Comments received on poems by Neville
While Drowning off Padliegh Hill
Goldfinch60 said:
Those flashbacks in our lives can bring both good and bad memories Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2022 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those flashbacks in our lives can bring both good and bad memories Neville.
Andy
September 24th, 2022 00:46
Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You
Christina8 said:
Oh there\'s the romantic side of Neville! I love this poem. I read it so fast I thought the title was \"Just a few of the things I don\'t like about you\" Ha! I was expecting a very different poem but pleasantly surprised!
September 23rd, 2022 11:37
Christina8 said:
Oh there\'s the romantic side of Neville! I love this poem. I read it so fast I thought the title was \"Just a few of the things I don\'t like about you\" Ha! I was expecting a very different poem but pleasantly surprised!
September 23rd, 2022 11:37
While Drowning off Padliegh Hill
Fay Slimm. said:
Flashbacks can shock even after long passage of time - - insignificance can feel like sinking in water and no achievement award can alter the resultant years of coping with smallness - -- I know the feeling Nev. - a haunt of a write to read................x
September 23rd, 2022 04:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Flashbacks can shock even after long passage of time - - insignificance can feel like sinking in water and no achievement award can alter the resultant years of coping with smallness - -- I know the feeling Nev. - a haunt of a write to read................x
September 23rd, 2022 04:28
While Drowning off Padliegh Hill
arqios said:
Oh my Nev, when I was turning five I too had a drowning experience in the river that ran through my grandparent\'s property in my mum\'s hometown. After having been fished out, pumped of water and sufficiently revived I returned early next morning on the shallow end to conquer my fear, to get back on the proverbial saddle. Quite a resonant poem for myself. Thanks for sharing your poem and memory. It takes courage and mental fortitude to accomplish even that!
September 23rd, 2022 04:20
arqios said:
Oh my Nev, when I was turning five I too had a drowning experience in the river that ran through my grandparent\'s property in my mum\'s hometown. After having been fished out, pumped of water and sufficiently revived I returned early next morning on the shallow end to conquer my fear, to get back on the proverbial saddle. Quite a resonant poem for myself. Thanks for sharing your poem and memory. It takes courage and mental fortitude to accomplish even that!
September 23rd, 2022 04:20
Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville.
Andy
September 23rd, 2022 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville.
Andy
September 23rd, 2022 01:26
Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought a gem, but then a warm comforting pillow as I drift to sleep with its company - and her.....
September 22nd, 2022 18:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought a gem, but then a warm comforting pillow as I drift to sleep with its company - and her.....
September 22nd, 2022 18:43
Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You
dusk arising said:
Moments from the past remain imprinted on our soul.
September 22nd, 2022 15:14
dusk arising said:
Moments from the past remain imprinted on our soul.
September 22nd, 2022 15:14
Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You
Bella Shepard said:
The sweet romance and simplicity of just being together. No words, just closeness, oneness. You have captured this beautifully my friend!
September 22nd, 2022 14:08
Bella Shepard said:
The sweet romance and simplicity of just being together. No words, just closeness, oneness. You have captured this beautifully my friend!
September 22nd, 2022 14:08
Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - your fans will love this piece of fancy my friend. A tempting invite your pen makes with nightfall now autumn draws near. Warm as ever your words Nev. so shall I pack my best flannel nightie and come knocking your door........ or maybe just put this write right into my faves..............x
September 22nd, 2022 13:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - your fans will love this piece of fancy my friend. A tempting invite your pen makes with nightfall now autumn draws near. Warm as ever your words Nev. so shall I pack my best flannel nightie and come knocking your door........ or maybe just put this write right into my faves..............x
September 22nd, 2022 13:03
Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
Bella Shepard said:
You portray the depth of love so beautifully. In all of its splendor and pain, it is truly a precious gift. You will definitely be missed dear friend. Safe travels.
September 12th, 2022 06:35
Bella Shepard said:
You portray the depth of love so beautifully. In all of its splendor and pain, it is truly a precious gift. You will definitely be missed dear friend. Safe travels.
September 12th, 2022 06:35
Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
Doggerel Dave said:
I do hope your R&R (if that \'s what it be - though I fear it may not..) is safe this time...!
Like and can relate to your piece...despite the pain I\'d have it all again....but deliberate?
September 10th, 2022 19:52
Doggerel Dave said:
I do hope your R&R (if that \'s what it be - though I fear it may not..) is safe this time...!
Like and can relate to your piece...despite the pain I\'d have it all again....but deliberate?
