Comments received on poems by Neville
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dusk arising said:
Such words of import would surely be filed in readily available scrolls of my mind sir!
To lay them to rest elsewhere would be disrespectful, nay foolhardy.
September 20th, 2021 07:39
dusk arising said:
Such words of import would surely be filed in readily available scrolls of my mind sir!
To lay them to rest elsewhere would be disrespectful, nay foolhardy.
September 20th, 2021 07:39
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L. B. Mek said:
lol
is this you, at your playfully abstract, meaningfully surrealist
poetically mystical, self?
ok! I like it...
like everything else you\'ve ever penned!
a funtastic head twister, if you permit me to be so bold, my friend
September 20th, 2021 07:15
L. B. Mek said:
lol
is this you, at your playfully abstract, meaningfully surrealist
poetically mystical, self?
ok! I like it...
like everything else you\'ve ever penned!
a funtastic head twister, if you permit me to be so bold, my friend
September 20th, 2021 07:15
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Fay Slimm. said:
Slowing reading and finding near-at-hand special shelves for these hidden-deep romantic lines to be kept within reach and maybe peruse - to check if I\'m right in my interpretation.........x
September 20th, 2021 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Slowing reading and finding near-at-hand special shelves for these hidden-deep romantic lines to be kept within reach and maybe peruse - to check if I\'m right in my interpretation.........x
September 20th, 2021 04:56
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orchidee said:
I cannot say what that lass said to me, when I did meet her. \'Tis as the title of this poem! heehee.
September 20th, 2021 04:13
orchidee said:
I cannot say what that lass said to me, when I did meet her. \'Tis as the title of this poem! heehee.
September 20th, 2021 04:13
Someone More Golden
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Letās think of it this wayā¦
1kt worth of gold is nothing more than a ploy to market something as gold while being significantly cheaper; not worth pursuingā¦IMHO.
To quote Shakespeareā¦
āAll that glisters is not gold.ā
Iām glad youāre simply
āscribbling awayā and thereās
nothing to worry about.
Lauraš»
September 19th, 2021 14:55
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
Letās think of it this wayā¦
1kt worth of gold is nothing more than a ploy to market something as gold while being significantly cheaper; not worth pursuingā¦IMHO.
To quote Shakespeareā¦
āAll that glisters is not gold.ā
Iām glad youāre simply
āscribbling awayā and thereās
nothing to worry about.
Lauraš»
September 19th, 2021 14:55
Someone More Golden
Accidental Poet said:
As long as you\'re not dismissed from these pages of MPS my good man. š
September 19th, 2021 10:40
Accidental Poet said:
As long as you\'re not dismissed from these pages of MPS my good man. š
September 19th, 2021 10:40
Someone More Golden
Michael Edwards said:
For a moment I thought you were relaying personal contemporary experience but thankfully I see it aint si my good friend - just poetic licence - by the way have you settled in yet in your new abode?
September 19th, 2021 08:02
Michael Edwards said:
For a moment I thought you were relaying personal contemporary experience but thankfully I see it aint si my good friend - just poetic licence - by the way have you settled in yet in your new abode?
September 19th, 2021 08:02
Someone More Golden
orchidee said:
They\'ll go rusty, under pretence of being golden! lol.
When I don\'t sing, they say \'Silence is golden!\'
September 19th, 2021 07:22
orchidee said:
They\'ll go rusty, under pretence of being golden! lol.
When I don\'t sing, they say \'Silence is golden!\'
September 19th, 2021 07:22
Someone More Golden
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a rehearsal for what\'s to come, Nev.
But never you care - it will be orright ...perhaps...one day....
September 19th, 2021 06:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a rehearsal for what\'s to come, Nev.
But never you care - it will be orright ...perhaps...one day....
September 19th, 2021 06:27
Someone More Golden
Poetic Dan said:
I know this from the core, I felt 14 again at the start of your words.
If this was truly from yours then I get no words can help you my friend!
I let this tear of silence bring the deepest of breaths
Always appreciated
With much peace and respect
Keep giving it!
September 19th, 2021 04:55
Poetic Dan said:
I know this from the core, I felt 14 again at the start of your words.
If this was truly from yours then I get no words can help you my friend!
