Comments received on poems by Neville
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading between exposes bigotry and is vital when lines are mainly religious -- am liking your take on a sticky subject that tends to separate - yet truth will out so they say................great piece for some deep pondering ..........x
January 21st, 2022 06:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading between exposes bigotry and is vital when lines are mainly religious -- am liking your take on a sticky subject that tends to separate - yet truth will out so they say................great piece for some deep pondering ..........x
January 21st, 2022 06:46
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
orchidee said:
It\'s surely want some people have made \'religion\'.
Put a cat among the pigeons - some say Roman Catholic Church is the Antichrist, the \'abomination\'. It\'s not hard to disagree with folk who say that.
Baaa - I\'m still a sheep! lol.
January 21st, 2022 05:18
orchidee said:
It\'s surely want some people have made \'religion\'.
Put a cat among the pigeons - some say Roman Catholic Church is the Antichrist, the \'abomination\'. It\'s not hard to disagree with folk who say that.
Baaa - I\'m still a sheep! lol.
January 21st, 2022 05:18
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
dusk arising said:
I like what Goldfinch wrote and fully support it.
Each of the organised religions seems full of ambiguity and each display the disgusting practice of childhood indoctrination by use of fear.
We are quite naturally spiritual beings. This spiritual side of us has been traditionally hijacked by the organised religions.
A really thought provoking post today Neville though I doubt it will even register with the few \'devout\' sheep who regularly spout religious rubbish on MPS.
January 21st, 2022 04:09
dusk arising said:
I like what Goldfinch wrote and fully support it.
Each of the organised religions seems full of ambiguity and each display the disgusting practice of childhood indoctrination by use of fear.
We are quite naturally spiritual beings. This spiritual side of us has been traditionally hijacked by the organised religions.
A really thought provoking post today Neville though I doubt it will even register with the few \'devout\' sheep who regularly spout religious rubbish on MPS.
January 21st, 2022 04:09
Someone Else’s Religion Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
I have read between the lines and found that organised religion just leads people into a life where only one thing is believed and the truth is never told.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 04:02
Goldfinch60 said:
I have read between the lines and found that organised religion just leads people into a life where only one thing is believed and the truth is never told.
Andy
January 21st, 2022 04:02
Like a Lark on the Rise
dusk arising said:
Your words today are a lesson in dignity for us all. No finer and more respectful way could there be for a parting of two who once trod the finest path but now should part.
The emotion carries such elegance.
Into my favourites for sure
January 19th, 2022 11:21
dusk arising said:
Your words today are a lesson in dignity for us all. No finer and more respectful way could there be for a parting of two who once trod the finest path but now should part.
The emotion carries such elegance.
Into my favourites for sure
January 19th, 2022 11:21
Like a Lark on the Rise
Fay Slimm. said:
Endings could never be sweeter that this - - yu\'ve dun it agen for me with that fab title and final line...........x.
January 19th, 2022 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Endings could never be sweeter that this - - yu\'ve dun it agen for me with that fab title and final line...........x.
January 19th, 2022 04:50
Like a Lark on the Rise
spilleronsheet said:
It’s the forbidden love in my eyes
When in complexity facing the dire
The lovers had to choose separate over time
Very endearing poetry
January 19th, 2022 03:30
spilleronsheet said:
It’s the forbidden love in my eyes
When in complexity facing the dire
The lovers had to choose separate over time
Very endearing poetry
January 19th, 2022 03:30
Like a Lark on the Rise
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful words ))
January 19th, 2022 03:27
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful words ))
January 19th, 2022 03:27
Checking the Night Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
The night sky is so wonderful and the moon overseeing our lives is so special within them.
Did you howl at the wolf moon this week? LOL
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
The night sky is so wonderful and the moon overseeing our lives is so special within them.
Did you howl at the wolf moon this week? LOL
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:39
Checking the Night Sky
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I really like your choice of words 🙂
Great poem and good flow , too
January 18th, 2022 16:27
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I really like your choice of words 🙂
Great poem and good flow , too
January 18th, 2022 16:27
Checking the Night Sky
GypsyLady said:
what a wonderfully written, image filled poem, with a bit of mystical intrigue...beautifully done!
January 18th, 2022 11:51
GypsyLady said:
what a wonderfully written, image filled poem, with a bit of mystical intrigue...beautifully done!
January 18th, 2022 11:51
Checking the Night Sky
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful imagery
Woven in nature
Woven with fantasy in my dreams
As if a dream was painted
Lost in the jewel studded in sky
So was the deep poetry that you laid in those lines
So surreal
January 18th, 2022 08:40
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful imagery
Woven in nature
Woven with fantasy in my dreams
As if a dream was painted
Lost in the jewel studded in sky
So was the deep poetry that you laid in those lines
So surreal
January 18th, 2022 08:40
Checking the Night Sky
L. B. Mek said:
poetry like fine wine, needs to age
so its juices can blossom
into a deeper, velvet of subtly nuanced
flavour,
I imagine, upon reading this
for the tenth time
I\'ll glean a hundred percent, more
of its poetic, sublime...
(love the flow
and that, smack in the face
last line)
just more of your poetic elegance
showcasing itself, once again
dear Poet
January 18th, 2022 07:18
L. B. Mek said:
poetry like fine wine, needs to age
so its juices can blossom
into a deeper, velvet of subtly nuanced
flavour,
I imagine, upon reading this
for the tenth time
I\'ll glean a hundred percent, more
of its poetic, sublime...
