Comments received on poems by Neville
Chasing Light
Fay Slimm. said:
Your tender expressions put romantic poetry on a whole different level and to say I enjoyed this would be putting it mildly - -- a sigh of a read Nev........x
December 30th, 2021 01:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Your tender expressions put romantic poetry on a whole different level and to say I enjoyed this would be putting it mildly - -- a sigh of a read Nev........x
December 30th, 2021 01:41
Chasing Light
dusk arising said:
(swoons)..... hold that thought.... I think I just fell in love too.
December 29th, 2021 16:09
dusk arising said:
(swoons)..... hold that thought.... I think I just fell in love too.
December 29th, 2021 16:09
Chasing Light
Michael Edwards said:
And so may she blossom. Enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2021 15:13
Michael Edwards said:
And so may she blossom. Enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2021 15:13
On Being But a Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all leave this earth at some time but hopefully we will leave some fond memories Neville.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 14:39
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all leave this earth at some time but hopefully we will leave some fond memories Neville.
Andy
December 28th, 2021 14:39
On Being But a Poet
orchidee said:
The didn\'t kill me off, or martyr me, like a poem of recent days, but they chucked me in a hole, and shovelled in a pile of stones, or proverbial \'ton of bricks\'. Why? Cos I began to sing! lol.
December 28th, 2021 11:56
orchidee said:
The didn\'t kill me off, or martyr me, like a poem of recent days, but they chucked me in a hole, and shovelled in a pile of stones, or proverbial \'ton of bricks\'. Why? Cos I began to sing! lol.
December 28th, 2021 11:56
On Being But a Poet
spilleronsheet said:
A poet the most sensitive being, noticing even minute details….a tale or two from his recount never leaves the heart….maybe he isn’t a king with green but a king with words
Well penned dear Neville
December 28th, 2021 09:21
spilleronsheet said:
A poet the most sensitive being, noticing even minute details….a tale or two from his recount never leaves the heart….maybe he isn’t a king with green but a king with words
Well penned dear Neville
December 28th, 2021 09:21
On Being But a Poet
Dove said:
Mine will say!
A Poet
wouldn\'t you know it
A Romantic
knew how to show it
December 28th, 2021 09:06
Dove said:
Mine will say!
A Poet
wouldn\'t you know it
A Romantic
knew how to show it
December 28th, 2021 09:06
A Life Lived Sadly
Dove said:
The variant is here , this one makes your nose run! Hope you have a wonderful New Year!
December 28th, 2021 08:54
Dove said:
The variant is here , this one makes your nose run! Hope you have a wonderful New Year!
December 28th, 2021 08:54
On Being But a Poet
Fay Slimm. said:
As suitable a place as any methinks Nev. for a dreamer to rest covered with stony reminders on a windy hill maybe that he wrote out his own heart in those re-told tale-tellings - -- a simply smart poet would not want to lay any other way. - -- though I am curious now for his name................x
December 28th, 2021 08:53
Fay Slimm. said:
As suitable a place as any methinks Nev. for a dreamer to rest covered with stony reminders on a windy hill maybe that he wrote out his own heart in those re-told tale-tellings - -- a simply smart poet would not want to lay any other way. - -- though I am curious now for his name................x
December 28th, 2021 08:53
On Being But a Poet
dusk arising said:
Whether it be us poets or the men who could plough the straightest furrow, we all shall pass. Our individual prowess shall be lost to the world, save for any tangible relic, and we shall be superceeded just as we took on roles once praised by our forebears....
...... and what then is left to say but \"that\'s life\"
December 28th, 2021 08:38
dusk arising said:
Whether it be us poets or the men who could plough the straightest furrow, we all shall pass. Our individual prowess shall be lost to the world, save for any tangible relic, and we shall be superceeded just as we took on roles once praised by our forebears....
...... and what then is left to say but \"that\'s life\"
December 28th, 2021 08:38
A Life Lived Sadly
Poetic Dan said:
Think I\'m lost on this one but 3 lines can send anyone over the edge... just stick with the one! Lol
Hope your well my friend
December 27th, 2021 03:50
Poetic Dan said:
Think I\'m lost on this one but 3 lines can send anyone over the edge... just stick with the one! Lol
Hope your well my friend
December 27th, 2021 03:50
A Life Lived Sadly
Rozina said:
A word, a punctuation, a rephrase, can change a meaning, make a difference. It\'s great.
December 26th, 2021 21:31
Rozina said:
A word, a punctuation, a rephrase, can change a meaning, make a difference. It\'s great.
December 26th, 2021 21:31
A Life Lived Sadly
Fay Slimm. said:
Certainly a variant Nev. - -- even within the title an important rephrasing - -- a life lived sadly shows tragic mind-sets and I guess that three lines would cover it\'s negative life-style - - - the read raises pity for those in such mental states - - - an interesting difference in postings mon ami ..................x
December 26th, 2021 13:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Certainly a variant Nev. - -- even within the title an important rephrasing - -- a life lived sadly shows tragic mind-sets and I guess that three lines would cover it\'s negative life-style - - - the read raises pity for those in such mental states - - - an interesting difference in postings mon ami ..................x
December 26th, 2021 13:32
A Life Lived Sadly
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
It’s a variant indeed…ever so present!
