Comments received on poems by Neville
Chasing the Carpet
L. B. Mek said:
we can word it as we may,
dear empathetic Hyung
\'chasing the carpet\'
\'chasing the bottom of a bottle\'
\'chase the escape
in a numbing, embrace..\'
and on...
pathetic, how some men out there
try to warp it in-to a gender fight
rather than, witnessing
a person, in need
a humane tragedy, unfolding..
I\'m ever astounded, at Gaia\'s
levels of tolerance
at a mere read of your words
my volcanic rage, is poised
to spew lava hate
February 3rd, 2023 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
we can word it as we may,
dear empathetic Hyung
\'chasing the carpet\'
\'chasing the bottom of a bottle\'
\'chase the escape
in a numbing, embrace..\'
and on...
pathetic, how some men out there
try to warp it in-to a gender fight
rather than, witnessing
a person, in need
a humane tragedy, unfolding..
I\'m ever astounded, at Gaia\'s
levels of tolerance
at a mere read of your words
my volcanic rage, is poised
to spew lava hate
February 3rd, 2023 04:02
Hello Again Marianne
L. B. Mek said:
\'I have lost a telephone
with your smell in it\'
(just a privilege
to read your memorable words
dear Poet supreme!)
love the unfolding reveal
a soundless beat
distilling subtlety\'s nuances
a line at a time..
February 3rd, 2023 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'I have lost a telephone
with your smell in it\'
(just a privilege
to read your memorable words
dear Poet supreme!)
love the unfolding reveal
a soundless beat
distilling subtlety\'s nuances
a line at a time..
February 3rd, 2023 03:53
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful Hyung
more vivid than a HD8k, vid...
(Intimacy, need not be
panting, breathlessness
its intoxicating, to be entwined
arms and legs, nothing else
headache\'s, as opportunity
to express a more lasting
chemistry, sensuality
knowing, in your arms
beats a heart, you trust outright...)
February 3rd, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful Hyung
more vivid than a HD8k, vid...
(Intimacy, need not be
panting, breathlessness
its intoxicating, to be entwined
arms and legs, nothing else
headache\'s, as opportunity
to express a more lasting
chemistry, sensuality
knowing, in your arms
beats a heart, you trust outright...)
February 3rd, 2023 03:47
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
orchidee said:
I\'ll chuck KP in that holy brook! We\'ve a Brook of that very name in our town.
February 3rd, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
I\'ll chuck KP in that holy brook! We\'ve a Brook of that very name in our town.
February 3rd, 2023 03:10
Chasing the Carpet
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness is that that anyone should become the slave of such a monster, where the brain trumps all in it\'s need to feed addiction. How little we realize that the brain has a mind of its own, inspite of us. A very powerful and pertinent write dear friend.
February 2nd, 2023 14:00
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness is that that anyone should become the slave of such a monster, where the brain trumps all in it\'s need to feed addiction. How little we realize that the brain has a mind of its own, inspite of us. A very powerful and pertinent write dear friend.
February 2nd, 2023 14:00
Chasing the Carpet
Doggerel Dave said:
You got me - I\'m glad there were early entrants to this column with more know than I have. Sounds sad, but you would have to convince me......Too hardened by having been told that a toke of maryj would have me flying out the window....🙂
February 2nd, 2023 07:50
Doggerel Dave said:
You got me - I\'m glad there were early entrants to this column with more know than I have. Sounds sad, but you would have to convince me......Too hardened by having been told that a toke of maryj would have me flying out the window....🙂
February 2nd, 2023 07:50
Chasing the Carpet
arqios said:
For a while there I was envisioning a flying carpet chase. But reality is, there is a deep sorrow underneath all these cases and lives.
February 2nd, 2023 04:44
arqios said:
For a while there I was envisioning a flying carpet chase. But reality is, there is a deep sorrow underneath all these cases and lives.
February 2nd, 2023 04:44
Chasing the Carpet
Christina8 said:
Wow. This is an epic piece for those addicted to crack and will search for
a piece so tiny as to cause bloody knees.....tragic!
February 2nd, 2023 03:24
Christina8 said:
Wow. This is an epic piece for those addicted to crack and will search for
a piece so tiny as to cause bloody knees.....tragic!
February 2nd, 2023 03:24
Chasing the Carpet
Fay Slimm. said:
The tragic addiction to drugs such as crack will reduce a poor human to less than a rabid animal and you pen it so vividly - - a shock of a read that happens on as your note says \"an increasingly frequent basis\" in your line of care.......x
February 2nd, 2023 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
The tragic addiction to drugs such as crack will reduce a poor human to less than a rabid animal and you pen it so vividly - - a shock of a read that happens on as your note says \"an increasingly frequent basis\" in your line of care.......x
February 2nd, 2023 03:07
Chasing the Carpet
orchidee said:
OCD?
Ohh, KP never does any housework. She\'s too busy having Botox! lol.
February 2nd, 2023 02:55
orchidee said:
OCD?
Ohh, KP never does any housework. She\'s too busy having Botox! lol.
