Comments received on poems by Neville
The Tease
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so true in many circumstances Neville and can be hard to avoid.
Andy
September 26th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
This can be so true in many circumstances Neville and can be hard to avoid.
Andy
September 26th, 2021 00:43
The Tease
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Teasing can be a very dangerous undertaking that can lead to an undertaker. My great grandmother recounted a story to my grandmother about a neighbor of hers that was drowned by her teaser.
Her motto:
(in Italian, of course)
—proceed with caution
(procedi con cautela)!
Thank you for sharing this noteworthy write.
Laura 🌻
September 25th, 2021 18:26
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Teasing can be a very dangerous undertaking that can lead to an undertaker. My great grandmother recounted a story to my grandmother about a neighbor of hers that was drowned by her teaser.
Her motto:
(in Italian, of course)
—proceed with caution
(procedi con cautela)!
Thank you for sharing this noteworthy write.
Laura 🌻
September 25th, 2021 18:26
The Tease
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Met this goddess in many disguises. Am a sucker for the tease.
September 25th, 2021 09:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Met this goddess in many disguises. Am a sucker for the tease.
September 25th, 2021 09:27
The Tease
orchidee said:
Should I meet her? Will she be too much for me?! lol.
September 25th, 2021 06:56
orchidee said:
Should I meet her? Will she be too much for me?! lol.
September 25th, 2021 06:56
The Tease
Fay Slimm. said:
What a linguistic and valid complaint about one so enticingly false to the name of vincibility yet so deserving of being called tease. - - - great stuff agen Nev.................x
September 25th, 2021 05:04
Fay Slimm. said:
What a linguistic and valid complaint about one so enticingly false to the name of vincibility yet so deserving of being called tease. - - - great stuff agen Nev.................x
September 25th, 2021 05:04
Nothing to Lose
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling is so wonderful in knowing that all was fine in their world.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling is so wonderful in knowing that all was fine in their world.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:12
Nothing to Lose
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem.😊
When there’s
‘Nothing to Lose’,
why not indulge?!………no regrets to be had………savor the moment…………🤗
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 24th, 2021 17:18
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem.😊
When there’s
‘Nothing to Lose’,
why not indulge?!………no regrets to be had………savor the moment…………🤗
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 24th, 2021 17:18
Nothing to Lose
L. B. Mek said:
\'Know, thy Self\'
then all your choices in life, will be centred upon those principles, you hold true and dear, meaning
even your mistakes, will have a level of humble decency
that will never overextend, to indecency..
so that \'morning after\' scene of consequence
may not have to appear
as a nightmare in your dawning future\'s, realm...
(an Inspiring write, once more you have me dancing, with my fingertips
how well, you spark my imagination, dear Supreme Poet)
what a gift you choose to share, thank you!
September 24th, 2021 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'Know, thy Self\'
then all your choices in life, will be centred upon those principles, you hold true and dear, meaning
even your mistakes, will have a level of humble decency
that will never overextend, to indecency..
so that \'morning after\' scene of consequence
may not have to appear
as a nightmare in your dawning future\'s, realm...
(an Inspiring write, once more you have me dancing, with my fingertips
how well, you spark my imagination, dear Supreme Poet)
what a gift you choose to share, thank you!
September 24th, 2021 05:40
Nothing to Lose
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I can\'t meet her. She is with someone. lol.
September 24th, 2021 04:24
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I can\'t meet her. She is with someone. lol.
September 24th, 2021 04:24
Nothing to Lose
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I can\'t meet her. She is with someone. lol.
September 24th, 2021 04:24
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I can\'t meet her. She is with someone. lol.
September 24th, 2021 04:24
Nothing to Lose
dusk arising said:
OOh I\'ve had mornings like that. Nervousness pervades the atmosphere.... anxiety vibrates... eventually flatulence breaks the impasse.... but he\'s very forgiving... aren\'t you Neville.
Great piece which did bring back memories and how the situations resolved themselves - some better forgotten.
