Comments received on poems by Neville
Marcella
L. B. Mek said:
you started as you meant to continue, didn\'t you?
simply Brilliant! dear Poet supreme
February 10th, 2022 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
you started as you meant to continue, didn\'t you?
simply Brilliant! dear Poet supreme
February 10th, 2022 06:07
To Fade Without Warning
Dove said:
Beautiful! Hope you enjoy Mexico!
Be safe!
February 8th, 2022 14:30
Dove said:
Beautiful! Hope you enjoy Mexico!
Be safe!
February 8th, 2022 14:30
A Collection of Slumbers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem . Like your words )
February 2nd, 2022 02:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem . Like your words )
February 2nd, 2022 02:25
Yankee Jack
Goldfinch60 said:
Some one else in music of whom I had never heard, thank you for the information.
Andy
February 2nd, 2022 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Some one else in music of whom I had never heard, thank you for the information.
Andy
February 2nd, 2022 01:54
Yankee Jack
Rozina said:
I have not heard of this character. Another piece of knowledge gained. Thank you.
February 1st, 2022 22:41
Rozina said:
I have not heard of this character. Another piece of knowledge gained. Thank you.
February 1st, 2022 22:41
Yankee Jack
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems One never stops learning - unavoidable when such information is made so easily available, as here. Many thanks.
Could not this be an introduction to further history lessons please, Nev.
February 1st, 2022 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems One never stops learning - unavoidable when such information is made so easily available, as here. Many thanks.
Could not this be an introduction to further history lessons please, Nev.
February 1st, 2022 18:37
Yankee Jack
spilleronsheet said:
A lovely read
Thanks for bringing Mr Jack to the notice of my eyes dear Neville….
February 1st, 2022 07:33
spilleronsheet said:
A lovely read
Thanks for bringing Mr Jack to the notice of my eyes dear Neville….
February 1st, 2022 07:33
Yankee Jack
L. B. Mek said:
how informative
sorry my uncultured existence
but had no idea about Jack..
(and I quickly looked-up his statue
really like the pose, the artist chose
it may add to your words
if you felt like adding a picture to your page, just a thought)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 1st, 2022 06:49
L. B. Mek said:
how informative
sorry my uncultured existence
but had no idea about Jack..
(and I quickly looked-up his statue
really like the pose, the artist chose
it may add to your words
if you felt like adding a picture to your page, just a thought)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
February 1st, 2022 06:49
Yankee Jack
Fay Slimm. said:
Well I confess I didn\'t know Jack before your first class information and now can comment on your four liner with a wry smile \'cos I didn\'t know either that \"crack\" went that far back. - - - -- such an engaging read Nev......................x
February 1st, 2022 06:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Well I confess I didn\'t know Jack before your first class information and now can comment on your four liner with a wry smile \'cos I didn\'t know either that \"crack\" went that far back. - - - -- such an engaging read Nev......................x
February 1st, 2022 06:40
To Fade Without Warning
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sudden ends can be so disturbing but at the same time sometimes mesmerising.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sudden ends can be so disturbing but at the same time sometimes mesmerising.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:08
To Fade Without Warning
Rozina said:
Compelling. Puzzling at first. Then realisation. Simply wonderful.
January 31st, 2022 22:36
Rozina said:
Compelling. Puzzling at first. Then realisation. Simply wonderful.
January 31st, 2022 22:36
To Fade Without Warning
Solar Impulse_1912 said:
Dear Neville (I keep thinking ‘Neville the Deville’ and know that I should not mention the weird ruminations of my brain to an almost stranger, not knowing what his reaction or his sense humour might be... In any case it is thought kindly!) ... anyway, what I wanted to say is: You really are a truly great poet! Not too many words but so precise and directly piercing into the heart. Thank you for letting us in! Bettina
January 31st, 2022 15:36
Solar Impulse_1912 said:
Dear Neville (I keep thinking ‘Neville the Deville’ and know that I should not mention the weird ruminations of my brain to an almost stranger, not knowing what his reaction or his sense humour might be... In any case it is thought kindly!) ... anyway, what I wanted to say is: You really are a truly great poet! Not too many words but so precise and directly piercing into the heart. Thank you for letting us in! Bettina
January 31st, 2022 15:36
To Fade Without Warning
spilleronsheet said:
Woah
You threw a palate of emotions on canvas
There was yearning
There was missing
There was grief
There was a sudden realise
There was astonishment as well as disappointment
And lastly there was a message that i imbibed
Live In the moment or it may fade
Those around as well us in frame
We may fade
Beautiful dear Neville
January 31st, 2022 13:32
spilleronsheet said:
Woah
You threw a palate of emotions on canvas
There was yearning
There was missing
There was grief
There was a sudden realise
There was astonishment as well as disappointment
And lastly there was a message that i imbibed
Live In the moment or it may fade
Those around as well us in frame
We may fade
Beautiful dear Neville
January 31st, 2022 13:32
To Fade Without Warning
Michael Edwards said:
Fay\'s right - a unique style, and a read to make you think.
January 31st, 2022 10:11
Michael Edwards said:
Fay\'s right - a unique style, and a read to make you think.
January 31st, 2022 10:11
To Fade Without Warning
L. B. Mek said:
applicable:
to those mirage, dreams
logic defining, romances
and self-betraying, mirror reflections...