I let this tear of silence bring the deepest of breaths
Always appreciated
With much peace and respect
Keep giving it!
September 19th, 2021 04:55
Someone More Golden
Fay Slimm. said:
Hope you are just wondering Nev. and not really experiencing the saddest exchange in the world of romance. A feel of despair to this haunt of a read.
September 19th, 2021 04:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Hope you are just wondering Nev. and not really experiencing the saddest exchange in the world of romance. A feel of despair to this haunt of a read.
September 19th, 2021 04:52
Someone More Golden
dusk arising said:
Hmm i think i begin to know all these moods Neville. For my personna adjusts to my whereabouts and the task, or lack of it, in hand. Not a split personality you understand, just conscience adjusting to the vibrations around myself.
Little bemused by your last stanza. Is this self inflicted or has someone exchanged you. I like to think you\'re describing a self improving spiritual upgrade but I\'m unsure.
September 19th, 2021 04:12
dusk arising said:
Hmm i think i begin to know all these moods Neville. For my personna adjusts to my whereabouts and the task, or lack of it, in hand. Not a split personality you understand, just conscience adjusting to the vibrations around myself.
Little bemused by your last stanza. Is this self inflicted or has someone exchanged you. I like to think you\'re describing a self improving spiritual upgrade but I\'m unsure.
September 19th, 2021 04:12
ScarperĀ
Goldfinch60 said:
Obviously no true love involved Neville, just instant lust.
Andy
September 19th, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Obviously no true love involved Neville, just instant lust.
Andy
September 19th, 2021 00:20
ScarperĀ
Jerry Reynolds said:
Matters not how fast you run from the crime, you still have to do the time.
Good write, Neville.
September 18th, 2021 15:46
Jerry Reynolds said:
Matters not how fast you run from the crime, you still have to do the time.
Good write, Neville.
September 18th, 2021 15:46
ScarperĀ
Accidental Poet said:
Some one night stands result in the 18 years after. Be careful Orchi, wrap that rascal. š
September 18th, 2021 11:08
Accidental Poet said:
Some one night stands result in the 18 years after. Be careful Orchi, wrap that rascal. š
September 18th, 2021 11:08
ScarperĀ
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āScarperāā¦
When I saw this title, I immediately thought of two Italian wordsā¦
āscappareā and āscarpeā.
I thought it would be interesting to read through your poem and see the penned words associated with that interesting title.
After the read, I wondered if either one left with or without their shoes on.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Lauraš»
September 18th, 2021 08:13
Lauraš» said:
Neville,
āScarperāā¦
When I saw this title, I immediately thought of two Italian wordsā¦
āscappareā and āscarpeā.
I thought it would be interesting to read through your poem and see the penned words associated with that interesting title.
After the read, I wondered if either one left with or without their shoes on.
Thank you for sharing your pen.
Lauraš»
September 18th, 2021 08:13
ScarperĀ
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Well at least it was mutual that quick scarper Nev. . Scalded by guilt or was it sheer disappointment ? - methinks that sometimes can happen to those on them \" 1- night- stands \" ...............x
September 18th, 2021 06:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Well at least it was mutual that quick scarper Nev. . Scalded by guilt or was it sheer disappointment ? - methinks that sometimes can happen to those on them \" 1- night- stands \" ...............x
September 18th, 2021 06:01
ScarperĀ
dusk arising said:
Wham Bam thank you ma\'am.
OMG let me outta here before she says i love you.
September 18th, 2021 04:46
dusk arising said:
Wham Bam thank you ma\'am.
OMG let me outta here before she says i love you.
September 18th, 2021 04:46
Blighty
dusk arising said:
Cannon fodder for old boy generals who\'d still have had \"the lads\" dressed as redcoats if they had their way.... tradition you know, look at the regimental lists of heroes dontcha know..
Might as well be a deserter, at least you\'ll be shot in somewhere clean and they\'ll be able to identify your remains. Shell shock? shoot \'em.
Very emotive writing from you. Short and punchy.
September 18th, 2021 03:51
dusk arising said:
Cannon fodder for old boy generals who\'d still have had \"the lads\" dressed as redcoats if they had their way.... tradition you know, look at the regimental lists of heroes dontcha know..
