Comments received on poems by Neville
On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was so so glorious. I mean your descriptions are so fine and vivid like I\'m literally in the moment. So well done!
March 28th, 2022 12:14
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was so so glorious. I mean your descriptions are so fine and vivid like I\'m literally in the moment. So well done!
March 28th, 2022 12:14
Zen Tree
Christina8 said:
Very descriptive and beautiful. I do detect a bit of lonely/empty I believe. C
March 28th, 2022 08:37
Christina8 said:
Very descriptive and beautiful. I do detect a bit of lonely/empty I believe. C
March 28th, 2022 08:37
Zen Tree
L. B. Mek said:
just one more, passion
we share dear Poet, Supreme
I too
could write a book\'s worth of Ode\'s
to those Trees, that
offer us, so much stability
of solace
in our, chaotic lives...
beautiful! thank you
and yes, if we heed their wisdom
they always lead us
to that Right, path
in life
March 28th, 2022 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
just one more, passion
we share dear Poet, Supreme
I too
could write a book\'s worth of Ode\'s
to those Trees, that
offer us, so much stability
of solace
in our, chaotic lives...
beautiful! thank you
and yes, if we heed their wisdom
they always lead us
to that Right, path
in life
March 28th, 2022 06:12
Zen Tree
dusk arising said:
The most relaxing of sounds are those of trees swaying gently in a breeze. The quiet rushing of leaves high above and the mesmeric creaking of their boughs. A emotionally warm companion to sit with and contemplate is a mature tree.
Just who knows how much a tree sees (or hears) and whether it is our next step along the continuum of being.
Footnote: in the supposedly \'woke\' (yuk) days your use of \'brother\' mocks these new attitudes. You might well have chosen sister but clearly we don\'t have trans gender trees in our woodland. I don\'t know what\'s going on. Saw an article about a protest on one of these \'woke\' issues and several protesters had placards reading \"some women have a penis\". Has the world gone mad Neville?
March 28th, 2022 05:32
dusk arising said:
The most relaxing of sounds are those of trees swaying gently in a breeze. The quiet rushing of leaves high above and the mesmeric creaking of their boughs. A emotionally warm companion to sit with and contemplate is a mature tree.
Just who knows how much a tree sees (or hears) and whether it is our next step along the continuum of being.
Footnote: in the supposedly \'woke\' (yuk) days your use of \'brother\' mocks these new attitudes. You might well have chosen sister but clearly we don\'t have trans gender trees in our woodland. I don\'t know what\'s going on. Saw an article about a protest on one of these \'woke\' issues and several protesters had placards reading \"some women have a penis\". Has the world gone mad Neville?
March 28th, 2022 05:32
Zen Tree
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn’t hear any Zen going on there Nev (tin ear?), but what I did hear, no feel, was foreboding…. And it’s raw.
March 28th, 2022 04:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn’t hear any Zen going on there Nev (tin ear?), but what I did hear, no feel, was foreboding…. And it’s raw.
March 28th, 2022 04:11
Zen Tree
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear N. for showing by poetic talent how much power emptiness holds.
March 28th, 2022 02:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you dear N. for showing by poetic talent how much power emptiness holds.
March 28th, 2022 02:44
Zen Tree
orchidee said:
Ah yes, that old chestnut. Erm, not meaning a chestnut tree particularly!
\'If a tree falls in a forest with no one around, does it make a noise?\'
Well, it might be a chestnut tree. Woof! (Fido says) \'Do shut up now Orchi\'. lol.
March 28th, 2022 02:01
orchidee said:
Ah yes, that old chestnut. Erm, not meaning a chestnut tree particularly!
\'If a tree falls in a forest with no one around, does it make a noise?\'
Well, it might be a chestnut tree. Woof! (Fido says) \'Do shut up now Orchi\'. lol.
March 28th, 2022 02:01
On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, that love will be there forever.
Andy
March 28th, 2022 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, that love will be there forever.
Andy
March 28th, 2022 00:49
On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Kinsey Peterson said:
The imagery invoked by your words is really impressive. Now I want to see if I can do the same, you should be proud of yourself. (:
March 27th, 2022 13:49
Kinsey Peterson said:
The imagery invoked by your words is really impressive. Now I want to see if I can do the same, you should be proud of yourself. (:
March 27th, 2022 13:49
On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
dusk arising said:
Cold winter winds outside can stir nostalgic thoughts. Alone times spur those thoughts of hope. Love is a warm place within us for yesterdays and hopes for chance.
It\'s all there and more i daresay in your emotional post today.
March 27th, 2022 11:44
dusk arising said:
Cold winter winds outside can stir nostalgic thoughts. Alone times spur those thoughts of hope. Love is a warm place within us for yesterdays and hopes for chance.
It\'s all there and more i daresay in your emotional post today.
March 27th, 2022 11:44
On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Christina8 said:
Such strong imagery in these lines! I really like this write. This is a love poem and it\'s wonderful!
