Comments received on poems by Neville
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
Michael Edwards said:
loads of punch in a small serving - super.................
April 13th, 2022 14:24
Michael Edwards said:
loads of punch in a small serving - super.................
April 13th, 2022 14:24
Gooder than Good Even
spilleronsheet said:
That’s a bunch of intelligent lines
So witty dear Neville
Awaiting more neologisms to encounter
It got more gooder and gooder as I read more from you
April 13th, 2022 13:01
spilleronsheet said:
That’s a bunch of intelligent lines
So witty dear Neville
Awaiting more neologisms to encounter
It got more gooder and gooder as I read more from you
April 13th, 2022 13:01
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
spilleronsheet said:
An intense romance, a sincere love and tragic ending
You made a tragic movie
Bringing tears to eyes
A fine and emotive work dear Neville
April 13th, 2022 12:54
spilleronsheet said:
An intense romance, a sincere love and tragic ending
You made a tragic movie
Bringing tears to eyes
A fine and emotive work dear Neville
April 13th, 2022 12:54
Before it Hurts Too Much to See
Fay Slimm. said:
Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at who love has gifted to one losing sight will bring a great lump to the throat and a tear to the eye of any reader -- a more than emotive write my friend.........x
April 13th, 2022 08:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at who love has gifted to one losing sight will bring a great lump to the throat and a tear to the eye of any reader -- a more than emotive write my friend.........x
April 13th, 2022 08:00
Gooder than Good Even
Rocky Lagou said:
So so lovely! I\'m definitely all for neologisms in poetry as I feel there are times when we just can\'t express what we want via regular speech. I\'ve used them in the past and even seminal poets like Gwendolyn Brooks have also used them. Thanks for this amazing sentiment,
April 13th, 2022 07:54
Rocky Lagou said:
So so lovely! I\'m definitely all for neologisms in poetry as I feel there are times when we just can\'t express what we want via regular speech. I\'ve used them in the past and even seminal poets like Gwendolyn Brooks have also used them. Thanks for this amazing sentiment,
April 13th, 2022 07:54
Gooder than Good Even
Rozina said:
Learnt another new word here, neologism. The most goodest of all? Thinking of all sorts of words now......
April 12th, 2022 18:17
Rozina said:
Learnt another new word here, neologism. The most goodest of all? Thinking of all sorts of words now......
April 12th, 2022 18:17
Gooder than Good Even
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
easy rhyme moment in time
creates a natural pause
even made me smile
April 12th, 2022 15:00
Pearcemelville 兎敏 said:
easy rhyme moment in time
creates a natural pause
even made me smile
April 12th, 2022 15:00
Gooder than Good Even
MendedFences27 said:
\"by a mile and a smile,\" and a half! Does that mean this is Neopoetic. Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Just to entertain for \"a moment in time\" is all we can expect. Great write. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2022 11:28
MendedFences27 said:
\"by a mile and a smile,\" and a half! Does that mean this is Neopoetic. Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Just to entertain for \"a moment in time\" is all we can expect. Great write. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2022 11:28
Gooder than Good Even
Christina8 said:
This is one of your \"goodest\" poems...Wonderful write dear N!
April 12th, 2022 08:27
Christina8 said:
This is one of your \"goodest\" poems...Wonderful write dear N!
April 12th, 2022 08:27
Gooder than Good Even
L. B. Mek said:
or even gooder than that, dear Poet
much, much
gooder, than any level of good
you realise..
all we can do, is thank you
for sharing your genius
and gifting us, so much poetic
enjoyment
April 12th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
or even gooder than that, dear Poet
much, much
gooder, than any level of good
you realise..
all we can do, is thank you
for sharing your genius
and gifting us, so much poetic
enjoyment
April 12th, 2022 05:45
Gooder than Good Even
orchidee said:
Good write N. I\'ve not met many neologisms myself. Does the Co-op sell them?! lol.
