Comments received on poems by Neville
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
Fay Slimm. said:
Seeing the intake clearly as I rejoice in your gift for intrigue so effortlessly - -- telling words and loved every line.
April 28th, 2022 07:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Seeing the intake clearly as I rejoice in your gift for intrigue so effortlessly - -- telling words and loved every line.
April 28th, 2022 07:01
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
spilleronsheet said:
And those are lines of optimism, overflowing with celebration of success… really enjoyed dear Neville…
April 28th, 2022 05:36
spilleronsheet said:
And those are lines of optimism, overflowing with celebration of success… really enjoyed dear Neville…
April 28th, 2022 05:36
Taking in the Seeds come Harvest
L. B. Mek said:
I gotta get out to the Dales again soon
been too long...
Have you been staying at the \'Country Harvest\', dear poet
is this poem how you paid for your bill?
(They got the better end of that deal!)
lol
thank you! loved this
pure nourishment for our poetic imaginations:
read, close eyes
and traverse, lush countryside\'s
at harvest
merely, within words...!
therapeutic to say the least
April 28th, 2022 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
I gotta get out to the Dales again soon
been too long...
Have you been staying at the \'Country Harvest\', dear poet
is this poem how you paid for your bill?
(They got the better end of that deal!)
lol
thank you! loved this
pure nourishment for our poetic imaginations:
read, close eyes
and traverse, lush countryside\'s
at harvest
merely, within words...!
therapeutic to say the least
April 28th, 2022 04:46
Some things are Just Not Right
Rozina said:
You are SO RIGHT Neville. It got me thinking about many wrong things in life. A great thought provoking write.
April 26th, 2022 18:00
Rozina said:
You are SO RIGHT Neville. It got me thinking about many wrong things in life. A great thought provoking write.
April 26th, 2022 18:00
Some things are Just Not Right
spilleronsheet said:
Totally resonating on those lines…something’s totally not right…from drugs, explosives, violence and war, corrupt bureaucracy to hypocrisy, opportunists to greedy politicians… so well said dear Neville…hope they extinguish faster…
April 26th, 2022 17:57
spilleronsheet said:
Totally resonating on those lines…something’s totally not right…from drugs, explosives, violence and war, corrupt bureaucracy to hypocrisy, opportunists to greedy politicians… so well said dear Neville…hope they extinguish faster…
April 26th, 2022 17:57
Some things are Just Not Right
Michael Edwards said:
And can I add cancer - - and yet there is so much good in the world - another poem?
April 26th, 2022 14:23
Michael Edwards said:
And can I add cancer - - and yet there is so much good in the world - another poem?
April 26th, 2022 14:23
Some things are Just Not Right
MR.apocalypse said:
the words of someone who wishes not just to gain wisdom but teach the wisdom they\'ve learned
April 26th, 2022 09:36
MR.apocalypse said:
the words of someone who wishes not just to gain wisdom but teach the wisdom they\'ve learned
April 26th, 2022 09:36
Some things are Just Not Right
Christina8 said:
That was a fantastic write by you dear N.....I can\'t think of what isn\'t right most....probably when people just look the other way and live their lives like things aren\'t happening when they could do something about it, like child poverty, or anything to do with children for that matter! Good solid write!
April 26th, 2022 09:09
Christina8 said:
That was a fantastic write by you dear N.....I can\'t think of what isn\'t right most....probably when people just look the other way and live their lives like things aren\'t happening when they could do something about it, like child poverty, or anything to do with children for that matter! Good solid write!
April 26th, 2022 09:09
Some things are Just Not Right
Rocky Lagou said:
I admire the way you sculpted this poem. It\'s like one long thin line of things that are \"just not right.\" The morally and wickedly corrupt. The terrorists and the evil in the world. You summed it up wonderfully.
April 26th, 2022 08:48
Rocky Lagou said:
I admire the way you sculpted this poem. It\'s like one long thin line of things that are \"just not right.\" The morally and wickedly corrupt. The terrorists and the evil in the world. You summed it up wonderfully.
April 26th, 2022 08:48
Some things are Just Not Right
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
You’re so spot on with your thoughts that you’ve inked for your readers. Much to ponder upon…
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
April 26th, 2022 08:41
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Neville,
You’re so spot on with your thoughts that you’ve inked for your readers. Much to ponder upon…
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
April 26th, 2022 08:41
Some things are Just Not Right
dusk arising said:
No, not right at all. The list could go on and on.
I feel we must srtive for the positives whilst dealing with the negatives and heap praise upon the do gooders in life.
It would be nice to think we learn from history\'s \'not rights\' but sadly we see repetition taking place.
April 26th, 2022 08:28
dusk arising said:
No, not right at all. The list could go on and on.
I feel we must srtive for the positives whilst dealing with the negatives and heap praise upon the do gooders in life.
It would be nice to think we learn from history\'s \'not rights\' but sadly we see repetition taking place.
April 26th, 2022 08:28
Some things are Just Not Right
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
An extra line needed? \'Orchi\'s singing will never be right!\' heehee.
April 26th, 2022 08:06
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
An extra line needed? \'Orchi\'s singing will never be right!\' heehee.
April 26th, 2022 08:06
Some things are Just Not Right
Fay Slimm. said:
That list is significantly versed as an implicit warning that so much recorded evil needs always to be in the front of our minds .. An explosive reminder that such actions and attitudes are no way to gain love and peace - - - thanks a load for this write my friend.