March 27th, 2022 10:17
Christina8 said:
Such strong imagery in these lines! I really like this write. This is a love poem and it\'s wonderful!
March 27th, 2022 10:17
On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Accidental Poet said:
Great words from an even greater man. 😉
March 27th, 2022 09:08
Accidental Poet said:
Great words from an even greater man. 😉
March 27th, 2022 09:08
On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, I get lost in the flow of your imagery, line after line.
March 27th, 2022 07:09
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, I get lost in the flow of your imagery, line after line.
March 27th, 2022 07:09
Not Just An Old Fella Passing
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
a lovely tribute, Neville. Love the conversational, direct address. I penned a similar poem about my grandad, called Stormin\' Norman. Again, a moving a heart-felt work. Well done! We will remember them!
March 27th, 2022 06:34
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
a lovely tribute, Neville. Love the conversational, direct address. I penned a similar poem about my grandad, called Stormin\' Norman. Again, a moving a heart-felt work. Well done! We will remember them!
March 27th, 2022 06:34
On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Doggerel Dave said:
Even I can discern the absence but faint hope embodied there , Nev. Thanks
March 27th, 2022 05:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Even I can discern the absence but faint hope embodied there , Nev. Thanks
March 27th, 2022 05:21
On the Cusp of a Sneeze ..
Fay Slimm. said:
Musing on what once was brings a bouquet of intimate memories and so well penned they need to be in my fave. list - - such a moving finalé to this look-back my friend..............x
March 27th, 2022 05:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Musing on what once was brings a bouquet of intimate memories and so well penned they need to be in my fave. list - - such a moving finalé to this look-back my friend..............x
March 27th, 2022 05:08
Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be with you Neville, nothing will ever change that.
Andy
March 27th, 2022 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be with you Neville, nothing will ever change that.
Andy
March 27th, 2022 00:50
Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m sorry, it\'s a very safe day for you, God is with you my friend,
March 26th, 2022 12:43
Crowns4Christ said:
I\'m sorry, it\'s a very safe day for you, God is with you my friend,
March 26th, 2022 12:43
Never Going Nowhere Maybe
spilleronsheet said:
That’s what truly justifies
When the journey turns sweeter than, goal post on other side
Another great one dear Neville
March 26th, 2022 12:23
spilleronsheet said:
That’s what truly justifies
When the journey turns sweeter than, goal post on other side
Another great one dear Neville
March 26th, 2022 12:23
Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Christina8 said:
Once a love is in our hearts its hard to let them go and like you said think of them every now and then......
March 26th, 2022 11:14
Christina8 said:
Once a love is in our hearts its hard to let them go and like you said think of them every now and then......
March 26th, 2022 11:14
Never Going Nowhere Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Once love is exchanged no matter the time a couple remembers the highs of their journey . A verse to remember and treasure as I am sure does your sweet Pam every now and again .................. x.
March 26th, 2022 08:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Once love is exchanged no matter the time a couple remembers the highs of their journey . A verse to remember and treasure as I am sure does your sweet Pam every now and again .................. x.
March 26th, 2022 08:01
Never Going Nowhere Maybe
dusk arising said:
Those highs in life are with us always and remind us of how lucky we have been to live them. I hold a vision of life like a mountainous landscape reflected in the still waters of a lake. The higher we climbed is reflected in the depth of reflected despair. And years on we have become shaped and rounded to survive yet our hearts still fly away to those yesterdays when life was,.. well, what is the right word? Special?
So relateable.
March 26th, 2022 05:13
dusk arising said:
Those highs in life are with us always and remind us of how lucky we have been to live them. I hold a vision of life like a mountainous landscape reflected in the still waters of a lake. The higher we climbed is reflected in the depth of reflected despair. And years on we have become shaped and rounded to survive yet our hearts still fly away to those yesterdays when life was,.. well, what is the right word? Special?
So relateable.
March 26th, 2022 05:13
Global Warning
L. B. Mek said:
how, regrettably - Poignant
these words read, dear Poet Supreme
\'Elsewhere
A child
Is now crying huge
Pre-spring tears\'
hundreds of children already, murdered
in Ukraine
such wanton, disregard for life...
if reposted
I\'m sure many would relate
with how current
these words seem..
a Great write!
March 25th, 2022 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
how, regrettably - Poignant
these words read, dear Poet Supreme
\'Elsewhere
A child
Is now crying huge
Pre-spring tears\'
hundreds of children already, murdered
in Ukraine
such wanton, disregard for life...
if reposted
I\'m sure many would relate
with how current
these words seem..
a Great write!
March 25th, 2022 06:57
Taking it Slow
Goldfinch60 said:
Rushing is not the way to hide them Neville.
Andy
March 25th, 2022 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Rushing is not the way to hide them Neville.
Andy
March 25th, 2022 01:30
Taking it Slow
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
A fine work of miniature art.
March 24th, 2022 08:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
A fine work of miniature art.
March 24th, 2022 08:42
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