Comments received on poems by Neville
Take Two Poles Josie
Bella Shepard said:
You\'re mum sounds like a very special lady, who appreciated the sweetest sounds in life. You have captured this beautifully in a tender poem of love. She taught you well my friend.
August 27th, 2022 12:36
Bella Shepard said:
You\'re mum sounds like a very special lady, who appreciated the sweetest sounds in life. You have captured this beautifully in a tender poem of love. She taught you well my friend.
August 27th, 2022 12:36
Take Two Poles Josie
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure of this one, Nev (not an uncommon experience here..).
Josie, it seems was cajoled into hard dangerous work with sweet flattering talk... and then Mum gets the blame...
Alas, I\'ll never understand poets....
August 27th, 2022 07:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure of this one, Nev (not an uncommon experience here..).
Josie, it seems was cajoled into hard dangerous work with sweet flattering talk... and then Mum gets the blame...
Alas, I\'ll never understand poets....
August 27th, 2022 07:21
Take Two Poles Josie
Paul Bell said:
Great memories from your mum.
When I go to the football today, I\'ll be listening out for the pigeons.
August 27th, 2022 06:56
Paul Bell said:
Great memories from your mum.
When I go to the football today, I\'ll be listening out for the pigeons.
August 27th, 2022 06:56
Take Two Poles Josie
dusk arising said:
I dunno what theyre building on my chimney cowl but theres sure enough a lot of two poles been taken up there for scaffolding.
August 27th, 2022 05:05
dusk arising said:
I dunno what theyre building on my chimney cowl but theres sure enough a lot of two poles been taken up there for scaffolding.
August 27th, 2022 05:05
Take Two Poles Josie
Fay Slimm. said:
Thoughts of such unique perception are treasured as gems when we lose all but memory of loved ones - - thanks so much Nev.for sharing your dear mother\'s description of dove talk when courting - -- I too shall now be on the listen for \"take two poles Josie\" - - -- ....................x
August 27th, 2022 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Thoughts of such unique perception are treasured as gems when we lose all but memory of loved ones - - thanks so much Nev.for sharing your dear mother\'s description of dove talk when courting - -- I too shall now be on the listen for \"take two poles Josie\" - - -- ....................x
August 27th, 2022 04:50
Between Pauses
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville. I was at my wife\'s side when she passed her final breath.
Andy
August 27th, 2022 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville. I was at my wife\'s side when she passed her final breath.
Andy
August 27th, 2022 01:08
Between Pauses
Fay Slimm. said:
Strength builds between pauses and that\'s what is needed when hearts skip a beat - so romantic these telling words Nev.....................x
August 26th, 2022 06:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Strength builds between pauses and that\'s what is needed when hearts skip a beat - so romantic these telling words Nev.....................x
August 26th, 2022 06:19
Between Pauses
dusk arising said:
Such thoughts raid and plunder through the heights of passion. Plenty of passion in your words here.
August 26th, 2022 05:41
dusk arising said:
Such thoughts raid and plunder through the heights of passion. Plenty of passion in your words here.
August 26th, 2022 05:41
The Making of Them Both Maybe
orchidee said:
Hmmm, now did I meet her? I can\'t remember. lol.
August 26th, 2022 01:45
orchidee said:
Hmmm, now did I meet her? I can\'t remember. lol.
August 26th, 2022 01:45
The Making of Them Both Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
Laughter in any relationship is so important Neville.
Andy
August 26th, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Laughter in any relationship is so important Neville.
Andy
August 26th, 2022 01:11
The Making of Them Both Maybe
arqios said:
A co-shared genuine laugh. That is always a good foundation to any relationship. Thanks Nev!
August 26th, 2022 00:43
arqios said:
A co-shared genuine laugh. That is always a good foundation to any relationship. Thanks Nev!
August 26th, 2022 00:43
The Making of Them Both Maybe
Doggerel Dave said:
A moment in a very real interaction.
Got it and enjoyed it Neville.
August 25th, 2022 17:33
Doggerel Dave said:
A moment in a very real interaction.
Got it and enjoyed it Neville.
August 25th, 2022 17:33
The Making of Them Both Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - the lift laughter gives to any relationship and in this case could have been the key to a close foreverness maybe - - -- well here\'s hoping they made their poem rhyme...... ......... x
August 25th, 2022 16:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - the lift laughter gives to any relationship and in this case could have been the key to a close foreverness maybe - - -- well here\'s hoping they made their poem rhyme...... ......... x
August 25th, 2022 16:45
The Making of Them Both Maybe
Dove said:
Cute, was he suppose to sign the check, lol .. Your words are always a mystery!
August 25th, 2022 12:02
Dove said:
Cute, was he suppose to sign the check, lol .. Your words are always a mystery!
August 25th, 2022 12:02
With Only Five Leaves Left
Dove said:
Awe, I should listen to music..RIP Nick, and best to u
August 25th, 2022 12:00
Dove said:
Awe, I should listen to music..RIP Nick, and best to u
August 25th, 2022 12:00
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
MendedFences27 said:
There is no sensibility here, only burning desire. She was only pretty as in \"pretty satisfying.\"
But your poem raises the quandary quite well. Is she perceived as a person or a means to satisfaction.? So, in that sense, it makes sense, Thoroughly enjoyed it, even if it wasn\'t the most beautiful. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2022 10:43
MendedFences27 said:
There is no sensibility here, only burning desire. She was only pretty as in \"pretty satisfying.\"
But your poem raises the quandary quite well. Is she perceived as a person or a means to satisfaction.? So, in that sense, it makes sense, Thoroughly enjoyed it, even if it wasn\'t the most beautiful. - Phil A.