September 10th, 2022 19:52
Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love the poem, Neville. Enjoy your holiday. In your note, however, I shudder at the word \"eventual\"
September 10th, 2022 13:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love the poem, Neville. Enjoy your holiday. In your note, however, I shudder at the word \"eventual\"
September 10th, 2022 13:48
Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Nev. -the depth of this verse really hits home in that hearts who count hurt as sweet show love is forever - --- another gem for my faves. dear friend............x
September 10th, 2022 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Nev. -the depth of this verse really hits home in that hearts who count hurt as sweet show love is forever - --- another gem for my faves. dear friend............x
September 10th, 2022 03:19
Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
spilleronsheet said:
A very good one dear Neville…maybe he was lovestruck or blinded by his dreams…wonder what kept him amused…
September 10th, 2022 01:41
spilleronsheet said:
A very good one dear Neville…maybe he was lovestruck or blinded by his dreams…wonder what kept him amused…
September 10th, 2022 01:41
Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories are always there of people we have met Neville.
Andy
September 10th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories are always there of people we have met Neville.
Andy
September 10th, 2022 00:38
Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Bella Shepard said:
The jaundiced eyes may tell all when the mind does accept, \'tis easier to stare at the sun. An intuitive write my friend.
September 9th, 2022 13:24
Bella Shepard said:
The jaundiced eyes may tell all when the mind does accept, \'tis easier to stare at the sun. An intuitive write my friend.
September 9th, 2022 13:24
Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot to think about here, Neville.
September 9th, 2022 08:28
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot to think about here, Neville.
September 9th, 2022 08:28
Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Doggerel Dave said:
A prey to some ultimately addictive substance, or mystic?
Never managed to obtain a toxicology report then, Neville?
So why not give the poor old bugger the benefit of the doubt?
A gem of an enigmatic write.
September 9th, 2022 08:12
Doggerel Dave said:
A prey to some ultimately addictive substance, or mystic?
Never managed to obtain a toxicology report then, Neville?
So why not give the poor old bugger the benefit of the doubt?
A gem of an enigmatic write.
September 9th, 2022 08:12
Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Fay Slimm. said:
Met but never forgotten I guess is that unassuming small chap - -- within your memory his sun-blighted eyes no doubt take centre stage - - a portrait worthy of sharing which you penned so well dear friend.
September 9th, 2022 03:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Met but never forgotten I guess is that unassuming small chap - -- within your memory his sun-blighted eyes no doubt take centre stage - - a portrait worthy of sharing which you penned so well dear friend.
September 9th, 2022 03:15
Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
orchidee said:
I\'m a \'blue eyed boy\' of course, teachers pet, etc! lol. Pet? That must be Fido.
September 9th, 2022 02:24
orchidee said:
I\'m a \'blue eyed boy\' of course, teachers pet, etc! lol. Pet? That must be Fido.
September 9th, 2022 02:24
Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Neville said:
I may be unassuming, but I assure you, I still have my baby blue eyes .. and of course, my hammer .. N :)
September 9th, 2022 02:22
Neville said:
I may be unassuming, but I assure you, I still have my baby blue eyes .. and of course, my hammer .. N :)
September 9th, 2022 02:22
Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
jarcher54 said:
Self-portrait? I dunno but ya nailed me!
September 9th, 2022 02:15
jarcher54 said:
Self-portrait? I dunno but ya nailed me!
September 9th, 2022 02:15
On Being Too Gentle
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab poem on how men can be taught new ways and get surprised themselves instead of alarming. Sublime and subtle muse. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
September 8th, 2022 13:24
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab poem on how men can be taught new ways and get surprised themselves instead of alarming. Sublime and subtle muse. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
September 8th, 2022 13:24
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Bella Shepard said:
Yes, I can see a teeny bit of tongue and cheek, however subtle. But I would suggest just one at a time. Stay strong my friend, you\'re gonna need it.
September 6th, 2022 13:23
Bella Shepard said:
Yes, I can see a teeny bit of tongue and cheek, however subtle. But I would suggest just one at a time. Stay strong my friend, you\'re gonna need it.
September 6th, 2022 13:23
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Jerry Reynolds said:
Now that was fun coffee reading, Neville.
September 6th, 2022 08:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
Now that was fun coffee reading, Neville.
September 6th, 2022 08:49
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Fay Slimm. said:
When so politely asked I wonder just who would step forward for just a taste of that indiscretion - - an aunt or a grandma maybe..........x
September 6th, 2022 08:39
Fay Slimm. said:
When so politely asked I wonder just who would step forward for just a taste of that indiscretion - - an aunt or a grandma maybe..........x
September 6th, 2022 08:39
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
orchidee said:
Someone having fun? or not having \'any\'? Swoon! lol. Revive me Fido.
September 6th, 2022 06:33
orchidee said:
Someone having fun? or not having \'any\'? Swoon! lol. Revive me Fido.
September 6th, 2022 06:33
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
dusk arising said:
Oh sisters and cousins, such a lot they have to answer for. Or is it me?
September 6th, 2022 05:08
dusk arising said:
Oh sisters and cousins, such a lot they have to answer for. Or is it me?
September 6th, 2022 05:08
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