Comments received on poems by Neville
Untitled #2
Lorna said:
Phew - this was tough on her.... I would have been on the shelf a few times if my husband hadn\'t been so forgiving. But you got it down to a tee!
August 20th, 2021 07:50
Lorna said:
Phew - this was tough on her.... I would have been on the shelf a few times if my husband hadn\'t been so forgiving. But you got it down to a tee!
August 20th, 2021 07:50
Untitled #2
dusk arising said:
Lol at shame or guilt memories.... no such thing, just another few footsteps of the learning stroll through life. The contents of that wastebin serve to thicken the walking boot soles of life\'s journeyman.
August 20th, 2021 06:19
dusk arising said:
Lol at shame or guilt memories.... no such thing, just another few footsteps of the learning stroll through life. The contents of that wastebin serve to thicken the walking boot soles of life\'s journeyman.
August 20th, 2021 06:19
Untitled #2
L. B. Mek said:
\'without even a shelf to sit on
She was deemed unworthy\'..
Oft, passion is deemed a quality
yet
in that moment, of blinding pain
we
far too often, choose to abuse our cherished
weaponising
that same passion, into a reactionary tool
designed
to inflict, such disproportionate levels of heartless
suffering...
(mirror, is a little harder - to look in-to
those, morning after\'s
still, fallible as we are - our conscious
if allowed to, can guide us back
to a realm, where forgiveness
is no longer, such an impossible
dream...)
August 20th, 2021 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
\'without even a shelf to sit on
She was deemed unworthy\'..
Oft, passion is deemed a quality
yet
in that moment, of blinding pain
we
far too often, choose to abuse our cherished
weaponising
that same passion, into a reactionary tool
designed
to inflict, such disproportionate levels of heartless
suffering...
(mirror, is a little harder - to look in-to
those, morning after\'s
still, fallible as we are - our conscious
if allowed to, can guide us back
to a realm, where forgiveness
is no longer, such an impossible
dream...)
August 20th, 2021 05:35
The Angle of Her Lay
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how with hindsight
all that we couldn\'t fathom
becomes so glaringly understandable,
its just a little unfair
how it often arrives, a little too late
for those willing to hold-on and fight...
another wonderful poetic treat, dear poet
captured the poetic voice with such sincerity
August 20th, 2021 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
crazy, how with hindsight
all that we couldn\'t fathom
becomes so glaringly understandable,
its just a little unfair
how it often arrives, a little too late
for those willing to hold-on and fight...
another wonderful poetic treat, dear poet
captured the poetic voice with such sincerity
August 20th, 2021 05:23
Untitled #2
orchidee said:
Aww, why he chuck her in the bin?! He could send her to me - to recycle? Call the poem \'Recycling Rita\' or summat like that.
Any more info on this from me might be swoony. lol.
August 20th, 2021 04:32
orchidee said:
Aww, why he chuck her in the bin?! He could send her to me - to recycle? Call the poem \'Recycling Rita\' or summat like that.
Any more info on this from me might be swoony. lol.
August 20th, 2021 04:32
Untitled #2
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh ... not a bad idea, really.. gotta meet fire with fire.... Thanks Nev...
PS: Perhaps second \'fire\' should be \'a hose\'...
August 20th, 2021 04:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh ... not a bad idea, really.. gotta meet fire with fire.... Thanks Nev...
PS: Perhaps second \'fire\' should be \'a hose\'...
August 20th, 2021 04:16
The Angle of Her Lay
Doggerel Dave said:
A leisurely ride over some interesting cuntry, Nev. (As Hamlet might have said....)
August 20th, 2021 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
A leisurely ride over some interesting cuntry, Nev. (As Hamlet might have said....)
August 20th, 2021 01:54
The Angle of Her Lay
Accidental Poet said:
A very sensuous pen under your command N. 👍
August 19th, 2021 19:20
Accidental Poet said:
A very sensuous pen under your command N. 👍
August 19th, 2021 19:20
The Angle of Her Lay
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hopefully her wish
is his command.
A wonderfully penned poem.
