Comments received on poems by Neville
Dirty Linen
Doggerel Dave said:
I have to confess, my friend........... I\'m sure of nothing here.... my pain threshold is all over the place.... I\'m unsure if your kite is a dicky bird or a contraption made of paper or other light material held together with a frame of likewise light material on the end of a long strong and light tether...... Finally (more or less) I was instructed by Mother to always soak/wash bloody clothing in cold water before said blood dried.. Perhaps the unidentified \'she\' in your piece needed a little more domestication and a little less discretion.
In Summary, I am forced to the conclusion that this was a very intriguing write - thank you...... 🙂
October 24th, 2022 06:22
Doggerel Dave said:
I have to confess, my friend........... I\'m sure of nothing here.... my pain threshold is all over the place.... I\'m unsure if your kite is a dicky bird or a contraption made of paper or other light material held together with a frame of likewise light material on the end of a long strong and light tether...... Finally (more or less) I was instructed by Mother to always soak/wash bloody clothing in cold water before said blood dried.. Perhaps the unidentified \'she\' in your piece needed a little more domestication and a little less discretion.
In Summary, I am forced to the conclusion that this was a very intriguing write - thank you...... 🙂
October 24th, 2022 06:22
Dirty Linen
L. B. Mek said:
simply Brilliant! oh Poet Supreme
and thank you for inspiring me to scribble a few lines in response
(you know it\'s true love
when they hide our shortcomings
and find a way to forget our indiscretions
then still find the strength to do our washing
while smiling at us
like we\'re shower clean, even beneath our skin...)
October 24th, 2022 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
simply Brilliant! oh Poet Supreme
and thank you for inspiring me to scribble a few lines in response
(you know it\'s true love
when they hide our shortcomings
and find a way to forget our indiscretions
then still find the strength to do our washing
while smiling at us
like we\'re shower clean, even beneath our skin...)
October 24th, 2022 06:07
Dirty Linen
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanking you truly mon ami for this gusty warning to whosoever when old clobber disposing and I sorely relate to resultant complains - - males who have preference for storing just-in-case- clothing create trouble in camp if just one is found missing - - hhhmm - methinks this maybe penned from the same bitter experience ? ..............x
October 24th, 2022 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanking you truly mon ami for this gusty warning to whosoever when old clobber disposing and I sorely relate to resultant complains - - males who have preference for storing just-in-case- clothing create trouble in camp if just one is found missing - - hhhmm - methinks this maybe penned from the same bitter experience ? ..............x
October 24th, 2022 04:58
elle Ă©tait unique
Bella Shepard said:
There are those people we encounter who, as Nat King Cole sang, are \"Unforgettable\". Lucky us, for wonderful relationships that may be brief, but are forever etched upon our memory. Such a truly heart-felt poem dear friend.
October 23rd, 2022 13:31
Bella Shepard said:
There are those people we encounter who, as Nat King Cole sang, are \"Unforgettable\". Lucky us, for wonderful relationships that may be brief, but are forever etched upon our memory. Such a truly heart-felt poem dear friend.
October 23rd, 2022 13:31
Narrow Margins
Bella Shepard said:
There are those regrets that now and again rear their ugly heads and give pause for thought. Conflicted with past and present, it is a difficulty that often evades resolution. Powerfully worded my friend!
October 23rd, 2022 13:07
Bella Shepard said:
There are those regrets that now and again rear their ugly heads and give pause for thought. Conflicted with past and present, it is a difficulty that often evades resolution. Powerfully worded my friend!
October 23rd, 2022 13:07
Narrow Margins
Fay Slimm. said:
Regret for ever giving true love makes its telling so needed to those who broke every olive branch offered and are now losers. Hope the sting reaches home Nev. in this piercing piece...............x
October 23rd, 2022 09:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Regret for ever giving true love makes its telling so needed to those who broke every olive branch offered and are now losers. Hope the sting reaches home Nev. in this piercing piece...............x
October 23rd, 2022 09:33
Narrow Margins
Doggerel Dave said:
I do believe there may just conceivably be unresolved issues there, Nev..
October 23rd, 2022 05:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I do believe there may just conceivably be unresolved issues there, Nev..