September 24th, 2021 03:20
dusk arising said:
OOh I\'ve had mornings like that. Nervousness pervades the atmosphere.... anxiety vibrates... eventually flatulence breaks the impasse.... but he\'s very forgiving... aren\'t you Neville.
Great piece which did bring back memories and how the situations resolved themselves - some better forgotten.
September 24th, 2021 03:20
Nothing to Lose
Fay Slimm. said:
That eventual awakening so very sensitively portrayed brought a smile to my face this morn - delighted thank yous for that - and more........x
September 24th, 2021 03:13
Fay Slimm. said:
That eventual awakening so very sensitively portrayed brought a smile to my face this morn - delighted thank yous for that - and more........x
September 24th, 2021 03:13
Without Closure
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your words convey a message of sadness and a void that this reader feels. Perhaps ‘without closure’, there’s still hope. We can always hope.
Laura🌻
September 24th, 2021 01:37
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Your words convey a message of sadness and a void that this reader feels. Perhaps ‘without closure’, there’s still hope. We can always hope.
Laura🌻
September 24th, 2021 01:37
Without Closure
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yes, the one she
refused
Not to wear on a
date ..\'
(its like she felt trouble approaching, and still chose
to charge forth,
grimacing heart, out in front
and bared raw
with pride, tide back
in that perfectly silken hair
she, far too often
hid behind...
its like she also, knew
whatever after-story guesses
their ashes of dying embers
may someday, spew
this here, was a Love
a belonging-to, worth
fighting for: with the Faith
she\'d invested
in all her hopes, of Life...)
mystical Poetry, at its subtly woven: Finest!
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply,
sorry if my interpretation was off the mark, I kinda let my imagination loose a little..
as always thanks for sharing
I read and learn, my friend
(oh and that book cover is gonna give me nightmares for a few days,
although admittedly not as much as those all-seeing eyes from your other cover..
they, just drill into you relentlessly 😨 ) lol
Cheers on your 5th 🥂
am already looking forward to that magical 6th! 😎
September 23rd, 2021 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'Yes, the one she
refused
Not to wear on a
date ..\'
(its like she felt trouble approaching, and still chose
to charge forth,
grimacing heart, out in front
and bared raw
with pride, tide back
in that perfectly silken hair
she, far too often
hid behind...
its like she also, knew
whatever after-story guesses
their ashes of dying embers
may someday, spew
this here, was a Love
a belonging-to, worth
fighting for: with the Faith
she\'d invested
in all her hopes, of Life...)
mystical Poetry, at its subtly woven: Finest!
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply,
sorry if my interpretation was off the mark, I kinda let my imagination loose a little..
as always thanks for sharing
I read and learn, my friend
(oh and that book cover is gonna give me nightmares for a few days,
although admittedly not as much as those all-seeing eyes from your other cover..
they, just drill into you relentlessly 😨 ) lol
Cheers on your 5th 🥂
am already looking forward to that magical 6th! 😎
September 23rd, 2021 03:48
Without Closure
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sadly emotive write Neville.
Andy
September 23rd, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a sadly emotive write Neville.
Andy
September 23rd, 2021 01:38
Without Closure
Doggerel Dave said:
So many questions:
Have you:
Cleaned it?
Pawned it?
Sold It ?
Good price?
Sequel definitely needed Nev, as the consensus makes plain.
September 23rd, 2021 00:24
Doggerel Dave said:
So many questions:
Have you:
Cleaned it?
Pawned it?
Sold It ?
Good price?
Sequel definitely needed Nev, as the consensus makes plain.
September 23rd, 2021 00:24
Without Closure
dusk arising said:
Well some old trinkets are just baggage after the lust has gone, the damage done, and life has well and truly moved on.....
September 22nd, 2021 13:54
dusk arising said:
Well some old trinkets are just baggage after the lust has gone, the damage done, and life has well and truly moved on.....
