Comments received on poems by Neville
Fablon
myself and me said:
We are all fablon in a sense, it depends on which side has been exposed. I can\'t believe that a piece of fablon could inspire such an amazing writing.
September 11th, 2021 11:54
myself and me said:
We are all fablon in a sense, it depends on which side has been exposed. I can\'t believe that a piece of fablon could inspire such an amazing writing.
September 11th, 2021 11:54
Fablon
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Two faced love is a sticky wicket.
September 11th, 2021 07:46
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
Two faced love is a sticky wicket.
September 11th, 2021 07:46
Fablon
dusk arising said:
Great analogy Neville. Fablon, she looks great at first take but the closer u get, you see the facade.... oooh and just as you say.... getting in deeper leads to just one tacky mess.
September 11th, 2021 02:54
dusk arising said:
Great analogy Neville. Fablon, she looks great at first take but the closer u get, you see the facade.... oooh and just as you say.... getting in deeper leads to just one tacky mess.
September 11th, 2021 02:54
Fablon
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such clever imagery to get the point over Nev. Fablon makes the perfect metaphor . Two-sided natures never won suitors -
but can\'t say I blame them for preferring truth\'s face...........x
September 11th, 2021 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such clever imagery to get the point over Nev. Fablon makes the perfect metaphor . Two-sided natures never won suitors -
but can\'t say I blame them for preferring truth\'s face...........x
September 11th, 2021 02:39
Narcissist
Goldfinch60 said:
One of my friends has just managed to escape from a Narcissist after twenty five years of trauma.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
One of my friends has just managed to escape from a Narcissist after twenty five years of trauma.
Andy
September 11th, 2021 00:13
Narcissist
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh yes Nev, they exist - both genders. And ofttimes the male version is the more dangerous, as he tends to have more power and influence.
However, in general, narcissists are quite amusing to watch - from a distance (as much distance as possible).
September 10th, 2021 20:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh yes Nev, they exist - both genders. And ofttimes the male version is the more dangerous, as he tends to have more power and influence.
However, in general, narcissists are quite amusing to watch - from a distance (as much distance as possible).
September 10th, 2021 20:13
Narcissist
dusk arising said:
LOL we used to call it \'lead guitarist syndrome\' in the group musicians enclave of society (lol). Though a couple of lady singers i knew easily fitted the bill.
September 10th, 2021 12:03
dusk arising said:
LOL we used to call it \'lead guitarist syndrome\' in the group musicians enclave of society (lol). Though a couple of lady singers i knew easily fitted the bill.
September 10th, 2021 12:03
Narcissist
Saxon Crow said:
Ooooo I\'ve met one or two of them in my time. Never ends well.
September 10th, 2021 08:33
Saxon Crow said:
Ooooo I\'ve met one or two of them in my time. Never ends well.
September 10th, 2021 08:33
My Lotus and Me
L. B. Mek said:
I have totalled three cars in my life, yet have had only six accidents in my life, and driven enough in one year to make taxi drivers sweat, a lifetime..
having never had an accident while anyone was in the car with me..
in short, I\'m a devil alone
a gentler presence, with someone at my side..
but I do love that romance of poetic solitude, not to be mistaken with loneliness..
solitude, looking out at nature\'s vastness and feeling so insignificant and small...
with trees, as my road signs and bumps as my re-calibrating influences: in life...
September 10th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
I have totalled three cars in my life, yet have had only six accidents in my life, and driven enough in one year to make taxi drivers sweat, a lifetime..
having never had an accident while anyone was in the car with me..
in short, I\'m a devil alone
a gentler presence, with someone at my side..
but I do love that romance of poetic solitude, not to be mistaken with loneliness..
solitude, looking out at nature\'s vastness and feeling so insignificant and small...
with trees, as my road signs and bumps as my re-calibrating influences: in life...
September 10th, 2021 05:48
Narcissist
L. B. Mek said:
I know these feeling\'s you articulate, so well my friend
only I lack the bravery to word and \'Shed\' my feeling\'s with such eloquence..
September 10th, 2021 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
I know these feeling\'s you articulate, so well my friend
only I lack the bravery to word and \'Shed\' my feeling\'s with such eloquence..
September 10th, 2021 05:38
Narcissist
Fay Slimm. said:
Sometimes a strong message such as this commendable verse contains is sometimes the means to make narcissists take a deeper look at themselves - a gurt and mighty forceful reminder Nev. - - hope it worked if it was written from experience mon ami..........x
September 10th, 2021 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Sometimes a strong message such as this commendable verse contains is sometimes the means to make narcissists take a deeper look at themselves - a gurt and mighty forceful reminder Nev. - - hope it worked if it was written from experience mon ami..........x
September 10th, 2021 04:19
Narcissist
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Narcissists are very self absorbed .... they think everything is about them . Sometimes we give to people who cannot give much in return .
September 10th, 2021 03:46
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Narcissists are very self absorbed .... they think everything is about them . Sometimes we give to people who cannot give much in return .
September 10th, 2021 03:46
My Lotus and Me
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Alas, that Lotus number seventeen was willing to perform, but I suppose there were too many problems to do so.
Not only did I enjoy reading your interesting poem, but I also learned something knew.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 9th, 2021 00:13
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Alas, that Lotus number seventeen was willing to perform, but I suppose there were too many problems to do so.
