Comments received on poems by Neville
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a woman of good sense, as well as beguiling. Best to lay the ground works up front, no surprises? But then a surprise here and there lends a little spice. So playfully and temptingly written my friend!
October 5th, 2022 12:16
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a woman of good sense, as well as beguiling. Best to lay the ground works up front, no surprises? But then a surprise here and there lends a little spice. So playfully and temptingly written my friend!
October 5th, 2022 12:16
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
Fay Slimm. said:
What an alluring title mon ami - -- the lady was playing wisely with issues of future behaviour. and gentle or dangerous she knew the ropes before love moved in. Some readers will relate to these words - including me if I might say...........x
October 5th, 2022 11:25
Fay Slimm. said:
What an alluring title mon ami - -- the lady was playing wisely with issues of future behaviour. and gentle or dangerous she knew the ropes before love moved in. Some readers will relate to these words - including me if I might say...........x
October 5th, 2022 11:25
With Nothing More to Lose
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:36
With Nothing More to Lose
MendedFences27 said:
To begin it reads like a love poem with all the trappings: \"rainbows,\" \"waterfalls,\" \"stained glass,\" \"handkerchief,\" and her \"eyes.\' Then, it shifts to the tragedy that it becomes. Having read it several times one discovers that it is in fact a Love poem.
Well done, it drew me in and held me spellbound until the end. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2022 19:01
MendedFences27 said:
To begin it reads like a love poem with all the trappings: \"rainbows,\" \"waterfalls,\" \"stained glass,\" \"handkerchief,\" and her \"eyes.\' Then, it shifts to the tragedy that it becomes. Having read it several times one discovers that it is in fact a Love poem.
Well done, it drew me in and held me spellbound until the end. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2022 19:01
With Nothing More to Lose
Bella Shepard said:
The way you have used the imagery of color to bring this piece to life is extraordinary. Bittersweet, heartbreakingly beautiful. A true fav!
October 4th, 2022 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
The way you have used the imagery of color to bring this piece to life is extraordinary. Bittersweet, heartbreakingly beautiful. A true fav!
October 4th, 2022 13:40
With Nothing More to Lose
Fay Slimm. said:
A linguistic picture of heart-touching moments when tears tell more than one piece of a story through your expertise with the pen. Unmatched your ways with words my dear friend.
October 4th, 2022 09:27
Fay Slimm. said:
A linguistic picture of heart-touching moments when tears tell more than one piece of a story through your expertise with the pen. Unmatched your ways with words my dear friend.
October 4th, 2022 09:27
With Nothing More to Lose
arqios said:
Beauty and sadness all rolled up together. How could they co-exist and yet they do!
October 4th, 2022 05:43
arqios said:
Beauty and sadness all rolled up together. How could they co-exist and yet they do!
October 4th, 2022 05:43
The True Value of Dreaming
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldn\'t agree more with this.
Dreams are the flames that engulf us into action.
Thx dear poetic friend!
October 3rd, 2022 15:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldn\'t agree more with this.
Dreams are the flames that engulf us into action.
Thx dear poetic friend!
October 3rd, 2022 15:36
The True Value of Dreaming
Christina8 said:
An accurate description of dream life.....I wish to dream during my waking hours....your last two lines are so true and wonderful!
October 3rd, 2022 14:10
Christina8 said:
An accurate description of dream life.....I wish to dream during my waking hours....your last two lines are so true and wonderful!
October 3rd, 2022 14:10
The True Value of Dreaming
Bella Shepard said:
The word \"unconditionally\" resonates for me. I think that dreaming, be it nocturnal or day, is our way of finding perspective in our lives, blending what we know and what we hope for into some kind of meaningful existence. Such well chosen words my friend. Truly a fav.
October 3rd, 2022 13:12
Bella Shepard said:
The word \"unconditionally\" resonates for me. I think that dreaming, be it nocturnal or day, is our way of finding perspective in our lives, blending what we know and what we hope for into some kind of meaningful existence. Such well chosen words my friend. Truly a fav.
October 3rd, 2022 13:12
The True Value of Dreaming
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with naughty wishes be my dreams mon ami - - --
but methinks that hope never dies.
Perfectly penned your value of dreaming...........x
October 3rd, 2022 07:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with naughty wishes be my dreams mon ami - - --
but methinks that hope never dies.
Perfectly penned your value of dreaming...........x
October 3rd, 2022 07:52
The True Value of Dreaming
Neville said:
I do so appreciate your disclosure DD a Freud of mine who was more of an expert in the field than me .. I\'m just Gestalting by the way, that you may be too Jung to remember, once said Roberto Assagioli has the answer .. Cheers
October 3rd, 2022 07:42
Neville said:
I do so appreciate your disclosure DD a Freud of mine who was more of an expert in the field than me .. I\'m just Gestalting by the way, that you may be too Jung to remember, once said Roberto Assagioli has the answer .. Cheers
October 3rd, 2022 07:42
The True Value of Dreaming
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m sure an essential truth is there fined down to a perfect definition, Nev - my (real) problem is that my dreams are truly so surreal that I am near certain no sense can be extracted from them.
