Comments received on poems by Neville
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, but in whose cheek would you really wish to come Neville, this weekend, if you really had the choice?
Erotica rules!!
September 6th, 2022 05:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, but in whose cheek would you really wish to come Neville, this weekend, if you really had the choice?
Erotica rules!!
September 6th, 2022 05:07
On Being Too Gentle
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds like you it just right, I\'d call it the \"Goldilocks Approach\". Very, very clever my friend!
September 5th, 2022 12:41
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds like you it just right, I\'d call it the \"Goldilocks Approach\". Very, very clever my friend!
September 5th, 2022 12:41
Potage du Femme
Bella Shepard said:
This sounds quite the taste treat. What I want to know is does this dish reheat well, or is it also good cold?
September 5th, 2022 12:35
Bella Shepard said:
This sounds quite the taste treat. What I want to know is does this dish reheat well, or is it also good cold?
September 5th, 2022 12:35
On Being Too Gentle
SureshG said:
I regret it wasn’t me, for had I in my youth, while being rejected - lessons learnt would have played an important role.
Just as I am learning how to scribe a lasting piece.
September 5th, 2022 10:25
SureshG said:
I regret it wasn’t me, for had I in my youth, while being rejected - lessons learnt would have played an important role.
Just as I am learning how to scribe a lasting piece.
September 5th, 2022 10:25
On Being Too Gentle
Doggerel Dave said:
A smooth change of pace portrayed in your piece; Improvisation the name of the game, Neville....ask and thou shalt receive....maybe 🙂
September 3rd, 2022 19:31
Doggerel Dave said:
A smooth change of pace portrayed in your piece; Improvisation the name of the game, Neville....ask and thou shalt receive....maybe 🙂
September 3rd, 2022 19:31
On Being Too Gentle
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it exposes her hidden talents without actually calling them out.
\"On Being Too Gentle,\" I think he at least had the spirit to engage.
Oh, woe is he! - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2022 17:22
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it exposes her hidden talents without actually calling them out.
\"On Being Too Gentle,\" I think he at least had the spirit to engage.
Oh, woe is he! - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2022 17:22
On Being Too Gentle
shaa said:
Couldn\'t be more clear 😅 oh how wrong they go. Brilliant!
September 3rd, 2022 07:05
shaa said:
Couldn\'t be more clear 😅 oh how wrong they go. Brilliant!
September 3rd, 2022 07:05
On Being Too Gentle
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - gentle approaches be blowed to this well versed lady - -- I am laughing aloud Nev at the cleverness you use to show her at the game - -once a seductress always the same eh ? - - brilliant piece of penning....................x
September 3rd, 2022 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - gentle approaches be blowed to this well versed lady - -- I am laughing aloud Nev at the cleverness you use to show her at the game - -once a seductress always the same eh ? - - brilliant piece of penning....................x
September 3rd, 2022 02:51
On Being Too Gentle
orchidee said:
What were the details of the \'error\'? Don\'t answer that, or I will swoon! Or at least, don\'t answer how she corrected the error. heehee.
September 3rd, 2022 01:49
orchidee said:
What were the details of the \'error\'? Don\'t answer that, or I will swoon! Or at least, don\'t answer how she corrected the error. heehee.
September 3rd, 2022 01:49
Potage du Femme
Goldfinch60 said:
Surely you must have some basil and saffron there as well Neville.
Andy
September 3rd, 2022 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Surely you must have some basil and saffron there as well Neville.
Andy
September 3rd, 2022 01:26
On Being Too Gentle
dusk arising said:
Says it all. Oh how wrong we get it sometimes.
September 3rd, 2022 01:12
dusk arising said:
Says it all. Oh how wrong we get it sometimes.
September 3rd, 2022 01:12
Potage du Femme
orchidee said:
You know I\'m gonna say this - Fido won\'t let me have any potage! lol.
September 2nd, 2022 09:17
orchidee said:
You know I\'m gonna say this - Fido won\'t let me have any potage! lol.
September 2nd, 2022 09:17
Potage du Femme
Fay Slimm. said:
Tis my kina broth this slice after slice of salty potage with delectable taste - -- - -thanks for the spicy read mon ami..............x
September 2nd, 2022 08:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Tis my kina broth this slice after slice of salty potage with delectable taste - -- - -thanks for the spicy read mon ami..............x
September 2nd, 2022 08:57
Potage du Femme
Doggerel Dave said:
...and she did and I did and the energy passed through her to me.... Wish I had the poetic skill to give it the moment...
Thanks Nev for at least giving me the chance.....
September 2nd, 2022 05:26
Doggerel Dave said:
...and she did and I did and the energy passed through her to me.... Wish I had the poetic skill to give it the moment...
Thanks Nev for at least giving me the chance.....
September 2nd, 2022 05:26
Potage du Femme
Doggerel Dave said:
Talking cunnilingus here? \'Since between your legs is all the richness of a pollution free seashore, I\'ll give you all you want and then some...\'
I\'m sure she\'ll come across if I ask her...
September 2nd, 2022 04:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Talking cunnilingus here? \'Since between your legs is all the richness of a pollution free seashore, I\'ll give you all you want and then some...\'
I\'m sure she\'ll come across if I ask her...
September 2nd, 2022 04:22
Somewhere Between Lovers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true in many cases Neville but sometimes the true love can arise from these places.