September 22nd, 2021 13:54
Without Closure
Fay Slimm. said:
The case of a missing lady-love and what skill in the telling when your lines open questions of fate intervening with intriguing clues. Another tale which maybe needs a sequel mon ami........ otherwise such as me will ever be sad at knowing this post is truly Without Closure. - - .good un tho. Nev.......x
September 22nd, 2021 12:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The case of a missing lady-love and what skill in the telling when your lines open questions of fate intervening with intriguing clues. Another tale which maybe needs a sequel mon ami........ otherwise such as me will ever be sad at knowing this post is truly Without Closure. - - .good un tho. Nev.......x
September 22nd, 2021 12:46
A Taste Well Shared
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words, that special person will always be with you.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words, that special person will always be with you.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:19
A Taste Well Shared
Doggerel Dave said:
A woody fragrance pervades this piece. Rhythmic in a quite erotic way, Nev
PS: they weren\'t gargling the stuff, were they? 😊
September 21st, 2021 18:34
Doggerel Dave said:
A woody fragrance pervades this piece. Rhythmic in a quite erotic way, Nev
PS: they weren\'t gargling the stuff, were they? 😊
September 21st, 2021 18:34
A Taste Well Shared
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Let’s hope their taste buds are aplenty with papillae and microvilli.
I’m sure the lucky one to whom this is dedicated is appreciative of your fine and delicate poem.
Laura🌻
September 21st, 2021 15:44
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Let’s hope their taste buds are aplenty with papillae and microvilli.
I’m sure the lucky one to whom this is dedicated is appreciative of your fine and delicate poem.
Laura🌻
September 21st, 2021 15:44
A Taste Well Shared
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I won\'t meet her. I will leave the two of them together.
September 21st, 2021 09:37
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I won\'t meet her. I will leave the two of them together.
September 21st, 2021 09:37
A Taste Well Shared
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
All the above, everybody should be blessed at least once with a Testable moment.
September 21st, 2021 09:22
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Neville.
All the above, everybody should be blessed at least once with a Testable moment.
September 21st, 2021 09:22
A Taste Well Shared
L. B. Mek said:
makes me feel like I\'m intruding, just by reading
how well you\'ve cultivated that sense of sacred intimacy, in such a short write, my friend
though still, as-ever
done it so subtly decadent, utilising scenic deft touches
no need for an avalanche of imagery,
just you and your masterfully unique Poetry!
September 21st, 2021 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
makes me feel like I\'m intruding, just by reading
how well you\'ve cultivated that sense of sacred intimacy, in such a short write, my friend
though still, as-ever
done it so subtly decadent, utilising scenic deft touches
no need for an avalanche of imagery,
just you and your masterfully unique Poetry!
September 21st, 2021 05:39
A Taste Well Shared
dusk arising said:
For the essence of love\'s spirit has twinned them into harmonic intimacy of spice.
September 21st, 2021 05:23
dusk arising said:
For the essence of love\'s spirit has twinned them into harmonic intimacy of spice.
September 21st, 2021 05:23
A Taste Well Shared
Fay Slimm. said:
Leaving me near speechless the appeal of these scenes Nev where closeness is felt even though distant - - - your readers will love it and hope your someone special will treasure this verse - - it goes into my list of favourites for sure...........x
September 21st, 2021 05:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Leaving me near speechless the appeal of these scenes Nev where closeness is felt even though distant - - - your readers will love it and hope your someone special will treasure this verse - - it goes into my list of favourites for sure...........x
September 21st, 2021 05:10
For Reference Purposes Only
Doggerel Dave said:
I resemble that remark, Nev.
My book case complies with the Iron Law Of the Thirds: One third, read; a third, part read; remaining third to be read...soon.
September 20th, 2021 18:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I resemble that remark, Nev.
My book case complies with the Iron Law Of the Thirds: One third, read; a third, part read; remaining third to be read...soon.
September 20th, 2021 18:05
For Reference Purposes Only
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love it, Neville.
A head twister for sure.
September 20th, 2021 10:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Love it, Neville.
A head twister for sure.
September 20th, 2021 10:03
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