October 3rd, 2022 07:21
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m sure an essential truth is there fined down to a perfect definition, Nev - my (real) problem is that my dreams are truly so surreal that I am near certain no sense can be extracted from them.
October 3rd, 2022 07:21
Inconsequential Wonderings
Doggerel Dave said:
An unanswered question if ever there was one, Nev. Close intimate human relationships are always unfinished, aren\'t they?
October 2nd, 2022 18:42
Doggerel Dave said:
An unanswered question if ever there was one, Nev. Close intimate human relationships are always unfinished, aren\'t they?
October 2nd, 2022 18:42
Inconsequential Wonderings
Bella Shepard said:
This one touches deeply. Are there truly degrees of love, a scale that measures it\'s depth? I think the human heart can only be truly quantified by the person within whom it beats. So poignantly written my dear friend!
October 2nd, 2022 11:04
Bella Shepard said:
This one touches deeply. Are there truly degrees of love, a scale that measures it\'s depth? I think the human heart can only be truly quantified by the person within whom it beats. So poignantly written my dear friend!
October 2nd, 2022 11:04
Inconsequential Wonderings
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate penning again mon ami and I think not inconsequential these clever questions for they will whet appetites for more of this oh so beguiling story..................x
October 2nd, 2022 08:04
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate penning again mon ami and I think not inconsequential these clever questions for they will whet appetites for more of this oh so beguiling story..................x
October 2nd, 2022 08:04
Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2022 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2022 01:50
Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow
Bella Shepard said:
To remember where, when and with whom we shared the sweetest moments of our lives is a reminder that nothing is ever lost, only stored for safe keeping to be retrieved and savored over and over again. Beautifully and lovingly written dear friend, thank you for sharing.
September 30th, 2022 14:52
Bella Shepard said:
To remember where, when and with whom we shared the sweetest moments of our lives is a reminder that nothing is ever lost, only stored for safe keeping to be retrieved and savored over and over again. Beautifully and lovingly written dear friend, thank you for sharing.
September 30th, 2022 14:52
Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully said, Neville
The memory is alive with loves shared well and those that went bad.
September 30th, 2022 13:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully said, Neville
The memory is alive with loves shared well and those that went bad.
September 30th, 2022 13:55
Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow
MendedFences27 said:
A fine recollection, full of color and heat, from the \"desert\" to the \"sheets.\"
These look-backs to olden love have a way of leaving a warm glow in the hearts of readers and authors alike. Maybe it was those \"sun-kissed undulations,\" but this poem drew me into it. Sometimes we wish we could just grab \"a handful of light\" for inspiration. Truly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
September 30th, 2022 11:57
MendedFences27 said:
A fine recollection, full of color and heat, from the \"desert\" to the \"sheets.\"
These look-backs to olden love have a way of leaving a warm glow in the hearts of readers and authors alike. Maybe it was those \"sun-kissed undulations,\" but this poem drew me into it. Sometimes we wish we could just grab \"a handful of light\" for inspiration. Truly enjoyed by me. - Phil A.
September 30th, 2022 11:57
Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing .. nicely expressed ))
September 30th, 2022 10:56
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing .. nicely expressed ))
September 30th, 2022 10:56
Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow
Fay Slimm. said:
Penned expertly those days long ago where naught can alter love once so beautifully shared. A first rate piece of memory\'s reflection on summers ago...............x
September 30th, 2022 10:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Penned expertly those days long ago where naught can alter love once so beautifully shared. A first rate piece of memory\'s reflection on summers ago...............x
September 30th, 2022 10:25
Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful look back and I hope it was so far that like an arrow you\'ll fast forward to a more wonderful paradise!
Keep writing my friend
Much peace and respect
September 30th, 2022 10:01
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful look back and I hope it was so far that like an arrow you\'ll fast forward to a more wonderful paradise!
Keep writing my friend
Much peace and respect
September 30th, 2022 10:01
A Certain Kind of Highness
Doggerel Dave said:
Dunno how I missed this before, Nev - mind if I keep and use at a timely moment in a relationship of mine?
Should ensure a beautiful moment or two, no risk.
Thanks
September 30th, 2022 01:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Dunno how I missed this before, Nev - mind if I keep and use at a timely moment in a relationship of mine?
Should ensure a beautiful moment or two, no risk.
Thanks
September 30th, 2022 01:51
A Certain Kind of Highness
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear friend, from the heart and soul. It makes me smile and reflect. Thank you! It\'s a fave.
September 29th, 2022 10:32
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear friend, from the heart and soul. It makes me smile and reflect. Thank you! It\'s a fave.
September 29th, 2022 10:32
A Certain Kind of Highness
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville.
Andy
September 29th, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville.
Andy
September 29th, 2022 01:33
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