Andy
September 2nd, 2022 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true in many cases Neville but sometimes the true love can arise from these places.
Andy
September 2nd, 2022 00:49
Somewhere Between Lovers
MendedFences27 said:
Her paper-thin veneer was finally shattered, and he voracious interior exposed. Her lovers felt like playthings and opted for a more meaningful connection. Love it seems comes in many layers, some deeper than others. We feel a sadness only for the loss of love and what will be her ongoing plight.
A well told scene of lost love told aslant of the actual occurrence. Sometimes, doing so is more difficult than relaying the actuality. A fine poem. I enjoyed it immensely. - Phil A.
September 1st, 2022 18:17
MendedFences27 said:
Her paper-thin veneer was finally shattered, and he voracious interior exposed. Her lovers felt like playthings and opted for a more meaningful connection. Love it seems comes in many layers, some deeper than others. We feel a sadness only for the loss of love and what will be her ongoing plight.
A well told scene of lost love told aslant of the actual occurrence. Sometimes, doing so is more difficult than relaying the actuality. A fine poem. I enjoyed it immensely. - Phil A.
September 1st, 2022 18:17
Somewhere Between Lovers
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the result of insatiable lust ends often in heart-wrenching sadness and for both genders too methinks --- you pen a picture deserving of pity dear Nev. - brings tears to the eyes does this haunt of a read.................x
September 1st, 2022 06:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the result of insatiable lust ends often in heart-wrenching sadness and for both genders too methinks --- you pen a picture deserving of pity dear Nev. - brings tears to the eyes does this haunt of a read.................x
September 1st, 2022 06:07
Somewhere Between Lovers
orchidee said:
Is she on the rubbish dump? Aww, send her to me - or will she be too much for me?!
And what am I on about?! Fido won\'t let me have any \'excitement\'. lol.
September 1st, 2022 05:18
orchidee said:
Is she on the rubbish dump? Aww, send her to me - or will she be too much for me?!
And what am I on about?! Fido won\'t let me have any \'excitement\'. lol.
September 1st, 2022 05:18
Looking Forward to Later
Christina8 said:
OOH Saucy! I like this a lot! The imagery is priceless. And THANK YOU sir!
September 1st, 2022 02:10
Christina8 said:
OOH Saucy! I like this a lot! The imagery is priceless. And THANK YOU sir!
September 1st, 2022 02:10
Looking Forward to Later
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully that love will overcome all Neville.
Andhy
September 1st, 2022 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully that love will overcome all Neville.
Andhy
September 1st, 2022 00:58
Looking Forward to Later
Bella Shepard said:
I think you raise a good point, the difference between making love and having sex. Does one necessarily lead to the other? One denotes connection while the other satisfaction. Now if you get both together, well you\'ve hit the jackpot.
August 31st, 2022 11:37
Bella Shepard said:
I think you raise a good point, the difference between making love and having sex. Does one necessarily lead to the other? One denotes connection while the other satisfaction. Now if you get both together, well you\'ve hit the jackpot.
August 31st, 2022 11:37
Looking Forward to Later
Doggerel Dave said:
No matter the route (care with spelling there), so long it worked out well in the end.
If kids in your neighbourhood are mouthing off like that, it’s time for a move, Neville.
August 31st, 2022 07:53
Doggerel Dave said:
No matter the route (care with spelling there), so long it worked out well in the end.
If kids in your neighbourhood are mouthing off like that, it’s time for a move, Neville.
August 31st, 2022 07:53
Looking Forward to Later
orchidee said:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F even!
Woof! Not now says Fido! lol.
August 31st, 2022 07:18
orchidee said:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F even!
Woof! Not now says Fido! lol.
August 31st, 2022 07:18
Looking Forward to Later
Fay Slimm. said:
The first of your double-take gets my vote Nev. as despite this culture\'s modern approach to the sex-act it brings out in your final lines the difference in just coupling and that of mating with love. Know too what you mean by street-wise phrases that come from lots of youngsters today...............x
August 31st, 2022 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The first of your double-take gets my vote Nev. as despite this culture\'s modern approach to the sex-act it brings out in your final lines the difference in just coupling and that of mating with love. Know too what you mean by street-wise phrases that come from lots of youngsters today...............x
August 31st, 2022 03:46
A Few Moments After
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be always there Neville.
Andy
August 31st, 2022 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be always there Neville.
Andy
August 31st, 2022 00:36
A Few Moments After
Bella Shepard said:
To me the beauty of the poem is that a simple gesture says it all. No need for words, a silence that fills the heart. Well penned dear friend!
August 30th, 2022 14:26
Bella Shepard said:
To me the beauty of the poem is that a simple gesture says it all. No need for words, a silence that fills the heart. Well penned dear friend!
August 30th, 2022 14:26
A Few Moments After
MendedFences27 said:
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a few words, the rest is left to the reader\'s humanity. The scene is minimally painted and yet piques the readers imagination. And then it ends, and the remainder is in the mind of the reader. If poetry is saying the most with the least, this is poetry at its best. - Phil A.
August 30th, 2022 10:44
MendedFences27 said:
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a few words, the rest is left to the reader\'s humanity. The scene is minimally painted and yet piques the readers imagination. And then it ends, and the remainder is in the mind of the reader. If poetry is saying the most with the least, this is poetry at its best. - Phil A.
August 30th, 2022 10:44
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