February 2nd, 2023 02:55
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Dove said:
Being a Dove, I love all feathered poems. Loved it. Beautiful
February 1st, 2023 12:30
Dove said:
Being a Dove, I love all feathered poems. Loved it. Beautiful
February 1st, 2023 12:30
Hello Again Marianne
Dove said:
Nice. I guess I\'m not familiar with the artist. But you always sway to the beat. Lol
February 1st, 2023 12:28
Dove said:
Nice. I guess I\'m not familiar with the artist. But you always sway to the beat. Lol
February 1st, 2023 12:28
Hello Again Marianne
Fay Slimm. said:
What an album to echo within your worthy words Nev. Cohen knew how to appeal with his deep and unforgettable voice laughing and crying with missed Marianne. Thanks for the back-when reminder mon ami....x
February 1st, 2023 09:41
Fay Slimm. said:
What an album to echo within your worthy words Nev. Cohen knew how to appeal with his deep and unforgettable voice laughing and crying with missed Marianne. Thanks for the back-when reminder mon ami....x
February 1st, 2023 09:41
Hello Again Marianne
orchidee said:
Should I start calling KP Marianne?! lol.
February 1st, 2023 08:24
orchidee said:
Should I start calling KP Marianne?! lol.
February 1st, 2023 08:24
Hello Again Marianne
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to find the CD and hope it replicates the album ..too late at night...may get back, but what more can I say about Leonard that I haven\'t....
February 1st, 2023 06:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to find the CD and hope it replicates the album ..too late at night...may get back, but what more can I say about Leonard that I haven\'t....
February 1st, 2023 06:38
Hello Again Marianne
arqios said:
Oh wow, that is a whole album. Too bad there wasn\'t a song called \'Songs from a Room.\'
February 1st, 2023 04:12
arqios said:
Oh wow, that is a whole album. Too bad there wasn\'t a song called \'Songs from a Room.\'
February 1st, 2023 04:12
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, may you fly together in ecstasy.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, may you fly together in ecstasy.
Andy
February 1st, 2023 02:58
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Bella Shepard said:
Feathers are such gentle things, ethereal and beautiful. Such fitting imagery for an act that dreams are built upon. Love should not be rushed, but anticipated and savored. Great write my friend!
January 31st, 2023 15:03
Bella Shepard said:
Feathers are such gentle things, ethereal and beautiful. Such fitting imagery for an act that dreams are built upon. Love should not be rushed, but anticipated and savored. Great write my friend!
January 31st, 2023 15:03
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Christina8 said:
\"flying\" is such a beautiful way of describing young love where there isn\'t any \"hint of regret at all\". What a wonderful recollection!
January 31st, 2023 09:22
Christina8 said:
\"flying\" is such a beautiful way of describing young love where there isn\'t any \"hint of regret at all\". What a wonderful recollection!
January 31st, 2023 09:22
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
orchidee said:
I was ready to fly with KP, but she meant she was gonna wear a Red Indian head-dress. Doh!
She gets up to some odd things.
January 31st, 2023 05:46
orchidee said:
I was ready to fly with KP, but she meant she was gonna wear a Red Indian head-dress. Doh!
She gets up to some odd things.
January 31st, 2023 05:46
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Flying\" is just the right word for making high whoopee with someone you love and I\'ll have you know heads full of feathers need shaking up with kisses and hugs
- another sigh of a read dear amigo..................x
January 31st, 2023 05:13
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Flying\" is just the right word for making high whoopee with someone you love and I\'ll have you know heads full of feathers need shaking up with kisses and hugs
- another sigh of a read dear amigo..................x
January 31st, 2023 05:13
Smile
Caring dove said:
That’s nice , that you have a book published ) well done ) and lovely writing
January 31st, 2023 05:06
Caring dove said:
That’s nice , that you have a book published ) well done ) and lovely writing
January 31st, 2023 05:06
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Caring dove said:
Feathers makes me think of freedom , light energy and gentle peace .
Lovely writing )) so nicely expressed
January 31st, 2023 05:04
Caring dove said:
Feathers makes me think of freedom , light energy and gentle peace .
Lovely writing )) so nicely expressed
January 31st, 2023 05:04
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
arqios said:
Brought me to that old phrase about having feathers for brains but love love covers so many things... for my part I spit out feathers first thing every morning...
January 31st, 2023 05:01
arqios said:
Brought me to that old phrase about having feathers for brains but love love covers so many things... for my part I spit out feathers first thing every morning...
January 31st, 2023 05:01
Smile
Doggerel Dave said:
Your latest publication - yes, always worth a smile and congratulations, Nev.
January 30th, 2023 07:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Your latest publication - yes, always worth a smile and congratulations, Nev.
January 30th, 2023 07:24
Smile
Christina8 said:
This short poem says it all...and a \'warm summers night\" is exactly what I dream of. Congratulations on your newest book!! x
January 30th, 2023 07:09
Christina8 said:
This short poem says it all...and a \'warm summers night\" is exactly what I dream of. Congratulations on your newest book!! x
January 30th, 2023 07:09
Making Out On a Loop
L. B. Mek said:
\'If you, but promise me\'
so tender, so subtle sweet
thank you! dear Poet supreme
(betting on life
with our heart\'s on the line
as our way of life
since that very first time
our pulse, raged
to let us know, this is our stop
all that\'s left now
is return trips, of memento\'s
being relived)
January 30th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'If you, but promise me\'
so tender, so subtle sweet
thank you! dear Poet supreme
(betting on life
with our heart\'s on the line
as our way of life
since that very first time
our pulse, raged
to let us know, this is our stop
all that\'s left now
is return trips, of memento\'s
being relived)
January 30th, 2023 04:09
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