Comments received on poems by Neville
Double Jeopardy
Draven said:
Haha, wow, so much spoken in such few words. I love poems like these. Well done.
January 28th, 2022 14:54
Draven said:
Haha, wow, so much spoken in such few words. I love poems like these. Well done.
January 28th, 2022 14:54
What it All Boils Down To
Draven said:
Nicely written and well formatted. :)
January 28th, 2022 14:52
Draven said:
Nicely written and well formatted. :)
January 28th, 2022 14:52
What it All Boils Down To
orchidee said:
A fine poetic piece. I will like it e\'ermore. I\'ve run out of \'v\'s on me keyboard, you will notice. lol.
January 28th, 2022 08:04
orchidee said:
A fine poetic piece. I will like it e\'ermore. I\'ve run out of \'v\'s on me keyboard, you will notice. lol.
January 28th, 2022 08:04
What it All Boils Down To
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Depicting
as it does, exquisite
yet still
inexcusable guilt
and yes, sublimely ..
Now etched
upon the minds of those
free wretches\'
(I can\'t help but wonder
how many thousands of write\'s
were binned, by impassioned obstinacy
in your strive, to accumulate
such wordsmith skill
for flawless, flow
and seamless, rhyming dexterity
in your, irresistible: Poetry!)
I simply bow, to your inking Mastery, my friend
January 28th, 2022 06:58
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'Depicting
as it does, exquisite
yet still
inexcusable guilt
and yes, sublimely ..
Now etched
upon the minds of those
free wretches\'
(I can\'t help but wonder
how many thousands of write\'s
were binned, by impassioned obstinacy
in your strive, to accumulate
such wordsmith skill
for flawless, flow
and seamless, rhyming dexterity
in your, irresistible: Poetry!)
I simply bow, to your inking Mastery, my friend
January 28th, 2022 06:58
What it All Boils Down To
spilleronsheet said:
The intense sin….the darkest crime…the love of ink stabbing the paper beside…spilling all over as the ink flows….such a grave crime but words so well stringed pleading the poet’s guilt….very skilfully crafted piece dear Neville….a thousands applaud
January 28th, 2022 06:11
spilleronsheet said:
The intense sin….the darkest crime…the love of ink stabbing the paper beside…spilling all over as the ink flows….such a grave crime but words so well stringed pleading the poet’s guilt….very skilfully crafted piece dear Neville….a thousands applaud
January 28th, 2022 06:11
What it All Boils Down To
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - you express so well the writing addition Nev. and I for one am guilty as charged. Poets world over love virgin pages for their sinful urge to leave unique marks. One for my faves as a witty reminder that I too have long needed that same daily fix.............x
January 28th, 2022 05:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - you express so well the writing addition Nev. and I for one am guilty as charged. Poets world over love virgin pages for their sinful urge to leave unique marks. One for my faves as a witty reminder that I too have long needed that same daily fix.............x
January 28th, 2022 05:15
Double Jeopardy
Rozina said:
Do unto others …..
So much said in so few words. Wonderful.
January 27th, 2022 08:39
Rozina said:
Do unto others …..
So much said in so few words. Wonderful.
January 27th, 2022 08:39
Double Jeopardy
dusk arising said:
Don\'t beat yourself up over this, she said, I\'ll gladly do that for you.
January 27th, 2022 08:25
dusk arising said:
Don\'t beat yourself up over this, she said, I\'ll gladly do that for you.
January 27th, 2022 08:25
Double Jeopardy
Buzz Bray said:
Wonderful use of language. Each word impactful. Wow!
January 27th, 2022 08:05
Buzz Bray said:
Wonderful use of language. Each word impactful. Wow!
January 27th, 2022 08:05
Double Jeopardy
L. B. Mek said:
I always feel sorry for those
that hate me
for they begin, so belatedly
or maybe, its just that
I began, so despairingly early..
(a great write!
you lead, I will strive
to follow, dear Masterful Poet)
January 27th, 2022 07:07
L. B. Mek said:
I always feel sorry for those
that hate me
for they begin, so belatedly
or maybe, its just that
I began, so despairingly early..
(a great write!
you lead, I will strive
to follow, dear Masterful Poet)
January 27th, 2022 07:07
Double Jeopardy
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, spread the beating around, and who knows, when the beating finally ends, just restart it.
January 27th, 2022 07:07
Paul Bell said:
Definitely, spread the beating around, and who knows, when the beating finally ends, just restart it.