October 23rd, 2022 05:19
Narrow Margins
arqios said:
A few of these broken branches have been nicked while I wasn\'t looking and used during the Palm Sunday procession.
October 23rd, 2022 04:11
arqios said:
A few of these broken branches have been nicked while I wasn\'t looking and used during the Palm Sunday procession.
October 23rd, 2022 04:11
elle Ă©tait unique
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah but you’re a smooth one Neville. Not being a sophisticate and no linguist either, I woz forced to seek the advice of Prof G.
Now not only did that sage identify your header as the identity of a race horse and a song by a name unfamiliar to me, but that you’ve been unfaithful. Ah désillusion........
October 22nd, 2022 16:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah but you’re a smooth one Neville. Not being a sophisticate and no linguist either, I woz forced to seek the advice of Prof G.
Now not only did that sage identify your header as the identity of a race horse and a song by a name unfamiliar to me, but that you’ve been unfaithful. Ah désillusion........
October 22nd, 2022 16:28
elle Ă©tait unique
Fay Slimm. said:
Bespoke indeed is the one who has been and still is unique - - a poem to treasure for a special she to receive
- -- a lovely read Nev........x
October 22nd, 2022 10:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Bespoke indeed is the one who has been and still is unique - - a poem to treasure for a special she to receive
- -- a lovely read Nev........x
October 22nd, 2022 10:10
elle Ă©tait unique
arqios said:
Appears to be a once in a lifetime occurrence such as she is to you. I too have my elle Ă©tait unique. Hope everyone has got one too.
October 22nd, 2022 09:35
arqios said:
Appears to be a once in a lifetime occurrence such as she is to you. I too have my elle Ă©tait unique. Hope everyone has got one too.
October 22nd, 2022 09:35
No Matter What Time it Is
Goldfinch60 said:
In my life there is music everywhere Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
In my life there is music everywhere Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2022 00:38
No Matter What Time it Is
Bella Shepard said:
OK, I googled \"There will always be Music on Clinton St.\" and came up with those lyrics
in the Leonard Cohen song \"Famous Blue Raincoat\". I found A Gospel group called Spencer Bridge Hall, and a bridge over the Yarra River/Melbourne called Spencer Bridge St. Judging from the song, it sounds possibly, like love, betrayal, forgiveness, acceptance. I may have it all wrong, but a very intriguing write, and the cryptic nature is just too good. Loved it!
October 21st, 2022 13:51
Bella Shepard said:
OK, I googled \"There will always be Music on Clinton St.\" and came up with those lyrics
in the Leonard Cohen song \"Famous Blue Raincoat\". I found A Gospel group called Spencer Bridge Hall, and a bridge over the Yarra River/Melbourne called Spencer Bridge St. Judging from the song, it sounds possibly, like love, betrayal, forgiveness, acceptance. I may have it all wrong, but a very intriguing write, and the cryptic nature is just too good. Loved it!
October 21st, 2022 13:51
No Matter What Time it Is
arqios said:
At the bridge of Spencer, if it connects to the road of same name, I wonder if the water ices over.
October 21st, 2022 06:05
arqios said:
At the bridge of Spencer, if it connects to the road of same name, I wonder if the water ices over.
October 21st, 2022 06:05
No Matter What Time it Is
Doggerel Dave said:
No probs with Clinton St o\' course, Nev....
Spencer Bridge Road, in Northampton boasts a Gospel hall (Prof Google)... not asking, just noting....
October 21st, 2022 05:37
Doggerel Dave said:
No probs with Clinton St o\' course, Nev....
Spencer Bridge Road, in Northampton boasts a Gospel hall (Prof Google)... not asking, just noting....
October 21st, 2022 05:37
No Matter What Time it Is
orchidee said:
I don\'t get it, of course! lol Is it about some gal I should meet? Oops, you said don\'t ask!
October 21st, 2022 04:38
orchidee said:
I don\'t get it, of course! lol Is it about some gal I should meet? Oops, you said don\'t ask!
October 21st, 2022 04:38
No Matter What Time it Is
L. B. Mek said:
my foggy mind can\'t place any context to your words, Hyung
but I can easily connect to your theme
of musically influenced states of mind
where post codes denote, more
than merely, a Time and a Place
where melodies intwine memory
within reality and in each blink
we cross decades
as we once again, relive and swim
in our much craved, ideal...