April 26th, 2022 07:21
Fay Slimm. said:
That list is significantly versed as an implicit warning that so much recorded evil needs always to be in the front of our minds .. An explosive reminder that such actions and attitudes are no way to gain love and peace - - - thanks a load for this write my friend.
April 26th, 2022 07:21
Some things are Just Not Right
L. B. Mek said:
an important write, dear Poet!
this
a listing of murderous
intent
and divisive, hate\'s
sinister, roots..
no
we must never forget and pretend
that they\'re all some nightmare
form a past
far removed
from our daily reality..
like
how the world press, pretend
Ukraine, is the only active war
on our planet
when in reality, its just the one
that\'s most profitable
to report about...!
yes, we must never
forget
and deny those harsh realities
of life..
April 26th, 2022 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
an important write, dear Poet!
this
a listing of murderous
intent
and divisive, hate\'s
sinister, roots..
no
we must never forget and pretend
that they\'re all some nightmare
form a past
far removed
from our daily reality..
like
how the world press, pretend
Ukraine, is the only active war
on our planet
when in reality, its just the one
that\'s most profitable
to report about...!
yes, we must never
forget
and deny those harsh realities
of life..
April 26th, 2022 06:12
Some things are Just Not Right
Distant View said:
No, some things are not right at all, but they are still with us. Danger lurks. Some dangers we can avoid, others, sometimes, we cannot.
April 26th, 2022 06:04
Distant View said:
No, some things are not right at all, but they are still with us. Danger lurks. Some dangers we can avoid, others, sometimes, we cannot.
April 26th, 2022 06:04
Some things are Just Not Right
Caring dove said:
So confusing .. the things that happen in this world .. when they shouldn’t
April 26th, 2022 04:32
Caring dove said:
So confusing .. the things that happen in this world .. when they shouldn’t
April 26th, 2022 04:32
Some things are Just Not Right
Caring dove said:
Their not right .. a good writing .. if only things were different and such things didn’t exist .
April 26th, 2022 04:31
Caring dove said:
Their not right .. a good writing .. if only things were different and such things didn’t exist .
April 26th, 2022 04:31
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Goldfinch60 said:
Kites are so wonderful to see, they fly over our croquet lawn quite regularly.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Kites are so wonderful to see, they fly over our croquet lawn quite regularly.
Andy
April 26th, 2022 00:21
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
MendedFences27 said:
Dancing in the wind. Somewhere off a cliff I imagine. Free to be \"wild.\" A scene you described poetically. Nice one. - Phil A.
April 25th, 2022 19:29
MendedFences27 said:
Dancing in the wind. Somewhere off a cliff I imagine. Free to be \"wild.\" A scene you described poetically. Nice one. - Phil A.
April 25th, 2022 19:29
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
dusk arising said:
Take me away from this cruel and battering torment of modern life and float me high on natures chariot wind that i may know again elemental joy anf freedom.
Those simple things hold such meaningful reward.
April 25th, 2022 12:49
dusk arising said:
Take me away from this cruel and battering torment of modern life and float me high on natures chariot wind that i may know again elemental joy anf freedom.
Those simple things hold such meaningful reward.
April 25th, 2022 12:49
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Without a care,\" ahh. What a blessing it is to be problem-free, no stress or worries, loving your imagery!
April 25th, 2022 10:16
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Without a care,\" ahh. What a blessing it is to be problem-free, no stress or worries, loving your imagery!
April 25th, 2022 10:16
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of one of keats\', letters
only distilled and concentrated
to its true poetic, eloquent form..
\'a tipsy Haiku, like those dancing
kites
lost, in those winds of life..\'..
such an immersive read, thank you!
dear Poet supreme
April 25th, 2022 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
reminds me of one of keats\', letters
only distilled and concentrated
to its true poetic, eloquent form..
\'a tipsy Haiku, like those dancing
kites
lost, in those winds of life..\'..
such an immersive read, thank you!
dear Poet supreme
April 25th, 2022 07:00
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Christina8 said:
Very nicely written! Ah...those primrose banks......if only spring would spring up where I live!
April 25th, 2022 06:08
Christina8 said:
Very nicely written! Ah...those primrose banks......if only spring would spring up where I live!
April 25th, 2022 06:08
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
spilleronsheet said:
A majestic scene cheering my heart inside…and all praises to capture in a haiku…its too difficult to compose one…wonderful dear Neville….
April 25th, 2022 05:51
spilleronsheet said:
A majestic scene cheering my heart inside…and all praises to capture in a haiku…its too difficult to compose one…wonderful dear Neville….
April 25th, 2022 05:51
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Draven said:
Whimsical and nicely written. I love a good haiku.
April 25th, 2022 05:43
Draven said:
Whimsical and nicely written. I love a good haiku.
April 25th, 2022 05:43
Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
Fay Slimm. said:
To see on a clear day those dancing sky-surfers fills poetic hearts with words that writers like yourself bring easy to life - - a breath of fresh air Nev. to this reader\'s return. Thanking you muchly.
April 25th, 2022 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
To see on a clear day those dancing sky-surfers fills poetic hearts with words that writers like yourself bring easy to life - - a breath of fresh air Nev. to this reader\'s return. Thanking you muchly.
April 25th, 2022 04:20
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