Comments received on poems by Neville
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
Bella Shepard said:
Doesn\'t the exotic, or even the quixotic always attract us? Without it we\'d be a pretty dull lot, and a little perversion every now and then just might be, dare I say, healthy. So yes, I think that this makes sense. Hope the knee is feeling better.
August 20th, 2022 13:36
Bella Shepard said:
Doesn\'t the exotic, or even the quixotic always attract us? Without it we\'d be a pretty dull lot, and a little perversion every now and then just might be, dare I say, healthy. So yes, I think that this makes sense. Hope the knee is feeling better.
August 20th, 2022 13:36
Come Let us Dance Some More
Bella Shepard said:
The dance is always divine, no matter how, no matter wear (pun intended). Dance on my friend. What fun!
August 20th, 2022 13:27
Bella Shepard said:
The dance is always divine, no matter how, no matter wear (pun intended). Dance on my friend. What fun!
August 20th, 2022 13:27
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
Doggerel Dave said:
The key definitely was chucked away.
So on what grounds do you appeal?
I\'m sure you will get remission for good behaviour, Nev.
August 19th, 2022 06:46
Doggerel Dave said:
The key definitely was chucked away.
So on what grounds do you appeal?
I\'m sure you will get remission for good behaviour, Nev.
August 19th, 2022 06:46
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
Goldfinch60 said:
Those strange relationships can lead to that padded cell sometimes Neville, that\'s ok as long as it is not the one next to Orchi. LOL
Andy
August 19th, 2022 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those strange relationships can lead to that padded cell sometimes Neville, that\'s ok as long as it is not the one next to Orchi. LOL
Andy
August 19th, 2022 01:42
Come Let us Dance Some More
Accidental Poet said:
Dance as you wish N, but don\'t be surprised if a swooning Orchi dances circles around you both. 🤣
August 18th, 2022 21:41
Accidental Poet said:
Dance as you wish N, but don\'t be surprised if a swooning Orchi dances circles around you both. 🤣
August 18th, 2022 21:41
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
Accidental Poet said:
Sense? What\'s that? 😉
August 18th, 2022 21:37
Accidental Poet said:
Sense? What\'s that? 😉
August 18th, 2022 21:37
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
orchidee said:
They might throw away the key when I am in the same room as her. Will it bring on my swoons?! I talk some rot sometimes. lol.
August 18th, 2022 12:24
orchidee said:
They might throw away the key when I am in the same room as her. Will it bring on my swoons?! I talk some rot sometimes. lol.
August 18th, 2022 12:24
Why Not Just Throw Away The Key
Fay Slimm. said:
Indeed a femme fatale can play many a perverted game methinks Nev and it makes sense to me that their key is maybe in the right place when thrown away - - - - . well perhaps it is..........x
August 18th, 2022 07:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Indeed a femme fatale can play many a perverted game methinks Nev and it makes sense to me that their key is maybe in the right place when thrown away - - - - . well perhaps it is..........x
August 18th, 2022 07:49
Come Let us Dance Some More
orchidee said:
I was OK until I got to \'naked\'. Then it brought on a swoon. It would! lol.
August 18th, 2022 01:29
orchidee said:
I was OK until I got to \'naked\'. Then it brought on a swoon. It would! lol.
August 18th, 2022 01:29
Come Let us Dance Some More
L. B. Mek said:
(\'vulnerability
is a curse, as much
as being a path
to our emancipation\'s
self-worth..\'
but we must be so
so
careful, who
we choose to intrust
for those battered doors
betrayed, once more
may jam themselves, locked
for life..)
Hyung
I know your profession
affords you so much insight
into the \'human psyche\'
but, your poetry
zooms-in and unfurls
those most knotted of situations
we all come across in life
and somehow makes us realise
its alright
we\'re not the only ones, scared
to let someone in
scared to offer ourselves, once again
scared
of this fear, we carry deep inside
that this time, it might all work out
then what
then what do we do, with all this
bruises and scars..
