Comments received on poems by Neville
Distilled Time
Doggerel Dave said:
All the qualities of a distraction free moment, Nev; that moment just there...no knowledge of a beginning or end....
Just telling what I got out of it...never mind what you meant...................🙂
February 12th, 2023 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
All the qualities of a distraction free moment, Nev; that moment just there...no knowledge of a beginning or end....
Just telling what I got out of it...never mind what you meant...................🙂
February 12th, 2023 19:19
Distilled Time
Bella Shepard said:
To capture a moment in time is serendipitous, to be saved and treasured. If this poem had a taste, I would say it is champagne. Beautiful my friend!
February 12th, 2023 15:12
Bella Shepard said:
To capture a moment in time is serendipitous, to be saved and treasured. If this poem had a taste, I would say it is champagne. Beautiful my friend!
February 12th, 2023 15:12
Distilled Time
orchidee said:
I\'m glad someone may savour things, cos there ain\'t no savouring for KP and I! lol.
February 12th, 2023 13:40
orchidee said:
I\'m glad someone may savour things, cos there ain\'t no savouring for KP and I! lol.
February 12th, 2023 13:40
Distilled Time
Fay Slimm. said:
The way your words seem to highlight the intimate moment is always so engaging ..... a taste again of your talent for short-line intrigue - - thank you for sharing it mon ami...............x
February 12th, 2023 13:33
Fay Slimm. said:
The way your words seem to highlight the intimate moment is always so engaging ..... a taste again of your talent for short-line intrigue - - thank you for sharing it mon ami...............x
February 12th, 2023 13:33
Shadows Dancing
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful image, dancing in the brightness of day and the shadows of night. What could be more perfect than the synchrinization of movement and music, lost in time, and when the shadows are no more the sensation lingers. I call it heavenly dear poet!
February 10th, 2023 16:31
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful image, dancing in the brightness of day and the shadows of night. What could be more perfect than the synchrinization of movement and music, lost in time, and when the shadows are no more the sensation lingers. I call it heavenly dear poet!
February 10th, 2023 16:31
Shadows Dancing
L. B. Mek said:
took me back to some treasured memories, Hyung
I\'ll be coming back to these words
(nothing like being lost in a dance
an embrace of shadows
a communion of in-sync hip vibrations
just sad, the music has to end
and wake us from that sensual
dreamscape)
February 10th, 2023 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
took me back to some treasured memories, Hyung
I\'ll be coming back to these words
(nothing like being lost in a dance
an embrace of shadows
a communion of in-sync hip vibrations
just sad, the music has to end
and wake us from that sensual
dreamscape)
February 10th, 2023 05:38
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
L. B. Mek said:
\'lost, cost, most
else, place, made\'
how subtly you weave your magic
this poem showcases
your poetry\'s technical prowess, Hyung
I read and learn, a great write
February 10th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'lost, cost, most
else, place, made\'
how subtly you weave your magic
this poem showcases
your poetry\'s technical prowess, Hyung
I read and learn, a great write
February 10th, 2023 05:34
Come Late July
L. B. Mek said:
Congratulations!!!
\'my eyes
from leaking
diamonds ..\'
so happy for you and your family Hyung
I\'ll have an extra glass or two over the weekend
to help you celebrate
😁👏🥂
February 10th, 2023 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
Congratulations!!!
\'my eyes
from leaking
diamonds ..\'
so happy for you and your family Hyung
I\'ll have an extra glass or two over the weekend
to help you celebrate
😁👏🥂
February 10th, 2023 05:29
Shadows Dancing
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Darkness came the moment I married KP. I\'ve not seen daylight since! heehee.
February 10th, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Darkness came the moment I married KP. I\'ve not seen daylight since! heehee.
February 10th, 2023 03:10
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
[email protected] said:
This is the best of your poems I\'ve read. It feels as if you\'re not trying too hard. I enjoyed this poem immensely.
February 10th, 2023 02:44
[email protected] said:
This is the best of your poems I\'ve read. It feels as if you\'re not trying too hard. I enjoyed this poem immensely.
February 10th, 2023 02:44
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Kinsey Peterson said:
Goodness Neville, every time I read your works I always have the inspiration to write. Beautiful as always and as touching as ever my friend. I hope the sadness in some of your work is the creation of an exquisite imagination.
February 9th, 2023 09:58
Kinsey Peterson said:
Goodness Neville, every time I read your works I always have the inspiration to write. Beautiful as always and as touching as ever my friend. I hope the sadness in some of your work is the creation of an exquisite imagination.
February 9th, 2023 09:58
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Christina8 said:
Guilt is a tragic emotion---I have felt it many a time and it\'s destructive. Glad I don\'t deal with it anymore but many folks do. This is a wonderful descriptive write, N! C
February 9th, 2023 06:59
Christina8 said:
Guilt is a tragic emotion---I have felt it many a time and it\'s destructive. Glad I don\'t deal with it anymore but many folks do. This is a wonderful descriptive write, N! C
February 9th, 2023 06:59
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Fay Slimm. said:
Tragic indeed is the end of some unhappy souls where their end is just waiting to happen - told with clear and precise honesty and highlighting guilt as the reason for yet another sad \"accident\" maybe - -- a heart-tugger and no doubt about it mon ami...........x.
