Comments received on poems by Neville
Swansong
L. B. Mek said:
lol, this is so relatable to us scribblers, what W B Yeats took a page to unravel, you uncoiled within two stanzas my friend,
Brilliant!
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-35118
December 8th, 2020 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
lol, this is so relatable to us scribblers, what W B Yeats took a page to unravel, you uncoiled within two stanzas my friend,
Brilliant!
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-35118
December 8th, 2020 05:02
Vermeil
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, (this is where I get thrown out of MPS for heresy) I find the (very well constructed) poem a bit sus - or rather the interpretations placed upon it by your esteemed correspondents.
I believe it\'s about the \'him\' glowing in self satisfaction at his smoothly (but thin) polished exterior.
Regards, Dave
December 8th, 2020 03:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, (this is where I get thrown out of MPS for heresy) I find the (very well constructed) poem a bit sus - or rather the interpretations placed upon it by your esteemed correspondents.
I believe it\'s about the \'him\' glowing in self satisfaction at his smoothly (but thin) polished exterior.
Regards, Dave
December 8th, 2020 03:32
Vermeil
orchidee said:
I not met any gals named Vermeil, I must admit! She sounds like an eloquent lass, as expressed here.
A tapestry clinging... see, I\'m nicking Gold\'s words. The unforgivable sin of plagiarism!
December 8th, 2020 02:38
orchidee said:
I not met any gals named Vermeil, I must admit! She sounds like an eloquent lass, as expressed here.
A tapestry clinging... see, I\'m nicking Gold\'s words. The unforgivable sin of plagiarism!
December 8th, 2020 02:38
Vermeil
Goldfinch60 said:
The gold in your words flows like a tapestry clinging to the world.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The gold in your words flows like a tapestry clinging to the world.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 02:26
Swansong
Goldfinch60 said:
That swansong is within all of us but we still have too much to do to sing it yet.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That swansong is within all of us but we still have too much to do to sing it yet.
Andy
December 8th, 2020 01:54
Carbonito de Sophie
Poetic Dan said:
Looking through the looking glass does funny things, like when it\'s mushroom season! Then Alice finds the reason....
Couldn\'t help myself! Great stuff good sir carry on
December 7th, 2020 16:41
Poetic Dan said:
Looking through the looking glass does funny things, like when it\'s mushroom season! Then Alice finds the reason....
Couldn\'t help myself! Great stuff good sir carry on
December 7th, 2020 16:41
Swansong
Michael Edwards said:
Have you swans sing
On water or wing
And if you have heard
This elegant bird
Is it rock, pop, or swing
That you’ve heard this bird sing.
December 7th, 2020 13:24
Michael Edwards said:
Have you swans sing
On water or wing
And if you have heard
This elegant bird
Is it rock, pop, or swing
That you’ve heard this bird sing.
December 7th, 2020 13:24
Swansong
orchidee said:
But you\'ll be back tomorrow, surely.
And now, nor a swansong - in an old TV series, my Mum said that my Gran used to say, if anyone got shot or injured etc: \'The b****r will be back next week!\' Ooohh!
December 7th, 2020 09:59
orchidee said:
But you\'ll be back tomorrow, surely.
And now, nor a swansong - in an old TV series, my Mum said that my Gran used to say, if anyone got shot or injured etc: \'The b****r will be back next week!\' Ooohh!
December 7th, 2020 09:59
Swansong
Poetic Dan said:
I have plenty of thoses, I used to not want to hear now I\'ve learnt to hold on to that tear!
A few little lines made my head explode, now that\'s a captain of a poetic soul!
Thanks for sharing!
December 7th, 2020 09:54
Poetic Dan said:
I have plenty of thoses, I used to not want to hear now I\'ve learnt to hold on to that tear!
A few little lines made my head explode, now that\'s a captain of a poetic soul!
Thanks for sharing!
December 7th, 2020 09:54
Swansong
dusk arising said:
It\'s a surprise i\'ve lasted this long. Long enough to admit, I like your style a lot but today you\'ve confused me
December 7th, 2020 09:37
dusk arising said:
It\'s a surprise i\'ve lasted this long. Long enough to admit, I like your style a lot but today you\'ve confused me
December 7th, 2020 09:37
Swansong
Fay Slimm. said:
Don\'t we all have that same illusion mon ami ? The inevitable occurs and we have to surrender as these few lines impressively prove with solemn yet an ever so slight wry humour. - or maybe that is just me .............. x
December 7th, 2020 08:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Don\'t we all have that same illusion mon ami ? The inevitable occurs and we have to surrender as these few lines impressively prove with solemn yet an ever so slight wry humour. - or maybe that is just me .............. x
December 7th, 2020 08:48
Carbonito de Sophie
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, almost as simplistic in wording as those child fairy tales you mention,
though even at a mere glance these reads so deep, sadly without context I can only guess, but for some reason, I imagine someone like the late Princess Diana, will relate with your words (may she R.I.P. - that\'s if \'they\' would ever let her, to begin with)...
December 7th, 2020 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded, almost as simplistic in wording as those child fairy tales you mention,
though even at a mere glance these reads so deep, sadly without context I can only guess, but for some reason, I imagine someone like the late Princess Diana, will relate with your words (may she R.I.P. - that\'s if \'they\' would ever let her, to begin with)...