August 18th, 2022 00:53
L. B. Mek said:
(\'vulnerability
is a curse, as much
as being a path
to our emancipation\'s
self-worth..\'
but we must be so
so
careful, who
we choose to intrust
for those battered doors
betrayed, once more
may jam themselves, locked
for life..)
Hyung
I know your profession
affords you so much insight
into the \'human psyche\'
but, your poetry
zooms-in and unfurls
those most knotted of situations
we all come across in life
and somehow makes us realise
its alright
we\'re not the only ones, scared
to let someone in
scared to offer ourselves, once again
scared
of this fear, we carry deep inside
that this time, it might all work out
then what
then what do we do, with all this
bruises and scars..
August 18th, 2022 00:53
Come Let us Dance Some More
Goldfinch60 said:
Once you are with the right person there are never any regrets Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2022 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Once you are with the right person there are never any regrets Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2022 00:48
Come Let us Dance Some More
Doggerel Dave said:
You gotta do wot ya gotta do given the circumstances, I suppose, Nev. Regret on any form is regrettable (!) - ultimately futile....
August 17th, 2022 22:09
Doggerel Dave said:
You gotta do wot ya gotta do given the circumstances, I suppose, Nev. Regret on any form is regrettable (!) - ultimately futile....
August 17th, 2022 22:09
Come Let us Dance Some More
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes despite acid rain let the dancing continue - cleverly writ the \"battered temple doors\" give a semi-ironic view of those who unhearing always condemn but where defiant nakedness will have no regrets - - aptly woven this piece of perceptive imagery to keep us all dancing dear Nev.... ........x
August 17th, 2022 14:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes despite acid rain let the dancing continue - cleverly writ the \"battered temple doors\" give a semi-ironic view of those who unhearing always condemn but where defiant nakedness will have no regrets - - aptly woven this piece of perceptive imagery to keep us all dancing dear Nev.... ........x
August 17th, 2022 14:22
Spellbound
Dove said:
Bewitched, oh the potion of time, pigs don’t sweat, I must say you matter.. lol
Best to you on your injury, and don’t let those pagan verses tatter your spirit..
August 16th, 2022 12:59
Dove said:
Bewitched, oh the potion of time, pigs don’t sweat, I must say you matter.. lol
Best to you on your injury, and don’t let those pagan verses tatter your spirit..
August 16th, 2022 12:59
Spellbound
Goldfinch60 said:
Those secrets are always around us Neville.
Andy
August 12th, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Those secrets are always around us Neville.
Andy
August 12th, 2022 00:32
Spellbound
Bella Shepard said:
Mysterious, cryptic, I just wish I had a dark and stormy night to read this by, but still a great read!
August 11th, 2022 12:25
Bella Shepard said:
Mysterious, cryptic, I just wish I had a dark and stormy night to read this by, but still a great read!
August 11th, 2022 12:25
Spellbound
dusk arising said:
Definitely some \"eye of newt\" about this piece amid it joyous splendour of a reading.
I feel that to dwell and seek measure in its words would betray the pure pleasure of it\'s reading.
August 11th, 2022 09:45
dusk arising said:
Definitely some \"eye of newt\" about this piece amid it joyous splendour of a reading.
I feel that to dwell and seek measure in its words would betray the pure pleasure of it\'s reading.
August 11th, 2022 09:45
Spellbound
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and hearing those whispers and shakin\' a bit as I light a candle to this grandly full and spellbinding moon - - hey-up then amigo cos tonight I\'ll be adancin\' .............x
August 11th, 2022 09:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Am listening and hearing those whispers and shakin\' a bit as I light a candle to this grandly full and spellbinding moon - - hey-up then amigo cos tonight I\'ll be adancin\' .............x
August 11th, 2022 09:13
Spellbound
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t realise there was a place for horse manure in the Wicca armoury.... 😊
August 11th, 2022 06:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t realise there was a place for horse manure in the Wicca armoury.... 😊
August 11th, 2022 06:56
Spellbound
Doggerel Dave said:
Woooo - Spells and incantations rule during the full moon - Had you not better take a full case history there, Dr Nev?