(Wonderfully tight lines Hyung
btw how\'s that sixth addition coming along)
October 21st, 2022 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
my foggy mind can\'t place any context to your words, Hyung
but I can easily connect to your theme
of musically influenced states of mind
where post codes denote, more
than merely, a Time and a Place
where melodies intwine memory
within reality and in each blink
we cross decades
as we once again, relive and swim
in our much craved, ideal...
(Wonderfully tight lines Hyung
btw how\'s that sixth addition coming along)
October 21st, 2022 04:13
No Matter What Time it Is
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for a write to think on a bit deeper Nev. - - Music ignores time or place to bring warmth to wintery memories; A comforting thought in this short but telling tribute to music\'s perpetual power...............x
October 21st, 2022 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for a write to think on a bit deeper Nev. - - Music ignores time or place to bring warmth to wintery memories; A comforting thought in this short but telling tribute to music\'s perpetual power...............x
October 21st, 2022 03:44
How on Earth Did She do That
dusk arising said:
On some women even lowly tattered rags manage to drape in a come and get me luscious mode
October 20th, 2022 10:09
dusk arising said:
On some women even lowly tattered rags manage to drape in a come and get me luscious mode
October 20th, 2022 10:09
How on Earth Did She do That
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev. - - that She left her mark on someone methinks. An age-old talent for flirting I would say made her behave that way - -- - - -- - - well at least my dear friend she is almost immortalised by this extra-beguiling and well penned verse............x
October 20th, 2022 07:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev. - - that She left her mark on someone methinks. An age-old talent for flirting I would say made her behave that way - -- - - -- - - well at least my dear friend she is almost immortalised by this extra-beguiling and well penned verse............x
October 20th, 2022 07:01
How on Earth Did She do That
Ninkasi said:
Quite a read that was and reading it all created a salt and pepper reaction in the mind. Drew a visual image gradually.
October 20th, 2022 05:51
Ninkasi said:
Quite a read that was and reading it all created a salt and pepper reaction in the mind. Drew a visual image gradually.
October 20th, 2022 05:51
How on Earth Did She do That
Doggerel Dave said:
Mystery, always mystery, but carnal relations could be imminent......
Worked for you, Nev?
October 20th, 2022 03:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Mystery, always mystery, but carnal relations could be imminent......
Worked for you, Nev?
October 20th, 2022 03:45
How on Earth Did She do That
arqios said:
Masters of communication once matriculating in the school of relationship arts has been successfully navigated. Some do take to that like a duck to water.
October 20th, 2022 03:29
arqios said:
Masters of communication once matriculating in the school of relationship arts has been successfully navigated. Some do take to that like a duck to water.
October 20th, 2022 03:29
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
Paul Bell said:
Putin\'s thumb along with his head should be amputated for the world\'s health.
October 19th, 2022 09:46
Paul Bell said:
Putin\'s thumb along with his head should be amputated for the world\'s health.
October 19th, 2022 09:46
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
Fay Slimm. said:
We may have grown accustomed to history repeating but not accepted that we become victims to belief that the spirit of hope has no future. - - - -- - -- well that\'s what i think mon ami despite that ominous thumb..........x
October 19th, 2022 04:27
Fay Slimm. said:
We may have grown accustomed to history repeating but not accepted that we become victims to belief that the spirit of hope has no future. - - - -- - -- well that\'s what i think mon ami despite that ominous thumb..........x
October 19th, 2022 04:27
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
arqios said:
And as the winter advances so shall the precedent of Napoleon and Aldolf\'s advances.
October 19th, 2022 03:26
arqios said:
And as the winter advances so shall the precedent of Napoleon and Aldolf\'s advances.
October 19th, 2022 03:26
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
Doggerel Dave said:
We have, Nev. Which in no way alters or modifies my contention that it need never have occurred at all.
(Best ignore - or this may once more end with a debate on the role of histo.....)
October 19th, 2022 03:23
Doggerel Dave said:
We have, Nev. Which in no way alters or modifies my contention that it need never have occurred at all.
(Best ignore - or this may once more end with a debate on the role of histo.....)
October 19th, 2022 03:23
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