Comments received on poems by Neville
Oedipus
Fay Slimm. said:
Oedipus would never prosper by taking up that odious offer - at least in my Chronicles - - mind you I like a bit of poetic history delivered thy way mine clever Sir Neville.
March 10th, 2022 09:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Oedipus would never prosper by taking up that odious offer - at least in my Chronicles - - mind you I like a bit of poetic history delivered thy way mine clever Sir Neville.
March 10th, 2022 09:52
Oedipus
Christina8 said:
Excellent write dear Neville...It gave me a giggle but you can never go wrong with the classics!
March 10th, 2022 09:30
Christina8 said:
Excellent write dear Neville...It gave me a giggle but you can never go wrong with the classics!
March 10th, 2022 09:30
Oedipus
L. B. Mek said:
\'but don\'t try this at home folks ..\'
(if only Freud, had heeded these words
how much of psychology\'s
mind fckery
he could have saved us, literally...)
lmao
\'blame it all, on that oracle at Delphi
and those inheritors of life\'s, guessing games
questing Poet\'s and and philosophical sages\'
(loved the humour, you squeezed
out of this morose tragedy, inking of poetic ill-fate)
March 10th, 2022 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'but don\'t try this at home folks ..\'
(if only Freud, had heeded these words
how much of psychology\'s
mind fckery
he could have saved us, literally...)
lmao
\'blame it all, on that oracle at Delphi
and those inheritors of life\'s, guessing games
questing Poet\'s and and philosophical sages\'
(loved the humour, you squeezed
out of this morose tragedy, inking of poetic ill-fate)
March 10th, 2022 05:40
Oedipus
Rozina said:
But this complex is a crucial stage in normal development - you’ve just destroyed it! Hehe!
March 10th, 2022 04:38
Rozina said:
But this complex is a crucial stage in normal development - you’ve just destroyed it! Hehe!
March 10th, 2022 04:38
Oedipus
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Neville - wot about a video? Why not go to yusporn or ask one of orchi\'s hamsters?
March 10th, 2022 03:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Neville - wot about a video? Why not go to yusporn or ask one of orchi\'s hamsters?
March 10th, 2022 03:28
Oedipus
Goldfinch60 said:
No won’t try that, my mother has been dead for ten years.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
No won’t try that, my mother has been dead for ten years.
Andy
March 10th, 2022 02:57
Fore and Aft
spilleronsheet said:
Felt to me it was the horizon
Where the sky loves the earth below
Don’t know but why it felt so heavenly sweet
Good one dear Neville
March 9th, 2022 14:32
spilleronsheet said:
Felt to me it was the horizon
Where the sky loves the earth below
Don’t know but why it felt so heavenly sweet
Good one dear Neville
March 9th, 2022 14:32
Fore and Aft
Christina8 said:
Sounds to me like a perfect relationship, N! Great write!
March 9th, 2022 08:35
Christina8 said:
Sounds to me like a perfect relationship, N! Great write!
March 9th, 2022 08:35
Fore and Aft
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught like those spicey ups and downs to keep life afloat - that\'s what I say ............. x
March 9th, 2022 06:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught like those spicey ups and downs to keep life afloat - that\'s what I say ............. x
March 9th, 2022 06:35
Same Old Blue Jeans
Rozina said:
Spent beauty.... sigh! Hair dropping, wrinkles appearing, age spots increasing, muscle tone losing, new dentures, height falling, but can still fit into those old blue jeans!
March 9th, 2022 05:02
Rozina said:
Spent beauty.... sigh! Hair dropping, wrinkles appearing, age spots increasing, muscle tone losing, new dentures, height falling, but can still fit into those old blue jeans!
March 9th, 2022 05:02
Fore and Aft
dusk arising said:
All those ups and downs.... like a country road in fine weather.... a time to relax and enjoy the ride.
Fore and aft with nothing more than a surface ripple to tease and such rich picking beneath the surface. How she loves to be in his keep net when he has his tackle out.
