Comments received on poems by Neville
Now Pinned to the Sky
spilleronsheet said:
Less words with so much depth
Spoken by a mightier pen
Again a deep poetry was woven
A painting engrossed with grief painted
Calligrapher the words that made us cry
So poignant dear Neville
January 17th, 2022 04:39
spilleronsheet said:
Less words with so much depth
Spoken by a mightier pen
Again a deep poetry was woven
A painting engrossed with grief painted
Calligrapher the words that made us cry
So poignant dear Neville
January 17th, 2022 04:39
Now Pinned to the Sky
Fay Slimm. said:
Waste indeed Nev the abuse of child labour for indifferent war and writ here with deep feeling for the many \"unready\" boy soldiers no longer with us - - meant thanks dear friend for this needed reminder not to ever forget..............x
January 17th, 2022 03:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Waste indeed Nev the abuse of child labour for indifferent war and writ here with deep feeling for the many \"unready\" boy soldiers no longer with us - - meant thanks dear friend for this needed reminder not to ever forget..............x
January 17th, 2022 03:23
Now Pinned to the Sky
Draven said:
Great read and very well written and set out.
January 17th, 2022 02:57
Draven said:
Great read and very well written and set out.
January 17th, 2022 02:57
More Than Just barely a Flutter
Solar Impulse_1912 said:
Beautiful poem Neville! Makes me feel scared though. Still desperately holding on to that dream of always being able to start again. Of holding on to that image of love. But slowly realising that youth and time are not mine anymore.
January 16th, 2022 07:55
Solar Impulse_1912 said:
Beautiful poem Neville! Makes me feel scared though. Still desperately holding on to that dream of always being able to start again. Of holding on to that image of love. But slowly realising that youth and time are not mine anymore.
January 16th, 2022 07:55
More Than Just barely a Flutter
Goldfinch60 said:
Good to see you back Neville with such fine words as usual.
Andy
January 16th, 2022 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good to see you back Neville with such fine words as usual.
Andy
January 16th, 2022 01:53
More Than Just barely a Flutter
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful work dear poet
Glad to see you again with your finest works
Such elegance
And such deep thoughts
The last lines were a thunderclap
‘“ Before that is,
a certain realization
eventually dawned
and it occurred to her,
in truth,
she was no phoenix after all “
January 15th, 2022 11:57
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful work dear poet
Glad to see you again with your finest works
Such elegance
And such deep thoughts
The last lines were a thunderclap
‘“ Before that is,
a certain realization
eventually dawned
and it occurred to her,
in truth,
she was no phoenix after all “
January 15th, 2022 11:57
More Than Just barely a Flutter
Keith said:
Really enjoyed reading this. A fine piece of writing and thought provoking too.
January 15th, 2022 06:00
Keith said:
Really enjoyed reading this. A fine piece of writing and thought provoking too.
January 15th, 2022 06:00
More Than Just barely a Flutter
Fay Slimm. said:
The risk of losing all by uncertainty is brought to mind here by your winsome words Nev. - lost innocence struck me as reason enough and the lead up to inevitable scorch made the impact more clear- --great read and
good to see you back posting again dear friend............x
January 15th, 2022 05:23
Fay Slimm. said:
The risk of losing all by uncertainty is brought to mind here by your winsome words Nev. - lost innocence struck me as reason enough and the lead up to inevitable scorch made the impact more clear- --great read and
good to see you back posting again dear friend............x
January 15th, 2022 05:23
Barely Semi Touched
Dove said:
Lovelier in the eyes! Now that is what I call superb poetry! I enjoy reading poems that tug at my heart! ! This one is a Chefs Kiss!
January 4th, 2022 07:33
Dove said:
Lovelier in the eyes! Now that is what I call superb poetry! I enjoy reading poems that tug at my heart! ! This one is a Chefs Kiss!
January 4th, 2022 07:33
Barely Semi Touched
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally understand this Neville.
Andy
January 4th, 2022 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
I can totally understand this Neville.
Andy
January 4th, 2022 01:37
Barely Semi Touched
Rozina said:
Someone we love will always be remembered, often unexpectedly. An old picture, a song on the radio, words in a book, in so many ways. Thank you for sharing.
January 3rd, 2022 23:41
Rozina said:
Someone we love will always be remembered, often unexpectedly. An old picture, a song on the radio, words in a book, in so many ways. Thank you for sharing.
