Comments received on poems by Neville



Don’t Talk to Me of …
Rozina said:

Powerful punching lines. Enjoyed reading this.

April 20th, 2022 18:13

Don’t Talk to Me of …
Jerry Reynolds said:

I agree with Teddy. Often humor comes out when you are rubbed the wrong way; if you keep rubbing so will the knife.

April 20th, 2022 17:15

Don’t Talk to Me of …
Christina8 said:

Words are powerful and so are yours this morning....A great write if I do say so myself!!

April 20th, 2022 09:08

Don’t Talk to Me of …
dusk arising said:


Wise words from you. Though late in the day, how lucky to recognise a persons true colours and keep the revolver in the drawer.

Words are strange for some. It seems many believe love starts with a good F.

April 20th, 2022 02:33

Don’t Talk to Me of …
orchidee said:

I might swoon - Fido says it\'s \'phuket\'. lol.

April 20th, 2022 02:22

Don’t Talk to Me of …
Michael Edwards said:

Words come easy and can mask the inner self - Aw heck ...getting a bit deep for me and still half asleep - good un Neville.

April 20th, 2022 01:16

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
Goldfinch60 said:

A very special place for you Neville and will always be special to you.

Andy

April 20th, 2022 00:47

Don’t Talk to Me of …
Caring dove said:

Sometimes it’s difficult to like some people or even respect them . A good writing )

April 20th, 2022 00:43

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
Rozina said:

So beautiful Neville.

April 19th, 2022 18:04

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
orchidee said:

Should I meet her? lol.

April 19th, 2022 11:42

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
spilleronsheet said:

A beautiful imagery
I was lost in the scenery
A calm serene place
To take abode in the pains
Truly enjoyed dear Neville

April 19th, 2022 11:01

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
Bella Shepard said:

I love the \"her that is the lake\" which is reminiscent of the \"her that you loved\". Those moments are special and priceless. How lyrical and beautifully crafted.


April 19th, 2022 09:57

Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Dove said:

Echoes , yes the echoes breeze through the air, let their whispers speak truth...

Beautiful always... Depth and heartfelt emotions

April 19th, 2022 09:15

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow, truly quite the touching tale Neville. I mean I totally felt the bittersweet sensations your poem gave me, with the wistful longing and the \"could\'ve been\'s.\" Sometimes not everything is destined, sadly. Hope you\'re doing good now though, you know with the whole love shebang.


April 19th, 2022 09:14

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done, Neville.
Sometimes nature and love collide and it all makes sense. You have captured it well.

April 19th, 2022 08:15

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
dusk arising said:

Memories lay like a mist upon the landscapes of our mind yet blow in the face with sudden reminisce when we confront such places in the flesh.

Once again your poetry has a mystic haunted feel drawing your reader into the inevitable picturescape... a watercolours haze in my minds eye rests peacefully.

April 19th, 2022 06:30

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
L. B. Mek said:


just
ahhhhhh
like, just
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
you know?!
just
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
how I cherish
those innate, subtle brushstrokes
in your bewitching, Poetry
thank you, Hyung
as-ever, I read
and learn, gratefully!

April 19th, 2022 06:09

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake
Caring dove said:

a lovely writing ))

April 19th, 2022 03:00

Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Rocky Lagou said:

Yooooooooo. Yoooooo. These metaphors, \"like a foundry,\" \"pools of golden light.\" I literally adore this poem. It\'s truly a bittersweet sense I get, like a move that hurts, but it\'s a change for the better. Great job dear poet!

April 18th, 2022 08:36

Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Goldfinch60 said:

Those echoes can resound in your mind for eternity Neville.

Andy

April 18th, 2022 00:44

Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Rozina said:

Love this. I can see the house and hear your footsteps as you walk through the empty rooms and hear the sad echoes sighing.......

April 17th, 2022 17:42

Golden Shadows
DestinysPerspectives said:

I love the line: \"some just sit in golden shadows\". Great poem!

April 17th, 2022 15:58

Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
dusk arising said:

The house of love is a haunted place with ghosts sudden shrieks causing us to shudder when entered alone but for the memories.

A haunting piece indeed.

April 17th, 2022 09:23

Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Paul Bell said:

You set the scene here.
The empty house tells a story, the flowers that once grew now withered and dead, followed by the memories as the door closes.

April 17th, 2022 07:32

Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Michael Edwards said:

Echos don\'t lie - they just repeat themselves but that\'s not always a bad thing where true love is concerned.

April 17th, 2022 06:18

Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
Caring dove said:

I like the way you have expressed yourself in this . Love can be so beautiful but so sad when fading and disappearing .

A lovely writing )

April 17th, 2022 03:59

Echo’s Just Don’t Lie
orchidee said:

Good write N.

April 17th, 2022 03:58

Golden Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Neville.

Andy

April 17th, 2022 00:58

Golden Shadows
Rozina said:

Full of emotion in so few words. Magical.

April 16th, 2022 18:23

Golden Shadows
spilleronsheet said:

A wonderful poetry created
And a beautiful title to it
“Golden shadows”
But it’s Neville poetry hidden with emotions
Tale of many a lives
Some may complaint about their worries
While others celebrating their lives often hide their hardships of life
That’s how I feel like when reading your crisp poetry full of essence
Applaud Sir, for creating magic again

April 16th, 2022 15:13



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