March 9th, 2022 02:29
dusk arising said:
All those ups and downs.... like a country road in fine weather.... a time to relax and enjoy the ride.
Fore and aft with nothing more than a surface ripple to tease and such rich picking beneath the surface. How she loves to be in his keep net when he has his tackle out.
March 9th, 2022 02:29
Same Old Blue Jeans
Goldfinch60 said:
Acceptance of what we have become is so important in our lives as it takes us into a place of peace within ourselves.
Andy
March 9th, 2022 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Acceptance of what we have become is so important in our lives as it takes us into a place of peace within ourselves.
Andy
March 9th, 2022 02:06
Same Old Blue Jeans
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot flares? Do try to hang onto them just a little longer.... they will be back... not that I\'ll be wearing them ...as impractical as those tight ankle jobs that are still around now....
Thanks Nev - I\'ve been wanting to get my frustration re changing fashion for some (a very) long time...
March 8th, 2022 18:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot flares? Do try to hang onto them just a little longer.... they will be back... not that I\'ll be wearing them ...as impractical as those tight ankle jobs that are still around now....
Thanks Nev - I\'ve been wanting to get my frustration re changing fashion for some (a very) long time...
March 8th, 2022 18:09
Same Old Blue Jeans
Christina8 said:
Spent beauty sucks for everyone but hey. if you can still get in your old favorite pair of blue jeans....thats epic! A great write dear N!
March 8th, 2022 17:09
Christina8 said:
Spent beauty sucks for everyone but hey. if you can still get in your old favorite pair of blue jeans....thats epic! A great write dear N!
March 8th, 2022 17:09
Same Old Blue Jeans
dusk arising said:
Time was back in the sixties when we all wore denim jeans and denim jackets, faded of course. A look I still admire and have the clobber to prove it though, just as you suggest, one doesnt strike the same presence as all those years ago. now where did I park my Lambretta.
March 8th, 2022 13:06
dusk arising said:
Time was back in the sixties when we all wore denim jeans and denim jackets, faded of course. A look I still admire and have the clobber to prove it though, just as you suggest, one doesnt strike the same presence as all those years ago. now where did I park my Lambretta.
March 8th, 2022 13:06
Same Old Blue Jeans
orchidee said:
Now, did I meet any gals in blue jeans?!
I wish I would shut up a while sometimes. lol.
March 8th, 2022 11:30
orchidee said:
Now, did I meet any gals in blue jeans?!
I wish I would shut up a while sometimes. lol.
March 8th, 2022 11:30
Same Old Blue Jeans
Fay Slimm. said:
Once in those jeans time becomes ageless life becomes high again and hair grows overnight - - so sages say - - - - and mirrors cant show us that love is forever - - a reflective verse Nev..............x
March 8th, 2022 11:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Once in those jeans time becomes ageless life becomes high again and hair grows overnight - - so sages say - - - - and mirrors cant show us that love is forever - - a reflective verse Nev..............x
March 8th, 2022 11:30
How Well Will You Remember Me
Rozina said:
Someone will without doubt. A family member, a friend, a colleague, admin, MPS poets for sure! Yes, don\'t go anywhere yet!
March 7th, 2022 22:47
Rozina said:
Someone will without doubt. A family member, a friend, a colleague, admin, MPS poets for sure! Yes, don\'t go anywhere yet!
March 7th, 2022 22:47
How Well Will You Remember Me
SureshG said:
I fear I know too well, so I dare not even ask -
but knowing the poet in you, you shall be remembered well
March 7th, 2022 17:23
SureshG said:
I fear I know too well, so I dare not even ask -
but knowing the poet in you, you shall be remembered well
March 7th, 2022 17:23
How Well Will You Remember Me
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your caring, your good deeds, (🕯), your six poetry books, etc. will not allow for you to be forgotten … you’ll be remembered well and……….fondly! ☺️
Laura🌻
March 7th, 2022 17:22
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your caring, your good deeds, (🕯), your six poetry books, etc. will not allow for you to be forgotten … you’ll be remembered well and……….fondly! ☺️
Laura🌻
March 7th, 2022 17:22
No Ordinary Woman
Alexander Pope III said:
Neville , fewer words but with lots of power.