January 27th, 2022 07:07
Conveniently Forgot
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It’s better to realise even though late
I breathed for myself
And it wasn’t granted by you
Loving thyself before than others
Thanks dear Neville for reminding these words in such gentle way
January 27th, 2022 05:51
spilleronsheet said:
So true
It’s better to realise even though late
I breathed for myself
And it wasn’t granted by you
Loving thyself before than others
Thanks dear Neville for reminding these words in such gentle way
January 27th, 2022 05:51
Double Jeopardy
spilleronsheet said:
The loose black coats and the enormous courts told a tale of the prisoner locked up twice in jail for the same mistake of waking late
Another great write dear Neville
A witty poetry you laced
A satire at the pen’s mistake
January 27th, 2022 05:49
spilleronsheet said:
The loose black coats and the enormous courts told a tale of the prisoner locked up twice in jail for the same mistake of waking late
Another great write dear Neville
A witty poetry you laced
A satire at the pen’s mistake
January 27th, 2022 05:49
Double Jeopardy
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We treat others a certain way , then get angry when they do the same to us . So why treat others a certain way , if we hate it so much ?
January 27th, 2022 05:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
We treat others a certain way , then get angry when they do the same to us . So why treat others a certain way , if we hate it so much ?
January 27th, 2022 05:30
Double Jeopardy
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some U.S.law-breakers - - - - am still chuckling at the scene your pen paints today Nev. - - and well if that takes your fancy am handing you the wooden spoon now................x
January 27th, 2022 05:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -such a fun interpretation of that fashionable clause among some U.S.law-breakers - - - - am still chuckling at the scene your pen paints today Nev. - - and well if that takes your fancy am handing you the wooden spoon now................x
January 27th, 2022 05:12
Conveniently Forgot
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a well composed lament to one who may not yet get it and a belated back-hander to boot Nev. - love can be painful if it\'s one-sided - or that\'s how I see this fine piece of poemed confession............ x
January 26th, 2022 06:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a well composed lament to one who may not yet get it and a belated back-hander to boot Nev. - love can be painful if it\'s one-sided - or that\'s how I see this fine piece of poemed confession............ x
January 26th, 2022 06:21
Conveniently Forgot
Rozina said:
Partially alive until gradually building up self as a whole person again. I think the person who leaves does not \'see\' this nor care?
January 26th, 2022 04:25
Rozina said:
Partially alive until gradually building up self as a whole person again. I think the person who leaves does not \'see\' this nor care?
January 26th, 2022 04:25
Conveniently Forgot
dusk arising said:
Cor, this can be read several ways, either with a relationship or after one has split up. The last one of mine to split up gave me a huge sense of freedom to my own existence and lifestyle back.
Re-read your words a couple of times (im sure you do this ambiguous trick on purpose) and now i\'m thinking it\'s aimed at a self centred selfish lady.
Well, certainly a head scratcher of a post, which is a good thing for a dunce like me.
January 26th, 2022 04:11
dusk arising said:
Cor, this can be read several ways, either with a relationship or after one has split up. The last one of mine to split up gave me a huge sense of freedom to my own existence and lifestyle back.
Re-read your words a couple of times (im sure you do this ambiguous trick on purpose) and now i\'m thinking it\'s aimed at a self centred selfish lady.
Well, certainly a head scratcher of a post, which is a good thing for a dunce like me.
January 26th, 2022 04:11
Conveniently Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, we will always exist.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 04:03
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, we will always exist.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 04:03
Conveniently Forgot
orchidee said:
I did not \'forget\' to say good write N.
January 26th, 2022 03:58
orchidee said:
I did not \'forget\' to say good write N.
January 26th, 2022 03:58
Conveniently Forgot
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s painful to be apart from someone you love .
A good expression , of how much sadness you can feel
January 26th, 2022 03:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
It’s painful to be apart from someone you love .
A good expression , of how much sadness you can feel
January 26th, 2022 03:53
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Doggerel Dave said:
Got \'em all going there, Nev...... (including Yrs Truly)...... Me? - Who? What? Why? How? - I have no answers to any of it. Doesn\'t hurt to ask though - just don\'t expect any of those answers.
Your \'maybe(s)\' say it all....😊 Your favorite word?
PS: Enjoyed the piece v. much.
January 26th, 2022 00:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Got \'em all going there, Nev...... (including Yrs Truly)...... Me? - Who? What? Why? How? - I have no answers to any of it. Doesn\'t hurt to ask though - just don\'t expect any of those answers.
Your \'maybe(s)\' say it all....😊 Your favorite word?
PS: Enjoyed the piece v. much.
