Comments received on poems by Neville
Somewhere Between Lovers
MendedFences27 said:
Her paper-thin veneer was finally shattered, and he voracious interior exposed. Her lovers felt like playthings and opted for a more meaningful connection. Love it seems comes in many layers, some deeper than others. We feel a sadness only for the loss of love and what will be her ongoing plight.
A well told scene of lost love told aslant of the actual occurrence. Sometimes, doing so is more difficult than relaying the actuality. A fine poem. I enjoyed it immensely. - Phil A.
September 1st, 2022 18:17
MendedFences27 said:
Her paper-thin veneer was finally shattered, and he voracious interior exposed. Her lovers felt like playthings and opted for a more meaningful connection. Love it seems comes in many layers, some deeper than others. We feel a sadness only for the loss of love and what will be her ongoing plight.
A well told scene of lost love told aslant of the actual occurrence. Sometimes, doing so is more difficult than relaying the actuality. A fine poem. I enjoyed it immensely. - Phil A.
September 1st, 2022 18:17
Somewhere Between Lovers
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the result of insatiable lust ends often in heart-wrenching sadness and for both genders too methinks --- you pen a picture deserving of pity dear Nev. - brings tears to the eyes does this haunt of a read.................x
September 1st, 2022 06:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the result of insatiable lust ends often in heart-wrenching sadness and for both genders too methinks --- you pen a picture deserving of pity dear Nev. - brings tears to the eyes does this haunt of a read.................x
September 1st, 2022 06:07
Somewhere Between Lovers
orchidee said:
Is she on the rubbish dump? Aww, send her to me - or will she be too much for me?!
And what am I on about?! Fido won\'t let me have any \'excitement\'. lol.
September 1st, 2022 05:18
orchidee said:
Is she on the rubbish dump? Aww, send her to me - or will she be too much for me?!
And what am I on about?! Fido won\'t let me have any \'excitement\'. lol.
September 1st, 2022 05:18
Looking Forward to Later
Christina8 said:
OOH Saucy! I like this a lot! The imagery is priceless. And THANK YOU sir!
September 1st, 2022 02:10
Christina8 said:
OOH Saucy! I like this a lot! The imagery is priceless. And THANK YOU sir!
September 1st, 2022 02:10
Looking Forward to Later
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully that love will overcome all Neville.
Andhy
September 1st, 2022 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully that love will overcome all Neville.
Andhy
September 1st, 2022 00:58
Looking Forward to Later
Bella Shepard said:
I think you raise a good point, the difference between making love and having sex. Does one necessarily lead to the other? One denotes connection while the other satisfaction. Now if you get both together, well you\'ve hit the jackpot.
August 31st, 2022 11:37
Bella Shepard said:
I think you raise a good point, the difference between making love and having sex. Does one necessarily lead to the other? One denotes connection while the other satisfaction. Now if you get both together, well you\'ve hit the jackpot.
August 31st, 2022 11:37
Looking Forward to Later
Doggerel Dave said:
No matter the route (care with spelling there), so long it worked out well in the end.
If kids in your neighbourhood are mouthing off like that, it’s time for a move, Neville.
August 31st, 2022 07:53
Doggerel Dave said:
No matter the route (care with spelling there), so long it worked out well in the end.
If kids in your neighbourhood are mouthing off like that, it’s time for a move, Neville.
August 31st, 2022 07:53
Looking Forward to Later
orchidee said:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F even!
Woof! Not now says Fido! lol.
August 31st, 2022 07:18
orchidee said:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F even!
Woof! Not now says Fido! lol.
August 31st, 2022 07:18
Looking Forward to Later
Fay Slimm. said:
The first of your double-take gets my vote Nev. as despite this culture\'s modern approach to the sex-act it brings out in your final lines the difference in just coupling and that of mating with love. Know too what you mean by street-wise phrases that come from lots of youngsters today...............x
August 31st, 2022 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The first of your double-take gets my vote Nev. as despite this culture\'s modern approach to the sex-act it brings out in your final lines the difference in just coupling and that of mating with love. Know too what you mean by street-wise phrases that come from lots of youngsters today...............x
August 31st, 2022 03:46
A Few Moments After
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be always there Neville.
Andy
August 31st, 2022 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be always there Neville.
Andy
August 31st, 2022 00:36
A Few Moments After
Bella Shepard said:
To me the beauty of the poem is that a simple gesture says it all. No need for words, a silence that fills the heart. Well penned dear friend!
August 30th, 2022 14:26
Bella Shepard said:
To me the beauty of the poem is that a simple gesture says it all. No need for words, a silence that fills the heart. Well penned dear friend!
August 30th, 2022 14:26
A Few Moments After
MendedFences27 said:
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a few words, the rest is left to the reader\'s humanity. The scene is minimally painted and yet piques the readers imagination. And then it ends, and the remainder is in the mind of the reader. If poetry is saying the most with the least, this is poetry at its best. - Phil A.
