Comments received on poems by Neville
Just a Series of Thoughts
Christina8 said:
Beautiful metaphors my friend. I like this poem very much!
February 22nd, 2022 08:30
Christina8 said:
Beautiful metaphors my friend. I like this poem very much!
February 22nd, 2022 08:30
Just a Series of Thoughts
L. B. Mek said:
we do think ourselves fake
when digging deep
in-to those truth\'s, we keep
for
we get to see, too clearly
just how many faces
we adorn, to survive
this incessant hurricane
of chaotic, absurdity
we call, life..
(love how you worded this poem
especially poignant
in our current stormy season)
\'The, Poet\' is back
all is well then
all is well
February 22nd, 2022 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
we do think ourselves fake
when digging deep
in-to those truth\'s, we keep
for
we get to see, too clearly
just how many faces
we adorn, to survive
this incessant hurricane
of chaotic, absurdity
we call, life..
(love how you worded this poem
especially poignant
in our current stormy season)
\'The, Poet\' is back
all is well then
all is well
February 22nd, 2022 06:16
Just a Series of Thoughts
spilleronsheet said:
Even the series of thoughts could be so deep
He turned into a romantic actor
That moon shining amidst the grey clouds
Carrying the hearts of lovers around
Good one dear Neville
Enjoyed a lot while reading it
February 22nd, 2022 06:13
spilleronsheet said:
Even the series of thoughts could be so deep
He turned into a romantic actor
That moon shining amidst the grey clouds
Carrying the hearts of lovers around
Good one dear Neville
Enjoyed a lot while reading it
February 22nd, 2022 06:13
Just a Series of Thoughts
Fay Slimm. said:
Two views from observing luna appearance and thinking in metaphor - - I love your musings amigo.....x
February 22nd, 2022 05:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Two views from observing luna appearance and thinking in metaphor - - I love your musings amigo.....x
February 22nd, 2022 05:58
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah - but who got their end away........in the end?
😊😊😊
February 21st, 2022 21:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Aah - but who got their end away........in the end?
😊😊😊
February 21st, 2022 21:57
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Rozina said:
My favourite band of all time. Paul McCartney was my favourite, my husband’s was John Lennon. George and Ringo not as popular amongst our group of friends. Thank you for bringing up this memory.
February 21st, 2022 21:48
Rozina said:
My favourite band of all time. Paul McCartney was my favourite, my husband’s was John Lennon. George and Ringo not as popular amongst our group of friends. Thank you for bringing up this memory.
February 21st, 2022 21:48
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Paul Bell said:
Poor Pete, did he make any money out of the Beatles.
February 21st, 2022 14:02
Paul Bell said:
Poor Pete, did he make any money out of the Beatles.
February 21st, 2022 14:02
A Long Pretence
Christina8 said:
Brilliant writing as always but I think we have all felt this way with someone possibly when we were younger. Love this!
February 21st, 2022 12:33
Christina8 said:
Brilliant writing as always but I think we have all felt this way with someone possibly when we were younger. Love this!
February 21st, 2022 12:33
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Christina8 said:
A fine write indeed! I am not as familiar with the beatles as I\'d like to be but I get the gist..x
February 21st, 2022 09:19
Christina8 said:
A fine write indeed! I am not as familiar with the beatles as I\'d like to be but I get the gist..x
February 21st, 2022 09:19
Five Beatles and a Groupie
L. B. Mek said:
Beatles of fun....
...
..
.
no, no one else? pffttt
fine then
I\'ll keep my wannabe
Liverpudlian humour
to myself!
(well for a day at least) 😁
February 21st, 2022 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
Beatles of fun....
...
..
.
no, no one else? pffttt
fine then
I\'ll keep my wannabe
Liverpudlian humour
to myself!
(well for a day at least) 😁
February 21st, 2022 07:05
A Long Pretence
spilleronsheet said:
A sad poetic ode of heart singing melancholy
I hope it’s just words
Not true, but if it is, good time shall be soon coming around with a beautiful maiden wrapped around…
February 21st, 2022 05:32
spilleronsheet said:
A sad poetic ode of heart singing melancholy
I hope it’s just words
Not true, but if it is, good time shall be soon coming around with a beautiful maiden wrapped around…
February 21st, 2022 05:32
Five Beatles and a Groupie
spilleronsheet said:
Wow
Now I can hear the band in my mind
Nice poetry dear Neville
To some stars no one can replace…
February 21st, 2022 05:29
spilleronsheet said:
Wow
Now I can hear the band in my mind
Nice poetry dear Neville
To some stars no one can replace…
February 21st, 2022 05:29
Five Beatles and a Groupie
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Now my \'I remember when.....\'. series of poems. It covers 5 million years! lol.
February 21st, 2022 04:04
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Now my \'I remember when.....\'. series of poems. It covers 5 million years! lol.
