Comments received on poems by Neville



When the Sea Fret Hit
Fay Slimm. said:

This special sea-fog is prevalent here often but Nev you gave it a personality that only a poet can - i smiled at where it kissed that sailor I did........... ha another great nature read.........x

September 7th, 2021 04:55

Wryneck
Goldfinch60 said:

In all my years birdwatching I have never seen one, maybe one day?

Andy

September 7th, 2021 00:19

Wryneck
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

Today I learned something new, thanks to you my dear friend.
A very interesting bird to behold.
Lucky you.☺️

Laura🌻

September 6th, 2021 16:08

Wryneck
orchidee said:

A fine write and sight to behold N.

September 6th, 2021 09:15

Listen Through the Breeze
L. B. Mek said:

\'I never
want you: choreographed
For that would be, too much
to ask\'..
without spontaneity, dear Poet
where would we hang our hopeful hats
that hide, those ever regressing hairlines
of our regretted, shouda - woulda\'s of life..
(subtly, incisive: poetic brilliance
uniquely
at your very best, my friend)

September 6th, 2021 07:53

Wryneck
Doggerel Dave said:

Well If you keep looking over your shoulder for them dicky birds they for some unaccountable reason are twittering on about just above me, and end up with a sore neck, it\'s no wonder them chiropractors make a lot of dosh, dull jewelled............... don\'t look at me - you recommended Google....

September 6th, 2021 07:49

Wryneck
L. B. Mek said:

never seen one, although
I doubt I would recognise it
but, on a somewhat similar note
they say, fritillary butterflies were spotted
in Kent this year
and while all butterfly numbers continue to decline
its warming to think
theirs a chance of a tepid re-emergence, of sorts
personally, I have seen so many this year
nature\'s fluttering: comforter\'s supreme
(in my humble \'city boi\' opinion\' lol

September 6th, 2021 07:47

Wryneck
Accidental Poet said:

Not seen this little fellow in my neck of the woods. But a handsome fellow he is. Well penned N. 👍

September 6th, 2021 06:53

Wryneck
Fay Slimm. said:

Beautiful sheen on the bird I have never seen Nev - they can be spotted on southern coasts but I have not been lucky - as you certainly were to see Wrynecks three days running - a bit envious so I be.............x

September 6th, 2021 05:21

Listen Through the Breeze
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

“ turquoise triangles “ .. I really like this poem .. I like your choice of words ... you even mention fairies !

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September 6th, 2021 02:24

Listen Through the Breeze
Thekkinkkattil said:

With things gone terribly wrong you have been able to make it a pleasant poem . Kudos to you

September 6th, 2021 01:00

Listen Through the Breeze
Goldfinch60 said:

Those times passed can be so wonderful but also so sad Neville.

Andy

September 6th, 2021 00:20

Listen Through the Breeze
Doggerel Dave said:

Did you get it together again or not, Nev?
Great flow with some depth - I\'m not quite sure just how it was resolved with all that baggage.....

September 5th, 2021 05:30

Listen Through the Breeze
Fay Slimm. said:

Am listening hard after reading this bit of familiar intrigue and thinking I can hear - maybe - - that romantic mandolin - I love this legacy of a remembered yesterday Nev - - now left for readers to unfold their own ending.......... x

September 5th, 2021 02:52

This is Not a Hake
Goldfinch60 said:

And very expensive!

Andy

September 5th, 2021 00:53

This is Not a Hake
Doggerel Dave said:

Could be shark - ah no - they\'re protected (just) now.....

September 4th, 2021 17:19

This is Not a Hake
Accidental Poet said:

Did I miss dinner again? Darn it. 🤔
Great little write N.

September 4th, 2021 09:17

This is Not a Hake
orchidee said:

Good write N.
Should I meet her? Oh, it\'s not on the theme of \'her\' this time! lol.

September 4th, 2021 06:25

This is Not a Hake
Fay Slimm. said:

And tis highly prized so I understand - never tasted European Hake myself but hey have your tasted Cornish salmon then ? - - - gorgeous and tis in the same class.......x

September 4th, 2021 05:42

I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
dusk arising said:

Blimey, If they aint got saxes in heaven I\'ve got 5 of the damned things u can borrow mate.

Which reminds me, I havent had a good honk on any one of them lately.

Maybe, if they let me into heaven (hmmmm) i could try to become the virtuoso i always dreamed of.

September 3rd, 2021 10:37

I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
L. B. Mek said:

(\'Kebero\' drums, to herald our fluster of last blinks
trumpets and flutes, as our swansong of last breadth
and saxophones: to play midnight Blues
as we traverse, that matter of nothingness existence
in that universe of endlessness...)
a wonderfully melancholic write, my friend
(got me in the mood for some Coltrane\'s Sound
Equinox if you will, c-sharp of modal Jazz
enticing free, that inner serenity)

September 3rd, 2021 05:23

I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
Doggerel Dave said:

Big question,........Saxophones would definitely sooth the transition... always supposing.... DD.

September 3rd, 2021 04:31

I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
Goldfinch60 said:

Of course you will know, meet you there one day - but not for a long time yet.

Andy

September 3rd, 2021 03:21

Songs From a Room
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words from a fine inspiring person Neville.

Andy

September 3rd, 2021 02:52

I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
Fay Slimm. said:

So do I re.the title my friend - - the sax has mystical seduction - am sure its sweet music will go on forever - - like love...........x

September 3rd, 2021 02:37

Songs From a Room
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I don’t know who Leanord is but this poem is lovely 🙂

September 3rd, 2021 02:03

I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven
orchidee said:

A fine write N.
I was only reading recently: \'Store up treasure in heaven, not on earth, where rust corrupts and moths devour\'. So you will only have lost earthly treasures.
You opened that wallet? Them moths flew out of it?!

September 3rd, 2021 01:57

Songs From a Room
orchidee said:

Good write Neville - all about me?
Now how did you know my real name was Leonard?!
If it is, ya should say \'DON\'T sing for me Len! heehee.
Wish I would shut up sometimes. lol.

September 2nd, 2021 11:48

Songs From a Room
Fay Slimm. said:

men to all that Nev - -- LC \'s inspiration is really exceptional - -- I especially liked the final lines of your appealing stanzas

September 2nd, 2021 10:03

Songs From a Room
Nicholas Browning said:

Had to look up whom you were referring to, but I must say the poem was splendid. I really enjoyed the read. Thank you.

September 2nd, 2021 09:17



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