August 24th, 2022 10:43
With Only Five Leaves Left
Fay Slimm. said:
The fate of some folk lies in their lifestyles but you pen Drakes sad case with emapthy\'s sincerity so very well dear Sir Nev................x
August 24th, 2022 04:23
Fay Slimm. said:
The fate of some folk lies in their lifestyles but you pen Drakes sad case with emapthy\'s sincerity so very well dear Sir Nev................x
August 24th, 2022 04:23
With Only Five Leaves Left
Goldfinch60 said:
Didn\'t have a clue but I do now, I will have to look into Nick Drakes music, this is the first time I have heard of him.
Andy
August 24th, 2022 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Didn\'t have a clue but I do now, I will have to look into Nick Drakes music, this is the first time I have heard of him.
Andy
August 24th, 2022 01:00
With Only Five Leaves Left
MendedFences27 said:
Not got a clue, that\'s me. Nick Drake, sad story, sad life, sad way to end it all. Genius at music, though. Maybe someday we\'ll understand the brain completely and be able to treat such depressions. Trying to interpret what you wrote, I guessed that as weathermen can\'t predict or control the weather, so too doctors can\'t always treat mental illness. Well, enjoyed the poem and listened to some of his music. So now I\'m more enlightened than before I read this. Thank you. _ Phil A.
August 23rd, 2022 22:02
MendedFences27 said:
Not got a clue, that\'s me. Nick Drake, sad story, sad life, sad way to end it all. Genius at music, though. Maybe someday we\'ll understand the brain completely and be able to treat such depressions. Trying to interpret what you wrote, I guessed that as weathermen can\'t predict or control the weather, so too doctors can\'t always treat mental illness. Well, enjoyed the poem and listened to some of his music. So now I\'m more enlightened than before I read this. Thank you. _ Phil A.
August 23rd, 2022 22:02
With Only Five Leaves Left
Doggerel Dave said:
Not wrong there Neville. Took the obvious course (that\'s me...). Owing to lousy speakers or poor hearing or possibly both was unable to sus Nick Drake out via the three songs available on u tube. His story on w\'pedia makes for grim reading.... although I recall encounters with several folks with similar behaviors way back when... I have a terrible feeling I didn\'t show them enough compassion.....
August 23rd, 2022 18:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Not wrong there Neville. Took the obvious course (that\'s me...). Owing to lousy speakers or poor hearing or possibly both was unable to sus Nick Drake out via the three songs available on u tube. His story on w\'pedia makes for grim reading.... although I recall encounters with several folks with similar behaviors way back when... I have a terrible feeling I didn\'t show them enough compassion.....
August 23rd, 2022 18:40
With Only Five Leaves Left
orchidee said:
I not got a clue! I wouldn\'t have. Trust me not to have. heehee.
August 23rd, 2022 14:49
orchidee said:
I not got a clue! I wouldn\'t have. Trust me not to have. heehee.
August 23rd, 2022 14:49
Anticipating Angels
spilleronsheet said:
I felt as if lovers separated by a boundary called heaven…so much romantic and full of fantasy dear Neville…
August 22nd, 2022 03:58
spilleronsheet said:
I felt as if lovers separated by a boundary called heaven…so much romantic and full of fantasy dear Neville…
August 22nd, 2022 03:58
Anticipating Angels
Doggerel Dave said:
I find my literal mind unable to be sure of the directional movement here, Nev - closer or further away? Am I to make the choice?
For me almost koan like.
August 21st, 2022 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
I find my literal mind unable to be sure of the directional movement here, Nev - closer or further away? Am I to make the choice?
For me almost koan like.
August 21st, 2022 19:38
Anticipating Angels
dean langmuir said:
Thank you for exercising my one brain cell,take care,poem on
August 21st, 2022 17:43
dean langmuir said:
Thank you for exercising my one brain cell,take care,poem on
August 21st, 2022 17:43
Anticipating Angels
MendedFences27 said:
\"Here\" vs \"There.\" \"Anticipating\" vs. \"Entertaining.\" I thought this might be a sad poem or a joyous one, but, \"Milligrams\" draws everything closer. This is about separation (maybe?) as in waiting for one\'s return. Someone bringing the joy to you. Well, I now see the expectation vs, the carrier of angels (joy). Maybe a homecoming. - Phil A.
August 21st, 2022 13:55
MendedFences27 said:
\"Here\" vs \"There.\" \"Anticipating\" vs. \"Entertaining.\" I thought this might be a sad poem or a joyous one, but, \"Milligrams\" draws everything closer. This is about separation (maybe?) as in waiting for one\'s return. Someone bringing the joy to you. Well, I now see the expectation vs, the carrier of angels (joy). Maybe a homecoming. - Phil A.
August 21st, 2022 13:55
Anticipating Angels
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a milligram or two of anticipation my friend. You paint such a seductive ;picture as always.......x
August 21st, 2022 04:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Nothing like a milligram or two of anticipation my friend. You paint such a seductive ;picture as always.......x
August 21st, 2022 04:22
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