August 30th, 2022 10:44
MendedFences27 said:
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a few words, the rest is left to the reader\'s humanity. The scene is minimally painted and yet piques the readers imagination. And then it ends, and the remainder is in the mind of the reader. If poetry is saying the most with the least, this is poetry at its best. - Phil A.
August 30th, 2022 10:44
A Few Moments After
Doggerel Dave said:
Gritty stuff, Neville - wasn\'t the makings of a question mark unfinished, was it?
August 30th, 2022 06:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Gritty stuff, Neville - wasn\'t the makings of a question mark unfinished, was it?
August 30th, 2022 06:05
A Few Moments After
Fay Slimm. said:
Another warm glimpse into an intimate moment giving your poet\'s view of \"afterward glow\" - -- you know how to leave much unsaid but always so telling mon ami ................x
August 30th, 2022 03:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Another warm glimpse into an intimate moment giving your poet\'s view of \"afterward glow\" - -- you know how to leave much unsaid but always so telling mon ami ................x
August 30th, 2022 03:13
While Watching Swifts
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, swifts are like art in motion.
Andy
August 30th, 2022 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, swifts are like art in motion.
Andy
August 30th, 2022 01:27
While Watching Swifts
orchidee said:
I had an experience of two halves - in a field, watching swifts go by, poetically, winging their way, etc - then I stepped in a pile of manure! Well, I was looking up. From the sublime to the ridiculous. lol.
August 30th, 2022 01:19
orchidee said:
I had an experience of two halves - in a field, watching swifts go by, poetically, winging their way, etc - then I stepped in a pile of manure! Well, I was looking up. From the sublime to the ridiculous. lol.
August 30th, 2022 01:19
While Watching Swifts
Doggerel Dave said:
For me it is impossible to express the wonder.
Glad you took up the challenge and succeeded, Neville
August 29th, 2022 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
For me it is impossible to express the wonder.
Glad you took up the challenge and succeeded, Neville
August 29th, 2022 19:51
While Watching Swifts
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear friend, I think it\'s all three. I can see the urge in the artist to paint it, the longing of heart to absorb it and the need in the poet to capture it in words, which is exactly what you have done. I love the way you have traced the movement of the swifts, and the visual of color.
August 29th, 2022 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear friend, I think it\'s all three. I can see the urge in the artist to paint it, the longing of heart to absorb it and the need in the poet to capture it in words, which is exactly what you have done. I love the way you have traced the movement of the swifts, and the visual of color.
August 29th, 2022 13:52
Just a Few Recollections
Fay Slimm. said:
Old crumpled photos can bring instantly back those golden days when love understood and a heart saw freckles as golden gems. An evocative read mon ami.
August 28th, 2022 11:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Old crumpled photos can bring instantly back those golden days when love understood and a heart saw freckles as golden gems. An evocative read mon ami.
August 28th, 2022 11:12
Just a Few Recollections
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I cant recollect meeting her. And what\'s it got to do with me?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
August 28th, 2022 07:17
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I cant recollect meeting her. And what\'s it got to do with me?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
August 28th, 2022 07:17
Just a Few Recollections
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory without remorse, Neville - the very best kind when it involves someone so special.
August 28th, 2022 06:36
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory without remorse, Neville - the very best kind when it involves someone so special.
August 28th, 2022 06:36
Take Two Poles Josie
Aradhya said:
a beautiful and emotional read Neville. your mother seems to be a very special lady and even if she isn\'t here physically her memories and teachings are with you and she\'ll be so happy to learn how you treasure memories. excellent, my friend!
August 28th, 2022 02:24
Aradhya said:
a beautiful and emotional read Neville. your mother seems to be a very special lady and even if she isn\'t here physically her memories and teachings are with you and she\'ll be so happy to learn how you treasure memories. excellent, my friend!
August 28th, 2022 02:24
Take Two Poles Josie
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emeotive words Neville, your mother will always be with you.
Andy
August 28th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emeotive words Neville, your mother will always be with you.
Andy
August 28th, 2022 01:19
Between Pauses
Bella Shepard said:
The heart, the great symbol of love and life. Listen to it; calming, steady, reassuring, the beat of love in one precious to you. Beautifully expressed!
August 27th, 2022 13:13
Bella Shepard said:
The heart, the great symbol of love and life. Listen to it; calming, steady, reassuring, the beat of love in one precious to you. Beautifully expressed!
August 27th, 2022 13:13
Take Two Poles Josie
Bella Shepard said:
You\'re mum sounds like a very special lady, who appreciated the sweetest sounds in life. You have captured this beautifully in a tender poem of love. She taught you well my friend.
August 27th, 2022 12:36
Bella Shepard said:
You\'re mum sounds like a very special lady, who appreciated the sweetest sounds in life. You have captured this beautifully in a tender poem of love. She taught you well my friend.
August 27th, 2022 12:36
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