Comments received on poems by Neville
Marina Girls
Goldfinch60 said:
You touch many hearts with your poetry Neville.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
You touch many hearts with your poetry Neville.
Andy
January 7th, 2023 02:49
Marina Girls
Bella Shepard said:
The olfactory is such a powerful sense, how with just the hint of a scent we can be transported, without even realizing it, to another place, another time. A sweet poem of reminiscence with the smell of love in the air. Lovely my friend!
January 6th, 2023 14:15
Bella Shepard said:
The olfactory is such a powerful sense, how with just the hint of a scent we can be transported, without even realizing it, to another place, another time. A sweet poem of reminiscence with the smell of love in the air. Lovely my friend!
January 6th, 2023 14:15
Marina Girls
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah those scents of the sea bring back the most seductive memories Nev. - - your lines remind me of those nights of gone dreams and the harbour boys who left us girls breathless..
January 6th, 2023 11:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah those scents of the sea bring back the most seductive memories Nev. - - your lines remind me of those nights of gone dreams and the harbour boys who left us girls breathless..
January 6th, 2023 11:44
Marina Girls
L. B. Mek said:
(if Poesy, had a physical form
I too think it would be in the guise
of effervescent mermaids:
\'beguilingly, illusive and endlessly
imbued with beatific sincerity
seeped, deep
in intensely, intuitive sensuality
that wisdom of feminine grace
and humane, empathy\')
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
I\'m just lucky you don\'t charge me
for endlessly inspiring
these humble scribbles of mine, Hyung
thank you!
January 6th, 2023 07:34
L. B. Mek said:
(if Poesy, had a physical form
I too think it would be in the guise
of effervescent mermaids:
\'beguilingly, illusive and endlessly
imbued with beatific sincerity
seeped, deep
in intensely, intuitive sensuality
that wisdom of feminine grace
and humane, empathy\')
Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
I\'m just lucky you don\'t charge me
for endlessly inspiring
these humble scribbles of mine, Hyung
thank you!
January 6th, 2023 07:34
Marina Girls
orchidee said:
Good write N. Was KP one of those gals?! lol. Well, I never hardly see her. Dunno where she goes most of the time. lol.
January 6th, 2023 06:53
orchidee said:
Good write N. Was KP one of those gals?! lol. Well, I never hardly see her. Dunno where she goes most of the time. lol.
January 6th, 2023 06:53
New Wine From Old Vines
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed
we must first survive our winter\'s, to earn
those comforting sips
of our life\'s warming mulled wine, mementos\'
(so relatable and worded accessible
a great write, Hyung
loved that subtle smooth jazz tonality
to your pacing and rhythm)
January 6th, 2023 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'indeed
we must first survive our winter\'s, to earn
those comforting sips
of our life\'s warming mulled wine, mementos\'
(so relatable and worded accessible
a great write, Hyung
loved that subtle smooth jazz tonality
to your pacing and rhythm)
January 6th, 2023 05:20
Amelie
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful smile
you and your family must be so very proud,
I pray fate shines only the kindest gaze
upon her long and fruitful, future..
(book will be purchased
and devoured, from first
to last alphabet)
Congrat\'s Hyung! how inspirational
what a great way to start my year\'s reading
220, you spoiled us, worth the wait!
👏🍻😎
January 6th, 2023 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful smile
you and your family must be so very proud,
I pray fate shines only the kindest gaze
upon her long and fruitful, future..
(book will be purchased
and devoured, from first
to last alphabet)
Congrat\'s Hyung! how inspirational
what a great way to start my year\'s reading
220, you spoiled us, worth the wait!
👏🍻😎
January 6th, 2023 05:14
The Most Perfect Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'manipulate
undulating
bespoke
template\'
just wonderfully worded
(if they ever write a tell-all guideline to romance
they\'ve got to include these lived-in words of wisdom)
lol
thanks for sharing Hyung
January 6th, 2023 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'manipulate
undulating
bespoke
template\'
just wonderfully worded
(if they ever write a tell-all guideline to romance
they\'ve got to include these lived-in words of wisdom)
lol
thanks for sharing Hyung
January 6th, 2023 05:05
When We Were Hot
L. B. Mek said:
\'And my word,
how we did then shine ..
Both hot
and furnace bright ..\'
(tattooing those youthful sunshine skies
with the trails of our realised dreams
oh how we did fly, high
scorching our wings of love, for a lifetime)
absolutely loved your poem Hyung
thank you!
January 6th, 2023 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'And my word,
how we did then shine ..
Both hot
and furnace bright ..\'
(tattooing those youthful sunshine skies
with the trails of our realised dreams
oh how we did fly, high
scorching our wings of love, for a lifetime)
absolutely loved your poem Hyung
thank you!
January 6th, 2023 04:59
New Wine From Old Vines
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine is a glass of Rioja please Neville. 🍷🍷🍷
Andy
January 6th, 2023 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Mine is a glass of Rioja please Neville. 🍷🍷🍷
Andy
January 6th, 2023 02:33
New Wine From Old Vines
Fay Slimm. said:
An intoxicating read and no doubt that if old vines can grow new shoots young love will flourish again. I am taken with every line of your chosen metaphor mon ami. First class writing,.
January 4th, 2023 13:40
Fay Slimm. said:
An intoxicating read and no doubt that if old vines can grow new shoots young love will flourish again. I am taken with every line of your chosen metaphor mon ami. First class writing,.
January 4th, 2023 13:40
New Wine From Old Vines
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful way to say love never grows old. That fine, mellow wine warms and intoxicates in the very best way. Thank you for this lovely image!
January 4th, 2023 12:22
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful way to say love never grows old. That fine, mellow wine warms and intoxicates in the very best way. Thank you for this lovely image!