February 9th, 2023 06:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Tragic indeed is the end of some unhappy souls where their end is just waiting to happen - told with clear and precise honesty and highlighting guilt as the reason for yet another sad \"accident\" maybe - -- a heart-tugger and no doubt about it mon ami...........x.
February 9th, 2023 06:08
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Doggerel Dave said:
A tragic suicide pact....why must you continue to traumatize us like this, Nev?!
February 9th, 2023 05:17
Doggerel Dave said:
A tragic suicide pact....why must you continue to traumatize us like this, Nev?!
February 9th, 2023 05:17
Come Late July
Goldfinch60 said:
Being a grandfather is so wonderful Neville, may you enjoy the journey with your grandchild.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Being a grandfather is so wonderful Neville, may you enjoy the journey with your grandchild.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:51
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:35
Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip
orchidee said:
A fine poem N.
KP\'s always been an accident waiting to happen - and it\'s always happened! lol.
February 9th, 2023 02:30
orchidee said:
A fine poem N.
KP\'s always been an accident waiting to happen - and it\'s always happened! lol.
February 9th, 2023 02:30
Come Late July
Doggerel Dave said:
No marriage, no issue (happy with that) but I\'ve seen it in other new grandparent\'s eyes...only remains to say good luck to all involved and all the best, Nev.
February 8th, 2023 20:18
Doggerel Dave said:
No marriage, no issue (happy with that) but I\'ve seen it in other new grandparent\'s eyes...only remains to say good luck to all involved and all the best, Nev.
February 8th, 2023 20:18
Come Late July
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem about your arriving grandchild in July. I really liked \"I cannot stop my eyes from leaking diamonds\". This is truly a grand write!
February 8th, 2023 06:13
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem about your arriving grandchild in July. I really liked \"I cannot stop my eyes from leaking diamonds\". This is truly a grand write!
February 8th, 2023 06:13
Come Late July
arqios said:
Diamonds indeed! And 3 generations of joy. Can\'t hardly wait til July for that gracing moment and the poems that would come from that time.
February 8th, 2023 05:45
arqios said:
Diamonds indeed! And 3 generations of joy. Can\'t hardly wait til July for that gracing moment and the poems that would come from that time.
February 8th, 2023 05:45
Come Late July
Fay Slimm. said:
No news could beat that news dear Nev. and all good wishes for that exciting time in July when your life will be changed and charged with Grandfather love.............x
February 8th, 2023 04:17
Fay Slimm. said:
No news could beat that news dear Nev. and all good wishes for that exciting time in July when your life will be changed and charged with Grandfather love.............x
February 8th, 2023 04:17
Come Late July
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing
Especially like this line
I cannot stop
my eyes
from leaking
diamonds ..
Beautiful words there )
Nice for you , to become a grandfather
February 8th, 2023 03:51
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing
Especially like this line
I cannot stop
my eyes
from leaking
diamonds ..
Beautiful words there )
Nice for you , to become a grandfather
February 8th, 2023 03:51
Come Late July
orchidee said:
A lovely write N.
Meanwhile, there\'ll be no children for KP and I. It would be too horrific, too scary, to have any little KP\'s. lol. Fido never lets me have any \'ardour\' anyway. He says it only makes me swoon. lol.
I must \'get out more\' in me sheltered life!
February 8th, 2023 03:31
orchidee said:
A lovely write N.
Meanwhile, there\'ll be no children for KP and I. It would be too horrific, too scary, to have any little KP\'s. lol. Fido never lets me have any \'ardour\' anyway. He says it only makes me swoon. lol.
I must \'get out more\' in me sheltered life!
February 8th, 2023 03:31
Come Late July
Neville said:
Upon hearing from my daughter that I was to become a grandfather in the summer .. ❤️
February 8th, 2023 03:27
Neville said:
Upon hearing from my daughter that I was to become a grandfather in the summer .. ❤️
February 8th, 2023 03:27
Someplace Where There Are Whales
Doggerel Dave said:
Going to be overcrowded, I fear as in a few masterly lines, you\'ve stirred the interest of the masses, Nev.... Still, put me on the priority list or the wait list... Not going to see much of her at this rate... or have you already made a reservation away from the madding crowds...?🙂
February 7th, 2023 04:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Going to be overcrowded, I fear as in a few masterly lines, you\'ve stirred the interest of the masses, Nev.... Still, put me on the priority list or the wait list... Not going to see much of her at this rate... or have you already made a reservation away from the madding crowds...?🙂
February 7th, 2023 04:22
Someplace Where There Are Whales
Christina8 said:
My sentiments exactly....great write and I want to go on that picnic too! :-)
February 7th, 2023 03:39
Christina8 said:
My sentiments exactly....great write and I want to go on that picnic too! :-)
February 7th, 2023 03:39
Someplace Where There Are Whales
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP is a beached whale - or beached trout! lol.
February 7th, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP is a beached whale - or beached trout! lol.
February 7th, 2023 03:10
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