Thank you for sharing my dear Poet.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 16:43
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Hopefully her wish
is his command.
A wonderfully penned poem.
Thank you for sharing my dear Poet.
Laura🌻
August 19th, 2021 16:43
The Angle of Her Lay
dusk arising said:
Wimmin, I\'ll never understand them... and you dont help, now i\'m bluddy confused too.
August 19th, 2021 13:10
dusk arising said:
Wimmin, I\'ll never understand them... and you dont help, now i\'m bluddy confused too.
August 19th, 2021 13:10
The Angle of Her Lay
orchidee said:
Might have to swoon at this! And should I meet her?! lol.
August 19th, 2021 10:28
orchidee said:
Might have to swoon at this! And should I meet her?! lol.
August 19th, 2021 10:28
The Angle of Her Lay
Fay Slimm. said:
A romantically intimate moment to sigh for and versed to perfection by your expertise mon ami......... I truly admire the inter-rhyming that brings it alive even more..............x
August 19th, 2021 09:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A romantically intimate moment to sigh for and versed to perfection by your expertise mon ami......... I truly admire the inter-rhyming that brings it alive even more..............x
August 19th, 2021 09:34
Elusive Blues
dusk arising said:
Ah that delicacy which elevates female flesh to the desireable artistic heights of sculpture.... and then she moves.... rapture.
August 17th, 2021 09:36
dusk arising said:
Ah that delicacy which elevates female flesh to the desireable artistic heights of sculpture.... and then she moves.... rapture.
August 17th, 2021 09:36
Elusive Blues
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautifully penned. Hope you find the blues
August 17th, 2021 07:12
Thekkinkkattil said:
Beautifully penned. Hope you find the blues
August 17th, 2021 07:12
Elusive Blues
Poetic Dan said:
Felt every bit of this my friend, thanks for sharing
August 17th, 2021 06:32
Poetic Dan said:
Felt every bit of this my friend, thanks for sharing
August 17th, 2021 06:32
Elusive Blues
L. B. Mek said:
those blue flames of passion
once we squander them
so impossibly hard, to ignite it within another again
but what to do
some mistakes, try as we might, just can\'t avoid
and although our loyalty may have failed us once
we must still strive
to find a path, to that Phoenix pulse of our love...
(this is how your poetry, expressed itself to me my friend
love the subtlety, a joy to read
even if it brought back some unwanted memories)
August 17th, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
those blue flames of passion
once we squander them
so impossibly hard, to ignite it within another again
but what to do
some mistakes, try as we might, just can\'t avoid
and although our loyalty may have failed us once
we must still strive
to find a path, to that Phoenix pulse of our love...
(this is how your poetry, expressed itself to me my friend
love the subtlety, a joy to read
even if it brought back some unwanted memories)
August 17th, 2021 05:20
Elusive Blues
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not a painter... so I think I would have to get closer to make my own private observations in order to verify the delicacy of her beauty.....
Got me going here, Nev.
August 17th, 2021 04:34
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not a painter... so I think I would have to get closer to make my own private observations in order to verify the delicacy of her beauty.....
Got me going here, Nev.
August 17th, 2021 04:34
Elusive Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
Evocative and fizzing with intimate moments of search and find. Who would not welcome the joy of discovering blues as elusive as these words portray - - great stuff again Nev..........x
August 17th, 2021 04:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Evocative and fizzing with intimate moments of search and find. Who would not welcome the joy of discovering blues as elusive as these words portray - - great stuff again Nev..........x
August 17th, 2021 04:09
Elusive Blues
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blues will be there for him one day Neville.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Those blues will be there for him one day Neville.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 02:59
Elusive Blues
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I\'m gonna take up studying a certain porcelain! Or should I stick to the ceramic sort? I might swoon otherwise. lol.
August 17th, 2021 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
I\'m gonna take up studying a certain porcelain! Or should I stick to the ceramic sort? I might swoon otherwise. lol.
