Comments received on poems by Neville



For Everfriends Everywhere
arqios said:

Got a couple of those me-self over the years. Ever ends quite quickly it seems.

February 16th, 2023 08:42

For Everfriends Everywhere
Christina8 said:

No, I don\'t think those days did end....just my two cents on the subject! x C

February 16th, 2023 07:40

For Everfriends Everywhere
Doggerel Dave said:

Which one of the 64 friends you have here woz it?

February 16th, 2023 05:59

For Everfriends Everywhere
Fay Slimm. said:

A case of \"say what you mean but mean what you say\" methinks -- maybe the heart was never in it........x


February 16th, 2023 05:29

A Time for Everything
Goldfinch60 said:

That time will come Neville and the enjoyment will be worth the wait.

Andy

February 16th, 2023 03:02

For Everfriends Everywhere
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Neville.

Andy

February 16th, 2023 02:42

For Everfriends Everywhere
orchidee said:

Yep, those days sure did end. Day 1 of my marriage to KP it was. All downhill since then! lol.

February 16th, 2023 02:33

Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
James Stinson said:

Neville, thoroughly impressed with your body of work.
Delightful and inspiring.

February 15th, 2023 17:05

A Time for Everything
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Neville,
Most definitely there’s
“A Time for Everything”.
An enjoyable read indeed!

Laura 🌻

February 15th, 2023 11:18

A Time for Everything
Christina8 said:

I really enjoyed this romantic write! Just perfect! C

February 15th, 2023 09:07

A Time for Everything
Doggerel Dave said:

I read that all the dust in my place which I have hitherto blamed on the environment, is in reality my shed skin, which flakes off at a don\'t bear thinking of rate..... perfectly prepared to leave it as long as she likes, as I \'forget\' to vacuum mostly....

February 15th, 2023 06:53

A Time for Everything
Fay Slimm. said:

Ooooh - -so very romantic this well chosen \"Time for Everything\" - - and so teasingly slow that last line is sure to send shivers up (and down) the spine.........x

February 15th, 2023 06:27

A Time for Everything
orchidee said:

Not now, not tomorrow, not ever, KP!! heehee.
Fido don\'t let me have any ardour anyway! lol.

February 15th, 2023 04:17

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Doggerel Dave said:

Well who\'d have thought ?.............................. I cannot but agree and not better Sir Orchi\'s, in this case astute, summation of your current situation, N...

February 14th, 2023 20:08

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
orchidee said:

Cooeee! Did it happen yet? Whatever it was. lol.
I get lost in some cryptic poems, then usually spout some rubbish. No change there then from me. lol.

February 14th, 2023 13:52

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Fay Slimm. said:

Right on the button this piece of summing up action Nev. - - - Events in the head can soon become a scary reality - and fair to say that staying alive is vital for any lasting confession - - glad you \'re still here though amigo........x

February 14th, 2023 06:04

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Christina8 said:

I don\'t think any of us are getting out of here alive but I think thats what you meant....I love the word play! C

February 14th, 2023 05:45

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
orchidee said:

I \'confess\' it\'s a good write N.

February 14th, 2023 03:12

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Poetic Dan said:

Get out of my head! Fantastic word play

February 14th, 2023 03:10

Precisely As it Did Not Happen
Goldfinch60 said:

Confessions lead to a release and the power to move on life Neville, keep moving on as this life is wonderful.

Andy

February 14th, 2023 02:13

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Doggerel Dave said:

OK Nev I\'m not going to blow your cover right now, so below is my lightly coded response:

Co-Ann was not quite broken, but some enlightenment ensued...

February 13th, 2023 22:03

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Jerry Reynolds said:

Terrific, Neville. The first thing I thought of was a gun fight. So bad of me.

February 13th, 2023 17:35

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Neville,
So he is what he is and
he isn’t what he isn’t …
he opined for a fleeting of a moment.
A very interesting write which I enjoyed perusing through.

Laura🌻

February 13th, 2023 11:56

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Kinsey Peterson said:

so much can change in a fraction of a second. never let anyone else define you.

February 13th, 2023 09:23

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Christina8 said:

I enjoyed your poem, dear N. Yes those fractions of a second can either be rewarding or disappointing, either way just a peek into a moment, thank you!

February 13th, 2023 06:21

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Fay Slimm. said:

Hah -- that\'s the way to stave off further complaints methinks - short but often resulting in double- trouble - -- - another momentary peep behind moments. Great stuff Sir N..........x

February 13th, 2023 04:09

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
L. B. Mek said:

indeed
dear cherished Poet, supreme
if all \'lifeline\' philosophy
could be worded so accessible
maybe
all that search for meaning
would have lost
its hold on humanity\'s capacity
to evolve, already...
(standing at our stations of life
we calculate future\'s, inclusive
of connections, within
a hairbreadth of our scheduled
arrivals
while, Time and a smirking Fate
look-on, unimpressed...)

February 13th, 2023 03:40

Distilled Time
L. B. Mek said:

\'Yet still as mountain air
Caught
And cupped\'
you at your subtle best, Hyung
these words are so deep
(memento\'s, grip
on our rear-view, mirror
perspectives, distilled)
I read and learn

February 13th, 2023 03:32

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
orchidee said:

You spent that extra second that we had one year?
I spent it all at once. Boo hoo! Now it\'s gone for ever.

February 13th, 2023 03:01

Afterthoughts Don’t Count
Goldfinch60 said:

Those fractions of seconds can be so dissipating Neville.

Andy

February 13th, 2023 02:47



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