January 26th, 2022 00:13
Now Pinned to the Sky
Dove said:
Heartfelt & Sad! The cruelty of war, and the hearts with holes within!
Awe, dear one you made me sigh
January 25th, 2022 10:52
Dove said:
Heartfelt & Sad! The cruelty of war, and the hearts with holes within!
Awe, dear one you made me sigh
January 25th, 2022 10:52
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Rozina said:
Powerful lines. Really good write.
January 21st, 2022 22:43
Rozina said:
Powerful lines. Really good write.
January 21st, 2022 22:43
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
spilleronsheet said:
So very true
A true religion in spirits is one which talks about enlightenment and rationality rather than bigotry
Good one dear Neville
January 21st, 2022 17:55
spilleronsheet said:
So very true
A true religion in spirits is one which talks about enlightenment and rationality rather than bigotry
Good one dear Neville
January 21st, 2022 17:55
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Paul Bell said:
I\'m all for religion, and if it gets you through the day, great, just don\'t inflict it on me. In saying that, that hot chick who did try to convert me. The little devil in me nearly let you.
January 21st, 2022 08:28
Paul Bell said:
I\'m all for religion, and if it gets you through the day, great, just don\'t inflict it on me. In saying that, that hot chick who did try to convert me. The little devil in me nearly let you.
January 21st, 2022 08:28
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
L. B. Mek said:
(once again, after finishing my selfish scribble
I must come back to the top
and insure I thank you, dear Poet
for these words you shared
and the inspiration they gifted me
to ink these feeble thoughts below.
Humbly, sincerely I thank you
what a gift to receive!)
that oh so
conveniently, contagious
\'religion\' of warped victimhood\'s:
\'Nihilism\'...
(tell them, to believe in anything
including themselves
and they cringe;
ask them what they choose, instead
they scream: \'renunciation\' of everything and anything;
ask them, why
and watch them sleep, without reply
through
their endless hangovers
as if life\'s too easy, to put in
any effort
\'simply let it be\' they whizz out
between that puff-puff - pass
cyclical routine of their lives...)
and how did we get here
because we let amateur \'Gardner\'s\'
rule over our life\'s petals of opportunity, changing
their names every few elections
in our aesthetic of a democracy..
and allowed
their incompetent green finger (of greed):
to Yank-out
all of our Integrity and Morality
when they rid us
of that theological, fog
of fear oppressed, mentality...
so now we\'re left swimming in all that:
\'darkness
the fear of it
and
what once
was hid within\'
now, free to seep-in, a little deeper
with every lethargic breath
of sans
they delude themselves
as being
the only things, sincere and free
in their
anxiety oppressed lives...
January 21st, 2022 07:44
L. B. Mek said:
(once again, after finishing my selfish scribble
I must come back to the top
and insure I thank you, dear Poet
for these words you shared
and the inspiration they gifted me
to ink these feeble thoughts below.
Humbly, sincerely I thank you
what a gift to receive!)
that oh so
conveniently, contagious
\'religion\' of warped victimhood\'s:
\'Nihilism\'...
(tell them, to believe in anything
including themselves
and they cringe;
ask them what they choose, instead
they scream: \'renunciation\' of everything and anything;
ask them, why
and watch them sleep, without reply
through
their endless hangovers
as if life\'s too easy, to put in
any effort
\'simply let it be\' they whizz out
between that puff-puff - pass
cyclical routine of their lives...)
and how did we get here
because we let amateur \'Gardner\'s\'
rule over our life\'s petals of opportunity, changing
their names every few elections
in our aesthetic of a democracy..
and allowed
their incompetent green finger (of greed):
to Yank-out
all of our Integrity and Morality
when they rid us
of that theological, fog
of fear oppressed, mentality...
so now we\'re left swimming in all that:
\'darkness
the fear of it
and
what once
was hid within\'
now, free to seep-in, a little deeper
with every lethargic breath
of sans
they delude themselves
as being
the only things, sincere and free
in their
anxiety oppressed lives...
January 21st, 2022 07:44
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Poetic Dan said:
Yep, we are all in the dark but most are afraid to admit and find more sensible ideas between those crazy lines!
The dance of life is now and each of us has a beautiful one to unfold before we get to old.
Cheers for that my friend, keep up the write
January 21st, 2022 07:43
Poetic Dan said:
Yep, we are all in the dark but most are afraid to admit and find more sensible ideas between those crazy lines!
The dance of life is now and each of us has a beautiful one to unfold before we get to old.
Cheers for that my friend, keep up the write
January 21st, 2022 07:43
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