Might as well be a deserter, at least you\'ll be shot in somewhere clean and they\'ll be able to identify your remains. Shell shock? shoot \'em.
Very emotive writing from you. Short and punchy.
September 18th, 2021 03:51
Alphabetical Infidelities
L. B. Mek said:
pure literary fun!
with layers, of course
always with depth
just what I needed to cleanse my poetic pallet, lol
and for that, I thank you
Supreme Poet
September 17th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
pure literary fun!
with layers, of course
always with depth
just what I needed to cleanse my poetic pallet, lol
and for that, I thank you
Supreme Poet
September 17th, 2021 05:26
Blighty
Fay Slimm. said:
These potent words got to my heart the first time Nev and now after this seconds they tear it open again. - - very true those lads were so often gun-fodder. Your empathy etches war\'s dreadful tragedy thru\' each and every short line mon ami ............... x
September 17th, 2021 05:22
Fay Slimm. said:
These potent words got to my heart the first time Nev and now after this seconds they tear it open again. - - very true those lads were so often gun-fodder. Your empathy etches war\'s dreadful tragedy thru\' each and every short line mon ami ............... x
September 17th, 2021 05:22
Fablon
Dove said:
I could use fabalon! Them cabinets of mine are pretty worn!
Always good to read you! if this was a metaphor for some
sticky personality, lol I say run, lol
September 16th, 2021 09:01
Dove said:
I could use fabalon! Them cabinets of mine are pretty worn!
Always good to read you! if this was a metaphor for some
sticky personality, lol I say run, lol
September 16th, 2021 09:01
Narcissist
Dove said:
Well luckily, Iāve met none! But movies portrayed them to a tee! Was that Evil Queen who stared at mirror a narcissist, ā Mirror Mirror on the wall, did Snow White steal my Neville.ā Am I not the fairest of the all, lol
September 16th, 2021 08:53
Dove said:
Well luckily, Iāve met none! But movies portrayed them to a tee! Was that Evil Queen who stared at mirror a narcissist, ā Mirror Mirror on the wall, did Snow White steal my Neville.ā Am I not the fairest of the all, lol
September 16th, 2021 08:53
Fablon
L. B. Mek said:
greedy fingers, lead to sticky mouths and cheeks
once lifeline jars, emptied and shattered
and everyone asking, who
to blame?
and wont you know it, there\'s always
one person that arrives late, and acts
so dramatically hurt and surprised, as-if
only they get effected by consequences of involuntary circumstances...
that same person, is always quick
to assign blame and hijack any narrative to insure their want\'s and needs are prioritised, at any cost..
and yet, in those rare moments
Angels: are born, from the serenity
of her dimpled smile...
and so I ask, what vulture
corrupted such potential for goodness
from such an early and critical age?!
(sorry my friend, this took me to a very personal place,
as always, I thank you
for inspiring me, with your
ever so subtle - empathetically transcendent: poetry)
September 14th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
greedy fingers, lead to sticky mouths and cheeks
once lifeline jars, emptied and shattered
and everyone asking, who
to blame?
and wont you know it, there\'s always
one person that arrives late, and acts
so dramatically hurt and surprised, as-if
only they get effected by consequences of involuntary circumstances...
that same person, is always quick
to assign blame and hijack any narrative to insure their want\'s and needs are prioritised, at any cost..
and yet, in those rare moments
Angels: are born, from the serenity
of her dimpled smile...
and so I ask, what vulture
corrupted such potential for goodness
from such an early and critical age?!
(sorry my friend, this took me to a very personal place,
as always, I thank you
for inspiring me, with your
ever so subtle - empathetically transcendent: poetry)
September 14th, 2021 05:26
Fablon
jarcher54 said:
We don\'t call it Fablon over here stateside... but it can be just as alluring, sticky, and deceitful
September 11th, 2021 20:16
jarcher54 said:
We don\'t call it Fablon over here stateside... but it can be just as alluring, sticky, and deceitful
September 11th, 2021 20:16
Fablon
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Appearances can be deceptive sometimes .... someone may appear to be one thing but be someone else
September 11th, 2021 12:09
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Appearances can be deceptive sometimes .... someone may appear to be one thing but be someone else
September 11th, 2021 12:09
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