February 21st, 2022 04:04
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville. I was there.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 03:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Neville. I was there.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 03:57
Five Beatles and a Groupie
Fay Slimm. said:
Grinning at this bit of bringing back \"those-were-the-days\" Nev - I love the fact that I was there back then with all that loud groupie laughter.......... gos on wid ya my luverly rouser of mem\'ries.......... xx
February 21st, 2022 03:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Grinning at this bit of bringing back \"those-were-the-days\" Nev - I love the fact that I was there back then with all that loud groupie laughter.......... gos on wid ya my luverly rouser of mem\'ries.......... xx
February 21st, 2022 03:39
A Long Pretence
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville but there will be some one out there.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville but there will be some one out there.
Andy
February 21st, 2022 01:53
A Long Pretence
Doggerel Dave said:
Happens to us all sometime, I think Nev. Remember the fleeting, oh so very fleeting good moments and enjoy that walk with your hound. Best wishes.
February 20th, 2022 20:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Happens to us all sometime, I think Nev. Remember the fleeting, oh so very fleeting good moments and enjoy that walk with your hound. Best wishes.
February 20th, 2022 20:25
A Long Pretence
Poetic Dan said:
Keep sailing on the only difference is how each of us brave the storms.
I always admire your open heart
Thanks for sharing my friend
February 20th, 2022 13:53
Poetic Dan said:
Keep sailing on the only difference is how each of us brave the storms.
I always admire your open heart
Thanks for sharing my friend
February 20th, 2022 13:53
A Long Pretence
Dove said:
Oh another way of saying you were living a lie... Sometimes we live in a fairy tale made for one... Excellent Writing
February 20th, 2022 07:56
Dove said:
Oh another way of saying you were living a lie... Sometimes we live in a fairy tale made for one... Excellent Writing
February 20th, 2022 07:56
A Long Pretence
orchidee said:
If you\'re not meeting her now - should I?! lol.
February 20th, 2022 06:44
orchidee said:
If you\'re not meeting her now - should I?! lol.
February 20th, 2022 06:44
A Long Pretence
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad thought but time to call it a day when there is not even a trace of the feeling of Us - -- pretence starts to hurt when playing dead roles. Marvelous use of few -worded lines again mi clever amigo........ x and x
February 20th, 2022 06:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad thought but time to call it a day when there is not even a trace of the feeling of Us - -- pretence starts to hurt when playing dead roles. Marvelous use of few -worded lines again mi clever amigo........ x and x
February 20th, 2022 06:26
A Long Pretence
Rozina said:
Sad when this happens. All the best to you. X X X
February 20th, 2022 05:15
Rozina said:
Sad when this happens. All the best to you. X X X
February 20th, 2022 05:15
A Long Pretence
Paul Bell said:
Sadly, some women judge a guy on the last guy, and so it goes on.
At some point in time, the penny drops, and you\'ll be off with Sally.
February 20th, 2022 04:43
Paul Bell said:
Sadly, some women judge a guy on the last guy, and so it goes on.
At some point in time, the penny drops, and you\'ll be off with Sally.
February 20th, 2022 04:43
A Single X
Goldfinch60 said:
That first kiss is always remembered Neville.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That first kiss is always remembered Neville.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 01:49
A Single X
Rozina said:
You’ve got me thinking - why is X used for a kiss? As Neil said X was given for mistakes. It’s still romantic.
February 19th, 2022 18:29
Rozina said:
You’ve got me thinking - why is X used for a kiss? As Neil said X was given for mistakes. It’s still romantic.
February 19th, 2022 18:29
A Single X
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to have you back today Nev. and to read your welcome intriguingly worded verses again - - - the fortunate She will love this romantic appeal for more kisses and will surely agree - -- - - - but in the meanwhile I will leave more than my usual one hoping that these will suffice as a substitute \'til you get increases from your special lady - - - - - I love that final line by the way........ x...x
February 19th, 2022 07:42
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to have you back today Nev. and to read your welcome intriguingly worded verses again - - - the fortunate She will love this romantic appeal for more kisses and will surely agree - -- - - - but in the meanwhile I will leave more than my usual one hoping that these will suffice as a substitute \'til you get increases from your special lady - - - - - I love that final line by the way........ x...x
February 19th, 2022 07:42
A Single X
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you need to start with one kiss, and hopefully it will build up to more. In saying that, I\'m thinking one kiss here is maybe one too many.
February 19th, 2022 05:59
Paul Bell said:
I suppose you need to start with one kiss, and hopefully it will build up to more. In saying that, I\'m thinking one kiss here is maybe one too many.
February 19th, 2022 05:59
Yankee Jack
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah a super fab poem on a fine soldiery statue, it made the statue personality seem more invincible. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:20
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah a super fab poem on a fine soldiery statue, it made the statue personality seem more invincible. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:20
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