(oh and I just loved your title, dear Poet
plus that moody reverie, you imbued
into your lines ever-so, subtly)
thanks for sharing,
this is A read I\'ll be revisiting
in the future, I\'m sure
January 31st, 2022 07:47
L. B. Mek said:
applicable:
to those mirage, dreams
logic defining, romances
and self-betraying, mirror reflections...
(oh and I just loved your title, dear Poet
plus that moody reverie, you imbued
into your lines ever-so, subtly)
thanks for sharing,
this is A read I\'ll be revisiting
in the future, I\'m sure
January 31st, 2022 07:47
To Fade Without Warning
orchidee said:
Was she gone like a puff of smoke? How would I meet her if she\'s gone?! lol
January 31st, 2022 06:07
orchidee said:
Was she gone like a puff of smoke? How would I meet her if she\'s gone?! lol
January 31st, 2022 06:07
To Fade Without Warning
Fay Slimm. said:
The sudden end of what was once seen and felt comes over so aptly in these lines of surprise and astonishment - - another jewel that can mean what readers wish - clever as always your unique style my dear friend..............x
January 31st, 2022 05:52
Fay Slimm. said:
The sudden end of what was once seen and felt comes over so aptly in these lines of surprise and astonishment - - another jewel that can mean what readers wish - clever as always your unique style my dear friend..............x
January 31st, 2022 05:52
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
Goldfinch60 said:
I feel exactly the same Neville.
Andy
January 31st, 2022 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I feel exactly the same Neville.
Andy
January 31st, 2022 01:47
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
Rozina said:
Oh so beautiful to read this. Your lines of love to your wife.
January 30th, 2022 22:30
Rozina said:
Oh so beautiful to read this. Your lines of love to your wife.
January 30th, 2022 22:30
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
MendedFences27 said:
A \"shining brightly\" star becomes a fond remembrance of a loved one. The love seeps through your words and remains intact with the hope of \"tomorrow.\" A difficult write I would imagine. - Phil A.
January 30th, 2022 20:25
MendedFences27 said:
A \"shining brightly\" star becomes a fond remembrance of a loved one. The love seeps through your words and remains intact with the hope of \"tomorrow.\" A difficult write I would imagine. - Phil A.
January 30th, 2022 20:25
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
spilleronsheet said:
This is so beautiful
A swan in sky
Flying high
While I fascinate upon her flight
Who knew that swan that I see in sky
Lighting the sky at night
One day she shall descend upon heavenly earth
Soo…..beautiful dear Neville
Such unique comparison
It’s a jewel
January 30th, 2022 13:01
spilleronsheet said:
This is so beautiful
A swan in sky
Flying high
While I fascinate upon her flight
Who knew that swan that I see in sky
Lighting the sky at night
One day she shall descend upon heavenly earth
Soo…..beautiful dear Neville
Such unique comparison
It’s a jewel
January 30th, 2022 13:01
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Stunningly beautiful Neville,..just so stunningly gorgeous🕊 I love the ending,..it really drives it home🍻
January 30th, 2022 12:01
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Stunningly beautiful Neville,..just so stunningly gorgeous🕊 I love the ending,..it really drives it home🍻
January 30th, 2022 12:01
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
orchidee said:
Good write N. Bit of algebra too?!l
January 30th, 2022 04:49
orchidee said:
Good write N. Bit of algebra too?!l
January 30th, 2022 04:49
Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring write Nev. with such a unique title - -- Cygnus the bringer of balance can fill grieving hearts with peace for spirit lives on to gladden assurance of future reunions. Love needs no form, it is timeless and truly perpetual. Deep and powerful these positive lines today mon ami................x
January 30th, 2022 04:34
Fay Slimm. said:
What an inspiring write Nev. with such a unique title - -- Cygnus the bringer of balance can fill grieving hearts with peace for spirit lives on to gladden assurance of future reunions. Love needs no form, it is timeless and truly perpetual. Deep and powerful these positive lines today mon ami................x
January 30th, 2022 04:34
What it All Boils Down To
Rozina said:
Your description is masterful. Such a pleasure to read. I am trying to do better by reading more poems; perhaps join a course too. Thank you.
January 29th, 2022 06:25
Rozina said:
Your description is masterful. Such a pleasure to read. I am trying to do better by reading more poems; perhaps join a course too. Thank you.
January 29th, 2022 06:25
What it All Boils Down To
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, those etchings will always be there.
Andy
January 29th, 2022 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, those etchings will always be there.
Andy
January 29th, 2022 01:25
What it All Boils Down To
MendedFences27 said:
If poetry is a sin, we are all going to burn in hell. Probably worth it though. Since I\'m just getting back onto this hellbent wagon your poem struck a chord.
You may have explained the attraction this writing uses to possess us all. It may truly be the letters and words upon the white paper. For what other common denominator is there since the ideas are so varied and unique. So rom one \"Shackled king\" to another, Keep It Up. - Phil A.
January 28th, 2022 21:10
MendedFences27 said:
If poetry is a sin, we are all going to burn in hell. Probably worth it though. Since I\'m just getting back onto this hellbent wagon your poem struck a chord.
You may have explained the attraction this writing uses to possess us all. It may truly be the letters and words upon the white paper. For what other common denominator is there since the ideas are so varied and unique. So rom one \"Shackled king\" to another, Keep It Up. - Phil A.
January 28th, 2022 21:10
What it All Boils Down To
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
As the book says. I sin seven times a day. Or is that pee overnight? I can\'t keep up
January 28th, 2022 16:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
As the book says. I sin seven times a day. Or is that pee overnight? I can\'t keep up
January 28th, 2022 16:12
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