Comments received on poems by Neville



When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
orchidee said:

KP will have to go. She is costing me too much! But I won\'t see her any less. I don\'t see her 99% in person anyway - only on TV, in papers, or doing \'porridge\'\'?
She gets away with things, with botox making her look like an old trout age 99, so they let her off (No offence to oldies).

October 16th, 2022 11:32

When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
Fay Slimm. said:

Sweeter than honey those long-ago days Nev. - -- remembering when love was a song that could never die and this piece of poetry proves it with relatable imagery - - - it set me off recalling life on the cheap but oh what great times ....x

October 16th, 2022 10:49

When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
arqios said:

Wow N, power title to start off with! As a child my older cousins and uncles took me wild honey ‘hunting.’ And yes, without the aid of bleached processed sugar it can have its specific type of sweetness that isn’t the sweetest type around. So glad to be experiencing this poem!

October 16th, 2022 08:20

The Science of Passing the Buck
orchidee said:

I\'m blustering on with another comment, in an upper crust fashion!
Oh, I say, old chap, a fine F poem if I F say so myself, and F well presented!
Woof, steady on says Fido. His ears are burning, and the air\'s turned blue! lol.

October 16th, 2022 02:03

The Science of Passing the Buck
Goldfinch60 said:

That litigation culture does not take to account the real feelings of the majority of people in our world, most just want to live in peace without those in power doing something different.

Andy

October 16th, 2022 01:31

The Science of Passing the Buck
Doggerel Dave said:

Never witnessed you so angry here, Nev.... Antipathy totally justified in my certainly not humble opinion - tho\' where it comes from, what triggered it ....and I wouldn\'t blame it on Covid...

October 15th, 2022 20:41

The Science of Passing the Buck
MendedFences27 said:

All it takes is one citizen to pass the buck to another, and then, because there is more than one citizen involved it ends up in the hands of some organization, who then passes it from the local to the regional to the national. They of course, pass it to the government starting with the local, who then pass it to the county, and they pass it to the state which, in turn, forward it to the federal. It then gets moved to the Congress which pass that buck to the president, where Harry Truman said, \"The buck stops here,\" as a measure of taking responsibility.
Your poem highlights this inane shirking and the preposterous excuses used to achieve it. Where does it all end? Only the originator of the pass has that answer, but he\'ll probably pass it on, to avoid a lawsuit. - Phil A.

October 15th, 2022 14:33

Upon Testing Positive
Fay Slimm. said:

You are too manly-strong to be under for long Nev. - - give that nasty covid a kick up the backside by resting a bit and methinks he will slink away before long - -- take care my dear friend.......x

October 15th, 2022 12:11

The Science of Passing the Buck
Paul Bell said:

A fall guy is always needed in every emergency, and the good thing with fall guy\'s is, they never realise till the handcuffs have clicked.

October 15th, 2022 11:00

The Science of Passing the Buck
orchidee said:

\"It wasn\'t me\'; \"I wasn\'t there, whatever it was!\" (heehee).

October 15th, 2022 09:08

The Science of Passing the Buck
Dove said:

Sorry, blame serves no purpose ! Get well, you be the one who protects others from the spread. Since it may be insidious, sometimes it’s too late

October 15th, 2022 08:52

Upon Testing Positive
Goldfinch60 said:

I sincerely hope that all gets better soon Neville.

Andy

October 15th, 2022 01:06

Upon Testing Positive
Lionel Mandrake said:

If you want to survive and get better, which I believe you will, detox and get no more boosters ....no matter what.

October 14th, 2022 20:18

Upon Testing Positive
MendedFences27 said:

Whoa. bad news that. Hope all goes well and you bounce back quick. - Phil A.

October 14th, 2022 16:53

Upon Testing Positive
orchidee said:

Yes, get well soon N.
If I had to have kissed a Manageress under Christmas mistletoe, I would never be well again! Doh! lol.

October 14th, 2022 12:09

Upon Testing Positive
Doggerel Dave said:

I ain’t no classical scholar Nev, so I had to resort to Prof G for a bit of a clue, an wot struck me woz wot dun her in woz in all probability childbirth.
I hope you don’t get too crook (Au inf),
Take care of yourself.

October 14th, 2022 05:38

Upon Testing Positive
arqios said:

Oh dear, get well soon Nev!

October 14th, 2022 04:01

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Goldfinch60 said:

I agree with what Fay has said.

Andy

October 14th, 2022 01:25

Why Not Just Call It a Day
orchidee said:

I never knew I betrayed ya! Or did I betray a certain gal?
OK, we\'ll call it a day - Goodnight! lol.

October 13th, 2022 08:35

A Few More Things Remembered
SureshG said:

ahhhh!!!!, that never fades from the memory glands with the passage of time.

October 13th, 2022 07:08

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Fay Slimm. said:

The she in this double would know where she stood right enough by these straightforward lines Nev. - -one betrayal can be coped with but twice - - well it needs the chop given - - -- honestly written and with such gentle reminders..........x

October 13th, 2022 05:30

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Doggerel Dave said:

Now there\'s plain speaki\'n for yer.
Like this one a lot, Nev.
Wouldn\'t care to share the content of that ultimatum, would you.....?
....Nah - a gentleman never tells, right?


October 13th, 2022 05:20

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Paul Bell said:

Yes, three good days is a honeymoon, after that it\'s all downhill.

October 13th, 2022 04:45

A Few More Things Remembered
Christina8 said:

A wonderful poem....so full of sensory images and smells. Spectacular!

October 12th, 2022 10:07

A Few More Things Remembered
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Your words have always had a life of their own, and their own personality, Neville. You speak not just through, but with your pieces as well. A beautiful work of art this is, like those rare flowers that just never lose their charm, sir. A definite favorite of mine.

October 12th, 2022 08:10

A Few More Things Remembered
Fay Slimm. said:

Your usage of word is simply stunning in this romantic memory of the way things were. - -- I love the final thought - that \"if love had a smell,
it would smell of my lady\" - -- -- such an appealing read Nev........................



October 11th, 2022 05:55

A Few More Things Remembered
Doggerel Dave said:

50i\'s did it for me, Nev - although never found any lady to attach embroidered flower patches to \'em... quite conceivably this could be seen in my circumstances as a positive.... where I worked...

October 11th, 2022 03:19

A Few More Things Remembered
orchidee said:

Good write N.

October 11th, 2022 01:58

A Few More Things Remembered
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words Neville.

Andy

October 11th, 2022 01:31

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Goldfinch60 said:

Amazing words Neville, in this day and age it is happening more and more.
I have experienced close people trying to commit suicide but they spoke to me and all became better.

Andy

October 11th, 2022 01:05



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