(love the flow
and that, smack in the face
last line)
just more of your poetic elegance
showcasing itself, once again
dear Poet
January 18th, 2022 07:18
Checking the Night Sky
Fay Slimm. said:
Faced with endurance those ridges seen with poetic vision glow like jewels within this prose-piece of personified skill -- a pleasure as always Nev. to re-read and guess your clever inferences in this night-sky tribute of perception\'s alliterative treat............x
January 18th, 2022 03:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Faced with endurance those ridges seen with poetic vision glow like jewels within this prose-piece of personified skill -- a pleasure as always Nev. to re-read and guess your clever inferences in this night-sky tribute of perception\'s alliterative treat............x
January 18th, 2022 03:41
Checking the Night Sky
orchidee said:
There\'s some giant asteroid thingy passing by Earth tonight (Tues) I think it is. About a million miles or more away from us though (phew).
Meanwhile - can I meet her?! lol.
January 18th, 2022 03:12
orchidee said:
There\'s some giant asteroid thingy passing by Earth tonight (Tues) I think it is. About a million miles or more away from us though (phew).
Meanwhile - can I meet her?! lol.
January 18th, 2022 03:12
Now Pinned to the Sky
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'d have to think that child labor goes back thousands of years,..it\'s so disheartening to know its still a reality of today\'s modern world,...maybe it\'s not so modern after all. Great piece Neville✌🕊
January 17th, 2022 12:03
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I\'d have to think that child labor goes back thousands of years,..it\'s so disheartening to know its still a reality of today\'s modern world,...maybe it\'s not so modern after all. Great piece Neville✌🕊
January 17th, 2022 12:03
Now Pinned to the Sky
dusk arising said:
And were planted beneath stones in row upon row if there was enough left of them to be identifyable. Fodder sent to foreign lands at politicians whim to pull triggers and fire acorns of hate and sorrow into generations to come.
And for those poor souls we now reap the harvest of vengence blasting holes into our society.
January 17th, 2022 08:46
dusk arising said:
And were planted beneath stones in row upon row if there was enough left of them to be identifyable. Fodder sent to foreign lands at politicians whim to pull triggers and fire acorns of hate and sorrow into generations to come.
And for those poor souls we now reap the harvest of vengence blasting holes into our society.
January 17th, 2022 08:46
Now Pinned to the Sky
L. B. Mek said:
\'like some
kids cartoon moon
beneath
an arc light bulb
burning
both the moth and
the fool ..\'
\'It must have been
special
to depart without
warning
and then to desert
us cold,
scared and hungry
boy soldiers
unready for war ..\'
(The
Poet
is back, all is well
then
All: is well, where
we pray
it shall remain)
my family, made refugees of us, all
and denounced
their comfortable, way of life
so they could prevent me
from being included
as one of those boys
immortalised in your poignant words..
and I have
but dissipated hopes and dreams
to repay them with
how shallow, this life
how unbearably shallow
it all ends-up, rotting
in its
six feet deep, Unpoetic
finale...
(I shall treasure this write, Hyung
thank you, dear Iridescent Poet)
I remain, your unwavering Fan
my friend
January 17th, 2022 08:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'like some
kids cartoon moon
beneath
an arc light bulb
burning
both the moth and
the fool ..\'
\'It must have been
special
to depart without
warning
and then to desert
us cold,
scared and hungry
boy soldiers
unready for war ..\'
(The
Poet
is back, all is well
then
All: is well, where
we pray
it shall remain)
my family, made refugees of us, all
and denounced
their comfortable, way of life
so they could prevent me
from being included
as one of those boys
immortalised in your poignant words..
and I have
but dissipated hopes and dreams
to repay them with
how shallow, this life
how unbearably shallow
it all ends-up, rotting
in its
six feet deep, Unpoetic
finale...
(I shall treasure this write, Hyung
thank you, dear Iridescent Poet)
I remain, your unwavering Fan
my friend
January 17th, 2022 08:09
Now Pinned to the Sky
Rozina said:
What a waste. We must not forget. Thank you for this timely reminder.
January 17th, 2022 04:53
Rozina said:
What a waste. We must not forget. Thank you for this timely reminder.
January 17th, 2022 04:53
Now Pinned to the Sky
spilleronsheet said:
Less words with so much depth
Spoken by a mightier pen
Again a deep poetry was woven
A painting engrossed with grief painted
Calligrapher the words that made us cry
So poignant dear Neville
January 17th, 2022 04:39
spilleronsheet said:
Less words with so much depth
Spoken by a mightier pen
Again a deep poetry was woven
A painting engrossed with grief painted
Calligrapher the words that made us cry
So poignant dear Neville
January 17th, 2022 04:39
Now Pinned to the Sky
Fay Slimm. said:
Waste indeed Nev the abuse of child labour for indifferent war and writ here with deep feeling for the many \"unready\" boy soldiers no longer with us - - meant thanks dear friend for this needed reminder not to ever forget..............x
January 17th, 2022 03:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Waste indeed Nev the abuse of child labour for indifferent war and writ here with deep feeling for the many \"unready\" boy soldiers no longer with us - - meant thanks dear friend for this needed reminder not to ever forget..............x
January 17th, 2022 03:23
Now Pinned to the Sky
Draven said:
Great read and very well written and set out.
January 17th, 2022 02:57
Draven said:
Great read and very well written and set out.
January 17th, 2022 02:57
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