August 11th, 2022 06:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Woooo - Spells and incantations rule during the full moon - Had you not better take a full case history there, Dr Nev?
August 11th, 2022 06:16
Naturally
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville but the H20 is missing at the moment.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 23:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville but the H20 is missing at the moment.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 23:53
Naturally
Bella Shepard said:
Priceless!!! If only we listened more to what is right under our noses.
August 9th, 2022 11:19
Bella Shepard said:
Priceless!!! If only we listened more to what is right under our noses.
August 9th, 2022 11:19
Naturally
MendedFences27 said:
For sure, Nature is a product of \"oxygen and a splash of H2O,\" but then which came first?
A very astute take on the origin of Nature, at least as we know it.
It is, also. the basic requirements of life. So much in so few words... Poetry. - Phil A.
August 9th, 2022 08:30
MendedFences27 said:
For sure, Nature is a product of \"oxygen and a splash of H2O,\" but then which came first?
A very astute take on the origin of Nature, at least as we know it.
It is, also. the basic requirements of life. So much in so few words... Poetry. - Phil A.
August 9th, 2022 08:30
Naturally
Doggerel Dave said:
Context is all, Nev: where and when? I\'m starting to feel decidedly chilly out here.....
August 9th, 2022 08:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Context is all, Nev: where and when? I\'m starting to feel decidedly chilly out here.....
August 9th, 2022 08:07
Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Goldfinch60 said:
A friend of mine has a an old classic car which was his fathers, he has put a plate on the back seat which says \"This is where I was conceived\"
Andy
August 4th, 2022 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
A friend of mine has a an old classic car which was his fathers, he has put a plate on the back seat which says \"This is where I was conceived\"
Andy
August 4th, 2022 01:00
Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, I should have seen these words a couple of days ago. Here in my part of the world it seems like all hell is breaking lose, and I\'ve drawn inside myself, trying to find some peace. Your words are balm on a painful wound, and I thank you for this wonderful reminder, we are survivors.
August 3rd, 2022 12:49
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, I should have seen these words a couple of days ago. Here in my part of the world it seems like all hell is breaking lose, and I\'ve drawn inside myself, trying to find some peace. Your words are balm on a painful wound, and I thank you for this wonderful reminder, we are survivors.
August 3rd, 2022 12:49
Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
orchidee said:
Woof! Good write Neville. Don\'t say it, says Fido! Ohh, F F F and A B C, and a bit of X Y Z also, whatever! lol. I\'m rambling now? Where have I gone? In the country, or where?!
August 3rd, 2022 11:38
orchidee said:
Woof! Good write Neville. Don\'t say it, says Fido! Ohh, F F F and A B C, and a bit of X Y Z also, whatever! lol. I\'m rambling now? Where have I gone? In the country, or where?!
August 3rd, 2022 11:38
Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, the good old back seat. It was free, available and you couldn\'t beat the ambiance. Where better to learn life\'s skills. I probably dates back to borrowing the chariot on Saturday night. Great fun!
August 3rd, 2022 08:25
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, the good old back seat. It was free, available and you couldn\'t beat the ambiance. Where better to learn life\'s skills. I probably dates back to borrowing the chariot on Saturday night. Great fun!
August 3rd, 2022 08:25
Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Fay Slimm. said:
I remember those back seats in my Dad\'s little Austin - - -- - -- my Dad wrote and pinned Danger on ours when my boy friend borrowed it to take me out.................x
August 3rd, 2022 07:56
Fay Slimm. said:
I remember those back seats in my Dad\'s little Austin - - -- - -- my Dad wrote and pinned Danger on ours when my boy friend borrowed it to take me out.................x
August 3rd, 2022 07:56
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