January 3rd, 2022 23:41
Barely Semi Touched
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
Memory is persistent will show up uninvited but always welcome.
January 3rd, 2022 18:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville.
Memory is persistent will show up uninvited but always welcome.
January 3rd, 2022 18:12
Barely Semi Touched
Draven said:
A wonderfully written, heartwrenching poem, Neville. Thanks for sharing xx
January 3rd, 2022 16:05
Draven said:
A wonderfully written, heartwrenching poem, Neville. Thanks for sharing xx
January 3rd, 2022 16:05
Barely Semi Touched
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Yes it is strange at times
‘to resurrect
these now ancient marriage vows
between
those living and the dead ..
And although still so very loved,
in truth,
you can only now be barely
semi-touched..’
Sometimes it’s voluntary and at other times it’s involuntary…depending on our state of mind…at least for me.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
January 3rd, 2022 13:03
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Yes it is strange at times
‘to resurrect
these now ancient marriage vows
between
those living and the dead ..
And although still so very loved,
in truth,
you can only now be barely
semi-touched..’
Sometimes it’s voluntary and at other times it’s involuntary…depending on our state of mind…at least for me.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
January 3rd, 2022 13:03
Barely Semi Touched
spilleronsheet said:
If a scale could measure the depth of love
Only if
Suddenly there were words to count the love
And those words stringed in poetry
So intense and so deep
Yet why so heart wrenching
Love leaves us abandoned, separated when fate makes a sudden change
January 3rd, 2022 13:02
spilleronsheet said:
If a scale could measure the depth of love
Only if
Suddenly there were words to count the love
And those words stringed in poetry
So intense and so deep
Yet why so heart wrenching
Love leaves us abandoned, separated when fate makes a sudden change
January 3rd, 2022 13:02
Barely Semi Touched
dusk arising said:
Semi touched but.... in cold places? Thoughts and memories linger in the heart and as they call out the heat is intense. So intense it has to be stepped back from, hoping to find cooler more pacifying coping thoughts.
January 3rd, 2022 12:24
dusk arising said:
Semi touched but.... in cold places? Thoughts and memories linger in the heart and as they call out the heat is intense. So intense it has to be stepped back from, hoping to find cooler more pacifying coping thoughts.
January 3rd, 2022 12:24
Barely Semi Touched
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah the unquenchable miss of those who loved are now barely available ........ only semi-touched but still remembered. -- A heart-tugging read Nev.
January 3rd, 2022 11:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah the unquenchable miss of those who loved are now barely available ........ only semi-touched but still remembered. -- A heart-tugging read Nev.
January 3rd, 2022 11:29
Sated
Dove said:
Beautiful! Has a frisky ending, or is that my naughty imagination! Lol Happy New Year
January 3rd, 2022 08:13
Dove said:
Beautiful! Has a frisky ending, or is that my naughty imagination! Lol Happy New Year
January 3rd, 2022 08:13
Sated
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on wondering Neville and your thoughts will come to fruition.
Andy
January 1st, 2022 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on wondering Neville and your thoughts will come to fruition.
Andy
January 1st, 2022 02:06
Sated
Paul Bell said:
Never used that as a chat up line.
Fancy exchanging, DNA.
No, Paul, I dumped you.
She never liked green fields, that girl.
December 31st, 2021 11:01
Paul Bell said:
Never used that as a chat up line.
Fancy exchanging, DNA.
No, Paul, I dumped you.
She never liked green fields, that girl.
December 31st, 2021 11:01
Sated
SureshG said:
Exceptionally deposited, may it flourish and blossom, and thanks for the tease
December 31st, 2021 10:13
SureshG said:
Exceptionally deposited, may it flourish and blossom, and thanks for the tease
December 31st, 2021 10:13
Sated
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - leaving D.A. eh ? well that\'s a most novel way to put it - -- the title did it for me - - but what could be better than to wonder whether the wet walk will deliver a dry patch to lie and maybe exchange more than pleasantries - - am smiling big at this bit of your gift for teasingly inventive intrigue .............x
December 31st, 2021 06:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - leaving D.A. eh ? well that\'s a most novel way to put it - -- the title did it for me - - but what could be better than to wonder whether the wet walk will deliver a dry patch to lie and maybe exchange more than pleasantries - - am smiling big at this bit of your gift for teasingly inventive intrigue .............x
December 31st, 2021 06:09
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