April 12th, 2022 05:21
orchidee said:
Good write N. I\'ve not met many neologisms myself. Does the Co-op sell them?! lol.
April 12th, 2022 05:21
Gooder than Good Even
dusk arising said:
I\'m still flinching at curiouser and curiouser but if betterest ever comes along i\'m out of here.
When something for us is \'gooder than good\' then it tickles our ego to hope that it will be remembered as such by that person too. But it took your finesse to state it so well.
April 12th, 2022 05:01
dusk arising said:
I\'m still flinching at curiouser and curiouser but if betterest ever comes along i\'m out of here.
When something for us is \'gooder than good\' then it tickles our ego to hope that it will be remembered as such by that person too. But it took your finesse to state it so well.
April 12th, 2022 05:01
Gooder than Good Even
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t get better than, gooder, maybe super gooder.
I\'ll be spending my day now looking for neologisms and just being annoying to people.
April 12th, 2022 04:54
Paul Bell said:
You can\'t get better than, gooder, maybe super gooder.
I\'ll be spending my day now looking for neologisms and just being annoying to people.
April 12th, 2022 04:54
Gooder than Good Even
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught can be gooder than memories of closeness between two like minds even for a few moments - regretting that would be an insanity - - or so methinks. - - Am loving your offering of pure neologism..........x
April 12th, 2022 03:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Naught can be gooder than memories of closeness between two like minds even for a few moments - regretting that would be an insanity - - or so methinks. - - Am loving your offering of pure neologism..........x
April 12th, 2022 03:15
Even Sadder than That Even
Rozina said:
This really tugs at the heartstrings. Heartbreaking.
April 11th, 2022 16:59
Rozina said:
This really tugs at the heartstrings. Heartbreaking.
April 11th, 2022 16:59
Even Sadder than That Even
Fay Slimm. said:
The saddest of sights is ravaged children which your concerned words capture on heaps of rubble to remind readers of the sheer desperation of those found after fire and death
- -- bewildered and weeping young faces do indeed need living and caring doctors and nurses - - shame on leaders unworthy of a new world of peace.................x
April 11th, 2022 10:44
Fay Slimm. said:
The saddest of sights is ravaged children which your concerned words capture on heaps of rubble to remind readers of the sheer desperation of those found after fire and death
- -- bewildered and weeping young faces do indeed need living and caring doctors and nurses - - shame on leaders unworthy of a new world of peace.................x
April 11th, 2022 10:44
Even Sadder than That Even
Christina8 said:
This is a magnificent poem, Neville. Magnificent but terribly sad.I can\'t even watch the news anymore. Hopefully some day the world will know peace. Fantastic job!
April 11th, 2022 09:45
Christina8 said:
This is a magnificent poem, Neville. Magnificent but terribly sad.I can\'t even watch the news anymore. Hopefully some day the world will know peace. Fantastic job!
April 11th, 2022 09:45
Even Sadder than That Even
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job. Currently our world is drowning in the evilness that is humankind. I pray for better days. Amazing and touching poem.
April 11th, 2022 08:35
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job. Currently our world is drowning in the evilness that is humankind. I pray for better days. Amazing and touching poem.
April 11th, 2022 08:35
Even Sadder than That Even
L. B. Mek said:
\'So now listen voyeur\'
this line
this break of poetic voice
this brave, artistry!
is why I\'m a proud fan
dear Poet, Supreme!
(as-ever
I read and learn)
and yes, at times
I too, have to fight
those enraged tears
from submerging my reality
into, utter despair..
April 11th, 2022 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'So now listen voyeur\'
this line
this break of poetic voice
this brave, artistry!
is why I\'m a proud fan
dear Poet, Supreme!
(as-ever
I read and learn)
and yes, at times
I too, have to fight
those enraged tears
from submerging my reality
into, utter despair..
