Comments received on poems by Neville
Fear of Flying Solo
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sensitive write Neville.
Andy
December 22nd, 2022 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sensitive write Neville.
Andy
December 22nd, 2022 02:23
Fear of Flying Solo
Bella Shepard said:
I see love, commitment, selflessness all wrapped up in this touching poem. The willingness to sacrifice for the good of another, whatever the cost, is true devotion. Beautifully written dear friend.
December 21st, 2022 14:38
Bella Shepard said:
I see love, commitment, selflessness all wrapped up in this touching poem. The willingness to sacrifice for the good of another, whatever the cost, is true devotion. Beautifully written dear friend.
December 21st, 2022 14:38
Fear of Flying Solo
orchidee said:
Doh! None of this applies to me and KP. I let her fly solo whenever she wants. I never hardly see her these days anyway! lol.
December 21st, 2022 11:12
orchidee said:
Doh! None of this applies to me and KP. I let her fly solo whenever she wants. I never hardly see her these days anyway! lol.
December 21st, 2022 11:12
Fear of Flying Solo
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m torn apart by this one, Nev.
On one hand I have an absolute conviction that he should have his way without question.
But, but, but maybe, just maybe........
December 21st, 2022 06:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m torn apart by this one, Nev.
On one hand I have an absolute conviction that he should have his way without question.
But, but, but maybe, just maybe........
December 21st, 2022 06:49
Fear of Flying Solo
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s effect shines deeply in this sensitive write on how to guide loved ones through the flight of finality. - - a truly potent read Nev.........x
December 21st, 2022 05:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Love\'s effect shines deeply in this sensitive write on how to guide loved ones through the flight of finality. - - a truly potent read Nev.........x
December 21st, 2022 05:27
As a Matter of Fact It’s a Fact
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville.
All the best for you Neville.
Andy
December 21st, 2022 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville.
All the best for you Neville.
Andy
December 21st, 2022 02:19
As a Matter of Fact It’s a Fact
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s a Christmas card (never send \'em - is that why I don\'t get any?)
Facebook ? A mirror in book form? All news to me......
December 20th, 2022 05:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s a Christmas card (never send \'em - is that why I don\'t get any?)
Facebook ? A mirror in book form? All news to me......
December 20th, 2022 05:50
As a Matter of Fact It’s a Fact
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha -- Well that is so true when you put it like that - - and here was I thinking its more likely the postal strike this year - -- so here\'s wishing you season\'s best too via the net my dear friend...............x
December 20th, 2022 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha -- Well that is so true when you put it like that - - and here was I thinking its more likely the postal strike this year - -- so here\'s wishing you season\'s best too via the net my dear friend...............x
December 20th, 2022 04:44
The Things One Remembers
L. B. Mek said:
get well soon, Hyung
being drowned in tissue stuffed red noses
and watery, rubbed purple eyes
is the worst
at this festive time of year
still, it does help
that you can always take an extra sip or two
of the strong stuff
you know... purely for medicinal reasons
\'ahem\'
(and I always wanted to visit a traditional cookout place in the south
a place where they sale kilos of bright red flavoured softshell fish in plastic bags
and hickory smoked, everything)
lol
December 19th, 2022 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
get well soon, Hyung
being drowned in tissue stuffed red noses
and watery, rubbed purple eyes
is the worst
at this festive time of year
still, it does help
that you can always take an extra sip or two
of the strong stuff
you know... purely for medicinal reasons
\'ahem\'
(and I always wanted to visit a traditional cookout place in the south
a place where they sale kilos of bright red flavoured softshell fish in plastic bags
and hickory smoked, everything)
lol
December 19th, 2022 04:34
On the Verge of Another New Year
L. B. Mek said:
as much a prayer, as a poem of awareness
Amen!
may fate afford as much kindness
to those
most in need of a little reprieve...
bless your kind heart, Hyung
a sentiment empathetically worded, at this challenging time of year
December 19th, 2022 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
as much a prayer, as a poem of awareness
Amen!
may fate afford as much kindness
to those
most in need of a little reprieve...
bless your kind heart, Hyung
a sentiment empathetically worded, at this challenging time of year
December 19th, 2022 04:26
On the Verge of Another New Year
Doggerel Dave said:
I doubt any Xmas card publisher would buy it, Nev (you may have to keep your day job for a while yet), but it certainly has a certain resonance for me.