December 7th, 2020 06:01
Carbonito de Sophie
Christina8 said:
What a sweet little poem....loved it ! x
December 6th, 2020 21:37
Christina8 said:
What a sweet little poem....loved it ! x
December 6th, 2020 21:37
Carbonito de Sophie
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful little bird done justice here - a member of the bullshit - err sory - bushtit family.
December 6th, 2020 14:46
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful little bird done justice here - a member of the bullshit - err sory - bushtit family.
December 6th, 2020 14:46
Carbonito de Sophie
dusk arising said:
Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....
........ flights of fancy take me.....
December 6th, 2020 06:32
dusk arising said:
Well if ever there were a short poem to muse upon.....
........ flights of fancy take me.....
December 6th, 2020 06:32
Carbonito de Sophie
Fay Slimm. said:
A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions ........... and methinks Bulgaria has a really good publicity agent in you my dear Nev. - - -great stuff...........x
December 6th, 2020 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions ........... and methinks Bulgaria has a really good publicity agent in you my dear Nev. - - -great stuff...........x
December 6th, 2020 03:53
Carbonito de Sophie
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. A cute little birdie - probably friends with my cute furry piggies.
December 6th, 2020 03:23
orchidee said:
Good write Neville. A cute little birdie - probably friends with my cute furry piggies.
December 6th, 2020 03:23
Carbonito de Sophie
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful bird Neville matched only by your words.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful bird Neville matched only by your words.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 03:01
Groundhog Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are with you Neville and they will be with her as well, she may well feel the same.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are with you Neville and they will be with her as well, she may well feel the same.
Andy
December 6th, 2020 01:31
Groundhog Day
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d rather not comment on how closely I identify with that work of yours - including, but definitely not only, the early lines relating to ageing...
Thanks for for being so succinct there . Any more and this post might have been very different....
Regards Dave
December 5th, 2020 22:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d rather not comment on how closely I identify with that work of yours - including, but definitely not only, the early lines relating to ageing...
Thanks for for being so succinct there . Any more and this post might have been very different....
Regards Dave
December 5th, 2020 22:34
Groundhog Day
Fay Slimm. said:
The passing of things and of those held so dear makes love and togetherness even more needed as this tribute to seeing the truth of comings and goings artfully discloses my friend. Feelings of Déja Vu become clearer when moments of \"pulsing and probing\" are virtually over - - maybe. Another depth here of your avid perception and so impressively well expressed.........x
December 5th, 2020 16:59
Fay Slimm. said:
The passing of things and of those held so dear makes love and togetherness even more needed as this tribute to seeing the truth of comings and goings artfully discloses my friend. Feelings of Déja Vu become clearer when moments of \"pulsing and probing\" are virtually over - - maybe. Another depth here of your avid perception and so impressively well expressed.........x
December 5th, 2020 16:59
Groundhog Day
Michael Edwards said:
If she doesn\'t remember then she\'s not worthy - but I bet she does.
December 5th, 2020 16:14
Michael Edwards said:
If she doesn\'t remember then she\'s not worthy - but I bet she does.
December 5th, 2020 16:14
Groundhog Day
Suresh said:
If she\'s still there, then she dost remember for she has similar experiences to share with you.
December 5th, 2020 12:50
Suresh said:
If she\'s still there, then she dost remember for she has similar experiences to share with you.
December 5th, 2020 12:50
Groundhog Day
orchidee said:
I expect she does remember. And should I meet her? lol.
December 5th, 2020 12:30
orchidee said:
I expect she does remember. And should I meet her? lol.
December 5th, 2020 12:30
Groundhog Day
dusk arising said:
If she has as much about her, character wise, as you do sir then... daft question.... and from me a ridiculous comment for she, would have to have as much depth as your good self otherwise there would be no \'she\'.
... I don\'t care!! I know what i meant. LOL
December 5th, 2020 11:46
dusk arising said:
If she has as much about her, character wise, as you do sir then... daft question.... and from me a ridiculous comment for she, would have to have as much depth as your good self otherwise there would be no \'she\'.
... I don\'t care!! I know what i meant. LOL
December 5th, 2020 11:46
In the End
Dove said:
Amen! Blessings to you and yours!
May you journey many more miles
December 4th, 2020 13:29
Dove said:
Amen! Blessings to you and yours!
May you journey many more miles
December 4th, 2020 13:29
My Lady Was a Poem
Dove said:
Beautiful!!! Love every word! Best wishes to u
December 4th, 2020 13:28
Dove said:
Beautiful!!! Love every word! Best wishes to u
December 4th, 2020 13:28
Some Words Are Too Heavy
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully simple but exponentially insightful, I imagine one could return to these words at different landmark\'s of a life and find them equally: an avenue of solace, or a heart wrenching incision - unfurling, those nightmare\'s kept bubbling just beneath the veneer of our clown smiles
December 3rd, 2020 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully simple but exponentially insightful, I imagine one could return to these words at different landmark\'s of a life and find them equally: an avenue of solace, or a heart wrenching incision - unfurling, those nightmare\'s kept bubbling just beneath the veneer of our clown smiles
December 3rd, 2020 06:42
In the End
Suresh said:
..as do we have birth,
which is sure to follow,
so let\'s celebrate life.......
November 30th, 2020 05:37
Suresh said:
..as do we have birth,
which is sure to follow,
so let\'s celebrate life.......
November 30th, 2020 05:37
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