April 11th, 2022 06:27
Even Sadder than That Even
dusk arising said:
The ruin of the roots of beauty itself cries in your words today. For what shall we build upon the ruined lifes but more opportunities for the human spirit to reveal how vile it can be. Like atwisting knife between the ribs of our hopes for brotherly love and world peace.
A timely thought provoking piece Neville (please have a peep at \"premonition\" i posted on the 8th april). Our peace loving achilles heel is tweaked into anger.
April 11th, 2022 05:34
dusk arising said:
The ruin of the roots of beauty itself cries in your words today. For what shall we build upon the ruined lifes but more opportunities for the human spirit to reveal how vile it can be. Like atwisting knife between the ribs of our hopes for brotherly love and world peace.
A timely thought provoking piece Neville (please have a peep at \"premonition\" i posted on the 8th april). Our peace loving achilles heel is tweaked into anger.
April 11th, 2022 05:34
Even Sadder than That Even
spilleronsheet said:
A poetry
A message of resurrection I seek
There you lay those magnificent lines
So well inked with blue describing the red that coloured the world canvas
Hope I see in the prose
Happen to believe to the belief of yours
A new world with a virtue called peace
April 11th, 2022 04:41
spilleronsheet said:
A poetry
A message of resurrection I seek
There you lay those magnificent lines
So well inked with blue describing the red that coloured the world canvas
Hope I see in the prose
Happen to believe to the belief of yours
A new world with a virtue called peace
April 11th, 2022 04:41
Why
Rozina said:
Unanswerable by the victims and others. But the main culprit knows why.
April 11th, 2022 01:07
Rozina said:
Unanswerable by the victims and others. But the main culprit knows why.
April 11th, 2022 01:07
Why
spilleronsheet said:
A thought provoking question
That awakes me in my deep sleep
Further to it a very intriguing poetry
So well matching with the recent times
I can hear the voices of so many who are marginalised
Very well worded dear Neville
April 10th, 2022 14:39
spilleronsheet said:
A thought provoking question
That awakes me in my deep sleep
Further to it a very intriguing poetry
So well matching with the recent times
I can hear the voices of so many who are marginalised
Very well worded dear Neville
April 10th, 2022 14:39
Why
Fay Slimm. said:
The horror of war\'s vile effect is brought to the fore by your experience when trying to enter the field of its victims dear Nev - -- your verse speaks its own clearly captured message of no answers to Why - -- - -- yet we must go on asking - -- - heartbreaking indeed this first read of my belated return to M.P.S. ..................x
April 10th, 2022 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
The horror of war\'s vile effect is brought to the fore by your experience when trying to enter the field of its victims dear Nev - -- your verse speaks its own clearly captured message of no answers to Why - -- - -- yet we must go on asking - -- - heartbreaking indeed this first read of my belated return to M.P.S. ..................x
April 10th, 2022 03:47
Why
Poetic Dan said:
To many thoughts for this piece of art, so I\'ll just thank you for sharing your heart!
Take care
April 10th, 2022 02:07
Poetic Dan said:
To many thoughts for this piece of art, so I\'ll just thank you for sharing your heart!
Take care
April 10th, 2022 02:07
Why
L. B. Mek said:
I imagine
all children, Victims
of war
can relate, verbatim
to every word in your poem
dear Poet Supreme!
how you capture, the true horror
in the eyes, and voice
of lost, innocence
and beleaguered, mindsets
where a childhoods, precious
naivety has been, warped
far - far, too soon
to that sinister, world
of adulthoods, wanton cruelty...
April 7th, 2022 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
I imagine
all children, Victims
of war
can relate, verbatim
to every word in your poem
dear Poet Supreme!
how you capture, the true horror
in the eyes, and voice
of lost, innocence
and beleaguered, mindsets
where a childhoods, precious
naivety has been, warped
far - far, too soon
to that sinister, world
of adulthoods, wanton cruelty...
April 7th, 2022 03:45
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