Not only did I enjoy reading your interesting poem, but I also learned something knew.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 9th, 2021 00:13
My Lotus and Me
Doggerel Dave said:
Well I suppose if you are a tree and not a hand and don’t have another tree not to clap with (if yer know wot I mean) then you best just lie down and hope no one heard…
The only thing which buggered the whole scene up was the British Racing Green Lotus, which we will have to excuse because it was only seventeen and really hadn’t had the chance , since it was always racing around, to sit, contemplate, then koan find out......
September 8th, 2021 20:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Well I suppose if you are a tree and not a hand and don’t have another tree not to clap with (if yer know wot I mean) then you best just lie down and hope no one heard…
The only thing which buggered the whole scene up was the British Racing Green Lotus, which we will have to excuse because it was only seventeen and really hadn’t had the chance , since it was always racing around, to sit, contemplate, then koan find out......
September 8th, 2021 20:53
My Lotus and Me
Dove said:
Oh my did you bend the tree! Timber’s away! Hope you both stick around, least you both weren’t bumps on a log! Racing sounds like fun! Of course trees don’t cry, they just weep sap
September 8th, 2021 09:06
Dove said:
Oh my did you bend the tree! Timber’s away! Hope you both stick around, least you both weren’t bumps on a log! Racing sounds like fun! Of course trees don’t cry, they just weep sap
September 8th, 2021 09:06
My Lotus and Me
dusk arising said:
The wheel came off mine on a nasty bend....... on another occasion i swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed!
There were tree fellers there but not an axe between em bejabers.
Do trees make a sound whilist falling or just when they stop falling... maybe its just the wind.
September 8th, 2021 05:57
dusk arising said:
The wheel came off mine on a nasty bend....... on another occasion i swerved to avoid a child and fell out of bed!
There were tree fellers there but not an axe between em bejabers.
Do trees make a sound whilist falling or just when they stop falling... maybe its just the wind.
September 8th, 2021 05:57
My Lotus and Me
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Anyone I should meet in this poem?!
September 8th, 2021 04:22
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Anyone I should meet in this poem?!
September 8th, 2021 04:22
My Lotus and Me
Fay Slimm. said:
Not being race-trained I ask did this Lotus have a tragic accident when a tree fell silently and so suddenly down to crush its hope of winning. - - but hope you were not in it me luverly..........x
September 8th, 2021 03:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Not being race-trained I ask did this Lotus have a tragic accident when a tree fell silently and so suddenly down to crush its hope of winning. - - but hope you were not in it me luverly..........x
September 8th, 2021 03:31
My Lotus and Me
Goldfinch60 said:
But if it did not make a sound did it really fall?
Andy
September 8th, 2021 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
But if it did not make a sound did it really fall?
Andy
September 8th, 2021 03:29
When the Sea Fret Hit
Goldfinch60 said:
That sea fog can be so enthralling and so frightening Neville.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That sea fog can be so enthralling and so frightening Neville.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:12
Listen Through the Breeze
myself and me said:
What a piece! The sound of that mandolin lingering in my mind, stirred up all the yesterdays\' memories.
September 7th, 2021 19:33
myself and me said:
What a piece! The sound of that mandolin lingering in my mind, stirred up all the yesterdays\' memories.
September 7th, 2021 19:33
Wryneck
myself and me said:
I did google it. Lucky you to catch one in your sight.
September 7th, 2021 19:30
myself and me said:
I did google it. Lucky you to catch one in your sight.
September 7th, 2021 19:30
When the Sea Fret Hit
Doggerel Dave said:
Despite the atmosphere and atmospherics (are they different?) your piece evokes, all this is a wee bit hard for me, Nev – so I’m afraid I will have to play the antipodean absentee card once more…. As I sus it , two ideas form:
- Hoar has an association with frost, yet according to my calculation, arrived at after standing on my head (puts myself more in your position and improves circulation to half defunct gray matter), you should by now be in Autumn –
- Which brings me to a “Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness”
So how come?
September 7th, 2021 19:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Despite the atmosphere and atmospherics (are they different?) your piece evokes, all this is a wee bit hard for me, Nev – so I’m afraid I will have to play the antipodean absentee card once more…. As I sus it , two ideas form:
- Hoar has an association with frost, yet according to my calculation, arrived at after standing on my head (puts myself more in your position and improves circulation to half defunct gray matter), you should by now be in Autumn –
- Which brings me to a “Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness”
So how come?
September 7th, 2021 19:24
When the Sea Fret Hit
myself and me said:
I lost myself in this mystery sea fret.
September 7th, 2021 19:00
myself and me said:
I lost myself in this mystery sea fret.
September 7th, 2021 19:00
When the Sea Fret Hit
Dove said:
The sea fog can be mysterious, or it can lead a sailor astray without a compass! Me thinks yours weaved tall tales of woes! Just like a dame 🌝
September 7th, 2021 13:14
Dove said:
The sea fog can be mysterious, or it can lead a sailor astray without a compass! Me thinks yours weaved tall tales of woes! Just like a dame 🌝
September 7th, 2021 13:14
Listen Through the Breeze
Dove said:
Music to my soul! Fairy lights they always sprinkle love dust! Great poem dear Neville
September 7th, 2021 13:09
Dove said:
Music to my soul! Fairy lights they always sprinkle love dust! Great poem dear Neville
September 7th, 2021 13:09
When the Sea Fret Hit
orchidee said:
Haar (I\'ll) be saying it\'s a fine write N.
September 7th, 2021 11:05
orchidee said:
Haar (I\'ll) be saying it\'s a fine write N.
September 7th, 2021 11:05
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