August 17th, 2021 01:51
Thanks to Covid
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, corruption has always been there unless you see through it and move along a different pathway.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:44
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, corruption has always been there unless you see through it and move along a different pathway.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:44
Thanks to Covid
Dove said:
Covid is the thief, who steals life
from unsuspecting souls,
spreading corruption and strife
Oh yes , it has a strong hold
Not even masked men can conquer
Though try and trace
Oh, what we humans endure
With a Mask upon their face
Found in your blood stream
Searched in your pocket of privacy
Covid makes every soul scream
It came from you, not me
August 16th, 2021 09:41
Dove said:
Covid is the thief, who steals life
from unsuspecting souls,
spreading corruption and strife
Oh yes , it has a strong hold
Not even masked men can conquer
Though try and trace
Oh, what we humans endure
With a Mask upon their face
Found in your blood stream
Searched in your pocket of privacy
Covid makes every soul scream
It came from you, not me
August 16th, 2021 09:41
Thanks to Covid
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
But can we now rcognise the corrupt?... with their face masks on?
Great thought of the day Nev
Thank you Loved it
August 16th, 2021 05:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
But can we now rcognise the corrupt?... with their face masks on?
Great thought of the day Nev
Thank you Loved it
August 16th, 2021 05:34
Thanks to Covid
dusk arising said:
I blame that washing machine I bought in 2018 for being secretly made in China.
August 16th, 2021 05:18
dusk arising said:
I blame that washing machine I bought in 2018 for being secretly made in China.
August 16th, 2021 05:18
Thanks to Covid
L. B. Mek said:
yup,
just wait till history books
\'write it up\', all tidy
and retrospectively - tampered with, fact
who, to blame - blamed likely
survivors decreed, mere lucky
and for those in power, an opportunity
Missed-out or Capitalised upon
so just another dogmatic tale
to be worded and preached
for the lowly majority\'s
fearmongering attuned, manageability\'s ease
cyclical, isn\'t cynical enough
to do our capacity for pathetic
enough justice!
still, we got Big Brother\'s apps didn\'t we
all Orwell prophesised and everything...
August 16th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
yup,
just wait till history books
\'write it up\', all tidy
and retrospectively - tampered with, fact
who, to blame - blamed likely
survivors decreed, mere lucky
and for those in power, an opportunity
Missed-out or Capitalised upon
so just another dogmatic tale
to be worded and preached
for the lowly majority\'s
fearmongering attuned, manageability\'s ease
cyclical, isn\'t cynical enough
to do our capacity for pathetic
enough justice!
still, we got Big Brother\'s apps didn\'t we
all Orwell prophesised and everything...
August 16th, 2021 05:06
Thanks to Covid
Lorna said:
I\'m dense and I\'m with Doggerel Dave Neville......... please let us know what you mean. Unless it\'s that Covid has exposed every single rotten politician that exists at the moment??
August 16th, 2021 04:42
Lorna said:
I\'m dense and I\'m with Doggerel Dave Neville......... please let us know what you mean. Unless it\'s that Covid has exposed every single rotten politician that exists at the moment??
August 16th, 2021 04:42
Thanks to Covid
Fay Slimm. said:
Smiling real big at this bit of tongue-in-cheek Covid exposure - your wit mon ami is easily tracked, traced and found by the likes of me.
August 16th, 2021 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Smiling real big at this bit of tongue-in-cheek Covid exposure - your wit mon ami is easily tracked, traced and found by the likes of me.
August 16th, 2021 04:29
Thanks to Covid
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a teeny bit enigmatic, Nev.
‘Like to elucidate?
‘t’s not as if I don’t like poetry where more is left unsaid than said, but mystery and inexplicability bring on a certain nervous condition (the details of which I will not disclose here)….
No? You are going to hold your fire until other poets have..... ain\'t you?
August 16th, 2021 04:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Just a teeny bit enigmatic, Nev.
‘Like to elucidate?
‘t’s not as if I don’t like poetry where more is left unsaid than said, but mystery and inexplicability bring on a certain nervous condition (the details of which I will not disclose here)….
No? You are going to hold your fire until other poets have..... ain\'t you?
August 16th, 2021 04:14
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