December 19th, 2022 02:30
Doggerel Dave said:
I doubt any Xmas card publisher would buy it, Nev (you may have to keep your day job for a while yet), but it certainly has a certain resonance for me.
December 19th, 2022 02:30
The Things One Remembers
Doggerel Dave said:
Cheering the crawfish, Nev - Glad the delirium has dissipated.
December 18th, 2022 17:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Cheering the crawfish, Nev - Glad the delirium has dissipated.
December 18th, 2022 17:38
The Things One Remembers
Fay Slimm. said:
Well they say sweat of infection releases strange dreams Nev.. You well pen here what delirium produces - True or not I\'m glad that poor crawfish proved viral heat can be cruelly hot..............x
December 18th, 2022 07:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Well they say sweat of infection releases strange dreams Nev.. You well pen here what delirium produces - True or not I\'m glad that poor crawfish proved viral heat can be cruelly hot..............x
December 18th, 2022 07:14
The Things One Remembers
orchidee said:
I remember - I was delirious too. When KP was home for a week - an actual whole week! I never see her hardly now in person. lol.
December 18th, 2022 05:38
orchidee said:
I remember - I was delirious too. When KP was home for a week - an actual whole week! I never see her hardly now in person. lol.
December 18th, 2022 05:38
On the Verge of Another New Year
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe we just start the new year with an act of kindness or love and see where it can take us? I sometimes fantasize that if the whole of mankind did a kind act all at the same time it could change the world. You strike at the conscience dear friend, right where we need to be hit. Bravo!
December 17th, 2022 15:46
Bella Shepard said:
Maybe we just start the new year with an act of kindness or love and see where it can take us? I sometimes fantasize that if the whole of mankind did a kind act all at the same time it could change the world. You strike at the conscience dear friend, right where we need to be hit. Bravo!
December 17th, 2022 15:46
On the Verge of Another New Year
Fay Slimm. said:
Your well rhymed lines strike the right chords better than any media reports my caring friend - - how sad the same hopeless conditions many folk face will remain as another new year approaches - -- a a potent write...........x
December 17th, 2022 07:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Your well rhymed lines strike the right chords better than any media reports my caring friend - - how sad the same hopeless conditions many folk face will remain as another new year approaches - -- a a potent write...........x
December 17th, 2022 07:55
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
Goldfinch60 said:
So much said in so few words Neville.
Andy
December 17th, 2022 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So much said in so few words Neville.
Andy
December 17th, 2022 02:53
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
Doggerel Dave said:
Well, You certainly do your best Nev, and no one can ask any more of you than that.....
December 16th, 2022 16:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Well, You certainly do your best Nev, and no one can ask any more of you than that.....
December 16th, 2022 16:29
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of lyrics to songs like \'runaway girl\' by ludacris and mary j blige
and tupac\'s \'brenda\'s got a baby\'..
so poignant and thought provoking
at this time of year..
a great write Hyung
December 16th, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of lyrics to songs like \'runaway girl\' by ludacris and mary j blige
and tupac\'s \'brenda\'s got a baby\'..
so poignant and thought provoking
at this time of year..
a great write Hyung
December 16th, 2022 05:51
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
L. B. Mek said:
(this that accursed duality of life
we breathe in our demise
and blink forth to our end
in every treasured moment
alive...)
but ending\'s can offer solace
aside our laments and fear
it\'s a question of perspective
truly..
(so knee-cracking relatable Hyung
promise me a seat at your table
on that other side
of that six feet divide
and I\'ll promise to buy
an eternity of drinks!)
cheer\'s, to a life bravely Lived dear Poet
🍻😎
let\'s smile in defiance till that very last
with one eye open
and the other
lost within that embrace of remembrance
for why else did we strive to accumulate
all those sunrise and sunset, experiences
in our lives!
cheers 🍻
December 16th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
(this that accursed duality of life
we breathe in our demise
and blink forth to our end
in every treasured moment
alive...)
but ending\'s can offer solace
aside our laments and fear
it\'s a question of perspective
truly..
(so knee-cracking relatable Hyung
promise me a seat at your table
on that other side
of that six feet divide
and I\'ll promise to buy
an eternity of drinks!)
cheer\'s, to a life bravely Lived dear Poet
🍻😎
let\'s smile in defiance till that very last
with one eye open
and the other
lost within that embrace of remembrance
for why else did we strive to accumulate
all those sunrise and sunset, experiences
in our lives!
cheers 🍻
December 16th, 2022 05:44
The Gardeness
L. B. Mek said:
(and how she plucked and mapped
curated a path to a blossoming garden
as life, by each others side
but he
was rooted to the weeds
that sculpted him, into the very man
she fell for...)
hence why tragedies, always make for best sellers
and Shakespeare reigns supreme
for all life
is a tragedy, waiting
to be captured in ink, everything else
is mere history and art...
(Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
so loved the tone)
December 16th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
(and how she plucked and mapped
curated a path to a blossoming garden
as life, by each others side
but he
was rooted to the weeds
that sculpted him, into the very man
she fell for...)
hence why tragedies, always make for best sellers
and Shakespeare reigns supreme
for all life
is a tragedy, waiting
to be captured in ink, everything else
is mere history and art...
(Brilliant!
dear Poet supreme
so loved the tone)
December 16th, 2022 05:34
Ukraine in Winter
L. B. Mek said:
and Defiantly! proud
long in-to Spring\'s gusts
may their flag be raised
fluttering and high
as I fear we\'ll still be hoping
and wishing, when Easter\'s festivities roll around...
an important write, thank you Hyung
December 16th, 2022 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
and Defiantly! proud
long in-to Spring\'s gusts
may their flag be raised
fluttering and high
as I fear we\'ll still be hoping
and wishing, when Easter\'s festivities roll around...
an important write, thank you Hyung
December 16th, 2022 05:28
From Inside This Box of Broken Mirrors
L. B. Mek said:
that itch
waiting for it to come and define
all that we\'ve built and hoped for..
I love the confessional theme
and yet your wording is so open
to interpretation and personalisation..
showcasing great skill, so well executed
thank you! dear cherished Poet
December 16th, 2022 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
that itch
waiting for it to come and define
all that we\'ve built and hoped for..
I love the confessional theme
and yet your wording is so open
to interpretation and personalisation..
showcasing great skill, so well executed
thank you! dear cherished Poet
December 16th, 2022 05:26
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
Fay Slimm. said:
A few lines of care and empathy mean so much to any forgotten ones whatever the gender -- - your heart in these words at this time of year Nev comes over so warmly for all the lonely.................x
December 16th, 2022 04:31
Fay Slimm. said:
A few lines of care and empathy mean so much to any forgotten ones whatever the gender -- - your heart in these words at this time of year Nev comes over so warmly for all the lonely.................x
December 16th, 2022 04:31
For all Those Forgotten Girls Out There
orchidee said:
I wish I could forget KP, even though I only see her 1% of the time in our marriage now! lol. I\'m horrible to her. heehee.
But there she is, on TV or in newspapers, etc. I don\'t notice any difference, It\'s as though she is with me 100% of the time. Doh!
Misogynist? Nope, I can\'t even spell the word without looking it up. You know Miss Hodge-Innist?
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido. lol.
December 16th, 2022 04:23
orchidee said:
I wish I could forget KP, even though I only see her 1% of the time in our marriage now! lol. I\'m horrible to her. heehee.
But there she is, on TV or in newspapers, etc. I don\'t notice any difference, It\'s as though she is with me 100% of the time. Doh!
Misogynist? Nope, I can\'t even spell the word without looking it up. You know Miss Hodge-Innist?
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido. lol.
December 16th, 2022 04:23
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
Fay Slimm. said:
Just a thought after reading these few grieving lines Nev. - down through the ages ladies and some gents spent fortunes to by-pass signs of decline in shape and form - - yet beauty they say comes from inside not out and restores outer wrinkles to ageless glory - well methinks that\'s worth trying for someone who mourns passing youthdom. Oooh ( Hope this last word raises a smile ) ...............x
December 15th, 2022 10:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Just a thought after reading these few grieving lines Nev. - down through the ages ladies and some gents spent fortunes to by-pass signs of decline in shape and form - - yet beauty they say comes from inside not out and restores outer wrinkles to ageless glory - well methinks that\'s worth trying for someone who mourns passing youthdom. Oooh ( Hope this last word raises a smile ) ...............x
December 15th, 2022 10:50
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
orchidee said:
Notice the appearance of Fido in my poem today? lol.
December 15th, 2022 07:12
orchidee said:
Notice the appearance of Fido in my poem today? lol.
December 15th, 2022 07:12
A Reflection Upon a Youth in Passing
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - the ageing process - tell me about it.......
Nah, don\'t remind me, Nev....
December 15th, 2022 03:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - the ageing process - tell me about it.......
Nah, don\'t remind me, Nev....
December 15th, 2022 03:39
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