It’s been nice to “see” you.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
December 26th, 2021 11:37
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
It’s a variant indeed…ever so present!
It’s been nice to “see” you.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura 🌻
December 26th, 2021 11:37
A Life Lived Sadly
dusk arising said:
Ithought I\'dseen it before but quickly realised its syllables this time around.
Lines can be long or short.
December 26th, 2021 06:56
dusk arising said:
Ithought I\'dseen it before but quickly realised its syllables this time around.
Lines can be long or short.
December 26th, 2021 06:56
A Life Lived Sadly
Paul Bell said:
Two hundred and fifty thousand lines of grief, and probably some of them died under the pretence of covid just to get them on their way. Here\'s to the next one with the fancy name.
December 26th, 2021 06:53
Paul Bell said:
Two hundred and fifty thousand lines of grief, and probably some of them died under the pretence of covid just to get them on their way. Here\'s to the next one with the fancy name.
December 26th, 2021 06:53
The Taking of Innocence
spilleronsheet said:
The closing of eyes won’t die the sad and anguish truth the society hides
A heinous crime like this boils the inner core
The respect and dignity stripes without caring about another soul
Well placed are those lines
Though tragic and pointing to inhumanity of mankind
Wish people could respect others choice
Even satan can’t define the evil those mind store
Felt sad while reading this
And yes the word anger can’t be hidden
The news lace with such incidents
Don’t know where the full stops lie
Wish the heinous devils could stop making such crimes
December 24th, 2021 01:00
spilleronsheet said:
The closing of eyes won’t die the sad and anguish truth the society hides
A heinous crime like this boils the inner core
The respect and dignity stripes without caring about another soul
Well placed are those lines
Though tragic and pointing to inhumanity of mankind
Wish people could respect others choice
Even satan can’t define the evil those mind store
Felt sad while reading this
And yes the word anger can’t be hidden
The news lace with such incidents
Don’t know where the full stops lie
Wish the heinous devils could stop making such crimes
December 24th, 2021 01:00
A Life Sadly Lived
spilleronsheet said:
Sad and tragic
Maybe it was the story of someone who lived short
But yet I believe it’s not the length that matters but how you make it
Like Roald Dahl wanted a life like a candle burning from both sides
Doesn’t matter if it’s long or not
But what matters is, can it be big
Can we create a noise and ruckus for others to notice
Can we make others life better
Maybe a meaningful life is well lived
As always dear Neville, the words you choose truly depict your experiences and the thoughts show that you have witnessed and seen a lot
A man of few words but big impacts and huge feels
Quite emotive
December 24th, 2021 00:56
spilleronsheet said:
Sad and tragic
Maybe it was the story of someone who lived short
But yet I believe it’s not the length that matters but how you make it
Like Roald Dahl wanted a life like a candle burning from both sides
Doesn’t matter if it’s long or not
But what matters is, can it be big
Can we create a noise and ruckus for others to notice
Can we make others life better
Maybe a meaningful life is well lived
As always dear Neville, the words you choose truly depict your experiences and the thoughts show that you have witnessed and seen a lot
A man of few words but big impacts and huge feels
Quite emotive
December 24th, 2021 00:56
The Taking of Innocence
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Literally a bitter piece of a despicable whole, told in the most definitive of its unfolding. A poem I hate to love, but love nonetheless. Well done sir. I felt it.
December 23rd, 2021 14:12
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Literally a bitter piece of a despicable whole, told in the most definitive of its unfolding. A poem I hate to love, but love nonetheless. Well done sir. I felt it.
December 23rd, 2021 14:12
A Life Sadly Lived
Michael Edwards said:
How sad. A dear friend and excellent artist passed away a few weeks ago - he had no family and at his service it was mostly populated by other artists who will all miss him so. It was a simple serviice that was soon over but nevertheless it was so moving. Your great lines reminded of this - great write.
December 23rd, 2021 11:38
Michael Edwards said:
How sad. A dear friend and excellent artist passed away a few weeks ago - he had no family and at his service it was mostly populated by other artists who will all miss him so. It was a simple serviice that was soon over but nevertheless it was so moving. Your great lines reminded of this - great write.
December 23rd, 2021 11:38
A Life Sadly Lived
dusk arising said:
A seventeen line epitaph or testimonial may well be more rhan most of us get. Some are wise enough to write their own. Spike Milligan for example. Upon his gravestone are hewn the words \" I told you i was ill \".
December 23rd, 2021 08:06
dusk arising said:
A seventeen line epitaph or testimonial may well be more rhan most of us get. Some are wise enough to write their own. Spike Milligan for example. Upon his gravestone are hewn the words \" I told you i was ill \".
December 23rd, 2021 08:06
The Taking of Innocence
Draven said:
Well written with such few words. It made me feel disgusted...yet I am thankful for you for sharing.
Is it possible to include triggerwarnings?
December 23rd, 2021 07:27
Draven said:
Well written with such few words. It made me feel disgusted...yet I am thankful for you for sharing.
Is it possible to include triggerwarnings?
December 23rd, 2021 07:27
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