) but bathe in the \'smiles and laughter,\' plus the \'joy, peace, love and hope\' for as long as it lasts..... I did enjoy the piece Nev, but fear I might be turning myself into an advice maiden - Dorothy Dix (Aust), UK - Edith Home if I remember....
February 3rd, 2023 07:03
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
arqios said:
Where the rubber hits the road
and that\'s where the skid marks are at.
February 3rd, 2023 06:25
arqios said:
Where the rubber hits the road
and that\'s where the skid marks are at.
February 3rd, 2023 06:25
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Christina8 said:
Quite the positive write....smiles and laughter i think are what we all want. Excellent. Well done!
February 3rd, 2023 05:15
Christina8 said:
Quite the positive write....smiles and laughter i think are what we all want. Excellent. Well done!
February 3rd, 2023 05:15
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Fay Slimm. said:
Smiles and laughter win every prize for lasting relationships and no doubt about it - and who would not take that \"double helping of joy, peace, love and hope\" - a positive write and inspiring read mon ami .....x
February 3rd, 2023 04:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Smiles and laughter win every prize for lasting relationships and no doubt about it - and who would not take that \"double helping of joy, peace, love and hope\" - a positive write and inspiring read mon ami .....x
February 3rd, 2023 04:12
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(it really doesn\'t take much
to put a smile on our face
or kind tones in our eyes
just a little openness, aside
a side serving of acceptance
and just like that
our slice of life, is that little bit
more sweet...)
February 3rd, 2023 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(it really doesn\'t take much
to put a smile on our face
or kind tones in our eyes
just a little openness, aside
a side serving of acceptance
and just like that
our slice of life, is that little bit
more sweet...)
February 3rd, 2023 04:05
Chasing the Carpet
L. B. Mek said:
we can word it as we may,
dear empathetic Hyung
\'chasing the carpet\'
\'chasing the bottom of a bottle\'
\'chase the escape
in a numbing, embrace..\'
and on...
pathetic, how some men out there
try to warp it in-to a gender fight
rather than, witnessing
a person, in need
a humane tragedy, unfolding..
I\'m ever astounded, at Gaia\'s
levels of tolerance
at a mere read of your words
my volcanic rage, is poised
to spew lava hate
February 3rd, 2023 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
we can word it as we may,
dear empathetic Hyung
\'chasing the carpet\'
\'chasing the bottom of a bottle\'
\'chase the escape
in a numbing, embrace..\'
and on...
pathetic, how some men out there
try to warp it in-to a gender fight
rather than, witnessing
a person, in need
a humane tragedy, unfolding..
I\'m ever astounded, at Gaia\'s
levels of tolerance
at a mere read of your words
my volcanic rage, is poised
to spew lava hate
February 3rd, 2023 04:02
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