March 7th, 2022 10:11
Alexander Pope III said:
Neville , fewer words but with lots of power.
March 7th, 2022 10:11
How Well Will You Remember Me
Christina8 said:
I actually feel such feelings too as my mother died somewhat young. You shall be remembered fondly, I\'m sure. Those around you that love you will be changed forever. Don\'t go anywhere soon, we\'re sure to miss your wonderful poetry!...C
March 7th, 2022 09:43
Christina8 said:
I actually feel such feelings too as my mother died somewhat young. You shall be remembered fondly, I\'m sure. Those around you that love you will be changed forever. Don\'t go anywhere soon, we\'re sure to miss your wonderful poetry!...C
March 7th, 2022 09:43
How Well Will You Remember Me
Rocky Lagou said:
Very forceful poem and I feel like this all the time. The feeling of being forgotten!
March 7th, 2022 09:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Very forceful poem and I feel like this all the time. The feeling of being forgotten!
March 7th, 2022 09:16
How Well Will You Remember Me
Poetic Dan said:
I know what I\'ll remember and it\'s not between the sheets!
A tip top poetic sailor, I even had the pleasure to meet. Sharing a love for a scruffy tail, carry our hearts for all to see!
Just saying..... that is..
Great work
March 7th, 2022 09:13
Poetic Dan said:
I know what I\'ll remember and it\'s not between the sheets!
A tip top poetic sailor, I even had the pleasure to meet. Sharing a love for a scruffy tail, carry our hearts for all to see!
Just saying..... that is..
Great work
March 7th, 2022 09:13
No Ordinary Woman
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a message so true. We\'re all atypical beings!
March 7th, 2022 09:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow what a message so true. We\'re all atypical beings!
March 7th, 2022 09:13
How Well Will You Remember Me
dusk arising said:
Yes I wonder these things too, but it must be so if true love was involved.
Indeed I\'m reminded of the time when I discovered that the young lady singing in a group i was playing with disclosed to me that she was the daughter of one of my old flames and had heard such wonderful stories about me as only a mother would share with her daughter. My head swelled - and I wrote poetry.
March 7th, 2022 07:40
dusk arising said:
Yes I wonder these things too, but it must be so if true love was involved.
Indeed I\'m reminded of the time when I discovered that the young lady singing in a group i was playing with disclosed to me that she was the daughter of one of my old flames and had heard such wonderful stories about me as only a mother would share with her daughter. My head swelled - and I wrote poetry.
March 7th, 2022 07:40
How Well Will You Remember Me
L. B. Mek said:
in one of my older scribbles
I remember writing
\'I shall keep that promise
I broke, while at your side\'
(or something like that)
and that\'s what essence you imbue
in these words, I think
a yearning
for us not, to become
yet another source
of hurt
to the ones, we once
loved, so earnestly
with all our heart...
(as-ever your subtlety
just drips between my defenceless cracks
and bleeds my bruises anew
staining my scars, a little darker
while reminding me of my fallibility
and reaffirming my choices
to become, that better me
I strive to find..)
simply beautiful honesty and bravery
being showcased in your poetry, dear empathetic Poet
March 7th, 2022 07:15
L. B. Mek said:
in one of my older scribbles
I remember writing
\'I shall keep that promise
I broke, while at your side\'
(or something like that)
and that\'s what essence you imbue
in these words, I think
a yearning
for us not, to become
yet another source
of hurt
to the ones, we once
loved, so earnestly
with all our heart...
(as-ever your subtlety
just drips between my defenceless cracks
and bleeds my bruises anew
staining my scars, a little darker
while reminding me of my fallibility
and reaffirming my choices
to become, that better me
I strive to find..)
simply beautiful honesty and bravery
being showcased in your poetry, dear empathetic Poet
March 7th, 2022 07:15
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