Comments received on poems by Neville



Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Goldfinch60 said:

Memories are always there of people we have met Neville.

Andy

September 10th, 2022 00:38

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Bella Shepard said:

The jaundiced eyes may tell all when the mind does accept, \'tis easier to stare at the sun. An intuitive write my friend.

September 9th, 2022 13:24

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Jerry Reynolds said:

A lot to think about here, Neville.

September 9th, 2022 08:28

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Doggerel Dave said:

A prey to some ultimately addictive substance, or mystic?
Never managed to obtain a toxicology report then, Neville?
So why not give the poor old bugger the benefit of the doubt?
A gem of an enigmatic write.

September 9th, 2022 08:12

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Fay Slimm. said:

Met but never forgotten I guess is that unassuming small chap - -- within your memory his sun-blighted eyes no doubt take centre stage - - a portrait worthy of sharing which you penned so well dear friend.

September 9th, 2022 03:15

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
orchidee said:

I\'m a \'blue eyed boy\' of course, teachers pet, etc! lol. Pet? That must be Fido.

September 9th, 2022 02:24

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Neville said:


I may be unassuming, but I assure you, I still have my baby blue eyes .. and of course, my hammer .. N :)

September 9th, 2022 02:22

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
jarcher54 said:

Self-portrait? I dunno but ya nailed me!

September 9th, 2022 02:15

On Being Too Gentle
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A fab poem on how men can be taught new ways and get surprised themselves instead of alarming. Sublime and subtle muse. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

September 8th, 2022 13:24

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Bella Shepard said:

Yes, I can see a teeny bit of tongue and cheek, however subtle. But I would suggest just one at a time. Stay strong my friend, you\'re gonna need it.

September 6th, 2022 13:23

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Jerry Reynolds said:

Now that was fun coffee reading, Neville.

September 6th, 2022 08:49

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Fay Slimm. said:

When so politely asked I wonder just who would step forward for just a taste of that indiscretion - - an aunt or a grandma maybe..........x

September 6th, 2022 08:39

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
orchidee said:

Someone having fun? or not having \'any\'? Swoon! lol. Revive me Fido.

September 6th, 2022 06:33

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
dusk arising said:

Oh sisters and cousins, such a lot they have to answer for. Or is it me?

September 6th, 2022 05:08

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes, but in whose cheek would you really wish to come Neville, this weekend, if you really had the choice?
Erotica rules!!

September 6th, 2022 05:07

On Being Too Gentle
Bella Shepard said:

It sounds like you it just right, I\'d call it the \"Goldilocks Approach\". Very, very clever my friend!

September 5th, 2022 12:41

Potage du Femme
Bella Shepard said:

This sounds quite the taste treat. What I want to know is does this dish reheat well, or is it also good cold?

September 5th, 2022 12:35

On Being Too Gentle
SureshG said:

I regret it wasn’t me, for had I in my youth, while being rejected - lessons learnt would have played an important role.
Just as I am learning how to scribe a lasting piece.

September 5th, 2022 10:25

On Being Too Gentle
Doggerel Dave said:

A smooth change of pace portrayed in your piece; Improvisation the name of the game, Neville....ask and thou shalt receive....maybe 🙂

September 3rd, 2022 19:31

On Being Too Gentle
MendedFences27 said:

Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it exposes her hidden talents without actually calling them out.
\"On Being Too Gentle,\" I think he at least had the spirit to engage.
Oh, woe is he! - Phil A.

September 3rd, 2022 17:22

On Being Too Gentle
shaa said:

Couldn\'t be more clear 😅 oh how wrong they go. Brilliant!

September 3rd, 2022 07:05

On Being Too Gentle
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - gentle approaches be blowed to this well versed lady - -- I am laughing aloud Nev at the cleverness you use to show her at the game - -once a seductress always the same eh ? - - brilliant piece of penning....................x

September 3rd, 2022 02:51

On Being Too Gentle
orchidee said:

What were the details of the \'error\'? Don\'t answer that, or I will swoon! Or at least, don\'t answer how she corrected the error. heehee.

September 3rd, 2022 01:49

Potage du Femme
Goldfinch60 said:

Surely you must have some basil and saffron there as well Neville.

Andy

September 3rd, 2022 01:26

On Being Too Gentle
dusk arising said:

Says it all. Oh how wrong we get it sometimes.

September 3rd, 2022 01:12

Potage du Femme
orchidee said:

You know I\'m gonna say this - Fido won\'t let me have any potage! lol.

September 2nd, 2022 09:17

Potage du Femme
Fay Slimm. said:

Tis my kina broth this slice after slice of salty potage with delectable taste - -- - -thanks for the spicy read mon ami..............x

September 2nd, 2022 08:57

Potage du Femme
Doggerel Dave said:

...and she did and I did and the energy passed through her to me.... Wish I had the poetic skill to give it the moment...

Thanks Nev for at least giving me the chance.....

September 2nd, 2022 05:26

Potage du Femme
Doggerel Dave said:

Talking cunnilingus here? \'Since between your legs is all the richness of a pollution free seashore, I\'ll give you all you want and then some...\'
I\'m sure she\'ll come across if I ask her...

September 2nd, 2022 04:22

Somewhere Between Lovers
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true in many cases Neville but sometimes the true love can arise from these places.

Andy

September 2nd, 2022 00:49



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