January 4th, 2023 12:22
Amelie
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words for a very good cause Neville. I have ordered \"Somewhere Behind These Eyes\".
Andy
January 3rd, 2023 03:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words for a very good cause Neville. I have ordered \"Somewhere Behind These Eyes\".
Andy
January 3rd, 2023 03:11
Amelie
Fay Slimm. said:
Courage shines from Amelie\'s sweet smile and wishes for her healthy recovery wing straight from here to this brave little lady as I read of her recent surgery. These worthy causes are high on my list too dear Nev - am on the way to purchase another of those titles and will be telling all of my friends too. Bless you and the rest of the kin-folk as you wait in hopeful trust that Amelie\'s treatment in Germany will aid her return to her family soon fully restored and happily smiling once more .........x
January 2nd, 2023 16:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Courage shines from Amelie\'s sweet smile and wishes for her healthy recovery wing straight from here to this brave little lady as I read of her recent surgery. These worthy causes are high on my list too dear Nev - am on the way to purchase another of those titles and will be telling all of my friends too. Bless you and the rest of the kin-folk as you wait in hopeful trust that Amelie\'s treatment in Germany will aid her return to her family soon fully restored and happily smiling once more .........x
January 2nd, 2023 16:54
Amelie
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful poem for such a beautiful little girl. That such a cruel disease should strike anyone is heart breaking, but to touch a child doubly so. I admire your commitment to these causes and all that you do for them. I\'ve ordered \"Turquoise & Other Shades of Blue\" and can\'t wait to read it. God bless you and sweet little Amelie, wishing her all the best.
January 2nd, 2023 14:39
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful poem for such a beautiful little girl. That such a cruel disease should strike anyone is heart breaking, but to touch a child doubly so. I admire your commitment to these causes and all that you do for them. I\'ve ordered \"Turquoise & Other Shades of Blue\" and can\'t wait to read it. God bless you and sweet little Amelie, wishing her all the best.
January 2nd, 2023 14:39
Amelie
orchidee said:
A poignant write Neville.
Meanwhile in my ridiculously less comparable way to this - a publisher and I fell out about \'alway\'. They said, erm, dunno about that. Reckon it should be \'always\'. Don\'t these people know what \'poetic\' means? Doh!
January 2nd, 2023 09:06
orchidee said:
A poignant write Neville.
Meanwhile in my ridiculously less comparable way to this - a publisher and I fell out about \'alway\'. They said, erm, dunno about that. Reckon it should be \'always\'. Don\'t these people know what \'poetic\' means? Doh!
January 2nd, 2023 09:06
The Most Perfect Love
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love remain perfect Neville,
Andy
January 2nd, 2023 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love remain perfect Neville,
Andy
January 2nd, 2023 02:49
The Most Perfect Love
Bella Shepard said:
As the song says \"Love is a many Splendored thing\", and you have captured the essence of it so beautifully in this poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
January 1st, 2023 12:06
Bella Shepard said:
As the song says \"Love is a many Splendored thing\", and you have captured the essence of it so beautifully in this poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
January 1st, 2023 12:06
The Most Perfect Love
Fay Slimm. said:
The perfection of loving relationships so expertly here captured brings me near tears - - a sigh of a read for the first day of new year - -thanks most dearly for sharing these lines Nev.
January 1st, 2023 06:23
Fay Slimm. said:
The perfection of loving relationships so expertly here captured brings me near tears - - a sigh of a read for the first day of new year - -thanks most dearly for sharing these lines Nev.
January 1st, 2023 06:23
When We Were Hot
Caring dove said:
Nice writing .. especially like the last line ‘ furnace bright ‘ that’s lovely
December 31st, 2022 17:01
Caring dove said:
Nice writing .. especially like the last line ‘ furnace bright ‘ that’s lovely
December 31st, 2022 17:01
When We Were Hot
Bella Shepard said:
\"Hot and furnace bright\", what could be more wonderful. To have such memories kept within the mind and heart, is to have a place where one does not grow old, and love is forever young. Beautiful my dear friend.
December 31st, 2022 15:23
Bella Shepard said:
\"Hot and furnace bright\", what could be more wonderful. To have such memories kept within the mind and heart, is to have a place where one does not grow old, and love is forever young. Beautiful my dear friend.
December 31st, 2022 15:23
When We Were Hot
arqios said:
The hotness takes on a variant characteristic at other life stages. But those ones in the memory bank they are the golden recollections.
December 31st, 2022 05:41
arqios said:
The hotness takes on a variant characteristic at other life stages. But those ones in the memory bank they are the golden recollections.
December 31st, 2022 05:41
When We Were Hot
orchidee said:
Hot? Fido is about to save me from a swoon! lol.
December 31st, 2022 03:03
orchidee said:
Hot? Fido is about to save me from a swoon! lol.
December 31st, 2022 03:03
What Wasted Words They Proved Themselves to Be
Goldfinch60 said:
I often wonder what happened to the words I did not use Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
I often wonder what happened to the words I did not use Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:53
When We Were Hot
Goldfinch60 said:
Those days will never be forgotten Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Those days will never be forgotten Neville.
Andy
December 31st, 2022 02:45
When We Were Hot
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah those were the days mon ami eh ? - - - nothing like love to keep winter at bay and you pen the heat of it to sheer perfection.
December 31st, 2022 01:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah those were the days mon ami eh ? - - - nothing like love to keep winter at bay and you pen the heat of it to sheer perfection.
December 31st, 2022 01:10
What a Bloody Waste
Bella Shepard said:
The tragic irony of this poem, is that it highlights the absurdity of life. Here is a prime example, well written dear friend.
December 30th, 2022 17:49
Bella Shepard said:
The tragic irony of this poem, is that it highlights the absurdity of life. Here is a prime example, well written dear friend.
December 30th, 2022 17:49
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